(Thought I'd give you an example of a bio I raelly liked back in the day- perhaps it could help us get a form going as well and fill in some holes. This doesn't have anything to do with your bio, but I just wanted you to see one that I thought was pretty complete. Rock on.)
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Name: Azpeth Piett
Callsign: Azpeth
Age: 21
Height :6"2
Hair Colour: White
Eye Colour: Red
Skin Colour: White Albino
Planet of Birth: Corellia - grew up on Imperial Centre
Appearance:
Azpeth is just over 6" with a slim build. Hardened from years of training within the Academy and later with COMP FORCE, Azpeth has a gymnasts figure, strong but without huge bulk which can sometimes be deceptive.
Born Albino, Azpeth has white skin and short white hair with piercing red eyes, his features made all the more noticeable by his preference for black clothes which are always finely tailored in a minimalist military style.
Azpeth's walks with a courtiers grace and has the affectations and speech patterns of the Corusant nobility, he can sometimes appear effete but this is only a front to keep others guessing.
Azpeth has a keen interest in technology and gadgets and has had his brain cybernetically enhanced, a small node behind his ear allowing him to access and process data almost instantly, this enhancement has added to his image of being emotionless and logical, and one he has not discouraged.
He is also rarely without his Data Slate
Personality:
The death of both his parents and his austere 'New Order' upbringing have had a strong effect on Azpeth. Even as a baby he was quiet and withdrawn but now as man he comes across logical and emotionless.
Azpeth models himself as one of Corusants gentleman elite, with all the mannerisms and social affectations of his adopted home world. With his distant uncle as role model, Azpeth studied the rare Holotapes he received as if they were from the Emperor himself; taking in every lesson that Sorel gave him.
Azpeth is calm and self-controlled, only becoming animated in discussions of military or political nature or in the heat of battle where he takes on a sort of restrained manic appearance.
Azpeth is a natural leader and manipulator, every action he takes is carefully considered and can be very selfless if it serves the greater good.
Azpeth is careful not to make enemies as they may be of some use later, but he has a long memory and is very unforgiving. Patient and controlled, he will wait however long it takes should he feel he his justified in revenge.
Despite the many actions he took part in for COMP FORCE and with the Palpatine Counterinsurgency Front, and his loyalty to the New Order, Azpeth does not hate aliens, but sees them as lesser species with their place within the Empire.
Goals and Motivation:
Azpeth is utterly Loyal to the New Order and Empire. A firm believer in 'The end justifies the means' he will take whatever actions are necessary to survive and successed.
A product of the New Order he sees his own success as part of its, his own opponents as opponents to the New Order.
A supporter of Grand Moff Tarkin's teachings, Azpeth sees all those killed by the Death Star as mere numbers, a justifiable cost to pay for peace.
Azpeth sees the Imperial Military as the New Orders best weapon, and the Imperial Navy the best opportunity to develop himself and succeed, following in the footsteps of uncle and continuing the work of the man he most admired, Grand Moff Tarkin.
History:
Azpeth piett was born on the planet Correllia in the last years of the Galactic Republic he was the only son of Horel and Arcadia Piett.
A wealthy family with pro-Palpatine connections, Horels older brother, Sorel, had already distinguished himself within the soon to be Imperial Navy and would one day be an admiral and serve under Lord Vader himself.
For Horel, life on Corellia was enough, looking after the families shipping interests and serving as an occasional advisor to the Corellian Diktat, a position that afforded him some access to further the aims of the emerging New Order.
But a future os one of Corellia's elite was not to be for Azpeth when during a tour aboard the Piett family's newest spaceliner, 'The Corellian Orbiter' turn to disaster when it was attacked by Seperatists and left a dead in space.
Everyone on board had been killed as the air escaped from the ships many blast holes, but with their last breaths Azpeths parents had managed to get him to an escape pod. The pod had malfunctioned and not jettesioned, but the boy had lived and was rescued when CORSEC police investigated the drifting hulk after it had been reported missing.
Barely a year old, with most of his family now dead, Azpeth was sent into the care of his Uncle, now Captain Piett, who was stationed at Corusant and was enrolled in one of the first of the New Orders new academies, run by COMPNOR (The Committee for the Preservation of the New Order) and committed to bringing up the next generation of imperials.
Azpeth spent the next sixteen years growing up within the Academy, bereft of his parents his only personal contact was with his uncle through Holotapes that he received intermittently, but even theses were not personal letters, rather the Captains own lessons and lectures on how to be a good imperial citizen, how to be a good tactician and how to serve the New Order.
Despite this austere and indoctrinating upbringing, or more importantly because of it, Azpeth thrived. Cutting himself off from his emotions, he threw himself into his studies and majored in Military History, Strategy and Political Science one year early.
At eighteen Azpeth had completed his doctorate, the final paper 'Justification for Military force: the political Blade' which flag waved Imperial aggression, becoming a standard text.
Finishing at the Academy Azpeth spent his first year as chairman of the local SAGroup (Sub-Adult Group) unit, the youth wing of COMPNOR, which he had been active in during his academy years, and then transferred to the newly formed COMP FORCE which had been set up by COMPNOR to be its military branch.
For the next two years Azpeth remained in COMP FORCE where he rose to the rank of Sector Force Group Leader and was responsible for several 'spontaneous anti-alien riots'. Azpeth was also involved in the infamous 'Calamari spire incident' when a whole sector Spire of Calamari were killed when they were trapped inside and the temperature controls were 'accidentally 'set to boil.
The death of the Emperor and his uncle at Endor was a big shock to Azpeth and although he recovered it had changed him, leaving him less naive but still convinced in the ultimate rightness and success of the New Order.
Throwing himself back into his work, Azpeth worked on the defence of Imperial Centre and eventually became part of Director Ysanne Isards Palpatine Counterinsurgency Front.
With the fall of Imperial Centre Azpeth went underground and with the PCF begun a campaign of terror and sabotage, but soon realised that it was a war that could not be won. Sickened by the fall of his home and in his eyes Ysanne Isards betrayal, Azpeth fled just as the Krytos virus began to spread and returned to Corellia where he went into hiding.
Still loyal to the Ideals of the New Order, Azpeth surveyed the fracturing Empire and saw in the Vast Empire remnant the hope of a fully restored Galactic Empire. Making his way to Vast Empire space Azpeth signed up to the Imperial Navy, recommitting himself to the Imperial Cause and a new future following in the footsteps of his uncle, eager for revenge on the rebellion for all their crimes and to one day see the liberation of Imperial Centre from their unworthy hands.
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