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  CJ's Life - Before the VE
July 3, 2006 6:56:37 AM    View the profile of CJ 
Fight for Jile
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The Devastation of Mawan was in the time of the newly formed Empire. Mawan was a remote system, it was isolated from the Republic, like the planet Tatooine, but is now a planet of ruin and destruction, crawling with thugs gangs fighting to survive on the abandoned planet. This is the history of it.
--------------------------------------------- History of Mawan ---------------------------------------
Mawan was a peaceful planet although having a few wars of it's past, was still peaceful. The Mawan race was simular to the Rodian race. The same mouth, the same wide eyes and the same skin colour. Their skin was smooth and they had two hearts. Because of this, their veins were bright blue. There skies were blue and bright. The temperature was cool yet, not too cold. It was just perfect. The cities were made of great, bright silver minerals and there was not a living soul on Mawan who had a poor life. They showed pity of outcastes of all species and provided them shelters, not as good as the native Mawan but still a shelter, and work of some sort.

Years of peace was soon disrupted in the small town of Jile by a male Human. He was causing an uprising in the markets of how unfair the town is. "The Mawans don't care about us! We should have the same rights as the local Mawan! We are like locals ourselves!" complained the human. This was the beginning of the revolution that sparked the Mawans.

Ever since then, other humans and species began making claims that the Mawans should treat them equally. These claims turned into protests. The protests turned into public harassment. Finally the harassments turned into attacks. The revolution of species started to try and take over the small towns of Mawan. The frightened Mawans resorted in making the Mawan Liberation Army. These hardly trained, fearful and fragile Mawans faught for years and years to restore freedom to Mawan, but instead freed a deadly war. This would be later called The Devastation of Mawan.
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Of the humans living in Jile, Cess Core was born. His middle name was of his home town, Jile, where he made his Mawan best friend, Tien'ka. His best friend always called him CJ (standing for Cess Jile) and ever since then, it was his local nickname. CJ grew up with a strong spirit and a wilful mind; once he started something he finished it. Mawans never liked the human race, for they saw they were too rebellious although they all liked CJ.

When the revolution broke out, CJ was convinced by his father that the Mawans were unfair on the humans. Even though his heart told him no, CJ joined the revolution in the fighting when he was 16. His mother wept his decision, fearing the loss of both him and his father, never fearing her own. CJ wanted to explain the situation to Tien'ka but his father forced him to accept a lie, that Tien'ka didn't care. Without training, CJ was given a DL blaster pistol and put on patrol of Jile. CJ was not happy at all about it, but once he started something, he had to finish it. CJ's captain quoted to him  "if it is new blood, he is ready for battle".
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"There are definitely Mawan spies outside the town, sir! I know it's dark but I can spot their eyes shiny in the moon a mile away. They're hiding in the hills, they must be taking note of every move we make." I reported in my comlink as the distant shiny specs faded away.

"It's worse than I thought. *zz* It's a good thing we moved out our men to Isnarn city in separated groups. *zz* I knew they would be watching us, but not the whole town! *zz* CJ, this is great information. You will be apart of the strike team to crush them. Your choice of assignment will be updated to level two at the end of this month. *zz*" Replied Captain Hede, leader of the Jile revolution.

A smile found its way upon my face for a few seconds as the thought of action in the front lines shot through my mind. I was about to continue my patrol until my comlink whizzed to life.

"CJ, ALERT THE REST OF THE REVOLUTION! *PEOW* THE MLA GOT INTO THE *PEOW* TOWN-*PEOW*ARGH *zz*"

"SIR!?" I screamed into the comlink right before I connected the comlink to all the other operatives, active or not. "EVERYONE GET TO YOUR GUARD! THE MAWANS ARE IN THE TOWN AND HAVE KILL CAPTAIN HEDE!"

I drew my blaster a sprinted to the front office to find a squad of MLA (Mawan Liberation Army) run out of the front office, follow by two other squads head off in another direction. I stealthily moved behind a bush and didn't move a muscle. Suddenly a flash of red light shone on one of the MLA troopers for a split second and he fell dead. Someone is shooting! Damn it, not yet! I stood up and aided the group of Revs (short for revolution troops) that came out of nowhere, firing at the MLA squad. Suddenly they began firing at the Revs as if expecting it. I unleashed a rapid fire from my pistol. *PEOW* *PEOW* *PEOW* One by one, the MLAs fell.

"CJ! We lost two guys back there just before we escaped, we were ambushed, and four now! We don't know about the other squads though" called one of the Revs.

"Two other squads went down that way." I pointed the way "I'm 'sure' that more are in the front office reading the inbox and outbox transmissions and with all that noise, they would be expecting a trap" I replied after holstering my blaster.

"Ok, all we need is a flash grenade, which we have" after the Rev finished, he nodded to a young boy, and he signalled the group to get in positions. I followed and got ready to storm in. The boy threw it in and ran back behind a potted plant. A huge flash came out of the door which made my sight go a little fuzzy for a few seconds, but none the less, I stormed in. There was a MLA squad spread out, hiding behind the furniture, looking as if they had seen a ghost, or nothing at all for that matter! We took them all out.

Then suddenly everyone's comlink, including mine, started buzzing. I picked it up and a transmission came out "Anyone who is listening, they have taken the town! All survivors abandon the town, I counted up to 50 of them attacking all of us at once, I'm the last one alive of the group of 20 Revs! Get out of here! Regroup at camp four! Remember they have guards outside the town, but not many. Blast your way out of here! Lieutenant Gordon out" I put my comlink back in my pocket and order everyone to prepare for an assault.

"No CJ, it's over! They have the town, for now. We can't take on over 50 MLAs! There are only 7 of us!" answered back one of the Revs

"Excuse me but when were MLAs expert troopers? We have grenades! So let's use em! They would have expected all of us to have abandoned the town! They won't see us coming!" I argued

"Yeah, we might have a chance, MLAs move in wedged formations! One grenade could take out an entire squad!" agreed another Rev

"Yeah, we could do it" said another and the rest agreed.

"Fine, but we are going to get killed!"

"We will if we just stand here talking! Ok, lets move around the barracks, stealthily! We can restock there and get some descent weapons. If you guys listen to me, we can do this! Oh, and kid, call camp four, tell them we need backup!" I ordered. To my surprise everyone nodded and we moved for the barracks building (which was once a motel), hiding behind anything we could find that matched our size.

Just as I was about to come out of hiding and move behind a trash collection container, a squad of MLAs walked pass. I signalled one of the Revs and straight after that, he threw a thermal detonator right in the middle of the unaware squad. "Uh, what is tha--RUN!!!" *!!!BOOOM!!!* Most of the MLA squad members flew 5 metres and some just a few. "I doubt no one heard that! Move to the barracks, its only about 100 metres away!" I ordered right before I lifted my feet and sprinted toward the building entrance.

"Wait! I hear another squad! Get back, hide! I got the thermal!" reported one of the Revs in front. I went for cover, but there was no where! All the group spread out and readied their blasters. True enough, I heard yells coming from down the street, coming closer.

"I heard it come from over here! I don't think the town is abandoned yet!" yelled a voice just a building away. Then the Rev threw the thermal! Idiot! They would have seen that! To my surprise they didn't see that! Right when half the squad had passed over the thermal, it exploded! *!!!BOOOM!!!* The few MLAs that had spread out were soon enough blasted out by the Revs.

"Move for the Barracks! Move!" I shouted at the top of my lungs. But as we were just one street from the barracks, blasters were pointed all around us.

"Prepare for your death, human scum!"

[OOC: Feel free to post comments here]


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Private First ClassCJ
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Fear over Peace.
Anger over Honor.
Power over Justice.
Darkness over Light.
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  RE: CJ's Life - Before the VE
July 4, 2006 5:13:58 AM    View the profile of CJ 
End and Beginning

"CJ? Is that you?" asked one of the MLAs. I lifted my head to see Tein'ka standing right in front of me, lowering his blaster rifle and nodding to the rest to do the same.

"How could you? My mother and father cared for your parents. They sheltered them when they came to our humble planet in desperation&. How could you betray them? Betray us?" he accused.

"There are good people in this galaxy and those who pretend to be&.. Those pretenders are selfish and only think inward about themselves& We 'fight' for equality& Which is not selfish&" my words left him speechless for a few seconds until he managed to get his chin up.

"No, no, we fight for peace! You are the ones who have torn this world apart! You are no friend of mine!" he yelled out as he, once again, aimed the blaster at me. Then it happened. I saw missiles soared from the clouds, darting straight down to the town! The first hit with a tremendous bang, almost deafening! Everyone fell back in shock. The barracks had been completely destroyed and other buildings were collapsing! Great chunks of debris flew all over the place. I moved behind a building wall just in time to avoid a huge piece of debris fly past, crushing 3 Revs and 1 MLA!

I swung around the street, sprinting as fast as I could to the vehicle garages. Two MLAs and Tein'ka fired at me but I made myself drop on the ground just in time to miss 3 blasts go overhead. I picked myself up just in time to run out of the way of 3 more blasts. Then the second missile came, zooming down, demolishing the town centre. The MLAs and Tein'ka were caught in the fire blaze. I stood in shock horror, as my best friend ran across the street on fire, gasping and howling in agony until finally dropping dead on the pathway. I fell down, part of me was dying for I could feel his agony but in a different way. I had lost a companion I had known for my whole life. I fell on my knees on the ground and took no notice of the flying debris until it was too late! A huge blown-off wall went flying towards me! I scramble to roll out of the way but it was coming too fast!

*Crack!* The well flew off right past me, taking my left arm off my body! I fell in pain, too painful for words! To try and move my bones almost killed me from the pain! I was shaking all over until the third missile rained down, a few hundred metres away! My body flew back from the force, but I could not feel it. I was numb all over, even my heart was numb. All I could feel were the final pounds of my heart, pumping blood to my different parts of the body including my left arm, where it would just drip out onto the ground. Then darkness started creeping into my eyes as if it was creeping around me. Then it took over me.

"Wake up." called an unfamiliar voice with no tone.

"AARRRGGHH!!" I howled in pain.

"It's alright. You have just come out of surgery. My scans indicate you are in perfect health. How do you feel." asked the mysterious person. As my eyes adjusted to the light I saw it was a medical droid! "I feel&.. An arm!?" I yelled out. "I have an arm! Wow, and my left shoulder hurts, like something inside it is spiking it!" I answered.

"Those are the nerves adjusting their position to your body. A procedure after every cybernetic surgery" replied the droid.

"Wow, I have a cybernetic arm! It does feel a bit heavy. So where am I?" I asked the droid as I sat up from my bed in a medical room.

"Camp 2"

"Camp 2? That's the medical outpost! I should have guessed." as I sat up I noticed I was wearing a grey shirt and pants with no shoes. The room I was in was filled with doctors and patients on beds just like mine. I walked up to a Rodian doctor and asked "Hello, where is the head director?"

"Oh, patients must be okayed at the examination room before their belongings are given back and can return to active duty" he answered, pointing to a door across the room. I walked over and it automatically opened. Inside there was a doctor at a desk and a few others examining other patients on beds. I walked up to the desk and said "I'm here to be examined". Without looking up the doctor asked my name. When I told him he said I had been already been okayed and my belongings were in another room, which he pointed the way to.

After getting on some descent clothes and equipping my DL pistol, the director walked into the room.

"CJ, I am I am astonished that you survived! Losing an arm and with severe wounds for 72 hours buried in debris! It's never been done before!" beamed the director.

"I don't want praise I want answers! First of all how many others survived than me? A second, where did you get those missiles!?" I asked with my brain begging for answers.

"Oh 4 men made it out safe a sound and&.. CJ&. We have discovered a vast underworld& It's like the opposite of Mawan, when it was in the days before the revolution. A new world of crime if you like, right underneath the upper world of Mawan. They are the old Mawans that once tried to takeover Mawan. They were banished from Mawan, forced to live underground and to take their weapons with them. It was sealed shut until the revolution. It was opened so the Mawans could go down and get weapons to fight us. Have you ever wondered how they would get their weapons from if they were a community of peace? Anyway, we forced them to give us weapons, including the devastating missiles and their launchers. But there was a problem. They escaped out of the entrance and are now killing off our men and the Mawans. They practically have unlimited resources of weapons, and men for that matter, when we only have what we stole." when he finished it took a while for me to understand what he just said, but then I realised what it meant.

"Evacuation&." I murmured out.

"Yes&.. I need all my men to help get the women and children off this planet first& Can you help?" responded the director.

"Of coarse sir" I answered right before he looked down and nodded. He then handed me a note and walked off. I looked curiously at the folded piece of sandy coloured paper. As I unfolded it, the first words I saw were, in big bold basic language letters, DEATH NOTICE. The next words made me drop the note and tremble. I regret to inform the death of Ailba Core and Sidmen Core...My parents? Dead?? How could this happen?..... I will find the exact person who did this, and make him suffer...


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Fear over Peace.
Anger over Honor.
Power over Justice.
Darkness over Light.
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  RE: CJ's Life - Before the VE
July 5, 2006 1:36:41 AM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
Good story man. Almost as good as mine.I like the fact that you didn't use existing story lines. YOU made  up your own. That was reeally cool. TTyl or talk to ya later Mykil.
 
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  RE: CJ's Life - Before the VE
July 5, 2006 6:52:50 PM    View the profile of Angel 
You might want to actually *show* us one of your supposedly pulitzer prize winning storiest before spouting your mouth off about how yours is better.

I for one would LOVE to see you post one, just so I can spend 20 minutes ripping it apart and bring you down a notch.
 
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July 5, 2006 8:01:30 PM    View the profile of Talon 
Not that bringing him down a notch isn't needed, but I think you've gone too long without a notch dropping yourself Angel. :P
 
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July 6, 2006 1:48:51 PM    View the profile of Angel 
I can't seem the recall the last time I saw YOU write there mr. high and might Jeedai master man

That's two notches for you.
 
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July 6, 2006 7:09:27 PM    View the profile of Talon 
I come by my laziness honestly.

Edit: Though I must say after watching my best work go down the crapper thanks to other people, I've largely lost interest in writing with others. Now that I'm ready to go again I'm told to hold off for an ESC. "Meh" is the best word that comes to mind right now.

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July 7, 2006 12:09:28 AM    View the profile of Angel 
Well forget the rest of 'em, give us something to do in our little secret handshake club.
 
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  RE: CJ's Life - Before the VE
July 7, 2006 6:58:01 PM    View the profile of CJ 
/me reminds everyone of the topics name
 
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Fear over Peace.
Anger over Honor.
Power over Justice.
Darkness over Light.
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