I walked into the main office and handed the official my data pad.
Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Sea blue
Skin Color: brown
Height: 5'8
Weight: 160 lbs
Age: 26
Full Name: Destruction Avaldre
Physical Build: A little bit above normal built (Not small but not super well built
Home world: Corusant
I thought about what every one said on my first bio so I changed a few things. Well actually, re-write I hope that's okay.
He looked it over and then said. "Do you have and talents or skill."
"I Excels at Melee combat particularly when I use a dual bladed weapon. I can speak and understand Mandoloran. When I served in the Republic forces, I served on Mandolor. I also excel at computers and strategy." I answered.
"How did you end up joining us?" He asked after he told me of the need for those skills were high.
"I was the son of Vara Avaldre and Victor Avaldre both were generals in republic. They were great generals but sadly withdrew when my mother found out she was expecting. I was born on Corusant and was always a handful. Later when I was 8 my father began to teach me who to wield a blaster and use it but it was never for me and I told after shot threw 16 windows that I would probably be better off learning how to use a sword. So grudgingly, he taught me and I quiickly caught on. I later learned to use a dual when I learned there was a tournament every weekend in the exchange part of corusant. My father tried to stop me but he gave up and came with me.
I was able to get to the finals after fighting a twilek who jumped around to much for his own good and the human well lets just say he should have used his head while he had it. The finale battle was the only one worth description. I walked into the arena my opponent gripping his blade tightly. He charged at me but a dodged to the left and brought down my blade but he blocked with a sword he had hidden in the cloak that covered his black robes. He quickly brought up his other sword to try to cut me in the face but a blacked it with the other blade of my sword and knocked it out of his hand. I tried to catch him off guard but didn't succeed and had to jump backwards to keep from being slashed in the knee. He tried again but the same thing happened then he spoke a wicked smile on his face. "Here is a message from the empire." He said it as he pulled out what I had only heard of a lightsaber. It glowed a brilliant red of the likes I had ever seen, even though I knew my death was at hand I didn't want to take my eyes off the blade until my death. He was about to kill me when some one in the crowd yelled. "Stop do not kill him the future will do better for him then death." The man who spoke it walked towards the arena and said. "Remember who sent us you might want to join them one day." He then led the man with the lightsaber outside.
My father rushed to the arena and took my home. When we arrived, he turned around and said. "You will join the republic Thursday morning and you will go to Kashyyykkkkk." I knew exactly why he made me do it he knew in my mind I knew the advantage of the empire. I enlisted and fought in a great battle many of my allies dead around me but the elites and their leader were still standing. Luckily both sides had taken heavy casualties so we were able to fight back putting the odds in our favors we quickly picked off the remaining few but one was crafty and caught use of guard. He attacked the left side right were I was the blaster bolt hitting my chest knocking me unconscious. All I could think of was This is it. I didn't know how long I had been knocked out but I woke up in a bactai tank. The water lowered and I was taken out. One of my best friends who had survived said happily. "We won the battle." The peace didn't last long though. The alarm went off and everyone began to grab their weapons. I didn't move thanks to the great pain of the wound. I could only stay there as I heard the screams of my fellow soldiers. When it all subsided a man walked in. "You might want to rethink staying with the republic dear child." Then I blacked out again.
This time a woke up in a bed. "Son a war is starting and they have made you an elite and if every thing goes well you my become a general." My father said walking back and forth in front of the window. I just nodded and he said. "You will leave in a week." I didn't even listen I just pondered on all of the invitations I had gotten to join the empire and how a viewed my dead comrades as pathetic and undeserving of life. Each day was the same until the last day, which was the day I had decided my destiny. "Father there is something I must ask you. If I were to change my allegiance what would you do?" He didn't even answer he just charged at me a blade already in his hand. I stopped him my blade threw his heart. His last words. "I knew you would do this and this is fitting you already broke my heart but know you make it bleed. My mother walking in a blaster in her hand. (she never was a great shooter.) If she hadn't walked in, she would have lived. She missed and before she could fire, again her head was rolling on the floor.
I left the house and got on the shuttle for Dantoine. I had been placed in charge of the bases operation. I walked threw the halls to the communication center and had everyone orderd to leave the room. We had obtained the signal of the empires base. "Hello, I have a propacission for you... I will do that, general." I walked out of the base and told my troops to attack scout the enemy base all of them because it would be heavily guarded and the might have to fight. I walked to the main controls, began to sabotage the system, and left a message saying that I had information to act on and that they should continue as always. I walked out of the base and hide. I waited for the troops to go inside and then it happened every thing began to short circuit and explode the base aflame and the survivors trapped begging me to save them. I just turned and walked towards the empire's base I data pad containing future plans in hand. That was it general." I said smiling at the great memory of those battles.
"Good good I believe you will be a great addition to the team and I hope your skills will become even better." He said dismissing me.
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