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Jarik Cassiline
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  Jarik's Bio
June 3, 2006 4:21:06 PM    View the profile of Jarik Cassiline 
Name: Jarik Cassiline
Callsign: Bandit
Age: 20
Height: 6'2
Weight: 195 lbs
Hair Color: Chestnut brown
Eye Color: Hazel
Identifying Marks: Pierced ears, scar to the side of the left eye
Place of Birth: Corellia
Family:
Davan Cassiline(father)
Taryn Cassiline(mother)
Seera Cassiline(twin sister)
Jonah Cassiline(younger brother)

Jarik was born to a family of fairly succesful Corellian traders. He was supposed to inherit the family business, but it wasn't for him. From an early age, the stars called to him. He practices his piloting even when he's not in the air, attempting to come up with new techniques. As the Vast Empire is to thank for his family's prosperity, most of his family is extremely loyal to the Empire, and Jarik is more so than most. He constantly trains physically, for the dual purposes of withstanding the rigors of flight and for the odd commando mission he might have to pull off. His favorite method of combat on the ground is getting up close and personal, but he won't hesitate to use his blaster if the opportunity arises.

His family was at first upset at his decision to join the Naval Academy, but they soon realized that it was for the best. Like certain other notable Corellians, Jarik was sticken with a desire to travel the cosmos and a thirst for adventure. He would never truly be happy, or efficient, doing paperwork and balancing his families' accounts. Jarik briefly considered the quicker, more dangerous route of smuggling, but he opted out of that path. While not reckless, he has been known to barrel headlong into anything he thinks will bring him some excitement. He does nothing without a whole heart, especially flying. From the time he was a child, Jarik has never felt more at home than in the cockpit of a starfighter.

Jarik was aggressive as a child. He was never a bully, but he certainly never backed down to one, either. At school, he'd often get into scraps with kids who were bigger, older and stronger than he was. One fight went particularly bad and almost cost Jarik his left eye. When that happened, his father quickly enrolled him in a self defense program. Jarik proved more than adequate, and mastered the cirriculum swiftly. He has since taken a great interest in the martial arts, and would especially love to study with the Echani if he ever had the opportunity.

As Jarik grew older, while he still loved the physical aspect of combat, he grem more interested in the mental areas of fighting. Tactics, strategems...these were the things that were holding his interest. He began reading and studying military tactics and records. This of course led him to perhaps the most important arm of any military...their Navy.

Jarik has ever since been obsessed with starship combat and tactics. He hopes to gain great skill at the Naval Academy and distinguish himself as a loyal and valuable member of the Imperial Navy.
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  RE: Jarik's Bio
June 3, 2006 4:23:02 PM    View the profile of Atrick25 
Looks good for a first try, but I think Shazam wants more "meat" in the History section.

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Jarik Cassiline
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  RE: Jarik's Bio
June 3, 2006 11:25:57 PM    View the profile of Jarik Cassiline 
Heh yeah, I was intending on it but I ran out of time before work. Have some time now before I sleep...let's see if I can't bang it out.
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  RE: Jarik's Bio
June 4, 2006 1:51:07 AM    View the profile of Jarik Cassiline 
Also, apologies if my bio is sucking right now...I'm sleep deprived and preoccupied with a martial arts tournament I'm going to be competing in in about eight hours...I'll do better when I've got the tourney over with!
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  RE: Jarik's Bio
June 4, 2006 8:51:10 AM    View the profile of Leon 
I like it, I think you did all right, better then my first bio, and don't worry Shazam will probaly like it to, he'll probaly tell you to change something, but for now leave it how it is untilll he tells you to change it. Good luck.
 
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  RE: Jarik's Bio
June 4, 2006 11:35:13 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
I'm your Trainer- That's Commander Shazam to you for your time here! I'm directing you to the following site so you can get some official notice on how to write your bio and what we'll be expecting here at the VEN (Vast Empire Navy).  As of right now, you are in the FS (Flight School) part of BT (Basic Training), which is the last part.  So, read through and go to Chapter 1- Character Creation. 

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Flight_School_%28FS%29

Obviously you've already started on one, but I don't want to look into it until you've got included all you're going to need in the first place- so take a good look at that site. Make sure you post the updated version in here so we can critique it and send you off to the next port. Welcome to the VEN.

(There's an edit button in the upper right hand corner- looks like a pen and paper- you're going to want to avoid double posting...)
 
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