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  Bones' Bio
December 27, 2005 2:14:24 PM    View the profile of Bones 
Personal Information:
Call Sign:  Bones
Real Name:  Julius Gregory Kelley
Native Language:  Basic
Hair Color:  Blonde
Eye Color:  Blue
Age:  25
Height:  6'2''
Weight:  195
Home World:  Trallus(Located in the Corellion Sector)

Talents/Skills:
Close Quarters Combat
Small Arms Expert
Long Rifle Marksman

Back Ground:

Julius Gregory Kelley, known to almost everyone as Greg, was named for his Grandfather Julius, who made a long career working under cover through the sector in smuggler rings for CorSec Counter "Spice" section.  Greg's' father Salvo also worked for CorSec, in the "Spice" interdiction section.  While working a case together, Julius and Salvo encountered a startup rebel group who were trying to sell a large quantity of  Glitterstim to fund their group.  Salvo, who was already unhappy with CorSec and the emerging Empire, decided to betray CorSec to the dealers, and to steal the Glitterstim, and leave the system on their ship.  What Salvo did not know was the group was not a Rebel group, but Black Sun.  Upon learning about the treachery, The Black Sun  gangsters murdered Julius, the whole time still attempting to maintain the cover of the Rebel group.  CorSec was however aware of the events, and promptly took, Greg four years old at the time, and his mother Nora into protective custody.  While Salvo was attempting to enter Hyperspace in the ship he had commandeered he was intercepted by an Imperial interdictor, and ordered to prepare to be boarded.  Knowing that he would be arrested, and taken to the Kessel Spice Mines, with the very same inmates he put there,  Salvo sent out a message to his wife, Nora, and only son Julius, that he loved them, and was sorry for disgracing the family, and hoped that Julius would follow in his foot steps as CorSec, then overloaded his hyperdrive, turning his ship into nothing more then flotsam and atoms.  CorSec intercepted Salvos message, and decided to maintain the cover story of the Rebel Group, blamed the death of Julius on the Rebels, and the death of Salvo on the Imperial ship that intercepted him.  The Black Sun was cut completely out.  Over the next Sixteen years, Greg's resentment for the Rebel Alliance, the Empire, and the New Republic grew and grew. 

Greg Entered CorSec Academy at the age of Twenty, and he excelled in all aspects of  CorSec, however, he was interested in only Intel.  Upon graduation Greg began working as an analist for Intelligence and had a good eye for detail.  One night while following up a lead, Greg encountered  a man named Bonner claiming to be former Intel, and a good friend of Julius, Greg's grandfather.  Bonner told Greg that CorSec had covered up the incident and pushed blame onto The Imperials.  The man refused to tell Greg any more then the two were closer then brothers.  The man gave Greg a Data Card, and turned down an alley then disappeared into an old abandoned building.  Disturbed by the happenings of the night, Greg decided to go home to get some rest.  When Greg got home, curiosity got the better of him, Greg had to see what was on the Data Card.  He inserted it into his secure data pad, to see an old grainy Holo of a Theta-class Shuttle streaking towards the Holorecorder.  Greg noted a faint audio in the back ground that sounded like radio chatter, then saw the Tractor latch onto the ship.  Greg noted the audio again, then watched the ship blow apart.  The Holovid terminated the recording, and the screen went black.  Greg adjusted the audio pick ups and restarted the holovid.  He closed his eyes to enhance his hearing and Listened:

    Imperial Interdictor:  "Theta Shuttle, this is Imperial                Interdictor    Falos, shut down drives and prepare for boarding.  We are under orders to detain you and turn you over to CorSec for protective custody"    
    Theta-Class Shuttle:  "I am sorry Greg, I was wrong, I love you and Your Mom.  I am sorry father for disgracing you, and getting you killed.  This is all my fault"
    Imperial Interdictor:  "Theta Shuttle, this is Imperial Interdictor Falos, shut down drives and prepare for boarding.  This is your last warning...Captain, He is powering up the engines and engaging his hyperdrive, he's going to... Oh Sithspawn."

The Holo ended there.

Greg sat silent and shaking.  All these years, he has directed his hatred towards the Empire for killing his father.  All they were trying to do was hold him until he could be turned back over to CorSec.  How could he work for an organization that lied to him, and diverted blame to others.  With Corellia allied with the Rebellion, there was only one place to go.  The Empire.  Greg resigned from CorSec that night, joined the ranks of the Imperial Army.     
[This message has been edited by Bones (edited December 28, 2005 6:37:49 PM)]
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  RE: Bones' Bio
December 27, 2005 9:27:45 PM    View the profile of Marka 
It was good, good storyline to it, excellent writing. I liked it. The only thing that I didn't warm to is your vast skills. Yeah, that sounds so b*tchy, but when people have that many skills it annoys me cause you seem to be a master at a lot of different things. But meh.
 
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  RE: Bones' Bio
December 28, 2005 3:31:59 AM    View the profile of Bones 
Really the skill set is what any law enforcement officer would be tought...the only exxception is the interigation...some thing not really taught in an early academy. 

Thanks I am glad you liked it, its the first I ever wrote.
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  RE: Bones' Bio
December 28, 2005 5:36:02 PM    View the profile of Marka 
Heh, I wish real life cops were as good as that  Actually my bio was the first one I had written aswell. I guess I hadn't really tried until I joined here.
 
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  RE: Bones' Bio
December 28, 2005 6:35:04 PM    View the profile of Bones 
Thanks, and sorry if i sounded a bit curt with my reply, it was a bit to early, and a little short on coffee. Thanks for the comments, that was probably the longest thing I have written in about 12 years.
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  RE: Bones' Bio
December 28, 2005 7:44:02 PM    View the profile of Sniping101 
Believe me when I say cops in real life can't shoot, I know. Generally give your character limited abilities when you join then develop those abilities as you go along. It's pretty standard fare, and don't worry, we've had much much worse. Still a good idea to rewrite, hell, I've been here three years and I'm still rewriting my bio, of course I'll never be satisfied, there are others who would have stopped revising by now.
 
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  RE: Bones' Bio
December 30, 2005 9:43:15 AM    View the profile of Bones 
I will be editing the heck out of My bio now...After going back and rereading it numerous times, I think I have a few inconsistancies in alliances, ships, and i need a bit more character development.  I am still figuring out the Vast Empire Universe, and all the newances that accompany it.  The is a lot of great reading in here.  Its going to take some time to get through it all.  Everyone here seems to be really dedicated to the cause, and I want to put forth the best effort as to not degrade anyone elses work.  I would love any and all coments, ideas, and critisims you all have. 
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