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Ra'a'mah
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  Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 16, 2005 1:33:57 AM    View the profile of Ra'a'mah 
Char-

Name- Ra'a'mah Numare

AKA- Rah

Age- 24

Home Planet- Coruscant

Current Location- Naval Acadamy

Family and History- She was orphaned at 13. She had to learn to survive in a tough world with little to no help. She has never married or had children. Because of what happend to her when she was young, she has no desire to ever have children of her own.

She was able to get a small dwelling and helps to care for other orphans, lost and abandoned children. That is enough for her to do. She works at star ship repair shop to pay rent and hopefully get her off planet soon. She can pilot a ship and enjoys space travel.


Appearance-

Hair- Black

Eyes- Gold

Height- 5'3"

Weight- 110 LBS

Clothing- Brown tunic, black pants, boots and a black cloak

Weapons- Two boot knives, a blaster and rifle

Utilities- Universal com-link, cuffs and backpack


Skills-

She can pilot almost any space ship with no training.

She is a great leader and organizer.

She has little training with her blaster, but she can fire her rifle with great accuresy.

(I had to redo my profile. Let me know what you think of this one and if I need to change anything.)
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 16, 2005 2:18:15 AM    View the profile of Willtconq 
There we go, very nice bio. Welcome to the Navy!
 
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 16, 2005 1:56:54 PM    View the profile of JSRUSSELL 
Welcome to the navy im sure ill see you around.
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 16, 2005 2:50:13 PM    View the profile of Jack Nebulax 
Welcome to the Vastest of Empires, pilot.
 
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 16, 2005 4:32:41 PM    View the profile of JMac 
*Insert generic welcome here*


Your bio looks really good, I think we can definitely use you in the Navy.
 
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 16, 2005 6:34:57 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Howdy there, welcome to the VEN.  I'm Shazam, and I'll be your semi-supervisor person today.

My job is to go on ahead and point you in the direction of the academy page: http://www.academy.imperial-navy.com

What do you do once you reach that point?  Go to the 'Exams' link and review the Basic Training page and then once you feel you've associated yourself with the site, (which it looks like you must have), you can fill out the form at the bottom of the page known as your VEBAT.  Once that is sent, you will be off to Flight School.

Now, the main step to flight school is your bio...  Its not that way for nothing.  You, as well as all of the people who will be writing with you, need something to run off of.  The more accurate, decriptive, and overall 'full' it is...  The better people will be able to write about you in their post.  It makes the RPGing of the Navy more succesful altogether...  So, hows your bio?

Well, you say that you had to grow up in a tough world.  I'm about to make your bio even more so... 

You might say where you were abandoned, or why, although that might seem obvious.  Possibly put some background into what forced your parents to leave you behind and who helped you out afterwords.  Or, if you were truly on your own, how could you possibly have survived at 13?  Steal a ship, get a job, or maybe you put yourself in an orphanage.  No matter what your history is, it has to link up with your skills.  Your aptitudes are something totally your own, but those skills must be learned.  If you are a great fighter pilot, why?  Or if you know everything about how an engine works, how?  We seek explanation from people.  I ask only that you do your best to describe yourself to the best of your abilities.  With all of this information, we can collect how you act and how you will react to the characters around you, especially when those people are the ones you are posting. 

So, you might go on ahead and add another heading that says:

Personallity-
Quirks-
Idiosyncrasies-
Things she hates-
Things she likes-

Those last three aren't required, but they give serious insight into your character and allow people to include you in their post and make them 'good' post.  The Navy prides itself on good story backdrop and background.  It looks like your ambitious though, so lets see some more of it.

If you have any questions, direct them to this post or you may message me or others if you need further assistance.  We're good like that.  Keep Rockin...
 
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 17, 2005 1:13:18 AM    View the profile of Ra'a'mah 
Thank you for the pointers on improving my profile. I will work on them and post them here in the next few days.
I have some stuff to think about now.

What is the time of the storyline? I never looked.
*Embarassed*

It will help me with the new info I will add.
[This message has been edited by Ra'a'mah (edited November 17, 2005 1:15:03 AM)]
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 17, 2005 1:21:28 AM    View the profile of Gemini 
We're in the Thrawn Era, approximately 10 years after RotJ" or something.----qoated from Cosmic,

Look in the Army main board, under State of the Galaxy made by Fury, there info that would help you out.
 
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 17, 2005 2:10:58 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
When you've finished your bio to the point where you like it, or atleast you think its ready for finishing out Flight school, post it as well as a notice, telling us you've sent in your VEBAT and finished your Aviators Exam.  We'll have you right through to a squadron unless I missed something.  Keep rockin.
 
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 24, 2005 8:36:10 PM    View the profile of Ra'a'mah 
My computer died a week ago. I have been working on getting that fixed this week and haven't worked on my profile more. I was able to get some of the stuff done I needed to for my training. I will hopefully be able to finish it soon.
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 24, 2005 10:55:50 PM    View the profile of Jen Knight 
That's alright, looks like you have a pretty good start on your bio already.

Oh and Welcome to the VE!
 
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
November 26, 2005 2:00:49 AM    View the profile of Ra'a'mah 
Redo profile for Ra'a'mah.  Let me know if this is better than the first or if anything needs more work.


Name- Ra'a'mah Numare

AKA- Rah

Race- Human

Age- 24

Home Planet- Coruscant

Current Location- Naval Acadamy

Family and History- Her parents fought for the Alliance and were killed in the battle of Endor. Rah was safe on Coruscant with an uncle. When news of her parents death, her uncle turned her out of the streets. He told her she would never be good at anything and was not worth keeping around. She was 13 at the time.

She survived for a short period on her own, but found it was difficult for a child her age. She eventually put herself into an orphanage ran by a woman named Selene.

Selene knew Rah would probably not get adopted, due to her age. She put her in charge of some of the children. In doing this, Rah gained leadership skills, compassion, negotiation and clear judgement. Selene also enrolled her is a defense class, where she excelled with her rifle.

Five years later, Selene died and Rah took over the orphanage. She had a difficult time managing everything herself. Eventually, Rah decided the best course of action would be to put some of the older children in charge of the younger. She found a job at a ship repair shop and earned money for the care of the other orphans and the house.

During her training at the shop, Theron, the shops owner, noticed Rah had a great affinity to fly a ship with no training. She was also able to repair anything wrong on a ship.

Very soon after starting work, Theron put her in charge of the final stage of repair and testing. She worked there six years and has started to feel chained. She can go no further than she has akready.

Not knowing what her future holds, she left the orphanage and repair shop. Deciding her next action, she joined the Imperial Navy.

Personality- Overall Ra'a'mah is easy going. She stays pretty calm under pressure amd rarely fails to meet a deadline.

Quirks and Idiosyncrasies- Even though she does great work on starships, she doesn't work with artificial intelligence. She would rather see a droid dead than work with or even communicate with one.

Likes- She loves flying, reading and working with her hands.

Hates- She hates droids and is terrified of bees.


Appearance-

Skin Tone- She has very light skin and freckles all over her body.

Hair- Black Long and straight. She usually has it pulled back into a tail at the nape of her neck.

Eyes- Gold

Height- 5'3"

Weight- 110 LBS

Marks and Scars- She has a small red mark on her left temple. About the size of a thumb print. The backs of her hands are scarred from working on ships. She also has a scar just below her right elbow from a knife cut she got when she was on the streets. Her upper left arm has a tatoo symbol from a book she really enjoyed as a child.

Clothing- Brown tunic, black pants, boots and a black cloak

Weapons- Two boot knives, a blaster and rifle

Utilities- Universal com-link, cuffs and backpack


Skills-

She can pilot almost any space ship with no training.

She has leadership ability and organization.

She has little training with her blaster, but she can fire her rifle with great accuresy.

(Second edit)
[This message has been edited by Ra'a'mah (edited December 4, 2005 1:58:18 AM)]
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  RE: Ra'a'mah Numare reporting for duty
December 2, 2005 10:10:35 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Sorry, I havn't gotten back to you.  Didn't realize you'd finished your bio-

As for that, I ask only that you go on ahead and give it a good read through.  You start out in third person- "She said, he did..." and then switch to kind of a second person thing-" She says, she does..."  That's about all I ask you to fix.  Other than that, your bio looks pretty good.  Might I ask where you learned to use a weapon?  One might assume through your adventures with your shop owner Theron...  Its nice to know though. 

What's next then?  Your aviators exam of course.  You need to go to the academy webpage at academy.imperial-navy.com

Click the picture and you'll enter the main site.  Once your in, hold your cursor over the exams tab and several things will appear.  In order to finish flight school, you need to go on ahead and click the Aviator's Exam link.  Take the test and let me know through this thread that you've completed it.  After that we'll have you off to a squadron in no time.  The best to you.
 
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