Redo profile for Ra'a'mah. Let me know if this is better than the first or if anything needs more work.
Name- Ra'a'mah Numare
AKA- Rah
Race- Human
Age- 24
Home Planet- Coruscant
Current Location- Naval Acadamy
Family and History- Her parents fought for the Alliance and were killed in the battle of Endor. Rah was safe on Coruscant with an uncle. When news of her parents death, her uncle turned her out of the streets. He told her she would never be good at anything and was not worth keeping around. She was 13 at the time.
She survived for a short period on her own, but found it was difficult for a child her age. She eventually put herself into an orphanage ran by a woman named Selene.
Selene knew Rah would probably not get adopted, due to her age. She put her in charge of some of the children. In doing this, Rah gained leadership skills, compassion, negotiation and clear judgement. Selene also enrolled her is a defense class, where she excelled with her rifle.
Five years later, Selene died and Rah took over the orphanage. She had a difficult time managing everything herself. Eventually, Rah decided the best course of action would be to put some of the older children in charge of the younger. She found a job at a ship repair shop and earned money for the care of the other orphans and the house.
During her training at the shop, Theron, the shops owner, noticed Rah had a great affinity to fly a ship with no training. She was also able to repair anything wrong on a ship.
Very soon after starting work, Theron put her in charge of the final stage of repair and testing. She worked there six years and has started to feel chained. She can go no further than she has akready.
Not knowing what her future holds, she left the orphanage and repair shop. Deciding her next action, she joined the Imperial Navy.
Personality- Overall Ra'a'mah is easy going. She stays pretty calm under pressure amd rarely fails to meet a deadline.
Quirks and Idiosyncrasies- Even though she does great work on starships, she doesn't work with artificial intelligence. She would rather see a droid dead than work with or even communicate with one.
Likes- She loves flying, reading and working with her hands.
Hates- She hates droids and is terrified of bees.
Appearance-
Skin Tone- She has very light skin and freckles all over her body.
Hair- Black Long and straight. She usually has it pulled back into a tail at the nape of her neck.
Eyes- Gold
Height- 5'3"
Weight- 110 LBS
Marks and Scars- She has a small red mark on her left temple. About the size of a thumb print. The backs of her hands are scarred from working on ships. She also has a scar just below her right elbow from a knife cut she got when she was on the streets. Her upper left arm has a tatoo symbol from a book she really enjoyed as a child.
Clothing- Brown tunic, black pants, boots and a black cloak
Weapons- Two boot knives, a blaster and rifle
Utilities- Universal com-link, cuffs and backpack
Skills-
She can pilot almost any space ship with no training.
She has leadership ability and organization.
She has little training with her blaster, but she can fire her rifle with great accuresy.
(Second edit)
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Ra'a'mah
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