Well i have updated my Bio, if anyone cares to take a look at it... criticizm welcome, and anything i can do to improve is greatly appreciated.




APPEARANCE

Full Name: Mahkar Sinister

Age: 22

Height: 6'2"

Weight: 200 lbs

Hair: Short Dirty Blonde almost brown

Eyes: Green with a gold rings around the pupils

Body Type: Muscular from farming and fighting Sand People.

BIO

Mahkar Sinister grew up like any young boy would on the barren dusty planet of Tatooine, working with his father on the moisture farm while his mother assisted, but for the most part was in charge of the day to day stuff around the homestead. Mahkar's father Batamus was a quiet man, but very intelligent, he taught his son that even though you may not like something it is still important do the job and do it right. Even though it was not easy dealing with Batamus and his firm hand and quick to loose temper, Mahkar struggled on, always wishing that he would be able to leave the dirt hole he was from for something better.

For the most part things seemed to be relatively calm and peaceful at the Sinister farm, until the day that the Tusken Raider happened by the Sinister's moisture farm. Batamus told Mahkar to stay out of sight by the machinery while he took care of the sand person. As Batamus approached the sand person raised his gaderffii and clubbed Batamus to death, Batamus screaming in agony and pain the whole time. Mahkar scared dropped his head into his hands and began to cry but made little noise so that the Tusken Raider would not hear him. The Raider searched Batamus' body and removed his family necklace, the Raider than mounted his beast and proceeded to go on with his business.

A few moments later Mahkar's mother Sheil ran from the home, the laments of her late husband stirring her from her preparation of dinner. When she arrived at her husband's side she dropped and began to weep, at this point Mahkar had emerged from around the corner and ran to his mother with tears in his eyes... from that day forward Mahkar devoted his life to two things, Killing as Many as possible and leaving the god forsaken planet of dirt...

Twelve years later...

Mahkar now a little bit older and a little bit colder, being as his mother died six years prior, had about had enough of the trappings of the wastelands of Tatooine. Sinister as he solely went by now had earned himself a bit of a reputation albeit not the best of ones, as being a hermit and a murderer and having the worst temper should it ever be shown. Although Sinister was the person one would want should one ever have to go into the wastelands. It had been a long time since Sinister had started his private war on the Tusken Raiders, and many lives had been ended, with no quarter shown, but Sinister was growing weary and tired of the hunts as he liked to call them for the fact that it was getting to easy to track and kill the sand people. Only one thing remained for Sinister to do... Join the Imperial Army where him and his anger could be put to some good use.

Personality

Mahkar Sinister is a very quite and reserved individual, preferring to be on his own and working, he is strong, polite, but often cold and apathetic. Only rarely does he show his anger and when he does it usually means someone is getting hurt. Sinister is also a very intelligent person wise beyond his years as when he was young before his fathers death Mahkar's mother taught him to read. And on the few visits to Mos Eisley, Sinister picks up a few things that he might not have read. Covered in scars that are not all physical Sinister searches for the Raider that killed his father and stole the one object that meant the most to him, but after years of searching he needs to escape maybe find his humanity again. Drawn to the Imperial Army Mahkar hopes that he may find a new use for his talents, and hopes maybe he can escape the pain that he has kept inside alone for many years.


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