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Adar Ree
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  Adar Ree´s bio
July 27, 2005 1:34:56 AM    View the profile of Adar Ree 
Name: Adar Ree
Callsign: Adar Ree
Age: 18
Height: 5'21
Weight: 139 lbs
Hair Color: blonde
Eye Color: blue
Place of Birth: Endor

Under the trees of Endor lay a little child, his mother and father abused by the Ewoks and taken from their little cozy home in one of the greatest trees of Endor. The little child was, surprised by himself, not crying, but hoping that his father hid him well among the bushes, for if he did not, the Ewoks could return and find him, and then he would join his parents in who knows what. Then he heard something cracking: he immediately stopped crying. Then he saw them, the great white men. It turned out to be Stormtroopers. The Stormtroopers found him and at first, they wanted to leave them behind, but then the squad leader decided it would be inhumane to leave such a little child prey for the vicious Ewoks. So they took him with them back to HQ. The squad leader treated him as his own son, and taught him many things. From the age of 5 the young Adar was already studying combat, as he wanted to fight the Ewoks, who had taken him from his parents. Year after year, he trained and trained, until he was 16. That year, he went on a patrol with his stepfather's squad, who by the way were one of the elite, sent out to eliminate Ewoks for revenge of the attack on the bunker. That faithful day, they found Ewoks HQ, and the Ewoks were slaughtered. They Stormtroopers didn't even aimed. They just shot at everything that moved. Adar didn't have a rifle, but he did have 2 katanas, which he made himself, just for this very occasion. By the end of the day, at the campfire, the Stormtroopers were celebrating the finally found the guerrilla Ewoks that had been attacking them every week. Their white armor was still clean as ever, but when Adar joined the party, there was a moment of silence. They had been counting how much they shot, but when they saw all the blood on Adar´s clothes, they didn't have to think twice over who killed the most. And that was the day that Xeno Ree, the squad leader filed a recommendation for Adar at the Imperial Academy, and so he stands before you, still clinging to his katanas. May this be a warning to those who stand against them, especially the little
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[This message has been edited by Adar Ree (edited July 27, 2005 6:56:49 AM)]
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  RE: Adar Ree´s bio
July 27, 2005 6:13:46 AM    View the profile of sk8guy 
Your bio is looking good. You have a lot of grammar mistakes and spelling errors. I would suggest you copy and plast this bio into Word, or a similar program and fix all the errors you have there. Once you have revised it please post it in your profile on the roster  and email [email protected]. You will then have it reviewed and once it is satsifactory you can move on to the next step in your training.
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  RE: Adar Ree´s bio
July 27, 2005 6:42:33 AM    View the profile of Yillis 
katana's are cool
 
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Adar Ree
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  RE: Adar Ree´s bio
July 27, 2005 6:47:27 AM    View the profile of Adar Ree 
okay, and sk8guy, i want to warn you, I´m Dutch so grammar and spelling mistakes can be made
 
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  RE: Adar Ree´s bio
July 27, 2005 8:04:59 AM    View the profile of Willtconq 
that's what spell checks are for.
 
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  RE: Adar Ree´s bio
July 27, 2005 10:58:34 AM    View the profile of sk8guy 
This is fine Adar. We have a couple members from other countries. I'd be glad to help you out along the way. If you want to send it to me I can read it over and fix any of the grammar stuff or offer suggestions.

BTW, keep up the excellent work; you are showing great promise.
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[This message has been edited by sk8guy (edited July 27, 2005 10:59:44 AM)]
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  RE: Adar Ree´s bio
July 27, 2005 11:55:24 AM    View the profile of Adar Ree 
thx for the compliment, I'm known to work hard
 
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  RE: Adar Ree´s bio
August 6, 2005 6:32:28 AM    View the profile of Carnanum Ree 
I dont have anything against Ewoks...
 
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