Xynen
ComNet n00b
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
Post Number: 14
Total Posts: 34
Joined: Jun 2005
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Bio
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July 18, 2005
9:49:50 AM
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Species: Zabrak
Eye Color: Blue
Age: 24
No. of Horns: 10
Tattoos: Full body pattern (Cobalt Blue)
Skin Color: White
Languages: Basic, Trandoshan, Gamorrean, Wookie, Rodian
Skills: Steet fighting, kick boxing, problem solving
From the depths of Coruscant I have risen. From an elite member of the vicious "Raptors" to the flight member of Nazgul squadron.
I have done my roster bio and it is totally better then this so check it out!
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~Xynen
[This message has been edited by
Xynen
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9:15:10 AM)]
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Jack Nebulax
ComNet Disciple
[VE-NAVY] Senior Chief Petty Officer
[VE-VEEC] Reporter
Post Number: 2273
Total Posts: 3245
Joined: Aug 2004
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RE: Bio
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July 18, 2005
9:52:15 AM
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Xynen
ComNet n00b
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
Post Number: 16
Total Posts: 34
Joined: Jun 2005
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RE: Bio
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July 18, 2005
9:53:49 AM
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Well acutally I don't know the date that the Vast Empire runs at. So technically I cannot make a valid birthdate until I find out. -----------------------
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Xynen
ComNet n00b
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
Post Number: 17
Total Posts: 34
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RE: Bio
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July 18, 2005
10:11:08 AM
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I have a question Jack Nebulax. Is my Id line correct?
TRN/CRW/XYNEN/NAZGUL 8/(2-3)/WING 1/mSSD Atrus/ Defensive Fleet
I am not too sure if it is correct. -----------------------
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Jen Knight
ComNet Initiate
[VE-NAVY] Petty Officer 1st Class
Post Number: 165
Total Posts: 317
Joined: Apr 2005
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RE: Bio
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July 18, 2005
10:15:43 AM
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You're in Nazgul, correct? Then you wouldn't be a trainee, you would be a flight member.
FM/CRW Xynen/Nazgul 8 (2-3)/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/Defensive/VEN/VE -----------------------
Jen Knight
As Darkness falls, Night unfolds ebon wings to wrap the world in its dark embrace...
Vast Empire Navy
FM/PO1 Jen Knight/Nazgul 12 (3-4)/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/Defensive Fleet/VEN/VE(=*A*=)(=*SA*=)[VC:B] |
Jack Nebulax
ComNet Disciple
[VE-NAVY] Senior Chief Petty Officer
[VE-VEEC] Reporter
Post Number: 2274
Total Posts: 3245
Joined: Aug 2004
Status: Offline
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RE: Bio
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July 18, 2005
10:18:31 AM
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sk8guy
ComNet Expert
[VE-DJO] Dark Jedi Knight
[VE-NAVY] Captain
[VE-VEHC] Captain*
Post Number: 1535
Total Posts: 1653
Joined: Sep 2001
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RE: Bio
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July 18, 2005
11:47:42 AM
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Please do not include any Jedi or Force sensitive stuff in your bio. I know everyone wants to be a Jedi and be Force sensitive but this just isn't logical. Think about the Star Wars universe and the time frame we fit.
The Emporer killed any Jedi that remained and if someone was found to have Force sensitivity they would not know what it is. For example take Luke Skywalker, he was Force sensitive but did not know it, and even if he did seem to do strange things he wouldn't be able to control or know what it is. Ben Kenobi had to tell him he was Force sensitive. Also if you did show extreme signs of the Force you would either be in service to the Emporer or dead.
You might want to add a bit more detail to your bio as well. Since you should cut out all the Force reference there won't be much there.
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Vast Empire Naval Training Officer
Naval Academy
NTO/CPT sk8guy/Abrae/Vectra System - (=A=) (=SA=) (=MA=) (=FOCE=)[LSM][IC]
DJK sk8guy, retired hermit of the Dark Side
Ex Ambassador/Squadron Leader/Cult Leader/Lusthawk
WoW addict.
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11:48:46 AM)]
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