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Linda_Irris
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  Finally getting around to putting a bio
July 15, 2005 9:09:28 PM    View the profile of Linda_Irris 
[Name] Linda Irris
[Age] 18
[Gender] Female
[Species] Human

[Hair] Brown
[Eyes] Blue
[Hobbies] Writing stories, reading Star Wars Technical Journals, Sleeping
[Affiliation] VE Navy
[Rank] Crewman

[Personality] I can be nice at times, but I can also be partially crazy, mostly when I'm half asleep.  I won't pay attention and do things I later regret (look in the lounge for an example).

[Character History] Linda Irris was born on Coruscant, as one of the nearly trillion beings that inhabit the universe's only city/planet.  Her parents, rebel sympathizers, were trying to teach her conflicting viewpoints on how the galaxy should work.

By preaching a philosophy of trying to become one with society, and help to maintain order, they confused Linda with their talk of how the Empire should be overthrown, which would surely cause chaos and confusion, perhaps destroying much in the ensuing wave of disorder.

When Linda graduated from Coruscant Educational Facility #40573, she applied to join the Imperial Navy, to help pursue her dream of helping to bring order to the galaxy, much to her parents' dismay.  They were both later arrested for trying to lead a demonstration against the Empire, and Linda was forced to leave them to their rebellious ways in an Imperial Corrections Facility.

[This message has been edited by Linda_Irris (edited July 17, 2005 9:33:46 PM)]
Jack Nebulax
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  RE: Finally getting around to putting a bio
July 16, 2005 6:57:16 AM    View the profile of Jack Nebulax 
I don't think you need real-life information here, at least I wouldn't put my entire life history there. If anything, I'd put my real name, age, date of birth, and maybe where I live.

But otherwise, it's very, very good. Keep up the good work!
 
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Jaden
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  RE: Finally getting around to putting a bio
July 16, 2005 8:57:17 AM    View the profile of Jaden 
I like that she put the real life information in there.  Your Character Bio is really good too.
 
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Shazam
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  RE: Finally getting around to putting a bio
July 16, 2005 12:11:55 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
What we've been working on with my group is emotional descriptions.  Meaning, how someone reacts...  Such as, what makes people, happy, angry, sad...  Whatever.  Plus the reasoning behind it.  Some people arn't quite as clever at assuming how people will act according to thier history. 

Good start, but you may want to add what your person is 'really' like.  This is for your own benefit and that of others who want to include you in their post.  Overall, interactions are better and so is the story as it becomes multi-layered.  Hopefully that wasn't disheartening or disrupting, but rather informal and kind.  I was 'Kind' right?
 
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Linda_Irris
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  RE: Finally getting around to putting a bio
July 16, 2005 8:47:32 PM    View the profile of Linda_Irris 
well I guess if my character had any kind of personality at all, it'd be mostly just sorta... I dunno... shy and nerdy... because I hide from people alot.  And I also have most of the Star Wars novels (but none of the comic books).  So yeah, I know more than most everyone else around me, but I don't want to be involved with them.
 
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Shazam
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  RE: Finally getting around to putting a bio
July 18, 2005 7:53:23 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
I'm havin a hard time seperating here, not that any of this is any of my deal per se...  But I can't tell if your talking about yourself as a character or the character your writing 'bout sometimes.  That last bit was you and the character then?
 
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sk8guy
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  RE: Finally getting around to putting a bio
July 18, 2005 9:26:36 AM    View the profile of sk8guy 
Your bio looks good. You might want to include some information about how you came to the service of the Vast Empire, but that is totally optional. You'll also want to copy and paste this over to the Roster under your profile. Other than that looks good.

Email [email protected] when you have the finished version on the roster under your profile. Thanks.
 
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