Revan666
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The Life of Holocron Korr
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July 12, 2005
6:50:42 AM
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Holocron Korr was born on Gondoria A few systems away from Coruscant. He was trained by the Jedi at Age 5 at the near by Jedi Temple on the planet. At the age of 15 he had finish his training as a Jedi Knight. The Council on Coruscant invited him to judge him, so they could put him on the council. They thought if he was so young on the council he would progress to fast and become one of the Best Jedi and that is what they did. He became the Leader of the Jedi Order at the Age of 35, when Master Arca killed by Droids in The Great Sith Wars with Exar Kun. Holocron Korr help develop the Jedi Holocron Archives. Then, he had to be trained again since the Sith Spell for The Sith War brain washed him at the Age of 38. He Had Master Kae Qel Droma and Ulic before Ulic Died. He had to fight the Worse Trooper of all before the Battle of Ruusan, Lotus Kataran. This trooper was led by Lord Kaan, which who led The BrotherHood of Darkness. Holocron escaped near death before the trooper shot him with a missile at point blank range. He fought at the Battle of Ruusan but didn't survive the Sith "thought bomb." His Spirit wanders The Valley of the Jedi and the Whole entire Galaxy. 
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Hunter Emnis
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RE: The Life of Holocron Korr
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July 12, 2005
6:55:35 AM
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Wait.... Does this story involve your character at all? -----------------------
HUnter EMnis
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a leader with a follower,
seriousness with immaturity,
smartness with idiocy,
merciful with relentlessness,
a friend with an enemy.
Combine two opposites,
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Revan666
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RE: The Life of Holocron Korr
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July 12, 2005
6:59:37 AM
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Yes it does Hunts only a bit for now okay and its still a work in progress! |
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RE: The Life of Holocron Korr
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July 19, 2005
3:07:09 PM
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Hey! No yelling. Lol
Uhhhh, you might wanna detail somemore Rev, actually, you definitely want to. I heard earlier you're gonna be in Raiders, well, welcome! If you have any question about the bio, the squad or the VE in general, let me know at [email protected] -----------------------
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RE: The Life of Holocron Korr
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July 19, 2005
3:24:56 PM
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This cannot possibly involve his character. As it mentions events that are thousands of years in the past. -----------------------
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RE: The Life of Holocron Korr
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July 19, 2005
7:37:01 PM
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Events that aren't even close together.... Your character would be in the hundreds of years old age by the time you lived all of those events.
Read about the timeline a bit more, Revan, and read more about the history of what actually happened (pay especially close attention to dates). You can't just take every single battle that happened in history and just smush them together as if they had happened several years a part from each other.
I'm saying it again: We are in the Thrawn Era - 10 years after the Battle of Yavin. You cannot possibly be talking about your character. -----------------------
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