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  The taxi driver
May 30, 2005 7:46:23 PM    View the profile of vint 
Heres my first story that i have cooked up.

The taxi driver.




    A light shifted in front of me.My taxi turned on it side. I felt my hand jamming the control stick down to the left. The putrid air of Coruscant Sector-3-east filled my nose. The wind ripped at my face. I tried to warn my passenger, but nothing came out of the gaping whole in my face. In the moment of incoming death, my body went limp, not a cold kind of limp; but a ,"im about to die and i for some reason dont care", kind of warm
    I heard my passenger try to scream. But the collapsing wall of my taxi speeder pressed against his side. No one even heard his last breath, the screaching of metal drowned out everything; even my hearing. Sparks and smoke hit my face like a Wookies fist. My last glimpse before everything suffocated my senses, was of a fast approuching ground; it wasnt really the ground, it was the top of a huge trash compacter.

                 What better way to die, then in your own refuse?

        *        *        *        *        *        *

    "He's a goner. Turn this junk around. The stench here is hurting my eyes." A  large burly man in the co-pilots seat said.
    The man controlling the ship ignored the dolt beside him. "We're not leaving 'till i see his charred bones. We cant have old Kee-Polg getting angry at us again." The co-pilot sighed, gazing at the blazing ship below them heading fast and steady toward, "bottom", as the workers here used to say.
    The hunt was near its end...
    The ship hit the compacter. Its follower pulled up.  No flames erupted from the crash site.
    "Where'd it go?"
    "If i knew we'd be there yesterday." The pilot retorted, turning the ship around.
    "It might've pulled up in time."
    "You fool", the pilot glanced over at ogre'ish man."A ship with one wing and on fire isnt just gonna pull up; for one, the last time i saw it, it was fourty feet from that awfull trash compacter. You think it survived that?"
    "No".
    As they drew closer to where a crash should have been, they saw that their pursuit had gone through a very large vent and into the Coruscants waste. They set down on the flattest area of the roof they could find.
    "You think im going down there?" The co-pilot started laughing and muttering about his bad luck.
    "Oh shut up. Get a grip on yourself! I know we dont have any carm4  suites, you can just get a breathmask and you should be fine."
       
    As they stood by the vent they saw that the waste had cushioned the taxi's fall, but it was beyond repair.
    "Think there still alive?"
    "Maybe. We gotta check. And stay quiet". They jumped down into the trash, making a louder sound then they had hoped to. No sounds came from the ship, except a running engine that tried to cut its way through the mush. It was half way embedded into the stink. A thin greenish-gray mist hovered about the place.
    With his first step the mans foot sunk into the "ground". He pulled it out and whispered a curse.
    " Ok. We're gonna have to take this slowly. One step at a time." With that, he pushed his foot onto an old Astromech T3 droid, which proved to be solid. And though his co-pilot and complained about everything, he never lied. especially about his bad luck; because he miss stepped more then he stepped; but me, i never had a problem the whole way to the ship.
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  RE: The taxi driver
May 30, 2005 8:23:37 PM    View the profile of vint 
      I entered first, my co-pilot stumbling behind me. I had my blaster out and ready. After my quick search, i concluded they had escaped. But they couldnt be far, there were blood stains on the seats.
        *        *        *        *        *        *
    My head felt like it had taken a hit from an ion cannon. My sight was blurred, blocks of gray crowded me. My body felt wet. The man who had been my passenger was dragging me forward.
    Why is it, that the day i need to get home, our tenth anniversary, i get stuck in the bowels of Coruscant? How i wish i could retire...
    I hear the man curse in huttese.
    The taxi buisness. Who as a child said they wanted to be a taxi driver? Not me. My dream was to be a starship mechanic, work on Mon Calimari.
    I fall, but the man holds me up. "Just a little further".
    Those dreams went to the dumps. And here i am in those dumps, knee deep in unfulfilled dreams. Maybe this was a sign to get out of this line of work. Either way, i have no ship.
    I gasped for breath.
    My ship i had loved her. A Sienar taxi LL3R, they made ten thousand of them. I modified mine: new carpet, correlion ventler rings, a nav droid, and a new paint job.
    We slowed down. He said something i couldnt make out.
    The year i purchased her, my family took no vacation. I had told my wife it was my dream to get one. What a lier i am...
    My head went underwater. When i came up everything was clear, there were no longer blurs and grays. We were in a narrow canal filled with trash, mostly liquid. The green-gray walls of durasteel went straight up twenty feet. We were going upstream.
    "Where we going?" I wanted to ask who he was but this did'nt seem like the best time to do that.
   
    "We're getting out and away from this place and those men". He did'nt have a Coruscant accent, that much i could tell.

    "Who were those men? They dont seem in the best of moods." Asking this seemed safer then asking why they were after him, because they certainly were'nt after me.
   
    "I dont know." Did he really think he was a good lier? "Any reason they would be after you?" Now he was shifting the blame to me.
    My resonse was simple. "No".
   
[This message has been edited by vint (edited June 3, 2005 2:38:45 PM)]
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  RE: The taxi driver
June 4, 2005 3:59:16 PM    View the profile of vint 
We came to a ladder that took us to the roof. From there we decided where to go. It was at least another mile to the edge of this garbage facility.

    "We go across  here?" The man asked. He looked tired.

    "I guess so. What other choice do we have?"

    "It looks like we'll be with eachother for a while. So, may i have the knoledge  of your name?"

    "Sure, its Kelvem Railter." I relpied. "You?"

    "Yuki Chumwaki". Like that wasnt a name he just made up. I wonder if he'll say it the same again?
    We walked along the roof having to jump over, crawl under, and wade through obstacles. The sun had touched the horizon, gold and red rays of light sprayed down on this part of the planet.
    After an hour or so, they reached the end of facility.

    "This is where i path together ends." He said. I glanced around.  I felt like someone was watching us.

    "I guess so." He walked away from me, into the maze of buildings. I stayed for a minute, thinking about what had happened today... I had lost my job, my ship, and my pride. What was i to do? Go home and sleep sounded good to me. What would i do after that?
    *        *        *        *        *        *

    After a week had passed, I, Kelvem Railter, regained some composure in my life. I had no job but had applied for many that suited me well. My family and I moved from the house to an apartment, but i had faith all would be good in the end. I had sent a messege to the trash facility to get the spare parts from my ship but they didnt reply. Everything wasnt all too bad, untill they came to get me.

    "buzz". Someone was at the door. My wife got it.

    "Theres two men at the door for you". She said. I went to see who they were.

    "Are you mister Railter?" The shorter one asked. His counterpart was large and did'nt look like the smarter of the two.

    "Yes i am. Who are you two?" 

    "NRI. We're here to ask you a few questions." New Republic Intelligence. What would i have to do with them?

    "May i see your badge?" One thing i've always done, is ask for identification.

    "Yes you may". They both held out there badges. They looked real enough for me.
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