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October 21, 2010
6:04:17 PM
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I thought it was garbage.
...I kid, I kid! I worship teh Mai.  Jegora Fal
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October 21, 2010
6:04:54 PM
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Jegora Fal
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October 21, 2010
6:05:37 PM
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Ba-dum
Edit: Rather than quadruple post (in my defense, the last two were to fix the topic), I'll just edit this one. I recently reworked my character a bit, not so much that it should affect how you write him, per se, but enough that if you for some reason delve into specifics you might want to double check mah wiki page.
That said, mah wiki page is still under reconstruction, and if you're getting that specific about my character...well, I'm sorry. Jegora Fal
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October 21, 2010
7:11:44 PM
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I posted my first real post on the story. Sorry If it's not to great and a little short. They will get better  haha Private Zippy
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October 22, 2010
5:52:56 AM
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Don't apologize Zippy, is a good post, the length isn't an issue. If anything I'd suggest you read through everything when you finish so you can pick up on sentences that sound a bit strange. The only real issues I can see are a few areas where you've mixed up the tense, and used the same adjective/verb multiple times in a single paragraph (which I am also guilty of doing!)
But like you said you'll get into the flow of things in no time  SL/SGT Mai Shyrr/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1REG/Tadath/VEA [LoR] [IH] [DCE] Rawr. |
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October 22, 2010
8:40:31 AM
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I like the story though. I didn't know if I was supposed to get us into the bridge or not, so I just tried to more or less, to develop my character into the story Private Zippy
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October 22, 2010
3:35:46 PM
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Leaveage, I'll be back on the 31st. TRP/CPL Jamasis/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [ESC09] [BoT] |
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October 25, 2010
5:41:01 AM
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So we haven't had a post on the story for 4 days. Not good enough in my book.
I'm going to post again on Wednesday night and want to see at least two more posts before I do. I understand that this story is a little more difficult to write on that the ones that you are used to participating in, but that's kind of the point. We want you to have to think about what's going on and express a little creativity.
I know you can do it ghosties. There's an awful lot of potential in this squad. Let's keep up the momentum! SL/SGT Mai Shyrr/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1REG/Tadath/VEA [LoR] [IH] [DCE] Rawr. |
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October 25, 2010
6:56:06 AM
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I'll get something up either tonight or tomorrow night, and then I may disappear for 2-3 days, but maybe not. Gunnery Sergeant Marka Suurriven ASL/GSG Marka/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE [LoR][ES2][EW1x2][LM][CoS][IH] "Duct tape is like the Force. It has a light side and a dark side, and it holds the universe together." |
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October 25, 2010
7:49:48 AM
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I'm going to wait for someone to post as this is a very difficult story to post on. TRP/LCP Zak Nightowl/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE/ARC1||SGT Eagle||ARC TEAM THETA||VEA||VE 
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October 25, 2010
8:16:27 AM
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Clarification post coming right up.   MAJ/Raziel/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE/(WoS1)(VP1)(VP2)[BoA][EW1][CDS][IH][GC][RoT][IG][SoS][GroM][PoC] ARC Commander: Alpha, Beta Squads "God does not play dice with the universe" - Albert Einstein "Who are you to tell God what to do with his dice?" - Bohr "God does not play dice with the universe. He plays an ineffable game of His own devising, which might be compared, from the perspective of any of the other players [i.e. everybody], to being involved in an obscure and complex variant of poker in a pitch-dark room, with blank cards, for infinite stakes, with a Dealer who won't tell you the rules, and who smiles all the time." - Terry Pratchett CM/DJK Raziel/lion 1-5/Krath/VEDJ/VE (WoS1) (VP1) (VP2) |
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October 25, 2010
1:08:32 PM
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I will be posting most likely tomorrow. This is a very good story Private Zippy
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October 25, 2010
6:00:56 PM
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Right, Razzy's post makes things awfully clear Whoever posts next can determine if we go after engineering or go entity hunting, either will be fun to write about. SL/SGT Mai Shyrr/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1REG/Tadath/VEA [LoR] [IH] [DCE] Rawr. |
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October 25, 2010
6:02:26 PM
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I'm writing, I promise. But I'm not deciding anything, just writing about an epic fight with mindles...uh, not-zombies. Jegora Fal
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October 25, 2010
6:04:16 PM
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Fine by me!
I think they're...crazy, cyborg-esque creatures. Who smell bad. Like...off cheese bad. SL/SGT Mai Shyrr/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1REG/Tadath/VEA [LoR] [IH] [DCE] Rawr. |
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October 25, 2010
6:09:13 PM
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So basically they're like duplicates of Marka. Jegora Fal
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October 25, 2010
6:13:38 PM
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No no. They don't have a Danish accent or girly braids  SL/SGT Mai Shyrr/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1REG/Tadath/VEA [LoR] [IH] [DCE] Rawr. |
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October 25, 2010
6:20:41 PM
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Jegora Fal
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October 25, 2010
9:13:10 PM
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I'm loving this squad already. haha. Private Zippy
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October 25, 2010
11:37:32 PM
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I posted. Shitty, but long, and it kind of accomplishes something.
Maybe. Jegora Fal
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October 25, 2010
11:48:44 PM
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Quote:I posted. Shitty, but long, and it kind of accomplishes something.
Maybe.[
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October 25, 2010
11:54:09 PM
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I feel like you aren't allowed to post on this topic unless you're part of Wraith.
...and if you are joining Wraith, then I'm so happy I don't even care that you made fun of me. Jegora Fal
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October 28, 2010
8:58:15 AM
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Right, well, it's Wednesday (Thursday in Ausland) and I only had one post. Though...technically, the length of Jeg's is probably equal to three. So I'll stay my lack-of-sleep-induced wrath for now.
I've sent us after the engineering room in-story so you now have a set objective and plenty of things to shoot at. There's no reason as to why you should not be posting before, during, or shortly after you send in your reports. Maul those...not zombie...things. Rawr. SL/SGT Mai Shyrr/3SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1REG/Tadath/VEA [LoR] [IH] [DCE] Rawr. |
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October 28, 2010
9:45:44 AM
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My post is up. sorry about the delay. haha. good to go now Private Zippy
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October 28, 2010
1:12:38 PM
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Mai wrote:Though...technically, the length of Jeg's is probably equal to three.
Jeez, sorr-y. I felt like I had to make up for not doing anything earlier. |
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October 28, 2010
5:57:38 PM
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Jegora wrote:Mai wrote:Though...technically, the length of Jeg's is probably equal to three.
Jeez, sorr-y. I felt like I had to make up for not doing anything earlier.
That was actually a compliment, though I guess my lack of smiley's (for once) did make it a little harsh. Ta for the the post Zippy, big improvement between the last and this one |
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October 28, 2010
6:22:00 PM
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And I was actually being facetious, but since they don't make a special font for that it didn't really translate.
I'm gonna try and post again tonight before I have to send in that yucky report thing. Jegora Fal
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October 28, 2010
6:56:30 PM
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Thank you very much I'm glad I did better. Took me a little while, but it was worth the effort Private Zippy
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October 29, 2010
10:34:08 PM
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Red has been placed.
Don't allow Jeg to be alone with him, please. You all know what happened last time. Corporal, Vast Empire Army
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October 29, 2010
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