I'm a little teapot, big and strong.

Liking the posts so far guys. Raz is ultra keen for us to try to drag the tension out for as long as possible, so let's keep zombie references to a minimum. The real enemy we're facing here is the ship, so you can focus on weird disturbances other than the dead bodies we're encountering as well. Let's try and keep posts at around 2 pages (that's usually my marker). If you're having difficulty hitting that length indulge in some descriptive writing, and delve into you character's reaction to the whole bizarre mission. Apart from that, no complaints! Glad to see everyone's getting involved

Also reports last week were grand,  I received one from everyone in the squad so would love to get the same results this week. And if you're on IRC we've been hanging in #Ghosties instead of #Wraith as I have a terrible habit of swearing and keep getting kicked/banned from the squad channel as a result. That and I swear Kadbot is out to get me.

I never swear either, I can't believe a SL would swear

oh Skarr, that may only be a [censored] RAIDERS thing. You know how we [censored] love to swear all the [censored] [censored] time.

Yes, unfortunately, squad leaders are human too. Weird huh? If you have a real issue with it Nightowl I swear (oops there I go again) that I'll be on my best behavior if you ever log on.

I like it when she's really naughty.

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For the story, other than walking in random rooms and slowly moving towards the bridge, what are we actually doing? I'm not complaining if I have to post plain CD, but what are we supposed to be doing?

Funnily enough, that is exactly what we're supposed to be doing. Raz wants us to build up tension before we move the plot forward, and if we do it correctly you should get a sense of that from post to post. This isn't a race. I'm in no rush to slam through every objective in one page and toss the story on the 'done and dusted' pile.

Let's pace ourselves and really try to enjoy it.

And Jeg: How bout a post?

I suppose I could try and write something.

Anival has been placed in reserves per his request, but do not despair Wraithy's I give you new blood,

Welcome Private Zippy from the land of RL back to active duty and placed in Wraiths. Enjoy

Welcome back, Zippy.

We have a dual-squad story going on at the moment over here: http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/14201/#203628

Should be easy going to write yourself in, or one of us can do so if you would prefer.

Reports go to Mai and I on Thursdays, but as you're new and it's already Thursday where I am, you're free to skip this week.

Enjoy.

Well I'd love to help you in that regard but I'm about as clueless as you guys with the story. Our primary objective right now is to reach the bridge in one piece, all whilst laying down clues that suggest that something 'unnatural' in going on. I guess the theme of the story means that we'll never have crystal clear goals, probably because knowing everything that's going to happen isn't very scary

Welcome to the squad Zippy. I'd love to see you jump in on the squad story as soon as you're able. You should just be able to write yourself in with Wraith at their current position, no need for me to introduce you in story.

in all honesty i haven't read your story but if you want creepy couldn't you guys see something shadowy or nondescript and investigate?  Thats setting a tone and not technically accomplishing a goal since you will find nothing but the darkness (wooooooooooooooooooooooooooWoooooooooooooo)

My character has already achieved his maximum level of development.








































I almost typed that with a straight face.

is there any way some one could give me a quick over view of the whole story? what our objective is? I've read a few of the last posts, but cant quite put it all together. thanks just want to do good on my first real post back

Niiiiiiiice post, Mai. Kept me glued to the screen.