Twitch
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New here
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December 18, 2012
5:07:03 AM
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Hey Everyone. New here and impatient to start.
http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/Anita_%28Twitch%29_Cafall |
Dunny
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RE: New here
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December 18, 2012
5:08:33 AM
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G'day Twitch and welcome to the Vast Empire! I'm Sam Dunn, leader of the 50th Interceptor Squadron. Please be patient, a Training Officer will be with you shortly.
Also, excellent work on the wiki - it looks good. SCO|SCPO Sam "Dunny" Dunn
Cobalt One|S:50 "Chlovi" W:101 "Blade"
ISD Adjudicator|TF:A|2FL|SC|VEN|VE
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Maroy
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RE: New here
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December 18, 2012
5:10:22 AM
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Already helping you out via Dunny, so I'll skip the formalities for now. I'm your Training Officer, Maroy. I guess I can count that as your bio, ID line, and wiki page submissions all in one, so the next step is a post on the Raptor: Disaster! story thread. Read the first post, skim the rest, and throw up one of your own. Try to shoot for 700 words or more. FM/WO2/ Maroy/Cobalt 5/S:50 "Chlovi" W:101 "Blade"/ISD Adjudicator/TF:A|2FL|SC|VEN|VE (=*A*=) [GCM] [CBV] [IG] [MC2] [MC1] [VC:B] [LoM] [CC:P] |
Twitch
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RE: New here
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December 18, 2012
5:11:45 AM
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Alright will do, and I'm glad you found my bio amusing lol.
[This message has been edited by
Twitch
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5:13:59 AM)]
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Twitch
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RE: New here
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December 18, 2012
8:00:44 AM
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Maroy wrote:
Alright the task has be completed. ^^ what next? |
Maroy
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RE: New here
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December 18, 2012
8:38:25 AM
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I'm passing it, but there's a few minor points on your post I'd like to point out before we move on. References to Sith and Jedi and most elements of their cultures, even in swears and such, is off-limits to the majority of the members in the Vast Empire. It is a bit annoying sometimes, but it's the policy. Incidentally, the other thing is your use of the 'f' word. It's not explicitly banned, to my knowledge, but both for the sake of immersion and the younger members of this club we try to stick to creative alternatives, such as 'frak' or one of the numerous curses on Wookieepedia's slang page. Not meaning to nitpick, the post itself was very good. Just wanted to make sure you know that going forward. Post is passed. Final step is to send a report to Echelon and myself using the ComNet Message Center and this template. Paste a copy in this thread for future reference and then we'll see what we can do about graduating you  FM/WO2/ Maroy/Cobalt 5/S:50 "Chlovi" W:101 "Blade"/ISD Adjudicator/TF:A|2FL|SC|VEN|VE (=*A*=) [GCM] [CBV] [IG] [MC2] [MC1] [VC:B] [LoM] [CC:P] |
Twitch
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RE: New here
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December 18, 2012
9:35:55 AM
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Dunny mentioned that and I edited it. I apology. I thought I got everything. I will Re edit and will figure out another thing to use in replacement of the "son of a sith"
I am working on the report now. Getting ready to send it to you, Hades and Echelon now. ^^ |
Twitch
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RE: New here
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December 18, 2012
9:50:16 AM
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(Twitch)’s Report: December/18/212 Activity:This week I have joined the Vast empire, created a wiki, filling out the bio and creating an ID line. I have posted one topic, titled new, made contact with my trainer. After approval, and with directive, I have also made one post in the Raptor: Disaster thread. Upcoming plans:Upcoming plans are to work with Maroy and Dunny to get through the academy system as quickly, and thoroughly and realistically as possible. I aim to receive the SoA, however I will not sarcifce a good basis for a medal. I plan on reading wiki’s and learning and studying as much as I can over the next week, and possibly while on leave. As of Thursday I will be on leave and may be without computer until the 2nd of January. Questions/Suggestions:So far the only suggestion/question I have is in regards to My ID line. Dunny was under the impression that the training fleet is 7, however, according to the wiki, training fleet is 3. For Lack of better info I went with the Wiki, however if others are under a similar misconception, it may be something worth looking into. Crewman Twitch Trainee TRN/CRW/Twitch/??/ S:137 "Raptor"/ W:46 "Shield"/ PLF Cappadocious TF:TH/3Flt/SC/VEN/VE
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Maroy
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RE: New here
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December 18, 2012
4:05:37 PM
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Nice catch on the fleet number, I'll look into that. You're all clear on my end now, so we're just waiting on my superiors to graduate and place you. FM/WO2/ Maroy/Cobalt 5/S:50 "Chlovi" W:101 "Blade"/ISD Adjudicator/TF:A|2FL|SC|VEN|VE (=*A*=) [GCM] [CBV] [IG] [MC2] [MC1] [VC:B] [LoM] [CC:P] |
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