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Sp3ncn80r
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  Rookie
May 22, 2012 5:24:59 PM    View the profile of Sp3ncn80r 
Hi there new guy here ready to fly!
Echelon
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Echelon
 
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  RE: Rookie
May 22, 2012 5:35:45 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
Welcome, new Crewman, to the Vast Empire Naval Academy! By posting here, you're one step closer to joining us in our ranks. ((If you remember, I'm Finbar in real life. ))

If you'll allow me to introduce myself, I am Chief Petty Officer Echelon. As your training officer, I'll lead you through the courses here at VENA.

You'll begin by completing the Basic Training course. Please proceed here, and read the section. When you're done Basic Training, proceed to your first chapter of Flight School, here, and create a bio for your Vast Empire character. Remember, you should have it in 3rd person (he, she, it) and in past tense (ran, shot, exploded).

Once your bio is complete, post it here for reviewing, and then we can move on to Chapter 2 of Flight Schooll!

If you have any questions, comments, concerns, or rants, feel free to contact any of us here at VENA. The fastest way to get help would to get on the #VENA IRC channel and ask there (I'm usually on). Otherwise, you can Private Message us, or just simply post here. Remember, the wiki has all sorts of information, and you're welcome to look at other people's works (just don't plagiarize or copy).

Utterly,

Training Officer Echelon

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{VehM} {SfrM} {HypM} {Astr} {LogS} {Shut} {Gunn}

Sp3ncn80r
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Sp3ncn80r
 
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  RE: Rookie
May 23, 2012 10:45:37 AM    View the profile of Sp3ncn80r 
-Physical Appearance
Homeworld: NA (Lived on Capitol Ship with mother)
Age: 19
Species: Human
Native Language: Basic
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Tan
Height: 6’ 2”
Weight: 183 Lbs.
Hair Color: Black
Facial Hair: Shaved
Eye Color: Hazel
Scars: Scars on arm
Tattoos: None
History
        Denik is a very calm and steady person. He has never had any true friends either from his childhood. When he was 7 his father who was in the fleet was sent out on a mission to protect from a attack when he was killed. Denik, or Den, never knew how his father got killed, but Denik knew that his father was too good of a pilot to die against some random enemy’s attack. Denik thought that is he were to join the Imperial Navy and became someone important he could find out how his father really died.
    His mother never knew the full information of his father’s death, but she actually believed that he died in combat. Den told his mother how he wanted to join the Navy and find out about his father’s death. When she heard this she thought he was being naive and told him not to even think about his idea any more.
      The more he perused the Idea the more his mother stopped him from continuing. Eventually she locked him in his room giving him his food in the room. He became depressed and started inflicting injuries to himself. He once cut his arms so badly; they were just a bloody mess of ragged skin.
      Eventually he became and joined the Navy right away. He knew his mother could not do anything to stop him. He joined the Navy and then started his search for how his father died.
Personality
      Denik was a fairly open person until his father died. Now he is a short tempered, yet quiet guy. He once almost beat someone to death because he was talking about his father. Den only thinks about the mission at hand and makes sure it’s finished to the best of his abilities.
Echelon
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Echelon
 
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  RE: Rookie
May 23, 2012 3:15:43 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
Good history, but I'd like to see a bit more on his personality. Also, add a paragraph about what he looks like.

Another thing, you never wrote his full name.

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DMG-CTRL Officer/CPO Finbar "Echelon" Bandoran/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/FC/VEN/VE

TO/CPO Finbar "Echelon" Bandoran/PLF Cappadocious/VENA/VEN/VE

[SoA] [NAR] [CAR] [MC2] [BWC] [HNS] [MC1] [SWC] [1NS] [=*ENG*=]
{VehM} {SfrM} {HypM} {Astr} {LogS} {Shut} {Gunn}

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