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Valthir
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  Blackjack - Writer's Workshop
February 20, 2012 6:31:10 PM    View the profile of Valthir 
Alright, so this probably won’t be something you’re used to. Rather than having a traditional squad story, I figured why not have a writer’s workshop of sorts? Basically, I’m going to put up some prompts for you guys to write on. Now, this isn’t strictly a competition, but I will offer a reward to the best post for each prompt (and when I say reward, I mean whatever you want, within reasonable bounds of course). Now, this writer’s workshop is in two parts.

First, you have the posting part, which you’re all familiar with. I give you prompts, and you write on those prompts to the best of your ability. I do not care about quantity whatsoever. You want to write a 200 words post? Go right ahead, just make sure it’s a damn fine post. I care about quality. This is mostly meant to see what you guys are capable of and to offer advice on any flaws that you may have. Improvement is the name of the game, which leads me to the next point.

The second point of this is one that some of you may not be all that used to. We’re going to try it for now, just to see how it goes. In one thread, you’ll be doing the actual story posting. But I’m going to open up another thread for feedback. What do I mean by feedback? It’s simple really. You’ll read one of your squad member’s posts on one thread, then go to the other and post feedback on their post. Stuff like, “You did this and this right, but you’re lacking a bit in this.” or “I loved the way this worked, but you need to cut back a little on this and this.” Just general criticism.

Third, I must stress this: I do not want you to attack another’s post and completely tear it apart. That is not the aim of this exercise and if I catch you doing that, there will be consequences.

******

These three prompts will run for an undetermined amount of time. When the length is decided, I'll post a notice up as well as adding one onto this post.

OOC:
You’re dying. Who are you? Are you a grizzled soldier dying on the field of battle or a black ops merc getting stabbed in the back by a former friend? What are your emotions and thoughts as you die? What’s happening around and inside of you?


OOC:
You wake up with no memory of who you are or where you are. What are your surroundings? What do you hear, see, taste, smell, feel? How do you feel, both physically and mentally?


OOC:
You’re entering a battle. Is it a one-on-one confrontation or is it a large-scale conflict? What weapons are you using, if any? Are you winning or losing? Who is your opponent?


(Please note that you aren't confined to answering the questions stated in the prompt. Those are there primarily to give you a starting point. Feel free to ignore some if you don't like them. Just make sure to keep in line with the main gist of the prompt.)

Good luck!
Valthir
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  RE: Blackjack - Writer's Workshop
February 22, 2012 5:53:57 PM    View the profile of Crest 
OOC:
Although you could probably figure this out from the post, I might as well spare you the trouble. This post takes place before the QW, meaning just a lowly trooper, Private First Class

CAPTURED!
The captured Private First Class looked over his captors, cursing each of them. They looked like wraiths in their black shirts, black pants, black balaclavas, black custom helmets, and black gloves. Four rebels held him in a delta formation. Of course, there were probably more rebels out of his site holding another perimeter around him.

Curse-ation! Did I just have to walk all the way to the target just to check if I had made the shot? Why didn’t I just go over and use those excellent binoculars? I guess I was too excited, but the shot itself! That was at extreme range of the A280! It was also perfectly on target! Of course, I was excited! Yet, I should’ve booked that cursed test from Gates today, and, voila! I don’t get captured. But I just had to book the test for yesterday. I should’ve have taken the extra day to study and taken the damn thing today. Now look, I’m captured by second-rate rebels! Oh, well, what’s done is done. If I could get my armor or my A280 back I could escape. Nothing would be like it if I could get both back. I think the guy in front has my A280 and the guy behind me has the armor. I could wait for Gates, but how would I explain this? And, it’d take him time to find me... He’d start tonight... And, as always, mission takes priority. He has four days before he’ll cut losses and go on to Liberty Station. Four days... I have to escape before they can escape into the hills, otherwise it’ll take more than that to find me.

Crest paused physically for a moment, contemplating his situation.

“Keep moving, Stormie,” a voice growled out from behind him.

A sharp jab with a rifle stock accompanied the order. Crest felt his balance shift that fatal bit forward. He instinctively tried to bring his hands forward from behind him. Then he remembered the binds on his wrists.

CURSES!

With that, he landed his ungraceful dive into the mud, his mouth landing into a particularly pudding-like spot.

Deciding his situation could get no better than now, he raised his mouth out of the mud, using his neck, and proceeded to complain the ears off the rebels, “OUCH! Do you have even a sense of decency!?! YOU-”

The response was a boot, which was raised up and smashed down... on Crest’s mouth.

Alright, I was wrong. My situation could be very worse.

“Aw, come on, boss, let’s make camp here,” complained the rebel on point guard.

With a sigh, the rebel behind Crest, acceded the point, “Fine. Leave the stormie in the mud; that’s as good as he deserves.”

Crest lay with the mud, using his neck to keep his mouth out of the mud. As the rebels retired into their tents, Crest realized the futility of keeping mouth of the mud the entire night, and he gave up. He was sound asleep by the time his mouth entered the mud.

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A voice whispered to him, “Get up! That is an order from a Lance Corporal to a Private First Class!”

Crest shook himself awake, to a red SCOPE helmet two inches away.

“Dammit, Kilroy, didn’t anyone teach you to be polite when waking someone up?... Sir,” he tacked on to the end.

Ignoring his question, Kilroy responded, “Come on, we’ve got to get back to the boss.”

Crest pushed himself up, his binds have been cut by Kilroy, and scraped off the hardened mud off his face.

“I’m going to get my armor back,” Crest declared.

“No. We’re going to go back to Gates. We can then assault the rebels as a squad.”

“Hell, no, I’m going to get my armor and weapon and wreak some havoc before I go back... Sir,” Crest stated, anger at the rebels boiling up inside of him.

“No, we’re going back to- Dammit, come back, you fool.”

Crest quietly slipped into the shadow, relying on his infiltration training to hide him. It was night, and, with the shadows falling over him, he knew Kilroy could not follow him. The rebel commander and torturer had set up his tent in the middle, and Crest bet that his weapon and armor was there. In addition to that, he had a certain revenge to extract for having his face stuffed with mud for a few hours.

The stars shone over him, illuminating his path just enough to have an idea where he was going. Crest quietly pressed himself against a tree trunk at the edge of the camp. A ten-meter clearing of cover separated him and the commander’s tent. The tents of the other rebels flanked the clearing, creating a sort of corridor. Crest slipped around the trunk of the tree and carefully snuck towards his target. It seemed as if each blade of grass screamed in pain as Crest slowly depressed them on his way. The air seemed to scream ‘Intruder!’ to the rebels. Yet, the noises were faint and the night was silent.

“Hey, Irik. Hey, Irik, wake up. I thought I heard something,” emanated a voice from a nearby tent. Crest froze in his spot.

Irik responded sleepily, “There are plenty of bugs out there, of course you’re going to hear stuff.”

“But this was something big, like a human.”

“As if the prisoner escaped? Ha! This may be your first mission but it surely isn’t ours. We’ve covered our tracks especially well this time. Don’t worry ’bout it.”

“If you say so...”

Crest paused for a few moments, waiting for the man’s suspicions to die down before starting again. Within thirty seconds, he silently slid into position beside the main tent. Emptying his mind of emotions, as he usually did before combat, Crest slipped into the tent, grabbing a short piece of rope. He quietly made an adjustable noose from it and moved so that he was standing above the sleeping rebel commander. In one quick, fluid motion, he placed it around the commander’s neck and violently tightened it. The commander jumped awake and clawed at the rope, desperate for a breath of oxygen. Crest, having leverage, pulled the rope tighter and kept it tight, as the commander struggled to get it off. Thirty seconds later, the commander fell unconscious. Crest tightened the rope one last time and tied it to its spot, leaving the commander to suffocate to his death. Rolling his shoulders, he moved over, donned his armor, and slung his A280 onto his back. A quartet of bulky oil containers lay beside where the armor had been. A smile came to his lips as he thought of one blazing plan.

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Crest quietly emptied the last of the oil in the container in the middle of the camp. A quick walk brought him out of the camp. As he reached the edge of the clearing, he spun around and brought his A280 up.  A wide grin plastered over his face as he lined up his scope on the oil. He gently squeezed the trigger.
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Blackjack Infiltration Expert

"If you're in a fair fight, you didn't plan it properly"
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  RE: Blackjack - Writer's Workshop
February 26, 2012 11:58:20 AM    View the profile of Psycho 
OOC:
Prisoner prompt.


The dull pain slowly creeped into his consciousness, drawing him back into reality. He attempted to open his eyelids, and they responded, revealing the visual surroundings to his true grey eyes. The pain slightly increased for a moment, and he mentally cringed, for his facial muscles were too tired to do so. After a moment of quiet laying, he strangely noticed the ceiling was pure metal. Wanting to see where he was, he forced his arm to push himself up from where he lay. At first, his arm, quite sore and very tired, would only move an inch, but after several frustrating moments of fighting his limp muscles, his arm wobbely moved up. However moving his body was another problem of its self. Why was he so unnaturally tired and limp?

Slowly, he gained more and more movement in his body, but he had to fight for it. It was a very odd sensation, not being able to move your body when you're fully awake, and he wasn't sure what kind of a predicament he was in. His other arm began to move and before he knew it he pushed himself out of the cot, where he lay, and his semi-limb body tumbled to the floor.

Now able to turn his neck, he looked about, and noticed he was in a very small room. The walls were cast of dull metal, and in front of him sat a shimmering, translucent-purple field, which he assumed was ray shield to keep things from coming in, or as he soon found out, coming out. Still, he wasn't sure where he was until he looked at his clothing. There, tagged onto his shirt were the words: PRISONER 55A7B4 - VAST EMPIRE.

The memories of the incident hit him like a blaster bolt, which had sort of been the case. He remembered himself patrolling the area around his squad's camp. Suddenly, he heard movement, and before he knew it, he was on the ground slowly driffting off into unconsciousness. Now he was a partially mobile prisoner, and from what he could tell about the cell, he was on a transfer ship, possibly New Republic.

Naturally, this man was Dev Bandoran. Or, as his squad mates called him: Psycho.

Being an ex-police officer on Cloud City, he knew how these transfer prisons worked. The patrols. The layout. Even the weapons the guard would have on them. Thus, he thought he would have a pretty decent chance of escaping. Though, it was Psycho; he didn't take statistics into account.

He also realized why he was imobile. It was a drug they used on prisoners to make them limp and unconscious. Thus, not a threat. Though, why he was taken a prisoner, he did not know. Perhaps they were going to interrogate him. No matter what, he was determined to break out of the ship.

Before I do anything, I need to regain my movement. Otherwise, I'd be fighting like druken bantha.

The drug that they used on him wouldn't last forever, and he could speed up the effects if he continued to try and move. He spent a few minutes sending movement signals to his still limp muscles. As time passed, his range of motion increased, and soon he was on his feet, doing jumping-jacks for good measure.

Feeling confident in his mobility, he lay back down on the bed, resting before his "plan" began. With Psycho, there really wasn't a plan. There was a goal. Any option or way to get to that goal was fine with him. Though this time, he had a start to a plan. Eventually, he would have to be fed. And for him to be fed, someone would have to open the ray shield. Thinking about his "plan", he suddenly realized one fatal flaw: there were "food flaps" on this ship. Little openings in the wall to insert small boxes of food. He cursed at his stupitidy, but then suddenly, he heard voices.

"Damn, Mike. This prisoner was injected with that numby stuff. I'm going to have to go in there and feed him," said once voice. "Gosh. I hate food duty."

"I know what you mean, Steve," said another lower voice, "I'll take the other one down the hall. You do this one?"

"I guess. I just hate it when they try to eat! They have barely any control of their mouths, and the food gets everywhere!" The chatter stopped, and he heard footsteps toward his cell. Instinctively, he stayed down on his bed. The guard opened the forcefield, and he suddenly realized his plan would work! The guard would think he was paralyzed, but he wasn't really, and the guard would have to manually feed him! From there he could do a surprise attack!

The ray shield deactivated and a lanky guard with a box stepped into the cell.

"Ugh. You still look at full paralyzation. This is going to be fun," he said sarcastically. As he stepped forward with a spoon, Psycho shot forward. He tackled the guard to the floor where he covered his mouth. The guard, extremely surprised, was completely pale, and he began to scream into Psycho's hand. The muffled shouts were soon lost as Psycho closed the man's nose with his other hand. The guard began to flail wildly as he realized he was suffocating, but Psycho held his grasp, and soon, the man was out.

Let the action begin...

He checked the man's body for any weapons. Though, he didn't have any blasters, he did have a knife and a baton. Those would be better than nothing. He grabbed the weapons and slowly crept into the hallway. Spanned the entire length were prison cells much like his own, though most were empty. He did pass a few prisoners, and they cheered him on (but silently). Psycho, not fully adequate in stealth, accidentaly stepped down on the floor to hard. The other guard at the end of the hallway peaked his head out of one of the cells.

"Steve," he said, "Have you gotten taller? Hey, you're also wearing a prisoner su-" He facial experssion changed when he realized the situation. Grabbing his walkey-talkey he yelled, "Prisoner escape in progress! Lockdown hallway 2b!"

As if on cue, several heavy doors were sliding out of the walls and blocking Psycho's escape! He began to sprint as fast as he could, trying to beat the slowly closing doors. Running was almost natural for him and he could do it with immense speed. His legs seemed to hover above the ground as he proceeded torward the first cutoff. Turning briefly to the side, he squeezed through, and continued on his running spree. The second door way was even more tight, and he just barely squeezed through. The last one would be even more tight.

It was only a few feet open, and closing fast! He dived forward, and shot through the opening like a bullet. He tumbled down to the floor, and to his relief he was in the main hallway. He looked to his side to see a viewport, and out that viewport, the ground of the planet he was on before! If he could jump out of the ship, he could land in safe territory!

He ran down the hall, knife and baton in each hand. The hallway was completely deprived of any people or noise, and the silence of the situation made him uneasy.

The airlock has to be here somewhere...

As he reached the end of the hallwy, he heard something. Turing around, his heart skipped when he saw he was silently being followed by another guard. With the knife, he swung his arm in a circular motion at the man before smashing the baton into the side of his head. The guard, bleeding and dazed dropped to the floor.

"Where is the airlock?!" Psycho asked, hostility in every sylable.

The man studdered and coughed up blood before replying, "Down the auxillary h-hall...to the l-l-left..."

Psycho immediately followed the man's instructions and before he knew it, he was there.

Now how am I going to land safely?

"Looking for this?" he heard behind his back. He turned to see another guard holding a parachute, flanked by two more. They each had a blaster rifle, and the situation looked hopeless, but Psycho wouldn't go down without a fight.

"You've gotten pretty far," the man continued, "You even took down two of my guards."

Psycho spit. "Give that that damn parachute, or I'll gut you like the Republic pig you are."

The men raised there rifles. "I don't think that'll be nesecary."

Psycho looked around and spotted the airlock button. He threw his baton, and it pressed the button. A door closed, seperating the man from his guards, and another door opened. With a large gust of wind, the two men were thrown out of the vessel, and into the lower atmosphere of the planet.

The man grabbed onto Psycho, clearly shaken from the incident. Psycho retailiated with a quick stab to the man's throat. Psycho quickly tugged the man's parachute, and a large larp flew up, immediately slowing their decent. From there, Psycho looked out into the landscape. The green hills. The blue mountains. It was all beautiful, yet at the same time he was floating down with a corpse.

A simple day in the life of Dev Bandoran. Also know as Psycho.

OOC:
Word Count: 1,569. The writing is good in the beginning but get's worse as it goes on, and I think I did the ending terribly. I should have put more effort into the second half of the post, but I was trying to get it done as fast as possible. Yet, I had a lot of fun with this. I look forward to feedback.
ETRP/PSC Dev "Psycho" Bandoran/3SQD: "Blackjack"/1PLT: "Wildcard"/1COM: "Phoenix"/1BAT: "Dragon"/1RGT: "Osiris"/VEA/VE/Tadath
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  RE: Blackjack - Writer's Workshop
February 28, 2012 12:53:43 AM    View the profile of Psycho 
OOC:
Dying prompt.


The lightsaber slashed up and severed the arm of trooper D-117B58. With a sharp pain, he stumbled off of the Coruscanti footbridge, and began the endless fall, which to him, would seem a life time.

It had all began with Order 66. A simple order. Two words, but a ship-load of consequences. Trooper D-117B58 was a clone trooper, an artificial soldier to the Galactic Republic. He and his squad had been ordered to dispatch a fleeing jedi. Once again, a simple order. They chased him down, and cornered him on a footbridge. A bridge above a several kilometer drop to the ground below. Trooper D-117B58 was ordered to attack, a simple order. The jedi defended himself, cutting trooper D-117B58's arm off in the process. Trooper D-117B58 stumbled and fell off the bridge toward his death. Orders were simple, but death, however, was not.

Now trooper D-117B58 was falling rapidly through the air. Close to 160 kilometer per mile at the moment. Still fully conscious, he was, to his temporary dismay, aware that he was going to die. Clonetroopers were literraly made and bred to fight, and eventually to die, but this didn't make them emotionless. And as trooper D-117B58 was aware of, they did have emotions.

The air was rushing past trooper D-117B58, but to him, it seemed relatively quiet. Air speeders were flying in the distance, and Coruscant's moon was reflecting nicely. Solemnly. Silently. He felt no pain in his arm, it was currently the least he was worrying about at the moment. Where would he go when he finally hit the ground? Would it hurt immensely? Would he feel anything at all?

Though, it is interesting to note that trooper D-117B58 did not feel sad. Yes, he was feeling emotions, but these emotions were too complex to describe. Almost as if solemness and joy were mixed together. Why was he feeling joy? Why was he feeling anything at all? Wouldn't he be scared?

He looked around him. The ground was coming closer and closer. His short life was beginning to go by in his mind. His training on Kamino. His induction into the Republic Army, and finally two words that were burned into his mind. Order 66. He figured he didn't have much time left on this neverending fall. The ground was close now, and suddenly, he was feeling something odd. Something undescribably in the situation.

That something was the warmth of death. A warmth that overcame him as he hit the ground. Trooper D-117B58 died immediately on impact, but his feelings, his aura, his essence remained. They remained indescribable. They remained complex. They remained un-simple.

Orders were simple, but death, however, was not.

OOC:
Word Count: 445. I tried something new with this. With the emotions and stuff. I look forward to feedback.
ETRP/PSC Dev "Psycho" Bandoran/3SQD: "Blackjack"/1PLT: "Wildcard"/1COM: "Phoenix"/1BAT: "Dragon"/1RGT: "Osiris"/VEA/VE/Tadath
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  RE: Blackjack - Writer's Workshop
February 28, 2012 3:46:56 PM    View the profile of Crest 
OOC:
Anteevy, HSC '10. I didn't get a chance in the HSC to elaborate on this, since it was ending and I needed to post, but here it is. Insert this into the gap in my last post.

Death!
He felt his life slipping away into the cold, hard, white snow. The white gave way to the red, and they both gave way to the pulsing black in his eyes. The blizzard cut his range of vision, solidifying the white into a sort of huge, solid half-sphere.

A long way to go... Might as well get going.

A ‘long way’ back to Gates was quite the understatement. In his current state, it was going to be a near impossibility.

Dammit! I’m not about to die just about yet. And definitely not on my first goddamn mission. Not without leaving a mark... Not as a green recruit.

One hand in front of the other.

The only thing in his frozen state of mind.

One hand in front of the other.

Bits of his flesh tore off him into the snow.

One hand in front of the other.

It barely registered.

One hand in front of the other.

It had to be done for him to survive.

One hand in front of the other.

Death awaited him if he stopped.

One hand in front of the other.

Life awaited for him back with Blackjack.

One hand in front of the other.

A medic was with the squad.

One hand in front of the other.

A Victory Star Destroyer with a professional medical team was in orbit.

One hand in front of the other.

The outpost appeared a long way off.

One hand in front of the other.

What about his camo?

One hand in front of the other.

It had exhausted its power when they had gotten on the snow.

One hand in front of the other.

The squad would see him.

One hand in front of the other.

Kilroy was on the east.

One hand in front of the other.

Even if he was crazy, he was dependable.

One hand in front of the other.

Would they mistake him for a mercenary?

One hand in front of the other.

He had on red armor.

One hand in front of the other.

The mercenaries had on black and white armor.

One hand in front of the other.

Would he be able to go back to combat duty?

One hand in front of the other.

His injuries were quite severe.

One hand in front of the other.

But could the surgeons, magicians they are, heal him?

One hand in front of the other.

He would settle for living, even if he could not fight.

One hand in front of the other.

“It’s Crest!” Kilroy shouted out. He jumped out of his shelter, and rushed out to the tattered body. Crest felt his hands secured.

What will happen will happen. I can do no more.

Crest surrendered to the blackness.
OOC:
/me leans back and sighs.

I haven't written this much CD/emotions since my Halloween MM. Looking forward to feedback!
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Assistant Squad Leader of Blackjack-Infiltration Expert

"If you're in a fair fight, you didn't plan it properly"
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  RE: Blackjack - Writer's Workshop
February 29, 2012 7:49:19 PM    View the profile of Psycho 
OOC:
Battle!


A hot gust blew past Sergeant Konuk, but he didn't feel it, fully shielded in his Stormtrooper armor. He looked up to see a vast skyline of medium sized skyscrapers. Their metallic surfaces sparkled briefly in the sunlight, before a cloud moved in, blocking the sun, and darkening his surroundings. Beside him, however, were medium sized houses and apartments. Their occupants either away or dead, casting the feeling of a ghost town. Which in essence, it was.

Behind him were 9 figures, fully clad in stormtrooper armor. They were his squadmates, and he was their squad leader. Together, they made up Sovengarde Squad, an assault squad for the Galactic Empire. Currently, the entire city was being invaded, and Sovengarde's mission was to capture a plaza at the East end of town. From there, reinforcements could be easily brought in. In short, it was a foothold for the battle.

In the Sergeant's grasp was a legendary T-21 light repeating blaster. This weapon was the heaviest standard issue weapon that could be given out to troopers. Despite its name, it was not light. With a barrel as wide as a fist, and a rounds-per-minute count that would even scare wookies, this weapon could pack in a punch. A big punch. The rest of his squad, however, we lightly armed with the standard E-11 blaster rifle. That was not to say that they couldn't fight. This squad was one of the most experience in the Galactic Empire which was why they were chosen for this task.

"300 meters from the plaza," Konuk said into his microphone, "Hold at about 50 meters ahead."

They continued their steady pace down the road, their eyes out for any movement. They stopped at the 50 meter mark, and Konuk began to give orders.

"Gabell and Ben, take the right side of the road. You two, take the left. Stay behind cover and advance 100 meters. From there, cover our advance," he ordered, the years of battle and experience inferred from his deep, militaristic voice.

The four stormtroopers immediately followed his orders by advancing along the buildings of the road. They ducked into alleys and doorways, covering the other's advance. Once they made their position, the rest of the squad broke into the road, running like a herd of dingoes. They could have slowly made their way along the walls, but this method was a hell of a lot faster.

About 40 meters into their run, all of hell broke loose. Suddenly, an explosion rocketed from Gabell and Ben's position, sending them and shrapnel flying into the air. A second later, a string of red laser fire flew out from several windows ahead of the group. Sovengarde's squad members responed by diving towards the nearest source of cover. Though, some didn't make it. A blast from one of the windows smashed into a trooper named Greg, frying and melting his lower body into a bloody, smoldering mess.

"Frak!" Konuk yelled, hiding in a doorway, "Its an ambush! How did they know we were coming?"

"I don't know," the Assistant Squad Leader called back, "but we better do something fast!"

Konuk pulled a lever back on his rifle, and pumped a few huge blasts at a window. They smashed into wall which in turn spewed metal and shrapnel in all directions. Unfortunately, the ambusher was not hit, and he continued to put intense pressure on the squad mates.

"They seem to have E-Webs!" called out a squad mate, as he was firing at one of the windows.

Suddenly, with a huge bang, an artillery shell came crashing down into a building beside the squad leader. The metal and brick collapsed, stirring dust into the air. Konuk dived out of the way just as one of the walls fell in. Then another artillery shell came down, followed by another.

"Artillery! Get down!"

The shells came down in rapid succession causing massive explosions of shrapnel and debris. Building tumbled, walls shattered, and dirt filled the air. Another shell came down in the middle of the road, causing a large smoldering crater where a the assistant squad leader had once been. Konuk watched in horor as one of his squad members flew high into the air as a shell landed right near her feet. He would have to find some place to hide, and fast!

He bolted forward toward one of the enemy houses. The artillery, he knew, wouldn't hit there. Running as fast as he could, he pulled out his pistol and smashed in the front door. Instinctevely, he fired several bolts at any movement he saw, and before he knew it, the enemy soldier was on the ground as dead as stone.

He grabbed a hold of the E-Web blaster and fired directly into the house across the street, which had held another E-Web. A series of lightning fast bolts shot out of the barrel, and entered directly into the window where Konuk heard a scream of pain.

Two down, one to go.

Exiting the building, he grabbed two of his grenades, cooked them for a moment and lobbed them straight towards the third enemy building. They exploded on impact, sending metallic debris directly into the enemy.

Though, his effort had been wasted.

Several miles away, an enemy artillery gunner loaded and fired a single round. The gunner had aimed improperly, sending the round to where his friendly soldiers would be, or in this case, where Konuk was. The shell flew high into the air, covering miles of distance before falling right where Konuk stood. His mangled body was sent  rocketing into the air. It landed as an unrecognizable heap of blood, fried armor, and debris.

The veteran had finally been slain. Slain in one of the most simplest of all of his battles. And ironically, he was slain by the mistake of his enemy, but this story, like many others, would be lost. No one would remember the heroism of Sergeant Koluk.

No one would remember how he was slain.

OOC:
Word Count: 1,001. I think I ended it kind of sillily. Feedback will be looked forward too.
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Dying!


Crusnik quickly and quietly slipped through the dark alley, making his way to the main street. Once on the main street, he turned left and started toward the Mili-corporation office building. Before entering the building he walked around to the right side of the building, leaned against the wall, next to a door and waited. 

Six minutes had passed by before the door opened and he was greeted by a Trandoshan in a guard uniform. Crusnik then walked through the door, noticing the flaks of skin on the Trandoshan’s vest. “Must be shedding,” he thought. The Trandoshan then closed the door behind him and turned toward him.

“Here take these,” the Trandoshan said, while handing Crusnik five different color coated ID badges.

“Use these in the order that I have given you, starting with the green one first,” he contend, but started toward the elevator. Crusnik followed. “Each card will get you passed a check point that the elevator passes. So be sure to dispose of each card that you use before the next check point, which are every five floors by the way. Also you’ll have to wear a lab uniform that will be provided for you in the elevator. Any questions?,” he said opening the elevator doors.

“No” Crusnik replied.

“Good, you’ll have two minutes before I start the elevator and mission begins,” the Trandoshan said, walking away.

Crusnik walked on to the elevator, closed the doors and started changing. Once changed and disposing of his other clothing. He then put on the first ID badge and the elevator began to move.
He had done everything the Trandoshan asked. Every fourth floor he disposed of each card before moving on to the check point on every fifth floor. Everything went smoothly, too smoothly. He found it weird that no one got on the elevator. 

When he reached the twenty-fifth floor, he headed straight to his objective point; witch was the Mili- corporation’s armor blueprint archives. His mission is to take the blueprint B-264110 and head to the roof were the ship a will be waiting to take him to the drop off point. It took him a few minutes to find the archives but he found it and also he felt a little relived to see a couple people walking about.

Upon entering the archives, he was greeted at the front desk by a young female human that had dark blue eyes, raven black hair and a slender body type.

“May I help you sir,” she asked, looking up at him from the computer.

“Umm…yes, I’m looking for the blueprint B-264110,”Crusnik replied.

“Just one moment please,” she said, as she began typing.
A few seconds pass by.

“Ok, you’re going to head down that corridor to the right and enter in the first door on your left,” she said, while smiling.

“Thank you” he said, walking away.

“Any time sir,” she said biting her lip, while she watched Crusnik walk away.

Crusnik found his way to the room, opened the door and went inside closing the door behind him. Once inside he started looking for the data chip with blueprint on it. After three minutes of searching he found it placed it in his pocket and started walking out of the archives the way he came. Before leaving the archives, he was stopped again by the human at the desk.

“Did you find what you were looking for,” she said, smiling.

“Yes, yes I did thank you,” Crusnik responded, as he started to turn away.

“Hey,” she said, abruptly.

“What now,” he thought. “Yes?,” he asked.

“I don’t usually ask this to a guy that I just met but…,” she started blushing. “Would you like to go get a drink after work?” she asked.
At this point Crusnik was flattered.

“Sure, what time do you get off?” he asked.

She lit up like bright supernova. “Eight, I get off at eight,” she answered.

“Ok then, at eight I’ll meet you here and we’ll go have that drink,” he said smiling as he walked away from her.

From the archives, he found his way to the roof. He then saw the ship and made his way toward it, but stopped half way, as he saw a shadowy figure come towards him.

“Who are you?,” Crusnik asked.

“Me, I’m the pilot,” the shadowy figure answered.

“Oh, ok let’s get going then, I got to be back by eight,” Crusnik ordered.

“Alright, just one thing,” the shadowy figure said, while pulling out his ol-44 blaster pistol lightning fast and shoots Crusnik in both legs bring him to his knees. Crusnik yelled in agony, as he felt flesh burning. He could also smell the burning flesh and hair. Then the shadowy figure came closer reveling that it was the Trandoshan from before.

He then said, “Sorry, its just business” taking the chip from Crusnik’s pocket and pointed the pistol directly at his head and before the Trandoshan pulled the trigger one last thing was going through Crusnik's mind. 

“Man, I’m going to miss my date.” he thought

*sound of the blaster going off*
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March 1, 2012 5:31:52 PM    View the profile of Crest 
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Battle!
“Captain! Captain!”

Captain Fi’ik looked over at the rushing messenger.

“Can’t I get a pleasant moment off duty?” he remarked, thoroughly annoyed at this latest interruption.

“This interception has been marked for immediate routing to you, sir. Top priority, no delays of any kind, sir.”

Fi’ik grabbed the proffered packet and glanced down at the short summary on the first page.

“Damn! What assets do we have there?”

“Full garrison of army elements, four squads of stormtroopers, sir.”

It took him a moment to calculate the odds.

“They stand no chance. Do we have anything else we can use?”

“Not much, sir. There’s only one SCOPE trooper, specialization in infiltration, off duty currently in the city.”

The choice pained him. Here he had been two seconds ago, annoyed that he’d been called while off-duty; could he bring himself to do the same to the trooper? On the other hand, the base stood no chance in holding its own. It was one of the most poorly designed in the Empire. Could the SCOPE trooper do it? Could he tip the scales? Could he make that critical difference?

“Tell me more about this trooper. Quickly also, if you don’t mind, we don’t have a moment to spare.”

“Uh, Lance Corporal Crest, Assistant Squad Leader of the Third Squad, First Platoon, First Company, First Battalion, First Regiment. He received infiltration training before his first mission. He went through hell in his first mission, requiring heavy reconstructive surgery. Everything else is classified, including the reasons behind his recent promotion and any further missions.”

Fi’ik contemplated the situation for only a moment.

“Do it. We haven’t a moment to spare.”

--------------------

“Hey, Oilik. I wonder... is that him?”

Private First Class Oilik shook himself out of his reverie.

“Yeah, buddy?”

“Doesn’t that guy kinda match this holo of the requested trooper?”

Oilik did not even look at the holo. One glance at the target, and the idea was thrown out of his mind.

“Did you miss the fact that he’s a bloody giant at about one point nine meters? He can’t be trained in infiltration. You’ll do better trying to teach a bantha to run.”

“But look at the holo once! He matches it! Perfectly!”

Oilik examined the holo.

“How the bloody hell? It’d be damn near impossible to train him in infiltration. Alright, fine, we’ll try him.”

Taking a deep breath, Oilik briskly walked over.

“Lance Corporal Crest?” he queried.

Crest sharply turned around.

“Yes? I thought I was supposed to be off duty?”

Oilik snapped off a quick salute.

“Private First Class Oilik, sir. It’s important, sir. You’ve been requested to help us out.”

“What happened?”

“No idea, sir. The base is suddenly on high alert, and we were sent out to find you and bring you back, if you consented, for an emergency briefing and deployment.”

Crest glanced over at a beautiful, raven-haired woman, who was watching the events with a concerned look.

“Sorry, Aieya...”

After a quick flash of anger in her eyes at Oilik, she silently nodded.

Oilik suddenly realized that the displeasure of the Lance Corporal was the least of concerns right now.

“Uh, sir? Shall we get going, um, like as in right now?”

Crest nodded once, a grin spreading over his face at the Private’s sudden display of fear.

--------------------

“Alright, Lance Corporal. Here’s the brief rundown, since we don’t have time for a full-scale briefing. An intercepted message indicates an on-going attack. Not an assault, mind you, not yet. They want to secure the codes for this base, and then attack before we can replace them. An infiltrator has been dispatched. We need to stop him, which is where you come in.”

“What can you give me? In equipment, floor plans, cameras, statuses, or anything for that matter.”

“Equipment, we should be able to equip you with Scout Trooper Armor, since we don’t have SCOPE armor. Weapon, E-11, unless you can find another weapon you like. Um, sidearm will have to be the Q2s5 Holdout blaster. Floor plans are over there on that desk. Cameras and statuses are over there.”

The commander brought an entire wall and a holoprojector to life with a wave of his hand. Crest fluidly stole command away from the commander.

“First thing, you need a perimeter around the servers. Set up directional anti-personnel into the vents. Scratch that, FILL the damn vents with the stuff. Next, deploy stormtroopers in and around the servers. Move army elements into successive spheres radiating out of the server. Cut any access to the server, be it wired or wireless, no matter the security of the connection. Constant reports, every five minutes, from everyone, starting this damned second! Get my armor and weapons, preferably A280, DLT-20A, or E-11, in that order. I have my own sidearm. Get three more people up here on the double.”

The commander jumped at Crest’s ‘advice’, which could be better classified as orders. The requested three arrived under one minute, with the equipment arriving thirty seconds after that. As Crest suited up, he tasked one person with making sure all the reports were in. The other two were tasked with checking the cameras. Crest subconsciously pushed the commander out of the tasks. It would have been excessively long since he had been tasked to working under such direct control. Crest bent over the floor plans and slowly examined and memorized them.

The commander increasingly grew anxious, nervous, and angry since, for all the activity, nothing was happening.

He could bear it no longer and angrily confronted Crest, “You were called here to do something! Get on it, and get me some results!”

While Crest could not bring himself to agree with the sentiment, he understood where the commander was coming from; Blackjack was exactly like this.

“Patience, sir, this is a game of chess with infinite stakes. Mind before brute strength, that’s why you brought me here, right?”

“This is not a game! I-”

“Unfortunately not, sir. Like it or not, this is a game of chess, and you must treat it as such.”

“Then whose turn is it?” the commander remarked sarcastically.

“Our move, but also their move.”

The commander remained thoroughly confused at Crest’s cryptic answer.

Crest explained, “Think of it as a literal chess game, except the players cannot see anything but their own pieces and moves. We can discover their pieces, know the effects of their moves on our pieces, but we cannot see their pieces until we discover them. Does not a player have a time limit on his move? It is our turn, and we must figure out their move and react before the time limit runs out. In the mean time, their move is still taking effect. So, it is both our move and their move.”

The commander fell silent, contemplating Crest’s explanation.

“What is the highest, adjacent building?” Crest asked.

The commander thought about it for just a section and then responded, “The ComTech building over to the east.”

Check.

“Alright, that’s his point of entry.”

“How? And how the hell do you know?”

“Ah, sorry, I meant that he used the building to get on the roof the base. And, it’s what I’d do.”

Crest lightly walked over to the holoprojector and switched it to the three-dimensional view of the vents. If the infiltrator was coming in from the roof, he had to have used a vent.

“Did any of your contractors realize that vents are never good for a military base? They put about fifteen trillion!”

“We’ll be rebuilding this as soon as another, smaller base is finished.”

A minute ticked away as Crest futilely tried to search for the elusive vent.

“Uh, sir? Position 36/b and Position 89/c have not sent it their reports.”

Check.

“Cameras!” Crest barked out, striding behind the two men assigned to the cameras.

“Position 36/b is normal.”

“Position 89/c is also normal.”

The commander jumped into the conversation, “How the hell can that be? If they’re normal, then why didn’t they send in their reports?”

Crest cut him off, “Very few infiltrators carry jammers. It prevents any radio communication about them, even if their cover if broken. But it does sometimes leave an inadvertent signature.”

Crest abruptly marched over to the holoprojector and pinpointed the two locations. There was only one vent in between them that led from there to the server. He waved the commander over.

“Alright, place two beacons, one here and one here.” Crest instructed, point at two opposite ends of a relatively long straight stretch in the vent. He continued, “Set explosives and another beacon here, in the middle. Get the detonator up here, on the double.”

“You can’t use expl-”

“Do you want the infiltrator dead or not?” Crest asked rhetorically.

The commander paused at the blunt answer and then nodded.

The minutes ticked away. The detonator came up, and the minutes continued to tick away into oblivion.

“You sure you chose the correct vent? And he isn’t going another way?”

“Don’t worry ’bout it.” I hope so...

Three more minutes marched into the record books.

“Beacon One has stopped transmitting.”

Check.

Half a minute ticked by.

“Beacon One is online.”

Fifteen seconds ticked off the clock. The commander grew agitated at the slowness of this game. Crest flipped the cap off the detonator. The red button gleamed, ready to be the messenger of destruction.

“Beacon Two is offline.”

Checkmate.

He depressed the detonator.

For such an insignificant act, the consequences were out of proportion. The sound of the explosion boomed into the ears of everybody at the base.

“Now, I believe I have a leave to finish.”
OOC:
I did take a more liberal meaning of 'battle' here. I decided to use the mind as a weapon in a one on one confontration between Crest and the now-dead infiltrator.

Also, I've finally broken the curse of the QW! WC: 1,588!
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Fight!


As Crusnik finished his drink the barkeep came up to him from across the counter. He was huge human, not in an overweight manner, but in a muscular way. He was broad shouldered and the clothing he wore looked amusing. He was wearing an opened, purple button up with orange floral designs on it, with a dark green under shirt. His pants were a dark blue and stopped about one or two inches above the ankles that reveled his two different colored sox’s, one black and the other white. He also wore a stained white apron on his waist and anyone could see the pistol resting in its holster on the left side of his body, next to his ribcage.

“He must be color blind.”

"Another?" he asked, in a rasping voice.

Crusnik nodded and the barkeep took his glass away. He soon returned a few seconds later with a glass full of the brew.

"Didn’t take you Cathars to be the drinking type" The barkeep said.

Crusnik didn't even lift his gaze from the cup when he said, "Neither did I."

The barkeep Looked at him and chuckled.

Crusnik sipped from his cup and said nothing.

"Not many of your kind are liked around here” the barkeep stated, leaning forward.

“And what kind would that be” Crusnik asked, as he looked up from his glass.

“Empire kind” the barkeep answered, with a grin on his face, showing his yellow stained teeth.

Crusnik heard the clicking of a weapons and the sound of feet being scuffled behind him. He had a problem from removing his gaze from the barkeep. Something inside him wanted to jump up from his seat and rip the man apart, but he resisted the urge.

“Four plus the barkeep, makes five.”

"Do you here that? They’re going to tear you apar…" he didn't even get a chance to finish his sentence. Crusnik had one of his hands around the barkeeps throat, crushing his wind pipe. His other hand was on the handle of his blaster pistol. Someone then shouted from behind,"GET HIM!" and then the fight ensued.

Crusnik felt as if he was moving in slow motion. He pushed the barkeep into the back wall of the bar while standing up. “One.” The group began moving toward him with a few firing at him. As the shots whizzed past him, he spun to his right, unholstering his pistol and hitting the Bothan behind him with the end of his pistol. “Two.” Just before the Bothan hit the floor, he grabbed him by the neck and used him as a shield. He then fired his pistol, moving right to left.

The first shot missed Crusnik’s first target, which was a red haired Human wielding a CDEF blaster pistol. The next two shots hit the human dead in the chest. “Three.” His next target was a Barabel, with black skin and red eyes. He used a renegade heavy blaster. The Barabel shot twice, both shots hitting his meat shield. He then dropped the dead Bothan and took the Barabel down with two shots. One to the shoulder and then one to the head. “four.” He then moved to his last target. Witch was another human, but with black hair using a vibroblade. He ran toward him, screaming, as he lifted the blade above his head. Crusnik then aimed for the human’s heart, and then fired, killing the human.  “Five.”

Crusnik then walked back over to the bar, sat down and finished his drink.
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Memory Loss
He stared at his...what were those called? There were two of them. He moved them into the area he could see. He flexed them and watched in fascination as the five branches off them responded by folding into a ball. 

They were attached to his...and what were those called? There were two of them.

Panic gripped his...what was that called? He felt it pounding in his chest.

Panic gripped it, as he searched for one piece of evidence that he was real. How could he be sure that this existence was real? If this wasn’t real, did it matter what he did?

The first thing he had noticed moved towards something on the middle of his existence. Out came a short, shiny thing.

He knew it would end this twisted reality. He did not oppose it but, instead, guided it on. It drove towards the pounding thing in the middle of his chest.

It slid through the skin, putting its tip to deadly use as it touched the pounding object.
OOC:
This is horrible. But I can't make it any better/longer.

Hint: This is possibly the epitome of what you should not do. XD
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Memory loss

He awoke with his body numb, sight distorted, mouth dry and head Pounding.

I feel like crap and what smells?

The air around him was stale, humid and smelled horrible.

Where I’m I and why does my head hurt?

He put his hand behind his head and then winced in pain, jerking his hand forward, looking at the blood on his hand.

ow, that’s why.

His eyes soon adjusted to the darkness of his cell and all he could see was the dim light of the dying bulbs from the hanging lights in the hall. He then sat himself up and leaned against the wall of his cell, being mindful of his wound. He then closed his eyes. He could hear nothing but the snoring and whispering from other people. He then turned his head and looked into the cell across from him. He saw a man sitting in his cell talking to himself. The man then turned and stared at him with blood shot eyes.

Creepy.

After a few moments the man spoke.

"So, you're the Cathar they brought in. Am I right?" The man asked.

“I don’t know.” He answered, in a dry cracked voice.

I need something to drink.

"Did they do that to you?" The man asked.

"I don’t know." He answered, again.

“Well, what do you know?” The man asked, irritated. 

“I don’t know where I am! I don’t who do this to me or why I’m here! I DON’T KNOW ANYTHING!” He yelled with aggravation.

His yell echoed through the hallway, in addition the whispering and snoring had ceased. 

"Hell, I don’t even know…” he paused with a sudden realization. “Who I am.” He uttered, terrified. 

“And I thought I had it bad.” The man said, as he started to laugh.
The man then turned away from him and went back to talking to himself.

He sat there drowning in his own thought.

Who am I?

Where did I come from?

Where am I?

Why am I here?

Did I do something wrong?


Then frustrated, he tried to stand but became light headed and sat back down.

“Damn it.” he grunted, pounding his fist into the floor.

This is getting me nowhere.

He then turned his attention back to the man in the cell across from his. He moved to the face of his cell.

"Hey, where are we?” He requested.

The man mumbled something and giggled.

“What was that?” He asked.

The man looked over his shoulder.

“Oh, nothing and to answer your question we are in some rebel prison.” The man said.

“Rebel prison?" He asked.

“Wow, they must have hit you pretty hard.” The man said.

“So why are we here?” He asked

“We are here because we support the empire and by the looks of it you must be a trooper.” the man said, turning around to look at him once more.

“A trooper?” He questioned.

He then noticed what he was wearing. It was some kind of white armor on his arms, chest and legs. He then checked his pockets and found an empire lighter engraved with Blackjack on the bottom. 

Blackjack

He also found a small book with empire citizen on the front of it. He then opened it.     

…Crusnik?
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OOC:
The story has concluded, so no more posts please.
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