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Shriken
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  Brand New
October 6, 2011 3:36:59 PM    View the profile of Shriken 
Good afternoon everybody. The name is Shriken and I'm here to petition for a spot in the Vast Empire's Navy. I await a response from the proper authority.
Ellesmere
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  RE: Brand New
October 6, 2011 7:03:28 PM    View the profile of Ellesmere 
Hello and welcome to the  Naval Academy, Crewman Shriken!

I am Petty Officer 2nd Class Ellesmere, one of the Trainers of the Vast Empire Navy. Some people call me ‘Ellie’ so feel free to do the same.

Now that you have posted your welcome message, we shall move onto the next step in Basic Training, or as we more commonly call it; BT.  It is mostly referred to as Flight School around here and its purpose is to prepare you for life in a squadron.

Your first step is to complete Chapter I which can be found here . Once you have completed this step please post it here for review.

Our method of writing here (in the Navy and the Vast Empire as a whole) is in the third person, please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to reach me via ComNet PM or hop onto IRC and join #VENA, if for some reason I am not present one of the Academy Staff should be on hand to answer any questions or concerns you may have.

Now to get you started off in Basic Training ; for starters, if you would please visit the VE Wiki Page for Basic Training found from there on, choose a school (Flight School where you become a pilot) or Command School (f you'd like to serve on the bridge of a ship) and complete the assignment listed for your chosen path. Once the assignment is completed, please post it here and I'll review it.

If you have any questions, concerns or anything please feel free to ask! I can be reached on IRC in #VENA, or if you prefer you can post anything here or shoot me a ComNet PM

Please note that your only option at this time is Flight School, due to the high application rate for Command School our number of active Flight Members in Squadrons is low; as such Command School is not an option at this time. All the information you need for  Flight School is provided in the link given
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[This message has been edited by Ellesmere (edited October 12, 2011 7:30:26 PM)]
Shriken
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  RE: Brand New
October 6, 2011 11:52:06 PM    View the profile of Shriken 
Physical Description of Applicant 55536-A5


Homeworld: Tatooine
Age: 20
Species: Human
Native Language: Basic
Gender: Male
Skin Color: White
Height: 5'10
Weight: 185 lbs
Hair Color: Brown
Facial Hair: None
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Two; One running from left eye to right cheek. Another on right arm running two inches vertically upward
Tattoos: Under left armpit reading A
Build: Average. Slightly muscular
Personality: Mental scarring from an alcoholic father is apparent. Raised solely by aforementioned father. Deep belief in the Empires mission.

Evaluators Description: The newly issued uniform fits well, but still leaves much to be filled in. Looking at the physical fitness report, applicant 55536-A5 passed all exams with above average scores. Not record breaking but enough to be recognized. However, during the examination the applicant did exhibit some nervous tics. Nothing debilitating. Making note for psychological exam.

Psychological Exam of Applicant 55536-A5


The psychological exam of applicant 55536-A5 was conducting by Dr. Chaleg. Anything noticed during the exam shall be noted and explained in this report, rather than give a full transcript.

1. Applicant explains marks on body in order.
    A. Scar from left eye to right side of chin - Physical abuse resulting from alcoholic father. Knife
    B. Scar on right arm running from elbow 2 inches vertically upward. - Schoolyard fight. Knife
    C. Tattoo under left armpit - Forcible tattooing from time as slave on Tatooine.
2. Applicant displays nervous tics.
      A. Upon dropping an item off my desk, he snaps to grab it, places it on the desks and neatly straightens it. Apologizes.
      B. Constantly fixing his uniform. Moreso than a regular applicant.
3. Applicant describes constant abuse by alcoholic father. Burns from deathsticks, bruises that went away with time, everlasting scar from cut from a combat blade. Mother died when applicant was 7 years old. Fascination with Imperial Navy was suppressed by father. Not out of Rebel sympathies, but individual disgust with general system of government. Father killed during Imperial occupation of Tatooine.
4. Open personality with a slightly withdrawn attitude to anything personal. Willing to discuss past history, but does so with a very monotone and straight attitude.


Self Biography


Shriken [Name Unavailable] was an only child born on the planet Tatooine to a father who's life revolved around the bottle in his hand and a mother who cared very much for him. However her love didn't last long and she disappeared when her son was seven years old. Given the remote location of his home it was attributed to the local savages and never looked into. The violence inflicted on him has created deep emotional scars as well as two literal ones. A very prominent facial scar implies physical strength but does not enhance his true strength but rather demoralizes his opponents. His father was not just a drunk, but also a man who had an almost religious dislike for whatever government flew its flag over his head. When the local Imperial Garrison decided to attempt and establish order in the sector where his was located, the father rallied his friends and marched towards the barracks. Needless to say, the Garrison didn't respond well to this crowd of drunks. Out of the 33 men present at the start of the shooting, 14 were arrested, 15 were killed and 4 managed to escape. His father became a statistic and he ran away. His records stop at this time but it is believed he was captured and sold into slavery. It is at this point he receives his blood type tattoo under his left armpit. This lasts for several years until he resurfaces to enlist in the Vast Empire. How he managed to escape his captors is unknown but it can be assumed it was not through peaceful means.

End Notes


Applicant 55536-A5 has been approved for Flight School Training. His current evaluation shows a bright future if he continues to apply himself towards service to the Vast Empire.
[This message has been edited by Shriken (edited October 9, 2011 9:22:04 PM)]
Ellesmere
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  RE: Brand New
October 7, 2011 8:40:25 AM    View the profile of Ellesmere 
The bio's interesting but I'd like for you to lengthen it; let us know more about your character, any family, childhood, etc. As well for your physical ad whatnot could you use the template everyone uses?

Here it is:

OOC:
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:
Build:
Personality:

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Shriken
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  RE: Brand New
October 9, 2011 9:22:42 PM    View the profile of Shriken 
Is this better?
Ellesmere
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  RE: Brand New
October 9, 2011 9:33:39 PM    View the profile of Ellesmere 
It is much better, now if you would please move onto Chapter II of Flight School, you'll find it in the Wiki link I had put up in my initial post.

If you've got any questions, please feel free to ask
SXO/PO2 Ellesmere/B-1/S:153 Regents/W:58 Javelin/ICF II Fearless /TF:B/2FL/SFC/VEN/VE [MC2][MC1]

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Shriken
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  RE: Brand New
October 10, 2011 9:10:21 PM    View the profile of Shriken 
Complete. I can revise. I know it isn't the best there...
Ellesmere
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  RE: Brand New
October 10, 2011 9:32:21 PM    View the profile of Ellesmere 
Could you provide me with a link please? And as far as ID Line goes at this point I would encourage you to implement it in your profile so it shows in your signature
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