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jebluap
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jebluap
 
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  open story
September 3, 2011 6:55:28 PM    View the profile of jebluap 
OOC:
anyone who wants to jump in: go right on ahead, lol.  you can even start the story if i don't get to it in time.  peace
jebluap
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  RE: open story
September 4, 2011 2:36:58 PM    View the profile of jebluap 
The ship careened downward, spirals of smoke furrowing back toward the heavens.  Support craft on all sides dove at higher speeds to keep up.  The thick blanket of cloud cover broke, revealing landscape of mountains, gorges and plains.  Thousands of feet up, the impending fate of the vessel Aerolark became obvious.  The crash would be catastrophic, and all aboard would be lost.  Minutes ago, the Captain had sounded the alert...  "All you who can, escape by pod or whatever means avail you."

Picking up speed, the main components of the ship's aeronautic capabilities broke off in chunks; pneumo-flaps, low thrusters, core and outer stabilizers.  Flashes and sparks emitted on all sides.  Escape pods disembarked with pops and blips of orange-white light.  Catching the wind, they slowed and were tossed into the smoke-trail of the doomed frigate.

Lying in the nether regions of outer space above, the battle space was a blur of debris and lancing cannon fire.  The Imperials, who had believed themselves to be on the attack when they hypered into the space above the planet Enosk, were immedietly unballanced by the superior Republic forces.  A well placed trap that had made the outcome obvious from the first turbolaser strike.  Escape was impossible, due to the large gravity well that had been launched soon after the battle's initiation.  The imperial ships would be picked off, one by one...

Mon-Cals of all kinds worked their way through the arena, devouring small and large imperial ships alike.  The captain of the Aerolark, had directed his frigate toward the planet Enosk in a desperate attempt to avoid immediate destrcution.  As the Aerolark broke away, smaller Republic ships nipped at it's heels, and an MC-80 had blasted away the ship's shields with turbolaser pot-shots.  Before the Aerolark ever entered the atmosphere of Enosk, much of its maneuvering mainframe was already disabled or destroyed.  The fighters that had managed to deploy tried to follow their mother-ship's uncontrolled descent.  As they did, though, they were picked off as well.  The battle would not last much longer.
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Dusk
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  RE: open story
September 11, 2011 1:59:59 PM    View the profile of Dusk 
Dusk slammed the hatch to the escape pod closed. He pressurized his suit as the pod launched. He quickly closed the iris and the room pressurized. As he ran through the doorway to check to see if all the pods jettisoned, a turbolaser blast ripped through the already weakened hull. The bulkheads slammed closed sealing Dusk in the vacuum.

His suit pressurized and his mag-boots activated. Dusk thanked the stars that he had taken the time to get a set of Space Trooper armor. He walked over to the jagged hole and got into position to jump.

Dusk activated his thrusters and launched himself from the frigate. He quickly moved towards the back of the ship. What was left of the air-brakes kept flipping in and out, whoever was piloting the death trap was doing his best to aim the ship towards the coast of one of the continents.

Dusk launched a cable at the area around a hatch that he could get back in with. As Dusk looked at the ship, he saw how really damaged it was. He landed about twenty meters from the hatch. Turbolaser fire came down in loose volleys.

Dusk fell through the hatch. He quickly stood and ran down the corridor. The turbo lift was down so he had to improvise. Taking out a hull-breaching charge he attached it to the floor. Jumping into another room Dusk detonated the charge.

After the smoke vented out into space he pulled himself into the next floor. A ray shield sealed the hole and air filled the room again. Luckily the bulkheads hadn’t sealed so Dusk proceeded to force the door open to the cockpit.

He wedged some shrapnel into the doorway to keep it open. Dusk proceeded inside and saw a lone pilot working to aim the ship.

“Hey, flyboy, stop working and let’s get the hell out of here.” Dusk called.
The man looked up and saw Dusk standing in his armor, and said back. “No, I can’t stop, less this ship crash into the sea.”
“That wasn’t a request.”

Dusk grabbed the man’s fight suit and grabbed the helmet off the floor.

“Put this on, you’ll need it were we’re going.”
"Power, Unlimited Power!"
~ Emperor Palpatine


TRP/PVT Dusk/2SQD/1PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE
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