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Skarr
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  Skarr's Character Challenge!
August 23, 2011 9:27:25 PM    View the profile of Skarr 
Hello peeps. With all this character stuff we've been talking about, I've decided to write up a challenge for you all.

The challenge is to write a short story on this topic about your character. But that's not all. The short story has to be from someone else's point of view (a friend, colleague, etc. but not another VE member). This story also really has no plot. The point of it is to write how that character sees yours. Yes, a bit tricky. But it could be fun. This topic is open to any and all VE members (retired, reserves, Army, Navy, etc.)

In an OOC box, tell us what NPC you're using, and what the relationship is between that NPC and your character.
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  RE: Skarr's Character Challenge!
August 23, 2011 10:46:34 PM    View the profile of Dusk 
OOC:
I am writing from the point of Ferea Noshlem, a citizen of Argau, and old teacher of Dusk who hasn't seen or heard from him in four years.


Farea walked down the corridor in her apartment complex. She walked towards her door and punched in her pass code. The door slid open and the lights flicked on. She walked into the room and heard the familiar hiss of the door. THUNK. She spun around saw a foot in the doorway. A hand gripped the edge of the door and forced it open. In the doorway stood a man in a wide brimmed hat and trench coat. Ferea stood frozen in fear.

"Ferea, is that you?" The shadow said in a familiar voice.
"Who... Who are you?" She stammered out.
"It's me Jacen, Jacen Arture." Jason said.
"What, It's really you Jacen? I haven't heard from you since you left. George, Shalin, and I have been worried. Were have you been?"
"Ok, Ferea, you can't call me Jacen anymore, Call me Dusk."
"What, why? What's going on?"
"I've joined the Vast Empire. I'm a Private. And my name is now Dusk."
"Ok, Dusk got it." Ferea said affirmatively.
"I need know were Shalin is. I'm taking the business back." Dusk said urgently.
"Um...,"Fera wondered for a second, then her face lit up as she remembered," I believe he traveled to Nubia."

Dusk's face froze for a moment taking a mental note.

"Ferae, i can't thank you enough, but I may call upon your assistance again." Dusk said this and sprinted through the door.
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  RE: Skarr's Character Challenge!
August 23, 2011 10:58:51 PM    View the profile of Skarr 
Dusk, this was a cool idea. Not what I had in mind, but this can work too.

Peeps, you can either post a story like Dusk or do what I was thinking of. What I had in mind was as if the NPC was being questioned on what they thought of your character.

But what Dusk did is fine. As long as it reveals something about your character or it shows how you want them to be viewed.
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  RE: Skarr's Character Challenge!
August 24, 2011 1:52:42 AM    View the profile of THX1138 
OOC:
A Chiss "parole officer" of sorts. He watches Therex and assures he stays in exile from Csilla.


  He lowered his electrobinoculars. There had been no movement in the house for several hours. The Chiss sat on a high cliff overlooking the house. To his left he had a small furnace going with a meal cooking. Turning, the Chiss stood and moved closer to the furnace. He reviewed a small datapad with information on his target.

  Everyone from Csilla knew his family, but few knew there rebellious son. After following him for a couple years, he had discovered that Therex had changed from his troubled childhood. Maybe the Army was doing him some good.

  As he sat down to eat, he heard a twig snap. Quickly he reached for his charric. His hand was stopped by a boot clad foot. When he looked up, he saw another Chiss standing over him with a knife. The light from the furnace was enough to reveal that his attacker was Therex.

  "I don't like to be followed," he said.

  With one swift movement, Therex cut the man's jugular and kicked him off the cliff.

OOC:
Not sure if that is what you wanted.
"He has his orders, and when a Chiss accepts orders he carries them out, period."

"He's in there, I was gonna shoot him but I was... busy."

"Chiss don't invade the territories of others. We don't even make war against potential enemies unless we're attacked first."

"You have to admire the Chiss. They don't just steal your technology—they make it better."

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  RE: Skarr's Character Challenge!
August 24, 2011 4:13:41 AM    View the profile of Fain 
OOC:
Azariah - Caarite shop owner. No prior relationship. Glóin - Killik bartender. Owes Alex money. Everyone except for Glóin talks like Christopher Walken (because I can).

~Courscant, outdoor shopping center, upper balcony. Mid level of the planet. Three years prior to Alex's enlistment with the Stormtrooper Corps. Alex is out of prison on parole.~


Azariah Kyras, do you wish to partake in the consumption of Membrosia? clicked Glóin, a surviving Killik Membrosia Giver from the planet Alderaan.


"You know I can't, Glóin. How many times I gotta tell ya. we're working."

*A series of clicks from Glóin*

"Don't you get snippy with me! You were nothin when I found you, and you'll be nothin when i'm dead! heh? whadda ya say to that?"

*more clicks from Glóin* His body language and mannerisms change when he sees a man wearing a leather trench coat duck into an alley four kiosks down.

"What is it, Glóin?" The Caarite shopkeeper asked his long time friend. All kidding aside.

*A series of rapid clicking from Glóin*

"You need to slow down on that clickin. You owe who money?"

Human. Male. Released yesterday. fifteen year sentence for incarceration. medium security prison, clicked Glóin.

The large and inviting smile that usually played across Az's face diminished as a pair of thugs exited an alley next to his kiosk. Without giving Az enough time to warn his friend, the two muscle men jumped Glóin, pinning the beings four chitinous arms behind his slender torso.

"This don't involve you, Caarite. Don't be a hero."

Az stopped short of a reply as a trench coated teenager with close cropped brown hair exited the same alley as the thugs.

"That's it boys. Hold him there, I wanna have a little chat with our insect friend here." The man told his crew. "You didn't think you'd see me for a very long time, did you Glóin." The man stated, and cut off the Killik mid-response. "You've had 7 years to come up with the credits. you never paid." cutting Glóin off mid-response again by raising a gauntlet encased hand. "See, some people might take offense to this...what's the word i'm looking for?"

"Blatant, boss." replied one of gang mambers.

Azariah couldn't help but imagine what this young man who couldn't be older than 17 had done to command such loyalty from his followers.

"yeah. blatant. thank you kindly, Mackie. Some people might take offense to this blatant" the teenager nodded to Mackie "disregard to proper protocol. But not me, see. Dead people can't pay up on debts."

Az watched, groping for a small blaster pistol he kept in his stall and after finding it, released it as Glóin visibly relaxed. Az anxiously awaited the leader's next move as a thought struck the Human.

"You know what. what the hell. Tony, Mackie, you know what to do."

As if rehearsed, the thugs replied in unison "sure thing, Boss" and threw the Killik over the balcony. Az stood stunned as his friend and co-owner of their bar 'The Pink Twi'lek' plummeted to near certain death. Blaster pistol forgotten, his trademark smile played broadly across his face as realization dawned on him that he now had soul ownership of the bar.

The young but brutal young man turned to Az, and said "it's a shame about your friend there."

"Not really, I hardly knew him." Az lied.

"Is this your establishment here?"

"It is now, actually. That slimy Killik was extorting money at 35% of my weekly take. But thanks to you kind and honorable gentlemen, I now have complete ownership of this ol' gal."

"huh. Complete ownership ya say? Well, we'll be makin' a few changes." The young man called over his shoulder as he walked to the balcony and leaning over slightly. A crowd was gathering below around the dead Killik's corpse, some looking up. "Unless you want to end up like your little friend down there, you'll be giving us 75% of your take to cover what he owed me. Got that...what did you say your name was again?"

"A-A-Azariah." Replied Az, shocked with disbelief at how fast his good fortunes had turned. The smile fading from his face, and slouching greatly. All remnants of his small victory gone like credit chips at one of the backroom Pazaak games Az ran in 'The Pink Twi'lek' after hours. "All right...Boss." Az added sardonically.

"All of this hard work today has stirred up a whopping thirst. What do you say to some drinks, boys? On our new business partner...uh...what's his name again. Forget about it. Not important." the young man said strolling past Az into the bar with his two goons.

"who the hell do you think you are?" Az called after the gang’s leader.

“Raven. Alexander Raven. Now stop asking questions and start pouring rounds of fire-water.” Alex called out the door over the shouts of his posse.

OOC:
The story ran a lot longer than I thought, I was just to into it to cut it prematurely. It's 4:00 A.M. right now and if need be I can crop it at a more reasonable hour. But come on, 838 words is a short story, and the majority of it is dialogue. again, if the need should arise, ill edit it Scarr. Thoughts on it as it is would be greatly appreciated, though.
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  RE: Skarr's Character Challenge!
August 24, 2011 5:37:28 PM    View the profile of Havock 
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ZOMG HAV POSTED. Okay not my best, doesn't go anywhere at all in fact but this is Aryanna "Whiskey" who as far as I'm concerned is still the Commander of ARC Theta. Oh and she's Havock's twin sister. Cool idea btw Skarr.


The office was a disaster. Flimsy stacks towered like a city scape on the desk. Piles of unidentifiable hodgepodge balanced precariously along the far walls. Drawers remained unclosed due to the volume within them. The scene gave Aryanna an absolute headache.

“You know I'm only on planet for a few more hours correct?”

A muttered, “yes” came growling across the wasteland of a workspace.

“And you realize that you are the one that somehow - and I really don't want to know how – rearranged my duty orders and got me off duty this afternoon.”

An exasperated sigh floated in the air. Aryanna gave up and stood to circle the desk and drag the other woman out of the office. She found a mirror image of her face being held between two identical hands.

They hadn't seen each other in almost a year. Aryanna was in ARC which meant several back to back deep cover missions with no contact with the outside world. Her sister, Ayme, was the Commander of Phoenix company. Based on her looks her job must have also been dominating her time.

Ayme's army uniform hung off her body. Both sisters had an athletic build but now Ayme seemed scrawny as if she skipped several meals. Aryanna had heard about the recent army campaigns in reports but somehow it never occurred to her how hard her younger twin would take the recent lack of success.

The blue eyes that finally looked up to meet hers were sullen and tired. “I'm sorry Ary, I...yea...let's go to lunch, this can wait.”

“You do look like you could eat.”

Ayme nodded then started collecting some datapads that were randomly stashed around the cluttered desk. Aryanna was lost in thought for a few minutes watching her younger sibling and wondering how anyone could find anything in such a disaster. Of course, Ayme never was the picture of organization. She had her own way of doing things and didn't like anyone imposing a new strategy on her. Good old Katash stubbornness showing itself there.

Aryanna stepped forward and put a firm hand on her sister's shoulder. “No datapads, no flimsy, no work for one hour.”

“Ary.”

“And no arguments either, that's an order Captain.”

Ayme raised an eyebrow then laughed softly under her breath. “Okay okay Commander. Although I'm pretty sure in the chain of command...”

“Oh shut up Ayme, food now.”

----~~~~----
“So then we had this one guy surrounded, all sides, there was no where to go. Next thing I know he's got this shovel in his hand. The crazy bastard was gonna try to dig his way away from ARC.” They both laughed.

Even though she had to practically drag the company commander out of her office, she seemed to be having fun. Ayme needed to spend time away from all the paperwork, frankly it wasn't like her not to set a limit on the hours she was devoting to her company.

“Aym's you need to take more breaks like this.”

Havock shrugged. “I guess. RAIDERS has been off planet and it just seems when they aren't here I pretty much keep busy in the office, or the gym.”

“What does one squad have to do....” Aryanna trailed off slowly a thought entering her mind. “Oh that girl is in RAIDERS isn't she?”

Ayme nodded.

“Right, and I take it Zee keeps herself as far from both of us as the universe allows.”

Another nod.

Aryanna smirked. Ayme had always been a precocious and independent child. She was often known to wonder off letting her curiosity drive her into some kind of trouble. Ayme was even fairly decent at fixing things, which always angered her older sister. Mostly out of a childish jealousy. Aryanna was only exceptional at reading, through her study she had become adept at several things but she always envied her sister's natural talent.

“Look kiddo, you don't need to be rescued from your office by someone to get some fresh air. Next time I'm on planet I'm going to find you and if you're buried in that closet I'm going to shoot you.”

“What!?”

“At least then you'll be in medical rather than that smelly office, oh and let a damn droid clean that place will ya?”
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