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Marka
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  Back to the Beginning
May 27, 2011 2:23:34 AM    View the profile of Marka 
Abregado-rae become just another blurred streak of matter as the Inebriation rattled off into space, whisking its battered and weathered cargo away from their responsibilities, their plights – and their shame. From all walks of life, old and young, rich and poor, sick and healthy folk alike huddled together in a quiet mass of change. Marka was no different.

A runaway soldier, silent and troubled.

Half a glance at the viewport showed the stars begin to stretch - electric blue strands reaching through the void. The engines below Marka’s feet gave one final pained lurch before turning over, shaking every loosely-fit component of the ship. As appropriately as possible, the whole cargo hold seemed the perfect reflection of its contents; mismatched, unusual, unrefined. Eclectic. There was an almost vagrant charm to the rough-living crowd. Toes were stepped on, foreheads were bumped. The air was hot and thick with breath as each person clung to the minute personal space they were afforded. One poor mother held her infant children tight to her chest as they grew restless and hungry, trapped between a rusted steel wall and the turned backs of several others. Shoulder-to-shoulder they stood, having little else to do save examine the person directly in front of them. Stood before Marka was a shorter man, his greasy, stringy hair combed across in a desperate attempt to hide the ever-expanding emergence of scalp. A trademark of humanity. The squat man’s head was shiny and slick with sweat, and rosy. The products in his meagre covering of hair smelled ripe with chemicals, tart enough to taste in the air. His shirt was thin and stained with oil, and it clung to him like everything else as he continued to perspire. Marka’s forearms were unavoidably pressed to the man’s lower back; they grew damp and tingly in the heat of it. But Marka endured, fingers tightly wound around a hide-wrapped sword hilt, held preciously to his stomach.

One of the children began to cry. The tension grew tenfold, with one particularly smarmy looking suit visibly grinding his teeth. It was a pressure cooker for tolerance and compassion. Something was going to break eventually – and no doubt sooner rather than later. The dishevelled mother shushed and cooed and whispered in singsong to her child, anything and everything she could think of to restore the peace and quiet. The boundaries of patience were fraying at the edges.

“Bloody hell, woman. Shut that thing up!” spouted the suit. His perfect white teeth were bared in increasing frustration. The woman just glanced at him, her expression caught between apologetic and venomous.

She murmured, though loud enough to be heard by those around her, “You try bringing children in here…”

That was all it took.

Another woman, whose snooty, pointed features matched the elitist hiss of her voice, shot back.

“My children haven’t made a sound!” she quipped. It was followed by a convulsion of half-hushed accusations and defences as each grew increasingly confident. Before long there was no end to the voices, progressively rising in volume. Shoulders tensed and muscles contracted and throats were finally stripped raw as screaming of all different sorts smothered everyone’s senses. Marka remained quiet, as did the young man beside him. All around them shouts and cries of annoyance swelled and pulsated until each voice grew old and tired and finally, after too long, all grew quiet once more; all that remained was time.

Time enough for Marka to succumb to contemplation of his deeds. Haunting flashes of the skeletal remains of starships, of fetid reanimated bodies skulked through Marka’s consciousness. Shadows had been born and multiplied in his mind. Too much had been compressed. What peace he had convinced himself existed was slowly decaying.

Many months before, at the very tail end of what would be Marka’s last mission for Wraith Squad, the past finally caught up. He and the rest of Wraith had just stolen a child. It wasn’t personal, it was business. Nothing had gone more awry than it ever did. But something ate away at Marka’s confidence, like there was a spectre of something he believed long gone following in his footsteps. It stuck to him like bad smell, all the way back to Tadath. Suspicion grew into paranoia, and paranoia brought out in him a long-supressed desperation for survival. So he ran – took the first shuttle off-surface and left everything and everyone behind. But the niggling fear, the phantom, had followed him; along with a Vast Empire retrieval squad, trained specifically to bring in deserters, alive or maimed. So began months of planet-hopping and evasion.

The retrieval squad eventually stopped for whatever reason. But still Marka ran.

It was on Abregado-rae that the fear became reality. Marka stopped running long enough to see what was behind him.

It was late in the day, and the sun set over the labyrinthine canals winding around the Triple Nova Casino. Flocks of starry-eyed tourists and frequent gamblers shed their work clothes for fancy attire and filled the streets as the neon lights grew bright in fading light. Everywhere, smiles leapt out as street vendors peddled their wares and greeters beckoned passers-by into the bellies of their entertainment superstructures. It was easy to get lost in it all. But the sense of danger was keen in Marka’s mind. Several people had followed him from the front door of his temporary residence. Their faces were so bland, so forgettable, as if they were nothing but shells without souls. Impeccably dressed as they were, they nonetheless stood out amongst the masses. And they took the bait.

A short trip around the block was all it took. Marka practically led them by the belt through the evening marketplace, and back to the small apartment complex he was staying in. He ducked inside, and closed the door behind him. His followers would remain outside for barely a few minutes, he figured.
Gunnery Sergeant Marka Su'Riven


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Marka
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  RE: Back to the Beginning
May 27, 2011 9:38:07 AM    View the profile of Marka 
The trap was set. Three stories up, Marka looked out over the swarm of big-spenders and risk-takers as they tended to their recreational vices. The high-tide of enthusiastic gamblers and shoppers went about their business with an impressive haste; swerving this way and that in an organised chaos. They were all so used to each other that it became a mass co-ordinated dance of sorts. It was this that made it easy to spot the ones that didn’t belong. Four of them, sporting identical brown pinstripe business suits and bowler hats, awkwardly negotiating their way through the traffic of shifting bodies toward the door three floors below Marka.

It was time to put his trap to the test. He needed only two things. His weapon, and the detonator.

In moments he was out the door and down the hall, knocking on the door of room C-G. It creaked open a quarter of the way, allowing an elderly woman’s hooked nose to peek around the side. Her fragile voice was sweet.

“Yes, dear? Oh you’re the nice young man from down the hall, aren’t you! Come in, come in!”

He knew she would let him in. She did so for everyone, whether she knew them or not. She was perfect for her role. The door whined as it swung inward, squeaking on shoddy hinges. Marka stepped in.

Immediately his senses were flooded with strange smells and sights. Old herbs and tea seemed mixed into the air, decades of dust carrying the scent to every corner of the room. The same dust left a thick film over most of the surfaces, undisturbed in most places. Shutting the door behind him, Marka slowly slipped into the main room; a small sitting room of armchairs and end tables and lamps and blankets. The furniture was musty and aged, and as it was all made of wood some pieces had been visibly chewed through by any manner of parasite.

“Can I get you some tea, love?” the old woman creaked.

“No,” Marka replied with a pause, before continuing with almost a tone of surprise, “thank you.”

He was unused to pleasantries. More than that, he was unused to conversation. Months of careful living, keeping under the radar, had not often afforded the luxury of personal interaction.  It had been longer still since he had thanked anyone. Perhaps it was the vulnerable accessibility of the old woman’s kindness that provoked it. It was difficult to differentiate from a life spent refraining from unnecessary talk. Marka had always been of the belief that if one had two ears and only one mouth, then one must do twice as much listening as talking. Words were too often wasted.

Time was running down, however. Dwelling upon his own characteristics was folly when timing was essential. As he turned pre-emptively to the communication terminal fixed on the near wall, Marka noticed the multitude of trinkets – precious items of great sentimental value. All over the mantle beneath the communicator were orbs of refined glass and crystal, and charms and jewellery of myriad gems, and image frames. The old woman’s family, if it was them, was extensive. Dozens of versions of the exact same smile shone up at him. There was no dust on any of them.

She was so proud of her family.

“I have this new tea, I do. The man who sold it to me was so sweet. Would you like some? It is strong, but oh does it give me the kick I need to keep these old bones going,” came the lady’s voice from the kitchen. She gave an excited chortle as the question hung in the air. He had no intention of drinking anything.

“Yes…” Marka replied, wishing he had more time. “May I use your communicator?”

“Go right ahead, love! I’ll have your tea all ready for you when you’re done.”

Sliding the detonator from his pocket, soldier instincts began to crawl back to the forefront of Marka’s mind. He deftly punched in the number for his room, and waited. The rickety video screen crackled to life as the call was answered. Staring back at him with shadowed eyes and a grim smile, a suited man spoke in confident tones.

“So you evaded us. But you cannot have left the building. We will find you.”

The call ended; and Marka pressed the little red button beneath his thumb.

All at once the building shook, accompanied by a thunderous boom. Every single ornament and image frame and little memento before Marka came crashing from the mantle, shattering at his feet. Dust was shaken from the ceiling and the window to his right splintered in its frame. Behind him, he heard the tinkling crack of fine china breaking against a slate floor. There was a moment of silence as Marka turned, and the old woman slumped against the doorframe to the kitchen. She stopped, her expression pained, and slid to the floor.

He knew then that the blast had startled her poor heart beyond its capacity, and a sudden wound of guilt opened itself in Marka’s heart. Worse still, there was no time to afford her body any of the respect it deserved. He dropped the detonator, slung his hide scabbard over his back and drew his sword in the moments it took him to reach the door to the hallway.

Once outside, the damage was unmistakable; the entire section of wall and ceiling and floor in the immediate area surrounding what was once Marka’s door was now entirely gone. Bits of steel and wood and plaster and clay were splashed throughout what was left of the hall, and into the rooms below. As he inched further along, the more complete result of the detonation became apparent: the rubble around the centre of the blast was thick with red paste, stuck in violent splattered patterns in every corner. Articles of burnt clothing clung lifelessly to separated sections of several men. The stripes of the now blackened suits were confirmation enough that at least some of the targets had been eliminated. As Marka considered the high probability that one of the four had been left at the front door on the bottom floor, the ringing scream of emergency sirens wailed in the distance. It was the variation of tone applied to suspected terrorist cases.

People began pouring into the hallway, seemingly unconcerned with the structural integrity of the only walkway they had left. They ran and pushed and yelled their way to the landing of the staircase, which had by now partially collapsed; the marble railings were chipped and shattered, and sections of the stairs continued to crumble to the lower flights. As ever, mothers herded their children close and gripped their hands with white knuckles. Their maternal instincts shouted at them to keep their children alive while their own personal instincts told them to run far, and fast. They seemed to pay no heed to Marka as he walked between them, sword in hand, toward the hole that was previously his living quarters.

He leapt down to the floor below, now only a short drop what with the pile of debris on the floor, and darted through a collapsed wall into the adjoining room. The street-side wall was completely obliterated, and fires had sprung from the damaged appliances, creating a waist-high barrier of flame between him and the thousand nameless faces staring up at him and the building. He looked out over them all, their features aghast and mouths unhinged. Several were crying and rushing forward – no doubt they had family here, and hoped they still did.

The heat of the fire caused the air above it to waver and blur, and the masses below looked all the more twisted in fear while a growing amount of eyes found Marka’s form standing over the destruction he had wrought. Behind him, a scuffling of shoes grew louder, then stopped.

“Got you,” came a smooth voice, his dulcet tone entirely unaffected by the chaos surrounding it.

Marka turned on his heel to face the suited man who was brandishing a long stun baton – specifically designed to incapacitate long enough for capture. The suit lifted it forward and stepped closer, the unmistakable glint of a satisfied hunter shining through his eyes. His comrades decorated the walls around him and he paid no notice to their fate. Marka lifted his blade, all thought of the consequences of his actions, or the waste of the old lady’s life, dissolved as the base survivalist emerged once again. This time he did not need to run. He knew what he faced. He could see it, see his enemy. His enemy was human; and human beings bleed and die.

The suit made the first move, taking up a basic fencing stance. Naturally, he had to have done some research on Marka’s own capabilities. He must have known if he had rushed in, he would have been swiftly parted from a lot of the blood he had. So the suit approached with caution, seemingly eager to test himself, but more-so to attain the bragging rights and now sole share of the reward that must be offered.

The wide eyes of the crowd below became fixed. A floor above the street, for all of them to see, two men stood sword to sword in preparation for combat, behind a half-wall of brightly burning flame in a room of debris. It was like something from a holovid to them, or a play. And they continued to watch as the combatants clashed, the crashing of the electric stun baton shooting off sparks left and right, lighting the room a fierce blue in the fading light. Onward they stared, mesmerised by footwork and flourishes and the dance of a blade above the flames.

Marka was every bit as controlled with his weapon as he needed to be, steering the fight as he wished. The suit put too much merit in his own abilities, and falsely believed he had the upper hand. He pressed forward. And again. He pushed and shuffled and thrust his baton at his opponent, driving him ever closer to the fire - and the drop - behind him.

But Marka was fully aware of this, and the moment he could feel the flames lapping at his back, he lowered his defences just enough to invite a frontal attack. It worked without fault. The suit lurched forward, all shoulders and hips, and had barely a moment to show the surprise on his face as Marka stepped beside him and opened up the suit’s left side: a clean, fluid slice along the waist. The suited man crumpled forward to his knees, his torso tumbling forward into the flame. The fire attached itself to the jacket and burned everything it touched as the body passed through it, falling limp onto the street below. The gasp from the spectators was uncertain and hushed, almost entirely drowned by the ever-approaching sirens.

Marka clambered down to the street without a word, sword still at hand, and found the crowd part for him as he made his way to the failing victim he had just sent down.

The brown of the man’s suit was splotched with soot and blood and dust as he lay in a crumpled mess on a pile of thick steel girders, face down. Every eye was on Marka as he searched the gurgling, convulsing body. No datapads, no wallets, no identification. Just a note, and a holstered blaster.

Leaving the blaster and carefully retrieving the dirtied piece of parchment, Marka surveyed the expressions around him for only a moment before turning from the scene.

It wasn’t hard to get lost again in all the commotion. But it was time to leave the planet. Too many people had seen him. Whether they knew he was responsible for all of it or not was irrelevant; tongues would loosen and his face would be the one to find. It was lucky, then, that he knew exactly where he had to go next. The note was all he needed:

Number Three,

Find the heir. Take him home. We will be waiting.

G.S.
Gunnery Sergeant Marka Su'Riven


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Marka
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Marka
 
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  RE: Back to the Beginning
May 28, 2011 11:20:55 AM    View the profile of Marka 
So it was that Marka found himself ensnared in the unrelenting grasp of the cargo hold, packed to bursting point with all the others. More than a few of them were there only because their homes were just destroyed; others fleeing what they believed to be the beginning of the end of peace on Abregado-rae. And that was only the first shuttle to leave. Half a dozen more were back on the surface opening their landing bays to the scared and the homeless, the superstitious and the opportunistic. There was more than a hint of uncertainty on every breath they breathed. The air became heavy with it: the anxiety in the face of the unknown. The parents especially, but they were the most courageous. They had more precious things to be brave for. The businessmen and the homeless and the slaves to self-preservation worried for themselves, their immediate future. But the mothers and fathers knew they could not put themselves first. It seemed the most common virtue across all species.

There was no announcement as the Inebriation jerked its way out of lightspeed, causing another unhealthy groan from the engines below. Once more the bits and pieces rattled and clunked and strained and every body braced itself to compensate. The steel frame of the hold moaned and whined, threatening to give way to whatever pressure it wrestled with. It was nearly enough to drown out the already crackling voice straining through the comm-system.

“Landing soon. Hang on to somethin’,” warned the disembodied voice of the ship’s pilot. His voice was not warm.

Not long to go now. Backs and shoulders straightened with a renewed anticipation as each and every person felt the end of the journey approaching. For some it meant starting their lives all over again, or seeking new opportunities. For Marka it meant reclamation – and a final confrontation. With who, or what, he was uncertain. But there could be no more running.

. . .

It was only a short time later that the landing gears crashed with a great lack of finesse into the shadowed platform below. There was a synchronised swaying amongst the passengers as the world took its time becoming stable under their feet, and only moments later the bay door fell outward with a great crack. The sight that greeted them was far from inviting.

The dingy, old circular landing pad was littered with assorted crates of varying shapes and sizes, and each had long been swallowed up by black lichen and artificial weeds. The mouldy spores of the dead flora floated visibly through the air, which smelled old and decayed. Several floor-lights fought bravely to illuminate the walkway leading north, but all that could be managed anymore was the occasional blinking and hissing of unmaintained wiring. Past the walkway, tall walls rose high above, beyond sight, into the inky sky. There was no life outside the shuttle.

But every soul marched their way down the ramp and out into the world, and with heads held aloft they went about their business. A portly man wrapped in a whirlwind of multi-coloured, mismatched silks stood rigidly at the cusp of the deep shadows, his oily moustache crowning a deceitfully welcoming grin. He waved his hands at the more helpless of the folk and churned out his undoubtedly practised pitch, luring the naïve to him with the promise of safe transport to palaces of gold and beautiful people. Too many went with him, and before long disappeared without a sound into the black.

Coruscant, as ever it was in the forgotten regions, far from the splendour shown in all the tourism brochures. This was a place of poverty now. The structures, the architecture all around whispered that it was not always this way. But much can change in a decade.

It was  this very landing pad, in fact, that Marka had used to escape when he was younger. It was this landing pad that he would wait on, for hours, for his father to come home. It was there he stood the one day his father didn’t come home at all. It was there he decided to find the Vast Empire. And several miles away was home; once a shining tower of glass and steel that glinted in the light and glowed with warmth in the dark, surrounded at the bottom by terracotta planters housing tidy little bushes rich with flowers of every colour. It had stood suspended over a great chasm, reaching out with unrivaled confidence.

It had been years since Marka’s last visit, and by then everything his home once was had perished. The tower remained, though the uppermost level had been crushed, and the windows were gone, or broken. The steel had blackened in the smog of industry and the plants shrivelled and disintegrated. Winds of traffic and nearby ventilation systems wore the natural substances to dust, and that dust was carried in through the missing walls and windows. Inside, the few items of furniture that survived theft were utterly spent, crumbling under years of nature’s abuse. The door was still clinging to its hinges in splintered pieces, a result of a breaching charge Marka remembered vividly. That was where the men in brown suits had forced their way into the house when he was only a boy. Through that doorway his mother was dragged and carried, kicking and screaming, while her arms and legs struggled to grasp the doorframe.

As all the life Marka had left behind came rushing back, the Inebriation spewed vile green smoke as it wrenched itself away and back into the sky. Everyone had left, leaving only the faintest echo of footsteps in the dark.

So Marka forced his feet forward, little-by-little submerging himself in the oppressive embrace of the narrow streets wedged between the towering, lifeless skeletons of a city-suburb long forgotten. Scum caked his boots within a few metres, and the murky filth in the air seeped into his lungs, and seemed alive – awoken and kicked up by the sudden influx of shuffling refugees.  But he soldiered on, as ever, through winding streets and sloping pathways, to and fro with a half-forgotten familiarity. The shape of it all was the same as it always had been, but that was all. The soul of it - the lights, the music, the smell of food… the people – was dead and buried beneath the ghosts.

It was the same for the entire lengthy trudge. Marka’s long hair and scattered, thick braids became damp with the moisture in the air, and his lips developed a thin covering of some murky grit. His beard had grown long and rough in his exile, streaked with the premature grey of a stretched soul. There had been no balance, no control for far too long. As a person he was unstable. Lost. The one purpose he clung to was only just ahead now, standing in the same decrepit place as the last time.

Home.

And the measly remains of the door were just the same as when last he saw it. But there were visible footprints in the dirtied footpath leading up the miniscule incline to the interior. And, far above, a barely glimmering light; it flickered a faint orange on the highest remaining floor. The family dining room.

Cautiously, Marka put one foot before the other and began the most agonising walk in his memory.

He slipped in through the front door and forced himself not to look at anything as he continued toward the winding stair set deep in the far wall. The wearied stone was recently scuffed by more than one pair of boots. The boot prints continued upward, ceaseless, through four empty floors of uncomfortable memories, to the top. The steel door was rusted and looked like dull copper, but the fancy brass handle was clean. At the bottom, the glitter of firelight fluttered at Marka’s boots as he stood cold and stiff.

A honeyed, engaging voice wafted into the stairwell from beyond.

“Do come in. I have been ever so patient, you know.”

Marka pushed gently down on the handle as if time was slowed; he heard the internal latch slide backward, and the dull scratching as the hinges begged for oiling and cleaning. The door turned in and the debris-scattered floor before him grew more and more bright, and the air warmer, until he was finally inside.

Directly six paces ahead was a grand winged armchair, a meticulously maintained antique piece, embroidered in rich red and gold thread, clearly brought from elsewhere. In it, sitting as relaxed as could be, was a thin, bald man. His hard, gaunt features were bathed in fluid illumination, leaving a hungry spark in his hooded eyes. Halfway between him and the door, by the glassless windows, was a great, deep metal drum and the fire that roared within it. It reeked of kerosene and old oil, and the billowing black smoke it produced collected across the ceiling like a blanket.

“My god, look at you. There you are. Finally, there you are. I almost cannot believe it,” the man spoke with a wide smile. The silence between them was electric.

“My name is Garrett, and I…” he continued, letting loose an amused, fake sigh, “I am your father.”

He let the words hang as his toothy grin grew stupidly. They both knew it was a lie. Marka held his tongue, his expression a mask of passive tolerance.

Garrett pressed his hands into the arms of his chair, and sprung to his feet with great enthusiasm, never once taking his eyes from Marka’s face.

“Well, not your real father, of course. No, no. I would know, I was the one who killed him,” Garrett boasted, the excitement in his voice barely restrained. Tucking his hands behind his back, he continued, “Went down fighting, your old man. He had no chance, sure, but he was tough as nails. Son of a bitch nearly took me with him, actually, your old dad.”

He took the time to focus his gleeful gaze on Marka’s eyes, searching to see if the words had hit home as firmly has he intended. Marka gave him nothing, and a flicker of disappointment etched its way into the prominent laugh lines surrounding Garrett’s antagonistic smile. So he progressed right along to his next best weapon.

“And I can tell you, son, that same spirit was the same with your dear mother – at first. That was, of course, before I broke her. Such a lively thing she was! I’d lay my hands on her and good heavens would she hit me! Nearly broke my jaw on a few occasions.”

Garrett’s features lit up again at his own sadism, thoroughly enjoying the idea of such emotional brutality. With the utmost pleasure, he continued talking while Marka envisioned an infinite number of ways he could unsheathe his sword from his back and tear that man’s heart from his chest. And still the words continued.

“But I’ve had such a long time. So long. One day, I had her taken to my bed, and when I put my hands on her, she just let me. She didn’t fight, she didn’t resist. She did not make a sound,” he said, pacing with a distinct spring in his step. His voice came to a whisper, “That’s right. Your mother, the whore.”

Marka’s blood boiled within, his vision narrowed and blurred at the edges, all the while the voice, thick with delight, drifted on.

“But I suppose you’re wondering what this all means, yes? Why bring you here, hmm? Well, truth be told, I need you. Dead, that is. I need you dead,” Garrett revealed. He injected just the right amount of obviously fake regret into his voice before continuing, “A shame, really. I would dearly love to keep you as a pet. You are quite a remarkable specimen. Very handy with that blade, I bet. And while I did expect you to be brought here by my… faithful servants, the fact that you came alone changes nothing. Actually…”

Garrett paused and raised his sleek eyebrows, seemingly at the whim of some revelation.

“Ah-ha!” he chuckled, “If anything, you’ve done me a favour! Now I don’t have to pay anyone! I can keep your family’s money all to myself. But I am getting away from the real issue.”

On and on, Marka held himself still as bloodlust suffocated every fibre of his being. He took no time to think, to plan an escape, to observe his surroundings. All the training he had received and absorbed disappeared beneath the veil of hatred inside him. There did not need to be a way out of this. When this creature before him ran out of words, Marka would do everything in his power to take Garrett’s head off, whether it meant death or not.

“So, here’s where you come in,” Garrett began nonchalantly. “See, your bitch of a mother left everything to you – and let me tell you, it’s enough for a small empire! Of course I didn’t know this when I murdered your father and had your mother married to me. Imagine my frustration when I took your family name – oh yes, I am quite officially Garrett Su’Riven – only to learn that the fortune I wanted would only fall to me should the remaining legitimate family be eradicated. So, that left you, and your delightfully supple mother.”

Garrett braved a step closer, and cocked his head faintly to the side.

“Your mother, of course,” he hummed, “was killed the moment I knew my men had found you. Mmm. It was a sad way for such an obedient piece of meat to end, but a necessity nonetheless.”

The night’s wind picked up beyond the broken windows, scattering the fire’s shadows in a frantic dance across the crumbling walls. Outside, the sky seemed darker, the wind colder, the stars dimmer. It was if the world was coming to a close. And still Garrett’s voice intruded.

“You don’t say much, do you? At any rate, I have talked long enough,” he said, and gave a brief wave toward the window. “And now the man I have positioned on the rooftop over yonder will have you in his sights, though I imagine he has done the entire time. You have no hope to kill me. You are going to die here, like a dog, in this old ruin.”

Then, with a flourish, Garrett gestured once more to the window, and the resounding snap of a single shot rung out in the air.

Garrett’s chest exploded outward, blood splattered every which way, and as he fell he left behind a fine crimson mist in the air. Little clouds of dust puffed up as his knees smacked against the floor while he bled. He twitched, gave a short and pained gurgle, and slumped back on his heels. There he knelt, extremely dead, the trademark look of morbid satisfaction completely gone from his face. Marka drew his sword with great caution and approached the body, making a point to step in the swiftly expanding ocean of blood pooling before it. Then, with a precise and vicious swing, he took the head clean off and cast it from the window into the gaping chasm below. Beside him, the body slumped left and toppled from the excess force.

Marka had no idea how long he stood there, struggling to find any suitable reaction for what had just happened. He was all but a statue, the drum’s fire burning fiercely alongside him. There were no words to describe any of it. There were no feelings complex enough. But, as always, time kept pace and passed in silence.

Eventually, Marka was shaken from his subconscious existence, and drawn back to the door behind him. A diminutive, pale man clad in dark leather armour breathily inched his way into the room. A long, complicated-looking rifle was slung over his back.

“Bastard,” he breathed, his bloodshot blue eyes sweeping over the messy remains of Garrett.

Still unable to conjure a suitable word for the situation, Marka settled his gaze on the grizzled man before him. Sewn into his dense jacket was the name ‘Knight’. He was thickset and broad across the shoulders and chest, but short, with only little legs.

“I’ve worked for this scumbag for a long time. This was the last straw, you know?” Knight grumbled, taking an aloof sniff.

Suddenly, words burst from Marka’s mouth.

“You worked for him?” he asked, the words rolling from his tongue with an unusual accent.

Knight gave a curt nod, “Sure did. Fifteen years. Always pretty dirty work, but the pay was good. Stopped being worth it a little while ago.”

“Did you know what was happening to my mother? Were you involved with what happened to my father?”

“I knew about your old lady, sure. He always had a plaything, I figured she was just the new flavour.”

Knight very nearly flinched as Marka turned partway toward him. A questioning look struck his face as his brow crinkled in confusion. He only had a handful of moments to mull over the ramifications of what he had just admitted to before he found his chest halfway along the intensely sharp sword in Marka’s hands. It had happened so fast, the pain was yet to take hold.

Marka’s voice trembled ever-so-slightly as he spoke, “You knew. All that time, you knew. And you did nothing. Remember this pain in hell.”

The last word was a hiss, and with his life draining away onto the floor, Knight’s legs gradually crumpled beneath him. He fell with a resounding thud and shared Garrett’s fate, leaving Marka to wrestle the internal typhoon of chaotic emotion: responsibility, guilt, vengeance, fury. And everything else.

After another stretch of time spent standing in tortured silence, Marka eased himself into the armchair and looked out over the sprawling towers of Coruscant. He watched the lights and the speeders, he surveyed the buildings before him, and he remembered the sweet old lady’s face in the moment his actions took their toll on her heart, and stopped it. There, sat in the throne atop his crumbling castle, Marka waited for a purpose.
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  RE: Back to the Beginning
June 1, 2011 9:29:14 AM    View the profile of Marka 
Only a day later, Marka found himself sitting in the centre of a sterilised interrogation room. The high walls glowed and hummed in stark white luminescence, blinding at first. Across from him, the door all but blended itself with the walls, showing only the most minute of spaces around it. Dull and cold, the chair Marka sat on was a hard, reflective steel matched perfectly to the single desk stood before it. And there, neatly spread out over its surface, lay a dozen images of nameless deceased. Each portrayed a different species and a different cause of death; blaster scoring, blunt trauma, poison, torture, drowning, and more. To reinforce the effect, each and every image showed the victim’s face, their lifeless eyes still open. Marka sat unperturbed.

Soon enough, the glimmering door slid back in its frame, then disappeared sideways into the wall. Through the breach, a portly man in the finest of suits ambled toward the desk. He was head-to-toe a vision of lavishness and pomposity; his velour jacket, slimming trousers, silken waistcoat and shirt sitting in picture-perfect form; his groomed moustache curled symmetrically, and his delicate black wisps of hair combed neatly according to his head’s natural part. Crooked beneath his left hand was a white cane of fine wood, rendered glossy, that caught the lights around it. The gentleman rested no weight atop its finely-curved handle.

“Well then,” he began with obvious tones of enthusiasm, “I believe we have some things to talk about, you and I. Tell me, then: how have you enjoyed the company?” His thick, stumpy hand gestured nonchalantly toward the images lain on the table.

For no particular reason, Marka cast his gaze again over the victims’ faces, “They seem shy. And I did not kill them.”

As the gentleman chuckled, the buttons of his pristine waistcoat strained around his heaving midriff. With his free hand, he touched a folded handkerchief to his glistening forehead, “No, no! I am absolutely not accusing you of such a terrible thing. Perhaps we are getting off on the wrong foot, yes? My name… well, it does not matter what my name is. You may call me Rikkt. Alright? Splendid.”

“Why I have brought you here is very simple. You were found with Garrett Myzant’s body, and the body of one other. It is fairly clear you did not kill Myzant. And I am willing to believe you simply defended yourself from the shooter. I can spin this story to the public however I wish. One of the many perks of my job, you see?” Rikkt continued. His eyes, unlike his comical appearance, were keen and focused.

Marka listened, glimmering from the tone of Rikkt’s voice a hint of the overall point.

“However,” Rikkt began. “However you, I believe, are just as dangerous as the two of them. It would not do for our citizens to have you loose on the streets, would it? Not without our guidance, at least. So I thought to myself about how I could treat you fairly for your hand in getting rid of Myzant, while also doing what is best for the good people who live on the edges of the criminal influence in this sector. My people. Would you like to know what I came up with? It is really very clever.”

There was a hunger in Rikkt’s expression, a deviousness in his voice, that fully betrayed the profession of noble intentions he had very clearly rehearsed. He paused to lick his round lips, flashing rows of white teeth capped in gold.

“What I came up with is you. What I want you to do for me, and for the people of this sector, is to replace Garrett Myzant. In his wake there will be a vicious vacuum of power. I want you to step into it and take control. You do seem like you can handle it. Once you have the power over the other groups, you will take direction from me. You will be the foundation of new life. We will restore the area, and you and yours will take hold of the business sector. I will, of course, require some understanding with each aspect of the businesses to ensure their loyalty – perhaps fifteen percent of future profits? We can negotiate this later.”

There was silence in the room, save the unobtrusive hum of the walls and the lights. There was never a moment of temptation in Marka’s mind, understanding both the visibility of the extortion and the transparency of motive. Not to mention, Marka had absolutely no desire to rebuild upon the ashes of his family. No doubt it would happen one day, but he would not be a part of it.

“Well? Come, boy, what do you say?” Rikkt’s hint of desperation ruined the façade of control he had attempted to maintain.

“No,” Marka replied, toneless.

“What do you mean ‘no’? Do you understand the opportunity I am presenting you? Look at these people,” Rikkt implored, again gesturing to the images scattered over the table. “Pictures like these will continue to be taken, people like these will continue to die, if you do not do what I am telling you to.”

Marka held his tongue, loathe to repeat himself.

“Then I am afraid we have a problem, son,” Rikkt sighed, abandoning false compassion. “You see, if you refuse, I have only to inform the public and the proper authorities that it was you who were responsible for both deaths, and several of the ones you see before you. You will be imprisoned without trial in a location of my choosing.”

Rikkt curved his oily lips into a vindictive smile, bolstering himself. He was convinced of his own triumph.

“So be it,” Marka replied, largely unruffled, “But I will find my way out.”

With a growl, Rikkt turned from the room, his jacket billowing behind him, “We shall see about that!”

.              .              .              .


Marka awoke blinded, eyes covered in a coarse, tightly-wound material secured to his head. The universe was black, devoid of all colour or light, confusing his senses. It was a few moments before he even realised he was standing. Above him, his wrists were sorely crushed in thick iron manacles. The harsh, rusted edges snagged and aggravated his skin until it was raw and bleeding. With a tentative ounce of force, Marka tugged his arms forward, but was quickly halted. The manacles rattled against the chain to which they were attached, and in response automatically tightened. The pain was fierce and spread viciously.

Lacking sight, Marka focused as intently as possible on his remaining senses. The stench of the place was immediate and sickening. The air was drowning in what had to be centuries of sweat and blood, fermented and left undisturbed. Every breathe he was forced to take was ripe, telling tales of men left to rot for their depravities. The easily identifiable smell of metal in the blood mixed with the scent of rust and deteriorating life became oppressive. It was sticky, and hot. It clung to everything it touched. Marka could taste the bile forming at the base of his throat.

Aside, the less intrusive rattle of countless other chains attached to even more pairs of shackles became clearer. Now and again one chain or two would shake and crash violently, and would instantly be followed by the hoarse pleas of men groaning through gritted teeth, begging whatever forces that existed to free them from torment. Then, slowly, they would once again return to their dispirited rhythms of breathing, only to be reminded of the degradation of existence surrounding them all.

Marka scuffed his bare foot against the floor and found it slick and rigid. Ridges rose in perfect rows under his tired soles, pronounced enough to cause a growing, dull discomfort. The cocktail of fluids and secretions that was spread beneath Marka’s feet made finding a firm foothold a desperate challenge. Patient and painstakingly measured inches were explored by his sodden toes in a shallow half-circle until he was sure there was nothing close at hand.

It is in the dark that those most nightmarish of things live, perched high on the old branches of their wicked trees. With great tendrils they weave and slither and skulk on the closing outskirts of sanity. Some fears were brutal in their approach, bombarding the mind with horrors until all that was left was a fragile, beaten mess. Marka’s fears arrived with a great deal more sedition. From afar they sniggered and sniped, a hundred thousand voices speaking little lies behind hungry eyes. With each word their teeth gnashed and ground together and they poured poisonous honey into his ears.

Let us in.

They growled and snarled and then grew quiet, waiting. When their terrible mouths formed smiles he could not see, he felt them branded into his skin. Ghosts of souls long-wasted formed their troubled voices, and they hissed a great many things. Marka fought not to listen. But he was trapped inside himself, imprisoned, at the finite mercy of solitude. A wintry hand wrapped bony fingers around his heart and squeezed. The cold burned ferociously.

Let us inside. Please?

The legion spoke as one but in so many voices. One by one they grew softer, inviting in their tenderness, until one distant whisper spun its careful webs into a cage.

You will let us in, before the end.
Gunnery Sergeant Markadus "Marka" Su'Riven


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[This message has been edited by Marka (edited June 1, 2011 9:30:42 AM)]
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