Lastorm, a good start, but we're gonna need some more background information from you, and placed in the following format please:
Name: First "lastorm" Last (lastorm is your callsign, what is your characters actual name?)
Home world: Barb I
Age: ?
Species: Barabel
Native Language: ?
Gender: Male
Skin Color: ?
Height: ?
Weight: ~2 Meters
Hair Color: ?
Facial Hair: ?
Eye Color: ?
Scars: ?
Tattoos: ?
Physical Description: A physical description of your character,
Character Background: Your character's history
Personality: a description of the personality of your character
Get that fixed and we can get you moving along with your training.
CWO Rorran "Slasher" Gorma
Executive Officer of the Academy, Naval Platform
Cappadocious