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Valthir
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  Breaking Away
January 21, 2011 9:45:30 PM    View the profile of Valthir 
In a nameless part of the galaxy, on a nameless planet, there lay a nameless city, full of nameless beings. They went about their lives, day in and day out, not taking the time to look at the world around them. They saw, but did not see. They heard, but did not hear. They felt, tasted, smelled, but did not. Everything was of various shades of grey; no other color was ever used. Society was dull and orderly. The beings were sheep, puppets pulled along by their Masters overhead. The rather small world was unremarkable in every way, except for one. It contained a precious metal, found nowhere else in the galaxy, which held fantastic properties. Even the most scientific advances could be achieved with this metal, which was why it was in such high demand. Unfortunately, the metal was finite, and had long since run out, hundreds of years before, leaving only a relatively small stockpile which was dwindling down at a shocking rate as the Masters used most of it to power their space station, in which they sat overhead, blissfully unaware.  They continued to utilize a large portion of population below to mine for the now nonexistent metal, and kept the rest in figurative pens, herding them around like animals, which at this point, they had almost become.

It was into this, that a child was forced. Unremarkable in every way, this child suddenly showed up on the surface of the planet. Throughout most of the galaxy, this wouldn’t be a particularly extraordinary event, save for on this planet. As everything was strictly controlled, any kind of being showing up without any sort of prior identification was a rare event, especially one so young, something that attracted the notice of the Masters overhead. Inquiries were made, papers were filled out, and an identity was created, smoothing over the lone mar in the history of a society in which order was put above everything else. Valthir, his new name.

As Valthir grew into a young man, he began to yet again attract the attention of the Masters overhead. From the very start, when he was found, he was undeniably unique. At an early age, he showed exceptional intelligence, far above the normal levels, and began to rebel against the authority of the Masters, which was quite literally unheard of. Not one being had yet been able to break out of the monotonous routine that enveloped their lives, except for this young man. Soon, the Masters began to covet his intelligence, wishing to harness it to benefit themselves, much like they had done with the other members of the planet. At first, they were gentle, and tried to persuade him to join them by bribing him. He refused. Enraged at their failure, they pushed  . . . and he pushed back.


They had sent someone after him. An assassin. The Masters had tried to kill him. It seems they had decided that since he refused to join them, his life was forfeit. How wrong they had been.

His first kill. It felt so wrong, but it felt so right. The deliciousness of holding the life of someone else in his hands was intoxicating, addicting. It would have been different if the man had died by way of a laser bolt or some kind of explosion, but no, he had killed the man with his very hands. He had watched as his fingers had tightened around the man’s throat, squeezing every so slight at first and gradually building into a death grip that could not be broken. He had watched as the blood flow to the man’s face stopped, as the man had began to gasp and attempt to suck in the air that he so desperately needed. He had watched as the man died, slowly. Deprived of all oxygen, the man had gasped one last time and had slumped back onto the floor, going limp in death.

Valthir stood over the man now, looking down at the corpse. The thoughts were whirling through his head, coming and going almost too rapidly for him to follow. He stared down at the former Master with hate, contempt, and loathing in his eyes, for the man had helped lord it over the denizens of this planet, yet here he was now, humbled in death. It was almost poetic. But then the feelings that had been dominating his mind melted away, as his rage cooled, and he realized just what he had just done. He had killed. He had murdered a man. Granted, it wasn’t in cold blood as the man had already been trying to find and kill him, but still. It was murder.

He felt sick, stumbling backwards as a single thought came to the forefront of his mind.

What if this man had a family?

Family. Apparently his one weakness. As he had grown up alone, he had never had a family. When he was younger, he was just fine on his own, but now that he had grown up, he longed for some sort of companionship. It was a hunger, a thirst.

Valthir clenched his fists, trying to will away the thoughts that threatened to overtake him. He was a changed man now. He had killed. He had taken the life of a being. There was no way to justify this. He closed his eyes and forced himself to inhale and exhale slowly, trying to breath in calm and breath out the pain. Meditation had helped him a great many times, and hopefully it would help him now. But alas, it didn’t.

With a groan, he doubled over and vomited. Wiping his mouth, he regained his composure and stood up. Leaning down over the corpse, he quickly searched the body, taking anything of use. He was a fugitive now, and he needed to whatever he had to do to survive, regardless of how much he didn’t want to.

Looking down at the loot, he grimaced. He held the man’s identi-card and a few credits chips of varying denominations in his left hand while his other hand contained the man’s pistol, now empty of ammo. He tossed the pistol aside and started to walk towards the door, intent upon leaving as quickly as he good. But something stopped him. He looked back at the body, torn between what he should do and what he felt he needed to do. The man could have a family somewhere. Plus he was just following orders. And I killed him. He bit his lip, agonizing over the decision. Finally, he decided and looked down at the identi-card. Once he found the man’s address, he took one last look at the body and left the building, closing the door tightly behind him.

Once out onto the street, he headed towards his destination, weaving in and out of the evening traffic. He did it almost unconsciously, so used to deliberately attracting attention through his behaviour that he found it quite difficult to blend in. Although he did tend to attract attention, it wasn’t through loud and obnoxious actions, but through actions that were considered outside of the norm in this sort of society. He wasn’t as obedient, nor was he as submissive. He walked upright with his head held high, not slumped down and dragging his feet. He was . . . different.

And now he had to become like the rest. He had to fit in. It galled him to think it, and it was even worse to do it. Still, he found himself grabbing a grey jacket off of a nearby stoop outside of an apartment building. Slipping it on, he pulled the hood over his head and pulled it low over his eyes, covering his unruly brown hair. Rolling his shoulders forward, he started to walk with a slight hunch, and stopped again.  He stepped forward, experimenting with dragging his feet. He attempted it a few more times and, once satisfied, set off again for his destination.

He was incredibly lucky that he had already spent an extraordinary amount of time wandering the streets, to the point that he knew the streets by heart. With the help of a few shortcuts, Valthir had covered the distance in a short amount of time. Even with those shortcuts, it was still night by the time he had reached the house that he seeked. With an almost audible sigh of relief, he looked upon the empty lot and allowed himself a small smile. At least his conscious was at peace now. He bowed his head out of respect for the dead man and turned away from the lot, disappearing into the night.
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Valthir
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  RE: Breaking Away
February 9, 2011 5:45:24 PM    View the profile of Valthir 
The rain drifted down, creating small rivulets of water on the panes of glass lining the street. The stores were dark now, but the dulled streetlights reflected off of them, outlining every being who passed by in a shadowy silhouette. One such being passed by, darker than the rest.

Completely absorbed in his own thoughts, Valthir almost didn't notice his pursuers as they tailed him through the dimly lit streets. He glimpsed the pair as he turned each corner, only watching them with his eyes as to not give away his knowledge of them. At that distance, it would be impossible for them to be seen as anything more than dark figures, but what protected the pursuers, also protected the one they pursued.

The Masters must have sent them. More assassins perhaps, though they probably wouldn't just tail me if they were bent on killing me. Simple tails then, keeping tabs on me.

Up until this point, he had meandered through the streets aimlessly, attempting to clear his thoughts, which had grown muddled as of late with the death and danger that always seemed to be hanging above and around him. Now, he had a purpose and that was to lose his tails. Easier said than done, however. The tails were actually quite adept at what they did, and Valthir was having trouble getting away from them, at least through the normal means.

Time to try something a little abnormal then.

As he turned another corner, instead of continuing on at a faster pace than he had before, he stepped forward and ducked into a recessed doorway. Finding the top of the doorframe hanging low above his head, he shrunk further into the deep shadows, becoming almost lost from sight. A few moments later, the tails rounded the corner, each looking around in vain to see where he had gone. They had walked a few feet past the doorway when the pair stopped. As they looked around, Valthir froze, hidden in the darkness. Deliberately, he slowed his breath and calmed himself, something that had become almost second habit to him. One continued on as he had before, albeit slightly more frustrated, as the other stayed where he was and looked around. Soon, the partner returned.

Failure was probably not familiar to them as various expressions crossed each face, ranging from disappointment to outright rage. With a whirl, one turned and stalked away, leaving the other to stare off down the street, towards where the man imagined Valthir had disappeared. After a few moments, he turned away and then stopped again, facing the doorway. With a thoughtful expression, he peered into the darkness of the doorway and started to take a step towards it, only to be distracted by his partner’s call. Taking another glimpse at the doorway, he sighed resignedly and followed his companion.

Unsure as to whether or not they had truly gone, Valthir waited for what seemed to be an eternity and slowly poked his head out, peeking around the corner. Seeing no one, he carefully edged out and moved back down the street, the same way he had originally been walking. 

***Three months later***

They had sent more after that first pair of tails, as many as one per day. They had sent not just tails, but assassins, bounty hunters, and the like after him, trying to kill him. He had outsmarted every one so far. Although, he couldn’t lay the victory directly on his shoulders; tremendous good luck on his part and tremendous bad luck on the part of others had played a vital role in many of his escapes. Time and time again, he had been very nearly killed, yet through some unforeseeable fluke, he managed to either kill his opponent or just plainly disappear. Those near escapes had eventually taken their toll on him though. He still bore a few long scars and burns, more as a reminder of certain failures than anything else.

He sat, perched on the edge of a building, unconsciously rubbing one such scar. It was a remnant from a fight with one the latest batch of assassins sent after him. The Masters, before that one, had stuck with assassins found on planet, which had met with zero success. Desperate, they expanded their search outwards.

That fight had been a fierce one, one of the toughest ones yet. Despite that, the only major injury he had sustained was the very one he was touching. He remembered how he got it, by way of the assassin’s knife, thrown with deadly precision towards Valthir’s head. There had been no time to duck or dodge it. All he had been able to do was bring his hand, which had already been moving, up into the knife’s path. The knife had sunk up to the hilt in Valthir’s hand, erupting from the other side. As the pain had racked Valthir’s body, he had been caught by a few other knives, nearly incapacitating him with the pain. It had blinded him, to the point where he passed out. Before he had done so though, he later vaguely remembered the feel of doing something, though he could not remember any specifics.

He had awoke later, alone. The assassin had disappeared, and his hand throbbed, but was not nearly as painful as it had been. Quickly gathering his wits, he had fled the area.

Valthir pushed those memories away and focused on his current mission, which was about to come to fruition. A starship had docked in the local spaceport earlier in the day. The pilot had apparently run low on fuel near the planet and drifted in. Once hearing of the news, Valthir had hatched his plan to escape. Gathering up his small amount of belongings, he had met every one of his contacts to extract credits or items from them, in return for the favors he had done for them. With everything in his bags, he had begun watching the spaceport. Luckily for him, the spaceport was incredibly small, so he could easily see the ship from his vantage point. Based on what his sources told him, the ship was going to be lifting off in less than an hour.

Deciding it was time to pay the pilot a visit, Valthir descended from the building and entered the spaceport. It didn’t take long to find him. The first place Valthir had visited was the bar. One look was all it took and he had pegged the man sitting at the bar counter as the pilot he was looking for. Obviously an outsider, from his clothing, he seemed to be a down-on-his luck spacer. With a quick grin, Valthir approached the man, waving a credit in front of the spacer’s face once he was close enough.

“This is yours if you take me with you.” Valthir said.

The spacer looked suspicious until he glanced at the denomination of the credit chip, after which he vigorously nodded, “Definitely. But my services usually run at about twice that amount.”

Sighing, Valthir fished another credit chip from his pocket and added it to the original amount, “Half before, half after. Ok?”

With another quick nod, the spacer downed the rest of his drink and sprang to his feet.

“Ready to leave?” he asked, eying the credits.

Valthir nodded, “After you.”
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