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January 18, 2011
11:24:17 PM
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Um. I may or may not have stolen this from Havvy.
Talk about the story here. Would be nice to see some posts, story's going to be great I promise!
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 18, 2011
11:27:45 PM
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So, listen. I'm obviously not in Storm. But I'm feeling nostalgic, and Storm will always be my home.
...so I just wanted to post here. Thanks for understanding guys.

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Ron
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 18, 2011
11:29:41 PM
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/me slides transfer papers across the table.
No one needs to know.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 18, 2011
11:31:20 PM
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Yeah but then you'd be my boss.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 18, 2011
11:37:05 PM
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This strange sensation of power.. it's overwhelming.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 19, 2011
12:02:02 AM
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Don't worry, I'll always be here to destroy your ego, just like Angel and Raz are always there to remind just how much of a screw up I really am. But don't worry, it just means that I care.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 19, 2011
12:09:16 AM
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 19, 2011
12:12:07 AM
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Double <3
(Now I'm just padding my post count. Can you tell?)
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 19, 2011
1:40:15 AM
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Yep
As for the story i think i'll be able to post tomorrow
EDIT: posted
TRP/PFC Njall/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE [FCE] [AS-H] [AS-1] {RCRT}Private First Class Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon Eclipse Squad Storm Platoon Phoenix Company Clearly Canadian~In Memory of Paladin Squad~
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 19, 2011
10:42:10 PM
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I'm probably not going to post until late tomorrow night or the day after.
So far, looks great, folks! Story's going to be fun, for sure.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 20, 2011
12:32:12 AM
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Looking great so far, really impressive character development from all of you. Expect another post from me with more details on the mission in the next 24 hours.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 20, 2011
6:21:44 AM
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I feel the warm fuzies going around...
great work guys! I'm very happy that Storm re-opened, it was my home for a large part of my time here and has always been in my heart the Platoon that had felt right to me compared to WildCard.
No offense meant fr the WC people but...yeah...
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 20, 2011
8:57:07 PM
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Posted! Let's keep it goin'.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 23, 2011
1:00:32 AM
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Falling asleep here, ladies and gents, get some posts up.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 23, 2011
11:47:16 AM
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*shrugs* I just got here, so give me a little bit of time to get familiar to my new surroundings . . . and yeah, that was a crappy excuse, but I'm sticking with it 
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 24, 2011
3:05:04 AM
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I will. Give me three days to get back to my computer, yeah? (Hard to type when you only get 10 minutes per pound.)
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 24, 2011
8:55:17 AM
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Corvin wrote:(...when you only get 10 minutes per pound.)
We all know you don't need that long, Corvin. >> Was that awful or what?
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 24, 2011
10:28:58 AM
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The lol's make it worth it...
... I'll go now.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 24, 2011
12:04:20 AM
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You will sit in the BLUE chair and have a dunce cap on your head.

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Ron
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 25, 2011
10:23:32 AM
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Post, people, I want posts. The sooner we get to Bakura, the sooner I introduce the bad guys. Anyone who served in the 09 HSC will remember the elaborate bad guys of Raasaa and Demortis I created, which got me the Cross of Zahn, my only writing medal. Trust me then when I say good things are coming, but they can only come if you- the troopers- take 15 minutes to half an hour each day or so to post on the story. I also know it can be hard to find the inspiration to post. Know then that I also am very generous with medals and recommendations for promotion when they are merited. The Vast Empire needs devotion and dedication, and I am willing to help you gain status among your peers if you are willing to give me some of your time by posting, and posting well, on the story. Additionally, I will be paying 1,000,000 ICs to the trooper with the most posts in this story; 750,000 to the second; and 500,000 to the third. Quality will be considered above quantity. So how do you get started? Work on your characters. Make for some good drama. Not the crappy, bickering and romance kind of drama, but good wholesome drama. Have your trooper despise another trooper because they believe in different gods than you- or have your trooper be a supporter of the return of a unified empire and find someone else who is not a supporter of that and debate it in story. Discover who your characters are and then tell us everything about them, in a meaningful, well written way. That will get you respect, and will put you on the road to being a very successful army man or woman. Another thing I'd like to encourage is the creation of NPCs, particularly companions/arch enemies of player controlled characters. Back when I was working on my Communications Technician specialties I created a character called "the Janitor" who acted as a mentor to Ron and taught him most of what he knows today. You could give your trooper a side kick, or an enemy, or a best friend, or a mentor, or (if you're careful) a romantic partner. You have so much potential as a writer to create so much, don't be afraid to tap into your creative medium. And if you are completely stumped for ideas on what to write, most importantly TALK to your SL or to someone on IRC who has been doing this for much longer than you. We are all more than happy to help, so please do not get discouraged if you can not think of anything to write. Ask one of us, and we will help you to build a creative and fun to write character.
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 26, 2011
7:14:41 PM
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Noted, and seconded. Back behind my keyboard, but it might take another day or so to get over jet lag and find inspiration.
In other news, "Post, ye scavies!"
/pirate
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Ron
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RE: Storm Platoon Story Topic
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January 27, 2011
12:32:37 AM
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I will have created the big three NPCs after tonight, and will introduce them to you all in story either today or tomorrow. Should get us landed by then as well. Don't let that keep you all from posting.
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