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Raziel
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  Not so much a weapon . . .
December 23, 2010 5:45:56 AM    View the profile of Raziel 
OOC:
This is an old journey, written over 6 years ago in fact! I just wanted to demonstrate the scale on which the DJO often writes. I almost feel embarassed posting something I did when I was so much younger and apologies if some of the formatting didnt some across


The dark and powerful man loomed over Raziel's crumpled form as he fingered his newly crafted lightsaber, appreciating its superb construction.

Another jolt of pain ripped through Raziel's body, and a hushed moan escaped his cracked lips. His muscles burned from his exertion, but it was nothing compared to the searing pain from both his mental and physical injuries. He attempted to refocus on the Force again, but it was much too difficult; his physical-self was just screaming at him too loudly. He began a routine that he had learned from Japheth to shut away the pain, and he started to detach himself from everything; the throbbing began to melt away.

Sensing Raziel's attempts to ease his pain, the Dark Jedi looked down at the beaten man next his feet and extended his hand, palm up, towards him.

"None of that thank you." Suddenly, Raziel felt his consciousness pulled back strongly. Everything: the searing pain and all of his harsh reality, flooded back into focus. He tried not to concentrate on the pain, but realised that there was nothing else he to do. He tried to scream, but his shattered ribs denied him the little comfort that that offered; instead, he whimpered pitifully.

The other man, his anger directed at Raziel finally spent, looked down at his broken foe and smiled. He casually tossed the lightsaber in the air and held it with an unseen grasp.

"Now, what to do with you?"




One year earlier...

A single bead of sweat rolled down his brow and fell to the floor of the training arena. More followed as Raziel came to a halt before his master. The warm liquid began to spread out and clean a section of the training room floor as it dissolved the recently settled dust. With every heave of his bare chest, more and more sweat began to roll down his body and dripped to the floor. Although Raziel had a diminutive stature, his build had increased greatly since his initiation into the Order, and begun his training.

Powerful muscles flexed across his body, and every twinge was very evident. He was tired from the mornings exercise; however, a few years ago he would have been crumpled in a heap, shuddering, and completely drained. He began to use a Dark Jedi technique to refresh himself. He felt the Force flowing both around and through him; he channelled it within. Slowly at first, it began to surge through him, empowering him. His tired body, and dulled senses, became refreshed and sharp. His chest stopped heaving and his muscles ceased their twitching. He deactivated his white training saber, lowered it to his side and bowed to Japheth.

Japheth replied with a slight nod, "You are growing more powerful, my apprentice. Overlooking your meagre telekinetic skills, I can sense you falling deeper into the Force every time we come here. Finally, you are beginning to understand not to rely on your quick reactions, but to anticipate the actions of others." Japheth stopped for a moment, looking deep into Raziel's eyes. The Krath Adept bowed in gratitude.

"I see you are ready for more?" Japheth asked, cocking one eyebrow. "You had better be faster this time." On the word 'time', another set of drones hovered into the room, humming and hissing as they went.

Raziel was already diving to the left when Japheth lifted some of the rocks from the ground and hurtled them towards his head. Raziel came up from the roll, saber humming to life. The white blade swung across his body to block the first shot before it even left the drone. The red dart bounced off the blade and zipped over Japheth's shoulder, who stood motionless. He gave Raziel a stern look and lifted another group of rocks with a thought.

Raziel edged backward, his saber humming in a poised position. He was safe as long as he kept control of his footwork and focused on the Force. The drones began to fan out around him, keeping a strategic distance away from him. Finally, they unleashed a barrage of stinging red lasers. The white saber hummed as it leapt back and forth, deflecting the bolts. He tried to expand his senses; he knew that if he concentrated too hard, it would all collapse, but if he let the Force flow through him... He felt the motion behind him, and his blade whipped around behind his head, picking the stone out of the air only half a metre behind his left ear. As he picked that off, an opportunistic drone got a shot in and singed his naked chest. Raziel heard Japheth's mocking laughter, which only fuelled his frustration.

"Faster! You must move faster!" Raziel was almost infuriated at his master. He had progressed so quickly and yet Japheth pushed him harder. Even as a master swordsman, Raziel had found the art of lightsaber combat very difficult to grasp. Its weightless blade moved too easily and without resistance, and trying to block blaster fire with it had felt to him like holding a feather up against a storm - and nine remotes! He had never battled five before, let alone nine!

The anger grew within Raziel, and the Force flowed violently through him. He tried to tap deeper into the Force, to listen to it as his guide and flow with it. Almost immediately, his senses widened, taking in the whole of the room around him, and he exercised every action effortlessly. He defended against three simultaneous attacks with ease and shifted his stance slightly, preparing to take the offensive. Almost immediately, Japheth launched a volley of missiles at him. Raziel realised he was beginning to be cornered in the back corner of the room, opposite Japheth. His sight fixed on the raised platform in the middle of the room and through the Force, he "felt" out his next course of action.

Raziel leapt into the air, twisting and slashing aggressively at two more laser bolts. He landed lightly on his feet and sprung back in the other direction, extending his saber out ahead of him to shatter a rock flying towards him. All of the drones simultaneously fired a volley at his exposed body, but he activated a second white blade, and deflected each of them. He pushed off the ground with one hand, and imparted some sideways spin so that he landed cleanly on his feet a metre away. The drones had forced him back into the corner, but he was still determined to reach the platform.

Japheth was pleased, yet slightly apprehensive to build Raziel a second training lightsaber when he had demonstrated how well he could handle two blades. He had watched over his apprentice, carefully at first, making sure that he didn't sever a limb in his haste. When Raziel had not, Japheth had been content enough to let him keep it.

"Ah, you are so full of energy today!" boomed another mocking call from his master. "Maybe if you weren't so weak with the Force you would jump higher!" Japheth continued in reference to Raziel's ongoing failure to grasp telekinesis.

Raziel screamed a challenge to the drones, and launched himself high, and to his right, as more rocks converged on his position. His sabers spun around him in unison, picking off more shots as he went. He twisted his body around and changed the direction he faced mid-air son that he was travelling backwards. His feet swung over his head and he landed lightly on the central platform, with Japheth behind him. From here, he could easily reach the drones.

He didn't pause to think about everything, and simply went along with his instincts; sensing the space around him as he went. He leapt forward off the platform, feet outstretched in front of him. His feet collided with a rock heading his way, and he sprung off back in the other direction, mid-air. He slashed backwards at the drone he knew to be there and his feet swung back over his head, completing the flip. He landed without a sound back on the platform in a crouch ready to spring again. A moment later, both halves of the drone fell to the floor with a clang. He felt so in tune with everything at that moment. The physical exertion coupled with his first victory and his stronger than ever connection with the Force filled him with a sense of elation. In one fluid motion, he bounded back towards the drone he had sensed, one blade thrusting into its mark, the other slashing furiously at laser darts. He pushed off the far wall before falling to the floor, this time landing after his target.

That left seven. With his back pressed against the wall, he was easily able to weave his sabers before him and keep the nipping lasers away. His feet slid lightly across the floor as he advanced on the throng of drones. He kept his footwork ordered and ducked, twisted, and bobbed to avoid Japheth's rocks. One saber flew up and to his right and aggressively swatting away one laser bolt, whilst the other arced across the centre of his body once before whipping back around to its natural guard position, picking of three more in the movement.

"Who brought us our holocron and the priceless knowledge it contains?" Japheth shouted from the other wide of the room, still not so much as appearing to pay attention as he launched more and more objects his apprentice's way. The question did not surprise Raziel; his master often shouted questions about the Krath and their ways at him whilst training.

"Say, Spart...." he paused to take in a deep breath."...acus and Sesswanna," he hissed through clenched teeth. Another bolt got through his defences and flew into his side.

"Concentrate! Who founded our Order?"

" Aleema and Setal Kato master!" Raziel managed to gasp. He launched himself at the nearest remote, but it managed to float out of reach as Raziel twisted to bring his saber to bear at the anticipated attack. He blocked three more shots on the way down to the ground.

"What do we want apprentice? What do we Krath crave?" Japheth asked as Raziel lunged viciously towards another drone, leaving himself open and suffering another two stinging blasts.

"Knowledge!" Raziel shouted this time, ignoring his lung's cry for more air. His face contorted into an expression of pure anger as he unleashed his frustrations on one of the drones, lobbing his saber with a great deal of force straight into it

"What would you do with this power?"

"I would face a Jedi!" Raziel screamed. "I would destroy him in combat!" Japheth did not look so pleased with that answer. Raziel spiralled through the air once more, landing just short of a drone, but following the Force and still keeping the others at bay. He reached out with the Force to his other lightsaber. Again, he failed to grasp it; however, it skittered across the floor, bringing it within range of a dive. Shutting off the screams of protest from his muscles, he slid towards the other saber. He jumped back up with a flourish of both weapons, and waded back in through a stream of laser blasts.




Raziel dropped to the floor in front of Japheth, panting heavily. The last drone still hissed and glowed behind him. His bare flesh was pockmarked with burns from the numerous laser blasts that had penetrated his defences Blood ran freely from several cuts where rocks hurtled by Japheth had clipped him. He looked up from the ground at his master, whilst at the same time tuning his senses inwards. It seemed like there was a battle between the various parts of his body to berate him first. His lungs felt like they were on fire; every breath he took was painful. Several of his tendons had snapped from the strain, and muscle fibres had been crushed. Nevertheless, he had felt more alive than ever.

"There will come a day when you will no longer be able to learn from me. You are a Krath Adept now, my apprentice, a true student of the Krath ways." Japheth looked down at Raziel impassively. "What do you feel of your lightsabers?" asked Japheth, looking at the training weapons he would take back at the end of the session.

"They feel...like a tool...something that comes between me and my goal. They move as I wish, but they do not do so willingly. It is almost like a barrier between me and my enemies; an obstacle that must be overcome first."

"Is that not always the case?" Japheth asked.

Raziel looked across the room to where his two combat knives sat. "No."

"Soon you will create your own weapons Raziel. They will be a part of you, and you will know them completely; creating them will help you know yourself.

"Now! I did not say I had finished training you yet!" Japheth barked. Stunned, Raziel extended his legs to stand and backed away from Japheth, starring at him from behind a mask of pure exasperation. He had to be joking, but as Raziel activated his lightsabers, another three drones glided in. It would be dark soon outside on Lopen!

Raziel shouted in defiance, as he blocked their first attacks. It would be a long and painful evening.




Raziel's heels clicked sharply and deliberately on the bare, uneven floor; echoing down the length of the corridor. He strode quickly down the seemingly endless passageway, the huge walls inspiring a sense of power and strength. Then again, this was the citadel of Lopen and if the awe-inspiring structure did not disturb you, then knowing who dwelled within would terrify you.

Raziel walked on briskly, but not hastily. He bowed his head respectfully, but did not let any sign of fear show through. Any mistake on his part now would bring an irate Templar's wrath bearing down on him. He had to appear humbled, but not afraid. Determined, but not foolhardy. He had been in these situations before, where he had to play a particular part, but the Krath had never been involved then.

Footsteps began to echo down the corridor louder now and instead of actively masking his presence he began to "feel" down the passageway ahead of him. He wanted there to be no way that Japheth could mistake his intentions for hostile. If Japheth believed there was any malice behind Raziel's visit, this would be a particularly short meeting. Raziel fondly remembered the days of his training when he had been closer to his mentor.

As he opened himself up to the Force more he sensed other presences, some familiar, others completely alien to him. He could feel more than some passing interest in his entrance. He could sense the end of the hallway now. Not far ahead were the plain wooden doors that marked the conclusion of his journey. As he closed the distance between himself and his old mentor, he noticed the walls moving in on him. The ceiling was also apparently dropping down towards him. Raziel felt his stomach knot as the passageway narrowed. He had always hated having this much rock over his head and now he was having vivid thoughts of it all dropping down on him, constricting him...
He shrugged away the thoughts as he came to a halt in front of the doors, holding in a sigh that he knew his master would have noticed.

As he reached for the door, it swung open, revealing his mentor's workshop. Japheth was sitting in the centre of the room; books piled neatly around him.
Raziel could barely feel his master's presence, even though Japheth was sitting in front of him. He could, however, feel a strong disturbance around Japheth and as he stepped into the room, it felt like walking into a viscous wall, except made of the Force. As he opened himself up to it, he could feel more in continuity in the flow of the Force around him. It almost seemed like there was "turbulence" around some objects and artefacts in the room.

The air smelled old and musky, like most of the citadel's lower levels, but it also smelled of human sweat along with a taste of something distinctly artificial. It made Raziel think of the Kolcta bacta chemical.  Raziel took in a cursory glance of the room around him. To Japheth's left was what seemed to be a workbench. There was a wide space in the centre surrounded by neatly stacked books and vials of unfamiliar substances. To his right sat a round, elongated table. It was nothing special in itself; it was plain and constructed of heavy wood. However, Raziel instantly recognised his two training lightsabers sitting alone on the table.

He tried to imagine it as a good sign, but if Japheth had wanted to hand his saber's back to him and welcome him to the Order again, he would not have placed them in plain sight. No, Raziel decided, their purpose was clear. Japheth would use them as part of his rebuking; he possibly would not even acknowledge them and would only use their presence to serve as a reminder to Raziel of what he had done. Japheth knew Raziel would want them and had put them in out in the open, but out of his reach.

Raziel's focus snapped back to Japheth. He watched his body, searching for any of those telltale signs of aggression he was trained to spot. He felt his fingers tense up and silently reminded himself that this was a Krath. Then he felt Japheth's presence begin to resurface from within his body, like a star ship re-emerging onto the fabric of real space. An almost tangible feeling of tension replaced the strange disturbances in the Force. Although his mentor had his back to him, Raziel felt Japheth's eyes snap open. Raziel's well-honed survival instincts told him that Japheth had grown in strength since last they met.

"Why do you disturb me?" Japheth asked, his tone calm and even. He rose from his position; he did not stand up in the normal sense of the word. There was no physical exertion involved. His body simply ascended until he was in a standing position. He twisted around and shot his apprentice a face-to-face look that froze him in place. Raziel was used to using the same technique on other people, but this time Japheth added subtle undercurrents through the Force that fully conveyed the contempt in which he held Raziel.

"I...er I..." Raziel focused his mind and fought through the hazy, confusing sensation that had suddenly taken a hold of his mind. Japheth retracted his intrusion as Raziel's deep green eyes stared back and narrowed dangerously on him.

"I've come to complete my training." Raziel said slowly and clearly, his eyes never moving from Japheth. Japheth hesitated for a second, before turning his eyes away from Raziel's and laughing. Raziel took a half step back at his mentor's unexpected actions. He had run through various scenarios in his head beforehand, but mild amusement was not something he had predicted. He felt his face flush, along with a slight tremor of anger stirring within him.

"You walked away from me, not the other way around. I shall not complete your training. I sense that you have faced your past and come out victorious. Not unharmed, but victorious nonetheless, but your reasons do not excuse your actions and they never will. I will not complete your training." Japheth reiterated the last few words loudly and leant slightly towards Raziel in a threatening manner.

"Why?" Raziel shouted back, his anger taking a hold of him. "There is no reason not too! I have not strayed from the path I have forgotten nothing! I will become a Krath with or without your help!"

"Who do you think you are? The Dark side does not come without a price, it does not yield to anyone, it is not something to dabble with and toy with when you please!"

"But Master Talo..." Raziel started.

"I do not care what anyone else says, I shall not help you! I should strike you down for your insolence, demanding such from the Headmaster!" Japheth sneered at Raziel. There was no movement, but in an instant there was a pair of knives in Raziel's hands.

"Damn you! I must learn more!" Raziel brought one arm back behind him and took a defensive step back.

"I see your hands still yearn for the feel of a blade," Japheth spoke calmly once again. "I noticed your fingers clench as you walked in and felt the desire. And yet you have no weapons that feel right anymore?" he motioned towards the lightsabers on the table. "I have been watching you on your way in. I see you are more adept at masking your presence than I would have expected. Perhaps you have not forgotten everything I taught you." Japheth ignored his apprentice's threatening posture, walked over to the long table and picked up the training sabers. He looked straight at the wall, ignoring Raziel.
"These you will not touch again." He raised one of the plain hilts for a moment and shook it mid-air. "Neither will I complete your Knight training." He paused a moment more before turning back to find Raziel composed and unarmed once more.

"You will. You have everything you need and you want to join us more than ever. Go now and create your own lightsaber. In doing so you will begin to understand yourself and the Force. It is all that is left now." Japheth placed the sabers back down on the table to his side and began to turn away from Raziel.

"Thank you master," Raziel said, bowing low.

"And if you return and I find that I have wasted yet more of my precious time on you, I will strike you down for the offence." There was no malevolence behind his words, just simple honesty.

Raziel bowed again and turned to leave the room. He stepped once more into the long dark corridor and began his journey back out of Lopen. Looking about he realised that the corridor did not narrow at all at this end as he had thought. He looked back over his shoulder and felt a hint of humour. Japheth had manipulated Raziel to find what he wanted to know about his apprentice, without Raziel having the slightest clue of what was happening.

Raziel quickened his pace along the dusty corridor on the way out.




The small seed-shaped craft shot through space behind its great solar sail. Jassyck watched as the golden translucent sail filled more and more space on the Pummel's viewscreen. The Trandoshan turned his green scaly head to one side.

"Range?" he hissed towards one of the staff.

"One kilometersss and closssing. Fisst and Claw ssquadronss are moving in to disable him now," the officer reported, referring to the squadrons of y-wings, whose bright exhausts could be seen, even now, closing in on the small craft out ahead of them.

"Launch the disgruntled," Jassyck ordered. The modified corvette shook as its home squadron launched and chased after the sail powered craft.

Jassyck was the leader of a Trandoshan gang who called themselves "The Spirit of T'doshok." The pretentious name stemmed from the fact that he had terrible delusions of grandeur. Jassyck truly believed that the trandoshans had receded somewhat since the end of the war and that by building his own personal fleet and army of pirates he could represent his people in some way. So far, his great scheme consisted of one heavily armed, but undermanned converted corvette, two squadrons of hired pilots along with a home squadron of Uglies. Jassyck's muscle consisted of failed bounty hunters, mercenaries and other such heavies. They made a living wherever they could, pirating, raiding doing whatever anyone would pay them too, but always in the name of Trandoshan welfare.

Recently they had been down on their luck and Jassyck's funds were running low. They were being paid a handsome amount to bring in this shady politician, who had slipped past them in a solar sail craft. This time however they had him, there was no way he could leave the systems gravity well and make the jump to lightspeed in time.

"Fisst and Claw are almosst within range. The Disgruntled are close behind."

"Good tell them to ussse ion cannonss firsst!" Jassyck replied.

Suddenly a bright beam cut across their vision. It emanated from the nearby moon and was flickering across the surface of the solar sails. It leapt forwards putting some more distance between itself and the pursuing fighters.

"What? No!" Jassyck screamed.

It accelerated faster and faster, beyond the speed of the Y-wings. The beam stopped firing and it pulled in its solar sails, gliding through space towards the edge of the system. Its engines flared once and it disappeared into hyperspace.

"That wasss ssome ssort of exotic particle beam on the moon ssir, it wass enough to send the ship out of the sssysstem. Sshall I call the fighters back and prepare to jump?"

"You know that we can't catch him now. He will reach the ssafety of the inner ssystems before we can catch him." Jassyck paused for a moment.
"No, tell the Claw and Fisst that their services are no longer needed."

"But ssir, that leaves us with just the uglies and Bravsk's headhunter!?"

"I know, but I don't have the money to pay them. Do not worry though we won't need them for this mission. Plot a jump route for the Nar Shaddaa system"

Jassyck retired to his quarters and activated his computer. He pulled up the image of a lightly built, black haired man and reiterated to himself the value that the anonymous sender had promised for his target's demise. Normally he ignored such messages, but right now, he was feeling desperate enough.




Raziel walked hastily to the landing part, spending the whole journey reflecting on what his master had said and done. He was only beginning to understand just how much those last words had meant and he had more than an inkling as to how Japheth would test him.

The hot wind blasted across his face as he walked out onto the sun-baked landing pad. The Quintessence sat gracefully, as always, on the exposed landing pad. The fast courier ship was about twice the length of an X-wing and equally armed. The oversized engines that propelled the craft to extreme speeds, took up a great proportion of its size. Raziel's only modifications had concerned stealth. He had had a small low power Vanish Sensor Mask installed over the weapons systems to misguide any sensors into thinking that the weapons were offline when they were armed and ready. With what little nutorium he had managed to scrounge together, he had coated sections of the hull to make it difficult to obtain a sensor lock on the ship.

The avian shaped craft lowered an entry ramp and Raziel hurried aboard, keeping his cowl tightly wrapped around his face. When the door had hissed shut behind him, he pulled back his hood and threw his white training cloak to one side, revealing a black sleeveless robe underneath. At each shoulder was a blood red metal, triangular shoulder pad. He wore a loose, long sleeved burgundy tunic and black trousers underneath with low cut boots. Looking to his robe he mentally proclaimed
I will not be needing that again Raziel took a seat and pulled the prized data disk from his pocket. He inserted it into the control panel, whilst setting the nav computer to bring the ship into orbit.

As the Quintessence lifted off from the protruding landing pad, he brought up the holo image of his lightsaber design. Not that he needed information on it now; the design was imprinted on his mind. When Raziel thought about it, he realised that the design was not just a memory of shapes and components, but it did in fact have a mental "feel", a qualia associated with it. The lightsaber was no longer a blueprint he remembered, but something that he intrinsically knew, something he could reach out and touch in his mind.

The inertial dampers ceased their loud whining as the ship broke from the atmosphere and took up orbit, taking away most of the strain of gravity. Raziel switched the holo image off and considered the amount of time that had gone into designing his weapon.

Raziel was used to manipulating people and using complex technologies from day to day, but the fundamentals of science had always escaped his grasp. Therefore, when he had tried to fiddle with the designs on paper, tried to decide how best to position the crystals to create the correct modes in the arc wave energy, he had failed. He rapidly became frustrated, compounding his confusion. It had felt at the time like trying to think through a maze rather than along a straight path. His frustrations had eventually led to anger and many old books being thrown across the room. His anger had strengthened his connection to the dark side and when he had given in to his emotions and listened to them everything had become much clearer. He just needed to follow his feelings and go with the will of the Force. Suddenly designing a smaller, more compact hilt had become easy; repeatedly he had picked up tombs with useful advice and instructions without even a cursory glance at the title.

Time after time, he had opened up books on pages concerning the construction of a dual-phase blade and time after time, he disregarded his findings. After all, why would he want a longer blade? Nevertheless, more and more frequently, he had returned to the same information, until eventually he realised why he had been guided there.




Raziel checked that the nav computer had set the correct jumps for the trip to the Y'Toub system and Nar Shaddaa. Returning to his home once more just felt like the right thing to do, almost all of his journeys led back there in the end. Moreover, although he still had a name there and it would be dangerous, his recent sojourn there had drastically reduced the personal risk associated with a trip there for Raziel. It also helped that Raziel had a great many contacts there and finding the right, high quality parts would take far less time. Then there were the crystals. That was not a problem either - not any more.

Raziel checked the holonet to make sure that the Leviathan IV was on time, it was. The Leviathan IV was a Super Transport XI, owned by the infamous entrepreneur Von Castellan. Castellan travelled the galaxy with his crew in their vast, kilometre long, transport, making money by trading in all sorts of goods wherever they could. The immense ship had been slowly transformed over the years until almost every kind of cargo imaginable could be carried. Much of the empty space had been changed into habitable space for smaller, personal cargo leaving the cruiser with only enough room to transport its lone CR90 escort corvette inside. It was a bulk freighter in the extreme sense of the word.

The transport was due to drop into orbit around the moon in the next few days, it would then stay there for over a week to unload some several million tonnes of fuel, materials and personal cargo. What interested Raziel were the rumours that the vessel was returning from the outer rim, with a huge quantity of rare and expensive gems destined for Corucsant and whatever purpose the New Republic deemed. The rumour had tugged at Raziel's attention until he had been forced to follow it up. Sure enough, by all accounts, there was a well-guarded section of the ship filled with thousands of crystals.

Raziel had been a thief all his life. It was a part of his nature and had started him down the dark path that even now he still trod. Somehow, it appealed to his more wayward, mischievous side that the very heart and soul of his lightsaber should be stolen. The assassin checked in with his contacts over the holonet to make sure that all his preparations were underway and retired to the cramped sleeping quarters on the ship for some meditation.




The gigantic ship dropped out of hyperspace and slowly descended upon the moon far below. Its enormous bulk rolled slowly, almost elegantly, its massive dorsal fin reflecting the light for a moment, before returning to shadow. The ship's thrusters flared for a moment and it stopped its roll. The Leviathan seemed to hold there in space, appearing motionless, but its size awed all who saw it. The front end of the ship began to open slowly like a gaping mouth and the hammerhead shape of its corvette escort emerged from within. Dwarfed by the transport's size, the corvette fell back to the side of its mother ship and trailed along behind it.

As it neared the planet, inumerous transports broke away from their refuelling spires and rose to meet the Leviathan, greedily awaiting their cargo. The transport started to orbit the moon, the swarm of waiting transports almost forming a queue behind it. A Hutt-sponsored Nebulon-B2 frigate took up a defensive position ahead of the Leviathan. No doubt, the Hutt would profit most from this visit and equally likely, the transport hid away great quantities of forbidden spice within its bewildering number of holds.

Raziel watched all this from a distance as he glided slowly towards the moon, signalling his assigned landing spire of his intention to land. He had his combat knives sat on the control panel in front of him; they had cost his Hutt masters a fortune. He picked one of them up, amazed at the perfect balance. What the grip on the handle was made of, he had no idea. It was solid like durasteel and even more resilient and yet felt soft like rubber to the touch, they never slipped and would mould perfectly to anyone's hand.
Raziel knew his first destination.




The Quintessence swung around the landing spire slowly. Raziel powered the thrusters up and slowed his descent. The nav computer highlighted his landing pad on the screen and he nudged the craft forward. As he dropped down towards the landing pad warning lights flashed all around him and internal sirens screamed at him. Raziel thumbed the thrusters and the ship careening towards a bundle of lifting cranes above him. The 156T courier stopped just short of the machinery, Raziel looked all around him for the source of the warning. Nothing on the sensors and he had not sensed any ill intent towards him, as he would have done if he was walking into an ambush.

"Oh," he grumbled and lowered the landing gears and dropped his craft back down to land. He was still no pilot.

The terminal by the entrance of the landing pad beeped into life before Raziel reached it.

"Is the pilot of a 156T courier Quintessence there?" Raziel reached forward and pressed an oversized button labelled "Speak"

"Yes?"

"We have a droid pilot down here asking for permission to come up to you. Is he yours?"

"Oh that thing, yeah. Let him up, but tell him to deactivate once aboard. I have no use for it right now." Raziel's feelings for droids remained the same - Non-existent. The voice on the other end of the comm unit went silent so Raziel presumed that the conversation was over. The doors opened up to a long dark corridor; at the end of it, he could see the elevator shaft that would take him down some five miles to the city below.

Raziel smiled as he stepped out onto an open rooftop. He looked all around at the murky cityscape. This was his home that he knew so well. This was his playground.




Sickly green neon light bathed the floor of the shop, as the door slid open. A diminutive figure stepped through and looked around. The walls were plain metal, except for posters and holograms advertising different brands of weapons. On one, the infamous Han Solo was depicted firing his trusty DL-44 into a squad of stormtroopers. The stranger snorted and walked up to the counter. A lone rodian male sat behind the counter on a stool. He was quite tall and round, but his heavy muscles still showed through the flab. He was re-pricing some rifles in a cabinet to his left.

The stranger slammed down a black combat knife on the counter.

"Business good Sa'jette?" Raziel asked.

"Oh frell. Do you have any idea what could happen to me if I'm seen with you?" The weapons dealer dropped the rifle he held in his hand and jumped up from his stool. He leant forwards over the counter and placed his hand over the knife.

"Things are a little better now, and relax I checked around. I can't believe you still live in this hole!" Sa'jette eased himself back into the stool, but checked over Raziel's shoulder cautiously.

"You think because Ania is gone they wouldn't skin you alive given half a chance?" Sa'jette said. Then, noticing Raziel's reaction to the name, he carried on: "Oh so you didn't think I'd have heard about that incident then? Don't you forget I still work for them!"

Sa'jette kept his small, tidy shop down in the lower levels of the district. The area was ill reputed and few people with many credits to their name came down here. Unless, of course, they knew what Sa'jette really did. He was a master weapon smith, able to craft the most beautiful, yet functional weapons. His fees were extortionate, but his work was simply the best. For years, he had also been responsible for equipping Raziel whilst he had been working for the Hutt.

"Ah I've missed you," Raziel said chuckling to himself.

"Yeah, well, don't make a habit of coming back here," the weapon smith smiled, checking the door again.

"Business I'm guessing?" he asked.

"You made these?" Raziel asked, pulling the black knife's twin from his belt.

"Ah, you know I did," Sa'jette winked and then took the two knives from Raziel. "Do you have any idea how long it took me to make these? Just adjusting the hilts to balance the monomolecular blades took me a month!"

"I'm sure they paid you well. Actually how much did they pay you?"

"Hah! Enough! Let's just say you must be good at what you do for a gift like that!"

"Anyways, I was wandering about the hilts, or more precisely, what they're made of."

"To be completely honest with you I have no idea what it is. It's some kind of alloy, alien origin - I think. I only got the one load of it, but I can tell you it was a worthwhile investment." Sa'jette ran his fingers up and down the hilt of the knife as he talked.

"So you have none left then?" Raziel asked, holding his hand out of the knife.

"A little," Sa'jette shrugged. "Enough to make a few more rifle handles or possibly a few pole-arms. Already got a few potential buyers."

"Well I could really do with some. I need two of these made." Raziel said as he handed over a data pad that seemed to appear out of nowhere.

"Look I'm sorry but that stuff is worth a lot of money, it's fashionable now and that sells!"

"I seem to remember paying you a vast amount of money for a jewelled vibro-foil that I never had a chance to collect." Raziel said, raising an eyebrow. Sa'jette lowered his head and avoided eye contact. He knew just enough about what Raziel did to be afraid.

"Well fair enough, I'm afraid I don't have the rapier anymore, but I can reimburse you!"

"I'm not worried about the blade, what I want is two hilts made of that alloy."

"Look I'm sorry, but I've got a queue of people, all much richer than you after that stuff. I know we go a long way back, but I just cannot do it for you. But I've got some pretty tough plastics and metals that I could...."

Raziel ignored Sa'jette's voice, but carried on staring straight into his eyes. Instead, he was concentrating on other things. He reached out to his mind and gently probed it. He tried to curb Sa'jette's greed temporarily. Then, concentrating hard on the task, Raziel managed to find the rodian's feelings for the potential buyers he had talked about and changed them to feelings of indifference.

"Look Sa'jette," Raziel interrupted. "You've always done a good job for me, you've never let me down and I wouldn't want to end on this sour note. I mean you don't even know the people after that stuff, whereas I'm right here, and anyway I could always throw in some more credits?" Raziel forced Sa'jette to remember some of the time they had spent together when Raziel had been on Nar Shaddaa. Sa'jette smiled thinly and looked down at the counter. He sighed once, and then looked back up at Raziel.

"Ok, ok I'm sure I could spare enough of the stuff for you. If you add in those extra credits!" he waved his finger at Raziel and chuckled. Raziel slid the datapad back over the Sa'jette.

"Excellent, I knew you'd help me out." Raziel said, whilst Sa'jette looked over the plan.

"So what are you using this for? And why does it need to be hollow?"

"You really don't need to know that," Raziel said. Before he could even consider using more mind tricks Sa'jette had promptly straightened up and pulled out a transaction card.

"Of course, of course. I don't need to know." Sa'jette really did know when it was best not to ask.

"This is the address I want these sent to when they're done. I'd like them done quickly if you can; I'm in a bit of a rush." Raziel handed over a scrap of paper.

"Nal Hutta eh?" Sa'jette said.




Deception. It was the primary weapon in Raziel's arsenal. Since he was a child being tutored by a shady dealer on Nal Hutta he had been a student of its ways. It was no surprise that Raziel had acquired a talent for reaching out and touching people's minds, particularly their perceptions. When he had first started to show skill in this area, it had come as some relief to Japheth who was disappointed that his student could barely lift a small stone with the Force.

He had soon learned not to try to force his way into people's minds. At his current level of Force manipulation, even someone with weak willpower could detect the vile intrusion and force Raziel out. As always, Raziel preferred the way of subtlety and after much meditation and practise, he could slip into the average person's mind unnoticed. Much as he had once slipped into his target's abodes, knife in hand...

Since he had left the order, he had spent much time learning how to alter men's perceptions and use them as weapon against their owner. Although he was limited to a few people at a time, depending on the mental strength of the people involved, he had learned to conjure all manors of false images to deceive their host.

Raziel still spent many hours of the day practising swordplay and combat. Although his yearning for martial perfection often worried his Krath master, it was in no way his primary goal. To Raziel his fighting skills were just another weapon to be used, he would not actively seek out a chance use them. However, when he was forced to fight he wanted to take pride in his skill with the blade.




Raziel was still deep in the bowels of Nar Shaddaa, but was now an entire city's width away. He walked down a long narrow walkway, only a three-foot glass fence standing between him and a three hundred metre drop. Although that was quite shallow in Nar Shaddaa terms, Raziel reminded himself by looking up through the miles of city above. A strange feeling overcame him then, as he stared upwards. He almost felt as if he was drowning and had fallen so deep under the surface that he would never escape. That had almost happened once, when he had been forced to hide down here for many months.

A small group of tatty looking humans walked down the thin causeway towards him. Raziel looked up at them once, held his gaze for a moment and then looked back down. Without question or thought the group, to a man, shifted to the side and waited for Raziel to walk past. Sometimes people's survival instincts could be surprisingly strong, despite their imprudence.

Raziel came to a halt before a small nondescript doorway. He reached out with the Force and "looked" at what was on the other side. It seemed like things were as they should be. Two men, both well-armed, but trying to look as innocent as possible sat either side of the elevator that Raziel knew to be on the opposite side of the room. Raziel sailed through the first set of doors, the back of his sleeveless robe billowing out behind him. Taken by surprise the first guard shot to his feet and extended a hand out to block Raziel's path.

"Sorry sir, this is private property." He said, firmly placing a hand on Raziel's chest. The look the assassin shot him made him quickly retract it.

"Tell me does Risswan Moridono still run this place?" Raziel asked. He looked up to the corner of the room, where a small camera was swinging about to get a look at him.

"Er, sorry? Who?" the guard asked, looking quickly to his companion.

"Because if he is he would tell you this himself: it would be a very very good idea to let me in."

"Look I'm sorry, but I really have no idea who you're..." the man reached out to place a hand on Raziel again, but the Krath adept's hand shot out, intercepted it midway, and gripped it firmly. The sentry, stunned at the speed Raziel had moved with, stammered for a moment and then looked to his assistant.

"Well I'd say you seem to be of reasonable character, I'm sure you won't cause any trouble?" he said, pulling his hand back from Raziel, who simply shook his head in reply. The guard stepped back out of Raziel's way and swept his arm out, indicating the elevator doors.

"Go ahead!" he said nervously smiling.

Raziel stepped into the elevator and started the hundred-metre descent.

"James?" came a voice from the comm units in the sentry's ears.

"Yes Mr Moridono?" one of them said into his collar.

"The man you just let in?"

"Er, he had ID. Don't worry we checked him out!"

"Fool. I could see he showed you nothing."

"Well, let me explain. He..."

"No let me explain. You are both damned lucky you let that man through, I dread to think what would have happened to you both, and myself for that matter, if you'd tried to stop him." The voice on the other end of the comm unit cut him off.

"Yes boss."

Raziel was greeted by a beaming man in a flamboyant suit at the bottom of the elevator shaft. He stepped out onto a wide glass balcony that overlooked a hangar large enough to hold a capital ship. Tables and displays of anything and everything covered the floor from end to end. It was teeming with all manner of people, rushing from table to table trying to find a good purchase.

This was the smuggler's market you went to on Nar Shaddaa. If you wanted a banned starship, you came here. If were after a large quantity of narcotics, you could probably find it here. The Hutt welcomed its presence, just as long as it was kept out of sight. Raziel had visited often in his youth; they sold an excellent variety of illegal poisons.

Raziel was here for several reasons. Firstly he knew the owner and knew that the owner knew of him. Hopefully just enough to know to stay out of Raziel's way and keep his mouth shut afterwards. Secondly you could find almost anything down here, from spare pieces of scrap metal right the way up to stolen frigates. Last of all, because the Imperials...in their great wisdom, Raziel silently added...had placed a great deal of restriction on what was and what wasn't legal. For example, the power supply he was after was so compact that a legal version would drain rather rapidly. The logic behind that law was because assassins, such as him, could put power packs that small and energetic to great mischief. With Raziel's compact design he would need a power core only two thirds of the usual size used.

"Mr. Moridono welcomes you and asks if there is anything I could fetch for you?"

"Do you know today's layout?" Raziel asked the lackey without turning to face him.

"Yes of course." He replied. He was obviously quicker than he looked, immediately discerning the 'quick and to the point' conversation Raziel was after.

"Excellent, because I have a very long shopping list," Raziel said, starting down the walkway.

He spent a great deal of time comparing power cores and getting the salesmen to prove to him their efficiency, but there were plenty of them about and it didn't take him long to chose one. A suitably shaped and malleable inert power insulator took him almost no time to find. The adjustment controls, circuitry and field energiser coils were all common enough items throughout the galaxy, so were readily available, though he did make sure that the wires were good long-lasting industrial types and not the mass-produced tat that deliberately shorted out after a year.

The emitter matrix took a few minutes of bartering to get the pieces that he "felt" were right. The blade arc tip had to be perfect in length for his reduced design and the magnetic ring the correct girth.

The parts for the crystal chamber took the most thought. He knew that the chamber would have to be constructed by parts himself, only when the time of creation came, would he know just how the three crystals would have to be positioned. However, all of the parts, threads and screws would have to be perfect. He found some nano circuitry and motors along with a short tube with a perfectly threaded inside. Then he managed to purchase some rings that could be altered to hold crystals that would sit inside the tube, and that the motors could rotate.

He carried on finding all the parts he would need, along with spares and extras, for several hours. He did not fret about taking his time, the Leviathan sure wasn't going anywhere fast and after all, this place was always open. He thanked Risswan's assistant for his time, gave him a hefty tip and sent his boss his best regards.
That ought to do it. Raziel thought on his way out.




Raziel eyed the droid pilot suspiciously. He had checked the droid's basic programming and there did not seem to be anything potentially dangerous in there, but still, it was best to be careful. Raziel had never been fond of droids, as an assassin he had been in constant competition with the latest model assassin droid. In the end he had always won out, for all their speed and weapon an assassin droid was still just a droid. They had their place and their uses, but they were always limited to certain situations. Raziel had been forced to use them before, but his contempt for them always meant he kept them a good distance away from himself.

The Quintessence was breaking out of the planets atmosphere now, the last of the gaseous resistance subsided and the ship leapt free of the moon's pull and assumed a low altitude, high velocity, orbit. The droid pilot reached over and pressed a flashing button.

"Thisss isss the Trandoshan vessel Pummel. You are in the way of our approach vector; please adjust your course to keep out of our waysss." Raziel looked to the droid pilot and nodded. No need to make a fuss now.

"Affirmative," replied the droid pilot in its shrill voice. It nudged the control stick to one side and the ship veered out of the path of the trandoshan vessel. Raziel watched as the heavily modified, bulbous shaped corvette drifted past his view. His throat dried up and he had a terrible, ominous feeling about the ship and its Ugly fighter escort.

The pilot droid set a new course to intercept the Leviathan. So far everything had gone smoothly, a great deal of people still owed Raziel favours around here. He had followed his predecessor's advice and had done several hits free of charge during the first years of his career. His mentor had reasoned that having a few 'I owe you's' around in the right places was never a bad thing.

A few hours of work on the holonet had secured a job collecting some expensive personal goods for an old 'acquaintance' from the orbiting Super Transport. As long as he returned the goods and didn't cause a fuss the other party was happy to let Raziel get up to whatever he wanted on the Leviathan. Raziel's courier class ship was perfect for the job; it was designed to be a safe way of transporting small amounts of cargo.

Raziel signalled the droid to send a message to the Leviathan. He had an allocated time to collect the goods, which was an hour from now.

"This is the Leviathan. You'll be docking in small bay C in roughly an hour, I'm afraid your goods have not been collated yet and you will have to wait." Raziel smiled and watched as the droid manoeuvred towards the appointed docking bay.

"Courier class vessel please refrain from docking, you will be wasting your own time. Do not dock or, as is our policy, you will have to wait another hour for your goods!" Raziel chuckled to himself; he had read Castellans policies well. The Quintessence only emitted static back to the colossal transport. As Raziel watched the closing transport he kept on thinking that they were getting close, only to realise that the ship was even bigger than he imagined.

He reached under the control console and pressed a couple of wires together. Sparks flared out from the wires, there was a popping noise from the communicator and then it went dead. Raziel then connected the wires back up to where they were supposed to be.

"You know what to do?" Raziel asked the droid, properly acknowledging it for once. The droid only bobbed its head once in reply. Raziel sat up from the co-pilots chair and strolled into the back of the ship, his cloak whipping around behind him. He passed down one small corridor, small beds cut out of the wall on either side, and into the cargo room. He sat down on the floor and opened himself up to the Force, his brow creasing in concentration.

As the ship glided into the docking bay, he reached out for the feelings of surprise and annoyance coming off the crew. Fortunately, for him there were only two men on the landing platform. The droid set the craft down lightly as Raziel reached out to the two crew members and tried to shield them from his own presence. At the same time, he felt small undercurrents in the Force, urging him on. The whole situation felt right and he knew where the crystals were as he let the Force guide him.

The droid stepped down from the ship and the two peeved crewmembers immediately confronted him.

"Sorry there was an error, my communicator shorted out," the droid started saying.

"Well I'm sorry, but you'll have to leave the ship, we can't have you -"

"I apologise again, but it was through no fault of my own that this happened. If I have to leave I'm afraid I will have to cancel payment for the goods and place a complaint about the service." The two slightly dim witted men looked to each other. One of them checked something on a datapad he was holding.

"Ok you can stay, but your goods will take two hours at the least. I tell you what we'll also have maintenance come down and have a look at your ship for you," the man had obviously gone into customer service mode now. He was smiling at the droid and gesturing wildly.

That was all Raziel needed to hear. He swept down the ramp between the two crew members, neither of them even gave him a cursory glance. Glad that they were both oblivious to him Raziel carried on to the open doors at the other end the bay and followed his feelings towards his goal.

It was easy enough for the Krath to get past the few bustling staff members he encountered along the way. In situations where his stealth skills were not enough he used his mind control skills to get through. He was lucky there were few intelligent staff and no droids around.

After a long walk into the bowels of the ship, Raziel was confronted by a huge set of blast doors. On either side of the doors sat a binary lifter and a very alert looking guard. Raziel kept out of sight and reached out with the Force towards the guards and the doors. The feeling of anticipation was getting stronger now; he knew he was close. Both of the guards were quick thinking and alert - between them, more than a match for his mental powers. He probed further ahead, past the thick blast doors, into the chamber beyond. The immense size of the room astonished him, especially as he could feel that it was filled with jewels. He could sense that the room was quite deep and open, roughly fifty metres long, thirty wide and ten deep. When he tried to probe the room in more detail, he was overwhelmed with anxiety. He knew that the crystals for his saber were in there and he had to get in!

His opportunity arrived shortly. A little man carrying a huge datapad, with a hoversled in tow, walked down the corridor towards the two guards. Raziel "listened in" on the unsuspecting man as he approached the guards; he was pathetically easy to read.

"I'm here for shipment A605-b" he squeaked to the guards, Raziel mouthed the words in time. He tried to feel for the little man's emotions, for his purpose and feelings. If Raziel could keep his train of thought in line with his targets, it made it infinitely easier to get into their mind. Raziel started thinking about the hurry he was in, about how rude the customers had been to him and how underpaid he was. He even began to feel hungry and looked forward to his lunch break.

"Name?" asked one of the guards.

"Dane," The staff member replied.

"Sorry just changed shifts," the guard replied tapping some buttons on a datapad. "Yeah there you are, off you go,"

"You're not going to help?" the little man asked the guards. Raziel was knelt down with his eyes closed, silently mouthing the words again. He was in a trance now and vulnerable. This would - however - require all of his concentration.

"Sorry we have to stay here, no matter what," sneered one of the guards.

He reached out, grabbed hold of the little human's perceptions, and began to experience them for himself. Raziel saw what he saw and heard what he heard. His own presence hung over the short staff member and he watched from their perspective.

Raziel felt the urge to lash out with the Force and break the weak minded fool's will to his own. Many times he had felt the urge to completely overwhelm someone and control them utterly. He knew what it was, it was the calling of the Dark Side, the thirst for absolute power and control. Again, he refrained, because he knew that he did not have the skill to do that yet and he would just hurt himself. One day he would submit to the urge.

The cavernous room on the other side of the doors was as deep as Raziel thought. It was in an elongated V-shape with three tiered levels on either side of a central channel. Each level was like a 2 metre high 'stair'. On the inside of each level was just a small handrail to stop you falling down to the level below, the only way down being a mechanical platform at each end of the room. Raziel saw through the worker's eyes as he walked along the top level. He looked down over the handrail to the centre of the room at thousands of crystals piled in the channel at the centre of the room. He looked up at three vertical levels on the other side of the room; there were two guards on that side walking from end to end. The field of view returned to the walkway ahead of the staff member. A guard was approaching him, blaster carbine lowered.

"What are you looking for then Dane?" Raziel heard the guard say through Dane's ears. The crew member handed the guard his datapad.

"Ah yes, next level down, booth three."

Dane then proceeded to lead his hoversled to the platform at the other end of the room. It gently eased him down to the next level and he headed off along the level. He looked to the wall on the outside of the room. Each three-metre section had a little alcove under which various containers were kept. Raziel assumed that was where they kept individual orders. The little man stopped at the third alcove and stepped inside to look around, he was now directly underneath the level above. Consulting his datapad once again he opened up the smallest of the boxes. Inside were three perfectly shaped gems. Raziel knew they were not for him; they had obviously been reshaped with a laser for aesthetics. No, his crystals were probably in the massive pile down the centre of the room.

As Raziel passively watched what Dane did inside the vault, he puzzled over how he could get inside. The room was well lit and because of its peculiar shape, there was no cover. On any of the levels, a guard across on the other side of the room would be able to see you. He decided his best chance was to get inside one of the alcoves on the lowest level and look over the raw gems from there.

Raziel felt a feeling of surprise through his connection and switched his attention back to inside the vault. The man had gathered all the items on his hoversled, but had been surprised to find an engineer opening a panel right behind him.

"Wow, you surprised me," Raziel realised that he had been concentrating so much on following the staff member that he hadn't heard the engineer go in through the doors.
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"Heh sorry. These damn lights have been playing up all week," he pulled a component from the wall, wires still dangling from it. "The lights may switch to emergency for a moment ok?" he shouted up to one of the guards. Dane started to walk past the engineer, manoeuvring the hoversled around the electrician. Sensing his opportunity, Raziel reached out and forced a suggestion into Dane's mind.

Without conscious thought, Dane tapped a button on the hoversled's remote control. It veered sharply towards the electrician and the pile of wires he was extracting from the terminal.

"Ack you idiot!" was the last thing Raziel heard before severing his connection through the Force.

Raziel looked down at his hands as the lights started to flicker. His hands were actually shaking in his anticipation! He clenched them into fists, took a deep breath and rose to his feet.

He could feel the guard's annoyance easily. He heard the doors opening and one of them shouted:

"What on earth have you done?"

"This frelling idiot rammed his sled into me! Argh it's gonna take me an age to deal with this mess." The guards annoyance turned into mild humour as he looked down at the scene. On the level below Dane was backing away from the angry engineer who was holding a hydro spanner in a threatening manner.

"Think we need to call for help?" The other guard asked, looking around into the flickering darkness.

"Nah I'll go sort it out, better stop Jason smashing that poor fool's head in." the other guard turned and entered the vault, leaving the doors open behind him.

"What was that?" the lone guard said to himself. He shouldered his rifle and took a step forwards. He sidestepped towards his left, keeping his guns raised.

Raziel came around the corner and looked at the guard walking away from him. He reached out one hand towards him and imposed the sounds of footsteps and now a distant blaster shot onto his hearing. Raziel then charged towards the door.

The soldier didn't even hear the faint whisper of sound that heralded Raziel's passing into the vault. After seeing that the corridor was clear he returned to his post, the memory of the blaster sounds slowly receding from his memory.

The room had been plunged into almost total darkness. Raziel's sensitive eyes made out the forms of one guard ahead of him and a group of three people on the level below, even before he sensed them through the Force.

Wasting no time Raziel leapt onto the railing and launched himself off it, his cloak fluttering behind him. The emergency lights kicked in mid-flight, the deep red light bathing the crystals in an evil glow. Raziel landed flat on his belly, two levels down, hoping that no one had seen him. He slid to the edge of this level, watching the back of a guard ahead of him. He edged underneath the railing and dropped down to the bottom level, his robe sliding behind him.

As soon as he touched the floor, he rolled back into the shadows offered by one of the alcoves. He paused for a moment, listening for any sounds of sudden movement, feeling out around him for any feelings of surprise. When he was satisfied that he had managed to slip into the vault unnoticed he moved into a more comfortable position. The booth that he was in was roughly a metre square, with only a lone stool in the centre. He displaced a few boxes - probably filled with priceless jewellery - from the stool and sat down.

The alcove he was sat in was directly underneath the lowest of the three tiers on his side of the vault. From here, he could look over the crystals, whilst keeping out of sight. He had not considered how he would get out yet.

He reached out with the Force towards the horde of gems, his senses washing over them like a wave. As the Force guided him in different directions, he sent out 'tendrils' through the Force and reached for the crystals. Raziel sat like that for almost twenty minutes as his senses guided him to the six crystals he would need. Without conscious thought, he took a step out into the open.

He raised his hands instinctively, opening his palms. There was a 'clink' sound as several crystals were dislodged from the pile and shot out to meet his hand. After a few seconds, a small pile of crystals burst outwards from the stock and another few jumped out to reach him.

He looked down at what lay in his hands, he had no real idea how they had jumped to him. Even concentrating all of his effort on that one act, the small crystals would have slipped through his grasp; his telekinetic skill was simply not good enough to do that. Four crystals lay in his right hand, in the red glow he could not tell what colour they were. Two of them were roughly cone shaped, with large facets, sharp corners and one flat side; they would be the primary crystals that the raw energy would pass through. The next two were roughly lens shaped, but were thick and had, few, large facets. The final two seemed to the eye to be perfectly smooth, thin, almost flat lenses. When he ran his fingers over of them lightly, he could feel thousands of tiny facets across its surface. Intuitively, he knew that these crystals would fit his design perfectly; he could even imagine exactly how they would be arranged within his saber. The transport had obviously been to the particular outer rim sector that the rumours had shown, where the crystals he needed could be found.

Abruptly, a noise brought him out of his fixation. He turned his head slowly to regard a soldier, walking towards him slowly, carbine raised.

"And what do you think you're doing?" he sneered. Raziel realised that he had stepped out into the open and was in full view of anyone who might have looked down.

Without warning Raziel's left arm uncurled, releasing the two smooth crystals. They sliced through the air and struck the guard in the neck. He gurgled once and then dropped to the floor, his carbine clattering to the ground. In the same instant, the main lights came back on.

Raziel rushed to the fallen soldier's body and pulled the razor sharp gems from his neck. He wiped the blood from them on the guard's uniform, he found it ironic that they had killed before even becoming a part of his weapons.

"Hey! What the frell is going on down there!?" he heard a voice shout from above him. Raziel looked up, ahead of him, to see two more guards looking down at him from the tiers across the other side of the gems. He dropped all six crystals into a pouch on his belt, noting that they were coloured orange and purple in full light.

He raised his hands and looked back up behind him. The door out was up three tiered levels, each two metres high and between him and the exit were two more guards. Dane had since left the vault with the hoversled, but the engineer was looking down at him curiously, hydrospanner in hand.

Raziel bolted towards the wall behind him, he reached up for the lip of the next level up and launched himself over the railings.

"Damnit," one of the guards shouted. He opened fire on the target, who had moved faster than he thought possible. Before he could even line up his sights on Raziel, the Krath had jumped up to the second level.

Blaster fire flashed across the width of the vault towards Raziel. He started to reach for the next level, but one of the soldiers on his side of the vault had realised what was going on.

"Stop!" he shouted and opened fire on Raziel from only ten metres away. Raziel dived into another alcove, scattering a pile of diamonds. He stood with his back to the wall only to see the guards on the other side of the vault aiming at him from twenty metres away.

"There's no way out! Give yourself up!" one of them shouted, holding his fire. It was a foolish mistake, as Raziel had nowhere to dodge in that instant. Raziel took a step out from under the alcove, keeping his back to the wall. He slowly raised his hands, eying the closest sentry to his right.

He summoned all of his energy and launched himself upwards; he reached back over his head and grasped at the railings. He flipped high over the edge of the wall and landed on the level above. Blaster bolts scorched the walls around him as he dashed for the door. The lone guard they had left outside opened the door and started to walk in. Before he even had time to react, Raziel had snatched the weapon from his hand and pushed him into the line of fire. Raziel dove through the open door, firing randomly back into the vault. He smashed the controls for the door with the butt of the rifle, before throwing the weapon to the ground. He took a moment to search his feelings for a direction; he had been taken aback by the sudden exertion. He headed down a passageway to his left, only moments later hearing loud booted footsteps coming from the direction he had decided against taking. He walked back into his ship, unnoticed except by droid pilot. Only minutes later the man whose mind he had latched onto, Dane, arrived with a hoversled full of goods.

"You wouldn't belief what's going on down in there. Guards running all over the place, still haven't let me take my lunch break," Dane stopped talking when he looked at the expressionless droid. "Well enter the code here then please," he asked. The droid reached out and tapped in a code. "Excellent, have a nice day!" he called as he left the ship.

Pieces of smashed droid lay about the bridge of the Quintessence. Raziel headed the ship back towards Nar Shaddaa. He would then proceed to Arduan on Nal Hutta, as far as he knew - and that seemed to becoming less and less these days - that was where he had been born. The droids arm twitched on the floor, Raziel kicked out and sent it skittering along the floor. He never would trust droids, in them he saw his own reflection.




One year earlier...

Raziel's training sabers fell to the floor, his hands not having the strength to hold them anymore. His bare chest - a mesh of cuts. Japheth's mentally thrown rocks having lacerated him deeply. He looked down at his left shoulder, at a deep crimson gash, pieces of skin were imbedded in the wound and it would need attention soon. The arm hung limply at his side.

With the slightest of nods being the only appreciation forthcoming from Japheth, his master turned and walked towards the door of the training hall. Raziel started to drop into a healing trance to try to give him enough strength to make it to the infirmary.

Instead of the Force flowing though his body, currents leapt out through the Force all around him in a way he had never felt before. An image appeared in his minds eye, much like when he reached out to touch things with the Force. This was different. Everything around him seemed dull, blurred and lifeless. Tables and chairs barely stood out against the floor and he could resolve almost no detail. Against the bland and grey hues of the room, something stood out brightly, like a beacon. He reached out through the Force towards it, and touched Japheth's mind.

He opened his eyes and looked around, trying not to let his vision blind him to his other levels of sensory perception, as Japheth had painstakingly tried to teach him. The grey image superimposed itself over the top of his optical vision.

Japheth was almost at the door, when he paused. Raziel watched as ethereal copies of the three rocks nearest to Japheth rose from their physical shape, as he imagined a spirit would from a lifeless corpse. He was seeing this in the new, different sense. The ghostly rocks shot through the air towards Raziel from different directions, they collided where Raziel was currently standing and then bounced off at three different angles.

Raziel looked up to see dust starting to shake off the three rocks. Confused, he took one step to his left out of the way of the paths he had foreseen. As he had perceived, Japheth launched the rocks at him, they each flew harmlessly past and skittered along the floor. Japheth swung around to face Raziel and stared hard at him. He had used the rocks only as a lesson and had fully expected Raziel to jump out of the way, but his apprentice had done that far too easily. Even if Raziel had been fully alert, he should not have anticipated the attack so quickly.

Confronted by a startled Japheth, Raziel panicked and his newly acquired perspective melted away. He tried to focus on it again, but it eluded him.

It had not taken Japheth long after that day to realise that Raziel had actually read him planning that move. Pleasantly surprised at his apprentices show of a new skill he immediately took to developing his abilities. For days on end he would try and help Raziel grasp the subtle skill of alter mind. He would open up his mind to Raziel and allow him to change simple perceptions, such as the colour of the walls. Every day, Japheth would put up more and more defences and Raziel skill at breaking them down would grow.

That was, of course, until Raziel disappeared off to Nar Shaddaa without a word and brought his training to an abrupt halt...




Sa'jette's breathing was harsh and sporadic. He looked down at the floor, as his own black blood started to pool on the floor beneath him. He whimpered pathetically as another vibro knife was slowly drawn across his back. More of his warm lifeblood tricked across his back and dripped off the table, adding to the pool below. He screamed as another burly trandoshan grasped his antennae and yanked his head up. The Trandoshan leaned forward and looked at the rodian's face, his transparent eyelids blinking.

"We know he was here. All you have to do is tell us where he is now!" the Trandoshan fully expected that the rodian had now clue, this would be the third soul of Nar Shaddaa he had tortured to death for information. He was savouring every moment.

"Do you have any idea who'll come after you for this!?" Sa'jette screeched back. The trandoshan signalled his assistant with the knife, who started attaching something to Sa'jette's head. The rodian was strapped, face down, on his own workbench.

"Look, all you have to do is tell us sssomething about him," the trandoshan reiterated, wafted the picture in front of his face.

"I don't know anything!"

"Look, what my friend is placing around your head isss really going to hurt. Now I mean exsscruciating pain, if you do not co-operate your eyeballs will pop out of your head. Got that?"

"Ok, all I know - all anyone knows - is that he is an assassin. He worked for the Hutt at some point and he is not someone you want to cross paths with; he'll rip you two apart!" his anger came out in the last few words and in return the metal band that had been placed around his head tightened. Sa'jette screamed as the abrasive band cut through the skin around his bald head. The rough surface began to pull the skin under the band away from his flesh. Sa'jette had no idea what to do, everyone around the area knew whom he worked for and people didn't dare anger someone who had, at some time, made something for every large crime lord on the planet.
'And these damn ignorant trandoshan's have no clue what the consequences would be!' he thought.

Somehow, all of this was bringing out the Rodian's better side; he had not even considered betraying Raziel. A thought struck him then, and he glanced up at the waste bin in the corner of the room.

"Something in that?" the vigilant trandoshan asked. He walked over to the bin and spilled the contents on the floor. Sa'jette looked down on the floor and swore under his breath in Rodese. All he could here was the trandoshan's simple-minded counterpart chuckling in his ear. He was an artist, the best of his profession; he wasn't supposed to be in situations like this!

"Thisss it?" the trandoshan asked, holding up the piece of paper. On one side of it was scrawled an address for an apartment on Nal Hutta.

"I hope he rips you frelling tongue out!" Sa'jette spat as a last defiance. The burly human behind him pushed down on his shoulders, pinning him down hard on the table. Sa'jette wished he had burned the scrap.

"Well thanks for the information. It'sss been a rewarding talk." The trandoshan smiled, bearing his needle-like teeth.

Sa'jette screamed in agony as the band was tightened. The thin metal strip pressed down hard at his temples, sending unbearable waves of pain through him. His vision started to distort and then faded to black, as he felt the band rub against his skull and start to crush it.

"Momento?" the trandoshan asked, holding up a red, multifaceted eye. His assistant nodded dumbly.

"There you go Gorash," he said tossing it over to his pet human.

As they left the shop, a short, innocent looking bothan watched them closely. When they were out of sight, he stepped into Sa'jette's store. The sound of vomiting came from within the shop and a minute later the bothan walked out, comm unit in hand.




Raziel gingerly set the heavy box down on a worktop. He twisted it around, studying it thoroughly. As if the plain metal box would somehow reveal something its contents. He ran his fingers across the opening, his fingers twitching in anticipation. In one fluid movement, he flung the lid open and pulled out the two cases. Each consisted of a handle about ten centimetres long, with the recharge socket adding another three centimetres to the base. He grasped each of them firmly, taking pleasure in the feeling of the grip moulding to his hand. He put one of them down and tapped the grip, it now felt hard and cold like a metal. He laughed aloud and placed them back in the box. Sa'jette's workmanship was always flawless.

He suddenly stopped laughing, as he felt his stomach knot up, inside him. He felt an echo through the Force; he heard screams and felt suffering. He slammed the lid down on the box and the feeling cut off. He briefly considered trying to contact Sa'jette, but decided to focus on the task at hand.

A single two-metre long worktop divided his simple, but spacious, one room apartment. It consisted of a kitchen section and a plain, unfurnished sleeping space. He got up from his stool and wandered over to the box with the rest of his components in.

"Not yet," he said aloud. The moment did not feel right yet.




"Sir we have news from the surface!" one of Jassyck's assistants grunted in dosh.

"What of it?" Jassyck replied from his command chair. He was beginning to grow frustrated with this manhunt. He had little patience and those closest to him normally suffered his outbursts when it ran out.

"Kradossk reports that they have a location. They've been following his trail through a number of sectors, he reports that this man is some kind of low life assassin,"

"Ah," Jassyck nodded. That would explain the grudge and his anonymous tip off.

"He's on Nal Hutta now. They have the area he's staying in, but apparently he can't find a reference to the place,"

"Call all men up from the surface! Inform the control station that we will be breaking orbit in a few hours!" Jassyck stood up from his chair and grinned. The kill was getting close now; he could feel it. His money problems would be over and his plans would be back on track.




Raziel sat on the bar stool, sipping a mug of coffee. His room had been cleared of all clutter and mess, he had removed everything from the walls and closed the blinds. All of the components were laid out in a semi-circle in the centre of the room, along with a tiny laser cutter and welder. Everything was set up and ready, but Raziel had to wait for the moment to come to him. The time would come soon.

"Not yet," he smiled and placed the empty mug back down on the worktop.




"Orders sir?" Jassyck's second-in-command asked.

"Drop us into a geosynchronous orbit over that city and prepare to send shuttles down."

"We'll have to launch the shuttles before we make our orbit, the standard day here is eighty seven hours and we'll have to orbit too far from the planet,"

"Very well," Jassyck replied curtly, sending his second-in-command an angry look. "Tell Kradossk that I am pleased with him. Send him and his team down to Arduan to look for that place, prepare kill teams two and three for launch upon Kraddosk's signal!"

"Sir! Approaching position over Arduan now," The Pummel's engines flared and it closed the distance between itself and the dark brown sphere.


Raziel sat down on the floor and crossed his legs. All of the components for his lightsaber were arranged in front of him in a semi-circle. There was nothing else in the room besides himself and his lightsaber. A single, softly glowing light lit the room, which gave everything a dark blue hue.

Raziel reached to his belt and pulled a small leather pouch from it. He tipped the contents into his hand and started deeply into the crystals. Nothing else in the room existed to him in that moment, only the crystals. After almost an hour of stillness, he sorted them into two groups of three, each including a smooth and rough focusing crystal.

He took a deep breath and exhaled slowly, over a whole minute. In that time, he cleared his mind of clutter, much as he had the room. He was now devoid of everything except dedication to the task. He closed his eyes and listened to the will of the Force, nothing else mattered now. Any thoughts or ideas he had, would only hamper him in this task.

He reached out and touched each of the components, both with his hand and his mind. He held each of them in turn for a moment and studied it, before placing it down in the same position. He delved into a deeper trance, not even aware of the physical world around him. He visualised in his mind how the saber would be constructed.

First, he would surround the diatium power cell with the power field conductor and the inert insulator. Next, he would work on the emitter matrix. The blade arc tip, from which the final blade would be emitted, would be welded into position in the flux aperture. Between them, they would control the outgoing and ingoing flow of the energy blade. The circuitry would take only a minute to connect to the energiser coils and emitter matrix. There was no room for anything complicated in his design; its size would not allow him to install pressure sensors, or any other extra components.

The last thing to do before assembling the blade would be to construct the crystal chamber. All three crystals would have to be set perfectly in two different positions. The crystals would have to be able to move between positions smoothly, modifying the energy patterns between them so that the blade changed, but did not short out. If anything went wrong the crystals could be shattered, or all the energy released at the lightsabers wielder.

In Raziel's mind, he saw the primary crystal placed at one end of the chamber. Then the rough-cut crystal was placed in the slot above that. Finally, the almost smooth crystal was placed at the very end of the chamber, so that it hardly affected the blade. When connected to the circuitry the two crystals would move closer together; the rough crystal away from the primary crystal and the smooth one away from the blade energy channel. He felt the Force begin to flow through him strongly; it swept over the components as every move was made.

All of the pieces would have to come together to form each weapon. Every component would have to connected flawlessly, there could be no seams, no error. No machine would ever be able to construct something to the precision required; only through the Force could it be done. This one act would take Raziel more concentration and Force manipulation than he had ever used before and afterwards, he would be more in tune with it than ever.

In Raziel's mind, all of the components were floating in front of him in absolute darkness. He had to understand what he needed to do completely, before he started. The case that had been built for him twisted around. The power supply, with all of its surroundings, were placed at the base of the hilt and connected to the recharge socket. The completed crystal chamber would go in afterwards; the primary crystal would have to be sealed to the power supply perfectly. The energy coils entered the case next and were connected on either side of the energy channel. The emitter matrix sealed the casing and provided an outlet for the energy within. Raziel watched the blade shroud being attached, the completed lightsaber then twisted around in the air before him and then dropped to the ground.

Raziel opened his eyes.

The completed lightsabers sat before him.

He sat in shock for a moment, not daring to touch the hilts. He had believed he was only running over the designs, how could the lightsabers already be constructed? He reached out with the Force to the blades he could still feel traces of his presence about the weapons. He had constructed them.

He reached out with his right hand; it hung over one of the blades for a moment. He picked up the other blade after a moment, sensing that that was the correct way around. Looking closely at it, he saw a bewildering pattern of swirls and symbols engraved along the length of the grip. As he looked closer still, he saw that there were patterns within patters, many different levels of designs saturating its surface. He had no idea as to how they had gotten there; even in his vision, he had not engraved the hilt.

He picked up the other blade and studied it as well. He could sense that they had been constructed to the best of his ability, for all he tried he could not find any internal flaws from the assembly.

Raziel rose from the floor and looked around. He intuitively knew that some time had passed. He also realised that in the process of creating his weapons, he had changed. He could not tell the extent of what had happened to him, it would take some mediation to discover that, but he knew that he had grown more powerful, his understanding advanced.

He lifted one of the blades up to his eye level and let his thumb hang over the activation button. He depressed it gently, it clicked satisfyingly and he was rewarded by a metre long burgundy-purple blade flaring into life. It hummed quietly, as if the blade was satisfied.

Raziel's arm suddenly turned to a blur and he launched into a simple, but fast routine. The lightsaber sat comfortably in his grasp, the grip moulding to his hand, the blade flowing through each move as if it wanted to on its own. It really felt like an extension of his arm. It was not so much a weapon, but he was a weapon and the lightsaber was a part of him.

He activated the twin lightsaber and noted the ever so slightly darker blade colour. With a flick of the wrist, he spun the blade around once. His thumbs paused over the two smaller buttons that were placed next to the activation switch. He smiled to himself, considering the consequences of what would happen if his workmanship had been anything less than his best.

Before he could try it, he sensed a commotion downstairs. He could easily hold a larger sensory sphere now, and within it, he could sense a great deal of fear around a group of men downstairs. He sensed that there was danger for himself. He looked around the room and noted that the only thing he needed to take with him was a small bag. He opened the window of his third floor apartment and hung the bag on the windowsill. Balancing it very gently so that the slightest push would dislodge it.

Raziel had constructed holsters for his lightsabers, which would wrap around his forearms. Plastic tabs ran down the inside of his sleeves and under his gloves, with a tug on the tab in his palms the sabers would drop out of his sleeves and into his hands.

Raziel swapped his sabers between hands and brought his arms together, he appeared to rub his hands together and his lightsabers disappeared.




Kradossk raised his leathery foot and smashed it through the door. Two nimble rodians charged into the room, pistols raised. One of the rodians kept his pistols trained on the left of the room; the other looked to the window on the far side. Kradossk calmly strode into the room and walked over to the workbench on the right. Gorash, the massive human, lumbered in behind them.

"A-hem," Raziel coughed, stepping out from behind the doorway. The four intruders turned to face him, standing in a diamond formation. Without pausing Gorash raised a huge vibro axe and charged at Raziel, screaming at the top of his lungs.

Raziel coolly stepped to one side, the vibro axe smashing into the wall beside his head. The other three couldn't make out what happened next, but Gorash dropped to the floor, blood spurting from several wounds.

Anger flashed across Kradossk's face, his eyes narrowing. His tongue flicked out and he hissed through his teeth.

Raziel regarded the three men standing opposite him. The trandoshan to his right was quite obviously the leader of this group, Raziel could sense that he was quick witted and that always made for a very dangerous trandoshan. Even now, obviously outraged, he had not raised his weapon, but left the stun carbine hanging loosely from his belt. The rodian to his left was grinning foolishly, looking down his sights at Raziel and was imagining blowing the small human away. If there was a weak point in this group, he was it. The rodian bringing up the rear held his pistol cautiously, but Raziel could sense a great deal of fear emanating from him.

"I'm afraid you'll have to come with usss," the trandoshan started, his three-clawed hand reaching for the blaster. Raziel ignored him, but reached out with the Force and attacked the anxious rodian's mind.

In the rodian's mind, Raziel leapt into a sprint and started running to his left. The rodian kept his pistol trained on the assassin, he finger twitching above the trigger.

The rodian behind them watched in horror as his companion adjusted his aim and twisted towards Kradossk. As far as the foolish rodian concerned, Raziel had stopped and had drawn a weapon.

"I've got him!" he shouted, oblivious to everything else in the room. Kradossk, bemused, turned to look at him and stared down the muzzle of his blaster.

"Mileek! No!" he shouted, too late.

Mileek fired from point blank range into Kradossk's face, blowing a hole right through. As Kradossk's limp body hit the floor, the illusion faded from his mind.

The other rodian jumped forward, grabbed Mileek's shoulder and spun him around.

"What in the Grand Protector's name are you doing!?" his companion kept his suction cupped fingers tightly around Mileek's pistol.

"I...I just don't know...he...he...Where is he!?" he screeched. Both of the rodians looked about but could not see their target. The lights switched off and the door swung shut.

"Back to back!" Mileek screeched in rodese. With their backs pressed against one another, they both felt secure. Each of them took out a torch with their off-hand. The room was not really that dark, but unnatural shadows had spread through the corners of the room.

"I can't see him!" Mileek screamed in frustration. The torch did not penetrate the shadows. The two circled around, still keeping back to back. "Maybe he's gone?"

The shadows encroached on their position, as did the fear in their minds.

"Aiee!" Mileek shrieked. His nerve broke and he opened fire into the darkness.

"Die! Die!" shouted his counterpart, who started to unload his pistol. They kept firing into the shadows until they had completely discharged their blasters.

"A-hem," someone coughed from behind them both. The rodians jumped away from each other and turned around. Raziel was stood between them. There were two clicks, as they both pressed the triggers on their blasters.

Without a word, Raziel shot an arm out towards each of them. There was a snap-hiss as the sabers dropped into his hands and ignited. A maroon blade pierced each of their chests. The trio stood there for a second, motionless. Raziel clicked to activation switches twice and the blades disappeared. Both rodians crumpled to the floor.


Kill teams two and three thundered up the flight of stairs, armed to the teeth with trandoshan stun carbines, shardnet launchers and heavy rifles. They formed up around the door to Raziel's apartment, training their weapons at the hole in the door that Kradossk's foot had left. Inside the room, Raziel snarled with contempt for the trandoshans. He was nothing but human prey to them. Why the emperor had dealt with their kind, he had no idea.

His fast, but weak style meant that whilst he could pick numerous blaster bolts from the air, blocking any heavy fire would leave him exposed. He knew that the groups would gun him down in moments.

"Kradossk?" the lead trandoshan called. In reply, the door exploded outwards in a massive fireball. Pieces of burning debris landed all around them and smoke filled the corridors. When the kill teams picked themselves up off the floor and stopped shielding their faces, they were confronted by a still-intact door. They looked around at each other, hissing, and grunting in dosh.

There was a snap-hiss from behind them and the angry Krath descended on the mob. His sabers hummed furiously as he ripped through the squad's rearguard. His blades darted back and forth in a blur, cutting down any soldiers within range.

Kill team two turned around and saw the Jedi ripping team three to pieces.

"Fire!" shouted their leader. Before any of them had even shouldered their carbines Raziel had disappeared in a flash, back down the corridor he had emerged from. Shardnets and blue stun bolts thudded harmlessly into the wall beyond. The trandoshans hissed to each other in disbelief.

"Advancsse!" their leader commanded. The soldiers advanced on the corridor cautiously and slowly, each of them focusing down his sights at what lay ahead. There was another humming behind them. They spun around, just in time to see their leaders head rolling to the floor.

"Retreat!" shouted one of the remaining six trandoshans. They backed away, in a circle, towards the stair well. The first four started down the stairs, expecting the Jedi to rush up at them. As the last two started to take the last step towards the stairs, Raziel calmly stepped out ahead of them. He raised his lightsabers ahead of him.

"Help!" the two called to their four squad mates, who were making their way down the stairs. They opened fire at Raziel, but he deflected the blue shots with a flick of his left wrist. His right saber swung around in front of him and cut them in half. Without pause, he leapt down the stairs onto the four remaining trandoshans. In the close-quarters, they had no chance.

"A Krath shall use his knowledge and cunning, and play on his enemies' fears to win the day." Raziel murmured.

He hurried outside and looked up to his bag, hanging from the window. He pulled at it as hard as he could with his mind and it slipped off. He caught it and rushed for Arduan's spaceport down the back alleys.




"What happened down their!?" Jassyck shouted at the holo-image in front of him. The obviously disturbed human paused before replying:

"I don't know! One of the other guests said something about a Jedi, but there are...there...oh...there are heads...everywhere!" the holo image expanded to reveal a worktop; a trandoshan head had been placed on it. Jassyck recognised the recently promoted Kradossk.

"Damn him I will have his head before the night is over!" Jassyck leapt from his chair, infuriated. The holo image deactivated.

"Wait! I have him!" shouted the tactical officer. "Sensors have spotted his ship, he's heading to leave the system, but we can catch him!"

"Do it! We will blast him out of space!"

Raziel knew that if he made the jump to light speed he could out run most ships, but when the pummel and half a squadron of uglies came around and blocked his exit vector, he realised there would be no easy way out of this. He considered turning about and trying to escape at the other edge of the systems gravity well, but the Z-95 headhunter in the group would probably catch him.

He slowed down as he approached the group and let the flights assume positions around him. The corvette moved up alongside the group and Raziel's console went furious with the number of weapon locks on his ship.

"I'm afraid thisss isss asss far asss you will get." There was a pause as Jassyck considered what to do. He really wanted the head of that man, but knew that bringing him aboard would probably be a bad idea. "I'm sssorry, but you will have to go now..."

Raziel's grip tightened on the control stick. He watched as the headhunter behind him loaded a proton torpedo. He closed his eyes and concentrated on the pilots all around him. Distance is only a matter of perspective Japheth had always taught him. Exhausting the last of his energy Raziel reached out to the pilots.

"He's going to hyperspace! He'll rip himself apart! Break off!" Bravsk shouted from his headhunter. The ugly tie-wing fighters all broke away from the Quintessence at full speed, all reading that the ships hyperdrive engines were activating. Raziel seized his moment.

He smashed the throttle forward and veered directly towards the Pummel laser cannons glanced his shields, but he suffered no direct hits. As he passed by the corvette, he rolled the ship over, looped around the corvette, and shot back at the pursuing fighters.

He opened fire at the Z-95 and before Bravsk could react, the laser darts smashed through his shields. The headhunter exploded into a ball of debris and Raziel shot past the rest of the fighters. By the time the cobbled together ships could turn to face him, he was almost out of range. Raziel transferred all available power to his engines and glanced at his sensors. He laughed out loud. He checked the Nav computer before leaning back into his seat and going into a trance. He had expended a lot of his energy and he was not expected a warm welcome back on Lopen.




"Follow him!" Jassyck screeched. Bravsk had been another friend of his, but more importantly, Jassyck knew he was finished if they did not catch the assassin.

"Sir!" his tactical officer shouted. He had been trying to gain the captains attention for the last few minutes.

"What is it?" he shouted, he started to turn to the insolent officer, but paused when he looked out of the starboard view screen. A Nebulon B frigate, with an escort of Hutt-fighters was rapidly bearing down on them.

"Raddas the Hutt would like to talk to you about a good friend of his!" shouted a voice over the comms. Before Jassyck could start to issue orders a volley of ion cannons thundered into the side of the corvette. Blue lightening crackled over the surface of the ship.

"Engines down!" someone shouted as a control panel exploded in a burst of sparks. Jassyck collapsed back in his chair, utterly defeated. He sat and watched as his fighter escort was blown apart. He spat a curse at the approaching frigate and tapped the self-destruct sequence into his control panel.




Raziel stood with his back to the Quintessence, his white robes wrapped rightly around his shoulders. He took a moment to collect his thoughts and reflect on his emotions. If he were indecisive for even a moment now, he would probably die. The conflict within him died out, he needed to find out just how much potential he had. The only goal left in his life now, was to prove that he was more than a mindless killing machine. Resolute, he proceeded into the citadel.

He knew where he master would be waiting - the training hall they had always used. The steel door was flung open with a protesting screech, and Raziel stormed into the room. His white robe adding a shard of light to the dull, shadowy room. The hall was much as it had been a year ago. The central dais was gone, but platforms had been added to the walls, high above their heads.

"Take it off. Either way, you will not need it," Japheth's voice was harsh and cold. He was stood at the far end of the room, lightsaber in hand. Japheth had always had presence and right now, it was looming over Raziel.

Without any thought of hesitation, Raziel flung his robe to the side. The material shimmered in the semi-light for a moment, before the robe fell into shadow and out of sight.

He held up one lightsaber for Japheth to see and nodded to his mentor. In response, Japheth's dark blue blade hissed into life.

"Let us see what that thing is made of," Japheth said, raising his saber into a hasso position.

'And let you see what I am made of.' Raziel silently added. Raziel ignited his blade, dropping his left foot back. He stood side on to Japheth, his lightsaber extended out in front of him, but pointing downwards to keep the bright blade form hurting his sensitive eyes. He kept his left arm out behind him and took up a typical fencing stance. He had trained with swords almost relentlessly for twenty years and had more than a few styles he could use.

Japheth gave Raziel the slightest of nods and began to advance. Raziel started to circle to his left, trying to keep some space between them, for the moment. He decided to try to attack Japheth's mind before the gap was closed, there was next to no hope of success, but he had to show Japheth all of his potential if he hoped to survive the encounter.

The first attack was brutal and simple; he jabbed at Japheth's conscious and tried to barge through his defences. The slightest flicker of recognition at Raziel's effort passed across Japheth's face, and that was all Raziel achieved. He kept his steps small and quick, never crossing his legs and always keeping his balance. Raziel probed Japheth's mind whilst he kept his footwork in order. He brushed against Japheth's conscious from different directions, discerning what he could. His master kept his thoughts almost unreadable, but Raziel could sense that he was limiting his Force use for the battle. There was a tremor of anger within Japheth, which he could not conceal. Raziel's apprehension over the 'test' grew immeasurably.

Japheth quickened his pace, circling around to limit Raziel's options. The adept launched a second, subtler, mental attack. This time he tried to affect Japheth's perceptions, without him knowing. A second image of Raziel started to split away in Japheth's mind and walk the other way. Japheth stopped his advance and swiped his hand in front of his own eyes, in a meaningless gesture. The image melted away.

"I sorely hope you have kept up with your swordplay my apprentice. I would hate to think that was all I managed to teach you," he smiled. However, whilst Japheth had paused, Raziel had moved to a more favourable position within the room. Japheth's stinging comments sent a surge of anger through Raziel and he stopped his retreat.

He sidled towards Japheth, raising the tip of his saber slightly, aligning it with the Templar's throat. He closed to a distance of three metres and stopped. The will of the Force would guide his hand now, he grinded his teeth together in determination and attacked.

He closed the gap in a heartbeat and stabbed a Japheth with a simple, but quick thrust to the abdomen. The blue saber swept around and stopped the attack with a solid block. Raziel darted back away, just as quickly. His blade was slightly shorter than Japheth's was and he was at a disadvantage at arms reach.

He assumed the same ready position and started to circle again. When he sensed the time was right he sidestepped forwards and struck at Japheth's legs. His mentor blocked the blow, but Raziel's saber whipped back around and slashed upwards, towards Japheth's chin. The blue saber came around just as fast and batted Raziel's saber away before it could split Japheth's skull in two. Raziel backed away once more before Japheth could retaliate.

Their eyes met and Japheth locked Raziel in a stare. As Raziel looked in Japheth's green and brown orbs, he felt like there was no distance between them. The tension between them seemed to charge the atmosphere, neither one of them could break away. Raziel changed his posture; his right foot dropped back behind his left and he brought his saber out to the side of his body. The nimble fighter launched himself into the attack.

With a slight bend of the knees, the only warning Japheth got he jumped at his mentor. As he did so, Japheth used a mental attack of his own. Instead of trying to block it out and directly oppose Japheth's will, Raziel let it flow across him, the attack passing him by without causing injury.

The moment Raziel's feet touched the ground his saber whipped around at Japheth. His mentor blocked the predictable, but fast attack, sending a shock up his forearm. Raziel took another step towards his mentor and went into a fast-paced attack routine. He slashed and stabbed at Japheth, his saber working high and low, searching for a gap in his mentors defences. Every time, the blue saber swung around and blocked the blow, with plenty of time to spare. Japheth was happy to stay in the defensive, backing away from Raziel and anticipating his attacks. His slow, swinging motions aggressively blocked each of Raziel's attacks and he started to manipulate the battle towards his own direction.

Raziel stabbed down at Japheth's legs, but instead of sliding off Japheth's blocking saber and quickly striking again, he shoved forwards and forced his mentors saber out wide, to his right. He tugged at the tab underneath his glove and his second lightsaber dropped into his left hand. He activated it and swung at Japheth's exposed body in one fluid motion. Smiling, Japheth put his saber inside Raziel's right-hand blade with a flick of the wrist. He sidestepped and ducked to his right under Raziel's slash. Raziel's eyes widened in horror, he could not understand how Japheth had seen the attack coming. It was an expert move that left Raziel defenceless. His sabers were both out to the right and Japheth was to his left. He started to jump to his right, but it was too late. Japheth brought his hilt up to eye level and stabbed down towards Raziel's exposed torso.

And then, everything happened in an instant.

Time seemed to stop for Raziel; he regarded the almost frozen image as Japheth's blade inched closer to his exposed kidney. He knew that he had to focus on the moment, otherwise it would slip past him and Japheth's saber would finish its journey to end Raziel's life.

He felt a flicker of panic run over him, but then a stronger, more tangible sense of fear grasped onto him and he twisted it to anger. A great wave of power flowed through him and he could feel strength gathering within him.

He reached out for Japheth's mind through the Force. Japheth, too, was fully focused in this instant and Raziel knew his thoughts would have to flow along with his mentors. From the days of mental sparring, he knew Japheth's defences well. He concentrated hard on Japheth's strike, trying to imaging things from his perspective. He reached out and tried to deceive his perceptions once again.

He saw the muscles in Japheth's feet and legs subconsciously move as they tried to compensate for what his sense of balance was telling them. His body started to twist away from Raziel, as Japheth's subconscious tried to keep his body upright. Japheth's expression changed momentarily as he realised that he could not bring himself around quickly enough to hit Raziel's fast moving form.

The moment ended.

Japheth did not let up, his balance quickly returned to normal and he took the offensive. He reigned down blow after blow, each hit jarring Raziel's arms. He saber moved fluidly and rapidly, never giving Raziel the chance to counterattack with either hand.

Raziel saw Japheth gather his strength for one almighty blow. The blue blade sliced down, around and then swung up towards Raziel's crotch. The two maroon blades crossed in front of Raziel and he caught Japheth's saber between them, dissipating the force of the blow. The three blades stayed there, interlocked. They heaved against each other with all the strength they could muster. Raziel's nose was an inch from his master's and he snarled in his face. Japheth's strength won out and Raziel's sabers were smashed out of the way.

Raziel started to fall backwards; he tipped his head back at the dark blue shimmering blade passed right in front of his face. He bent his knees as he fell back, preparing to jump.

"Ha!" Japheth shouted triumphantly. He allowed his blade to carry on with the motion, up and over his head and kicked out at Raziel. His apprentice launched himself away from Japheth's foot, again only centimetres from harm. He flipped backwards away from Japheth and landed softly.

"You managed to affect my balance - that was clever! Now you are just getting lucky. The next time you err so foolishly, I will strike you down." Japheth took up the same ready position and waited for his apprentice.

Raziel flipped his right saber over and held it in a reversed grip, his thumb and forefinger at the butt of the hilt. His left hand, he held out before him, the saber pointing straight at Japheth's heart. Fear clutched at his throat, he had seen the predatory look in Japheth's eyes as he had struck down at Raziel's exposed body. He felt foolish for believing that Japheth would not have known he had constructed a second lightsaber.

If he went down today then at least he would go down fighting. A part of him had always been a duellist and he saw this as a fitting end. He resigned himself to his fate.

Every attack routine so far had been faster, more intricate and skilful than the last. This was no exception. Raziel dived at his master, his left saber stabbing straight forwards. Japheth parried the blade to the side and Raziel's right-hand saber swung around at an extraordinary speed. Japheth's saber turned around one hundred and eighty degrees, so that the tip pointed downwards, he barely managed to block the attack. Raziel's two blades worked in complete harmony. The left blade went through complex patterns, to try to open a hole in Japheth's defences, whereas the saber held in a reverse hand grip slashed across his body whenever an opportunity arose.

Japheth backed away rapidly, taken aback at the sudden change of style. Raziel's arms were a blur of motion and his single blade was forced to keep up, but his connection to the Force was far greater than Raziel's and he was able to anticipate each of the attacks. He started to adapt to Raziel's technique and his apprentice began to lose momentum. Sensing the opportunity fading Raziel threw all of his weight forwards and pivoted about on his back foot. His right saber slashed at Japheth's head, the blue saber gracefully came up to block it as always, but the force of the blow carried it onwards, twisting Japheth around.

Raziel felt his back thud against Japheth's and he struck out, back around his body at Japheth's exposed side. He was impressed as Japheth somehow managed to catch his arm out of the air, his fingers clamping tightly around Raziel's wrist. They stood there, motionless, for a minute. Back to back, with their arms straight out to the sides, as if they were about to be crucified together. On Raziel's right, sparks were flying as he struggled to hold Japheth's saber at bay. To his left, he was wriggling to get free of Japheth's grip.

They started to circle around each other, sweat dripping off Raziel with the exertion. Suddenly, both his left saber and Japheth's saber to his right broke free and Japheth spun around. Japheth had the greater momentum and Raziel had to duck under the attack, right afterwards he twisted around and slashed at Japheth's legs.

The Templar launched himself twenty feet into the air, avoiding the blow, and landed on one of the platforms high above. Japheth was burning with rage. Not only had his insolent apprentice come back here and demanded to be trained, but also now, he had almost struck Japheth. True Japheth was holding back, but Raziel should never have returned to Lopen!

Raziel returned his right-hand saber to a normal grip and drew it back, over and behind his head, ready to strike. He looked up to his mentor, unable to follow.

"Satisfied?" he asked.

Japheth did not even listen to what he said. He vaulted down from the platform, saber raised high. He fell upon Raziel and unleashed some of his anger. Raziel absorbed the power of his first stroke with his left hand and his second saber struck down at Japheth like a scorpion's sting. Japheth sidestepped the strike and rapidly advanced on Raziel. His saber sliced through the air ferociously, each attack knocking Raziel's sabers out of the way. Every blow forcing Raziel back another step. Each attack moved fluently into the next, offering Raziel no chance to counterattack. No leeway was given, as he pressed Raziel back further and further, closer and closer to the wall.

Fearing the worst Raziel utilized his last trick. He stood his ground and dodged out of the way of one of Japheth's powerful attacks. He pressed the one of the small buttons on each lightsaber. The blades decreased in length from a metre down to a foot, effectively become lightdaggers; Raziel's weapon of choice. The colour of the blades also changed from their red and purple shade, to a dark, rusty orange colour.

He stepped forward under Japheth's attack and slashed at his belly. Japheth barely avoided the attack and started to back-pedal furiously. He had not foreseen this and the sudden surprise almost panicked him. Raziel was too close now, he was in under his defences and he could not bring his saber around quickly enough to hold him off.

Raziel unleashed all of his anger at Japheth, attacking with short, quick slashes and stabs. Each thrust forced Japheth to parry the attack from an even more awkward angle and Raziel attacked relentlessly. He forced Japheth to block higher and higher, until he had an opening. Japheth's saber was horizontal, at eye level. Raziel struck it with his left-hand blade and pushed it up high, over their heads. He took a step forwards and stabbed at Japheth's belly. Japheth unleashed a fraction of his anger in an attack to try to break Raziel's offensive.

Raziel sensed the build up in the Force before Japheth unleashed the attack, he was able to dissipate some of the energy, but he still took the brunt of the blow. The telekinetic attack threw Raziel along a low trajectory, but gave Japheth the space he needed.

Raziel landed gracefully on his feet and skidded to a stop. He pressed the second small switch on his lightsabers and the crystals altered their position again, restoring the blades to full length. He held both blades out ahead of him in a more traditional stance. His mind was racing, his muscles trembling from the stress and sweat pour off him. Yet Japheth showed no signs of fatigue, for all the energy he had expended.

Japheth started to regain control over his anger. He realised that Raziel had in fact proven that he had kept up with his studies and was more capable than ever. His feelings lingered, but he kept them in check.

"Perhaps I did not waste my time with you after all," Japheth called across the room. "You have indeed kept up with your training," he raised his lightsaber in salute and advanced. Raziel's heart lifted, he was not going to die today.

Raziel attacked more cautiously now. Each strike was slower, but his routine followed a more carefully constructed plan. Japheth allowed Raziel to force him backwards and keep up the attack.

With one circular motion of the wrist, Raziel blasted Japheth's saber from his grip. The hilt bounced along the floor and came to rest in the corner. Japheth started to chuckle, but Raziel kept the same pose, lightsaber held out threateningly.

"You have grown more powerful since you left. Can you not feel it yourself? Two years ago you thought you were quite a swordsman, but if then, you had watched yourself fight now, you would have been stunned."

"I can't move," Raziel whispered.

"I know. It still does not change the fact that you walked out on me, after all the effort I spent on you. It is not wise to anger a dark Jedi and you need to be taught that. Let me have a look at this." Japheth pulled the lightsaber from Raziel's still hand. He looked at it closely, admiring the construction. There was no sign of strain on his face, despite the fact that he held the young adept paralysed in his grip.

"Dual-phase?" he asked. Raziel managed to nod slightly in reply. "I suppose I should have expected that." In a flash of anger, Japheth turned the lightsaber against its master. He slashed along Raziel's right arm and leg, leaving cauterized incisions.

"No please!" Raziel shouted.

He picked Raziel up like a rag doll and tossed him into a wall. There was a sickening crunch and several bones were smashed. Raziel was flung high into the air and landed with a crack. Japheth stood over him, still holding one of his lightsabers.
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