Oh, it's not that bad. Don't scare him off.

Maroy wrote:We're not all clones, we need some originality!

Canonically speaking, yes, Stormtroopers are all clones.

/me looks at the Osk roster.

Mostly army, funny, I could have swore. . .oh, yeah; we have standards.

There is no bio that can't be salvaged and only a few writers that cannot be saved. Don't go tossing rocks about, kid, you'll bring that pretty glass house down around your head.

Everyone is so mean.




For the record, it was a rhetorical question.

Fist off

http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/11350/

Next WTF is the Army posting in the NAVY ACADEMY BOARDS.

And third why are starting an argument on the VENA board no lease.






Now finally Racker2 you have to do your character sheet all over again.

If you need an idea about what it needs to look like use mine as a reference at the link below.

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Rocketman

If you have any questions shoot me a pm.


WO2 Rocketman
XOA VENA

better.

you may want to expand on this a bit more. tell us his full real name. how did he get the scar? what was his childhood like on Coruscant. why was he on Alderaan? what drove him to enlist.

details are what give your character life. go crazy.


...but not tooooo crazy, we got enough of those here already.

Hey there Racker2, i'm PO2 DeepSix and i'll be trying to help you out a little.

First of all do not be intimidated by the comments above. Just figured that should be mentioned first

Regarding your bio. The first part is fine. The physical description should be a little longer and detail more about him. Granted the first bit already provides a rough sketch but there are still many things that could still be added. First thing that comes to mind would be his apparel. What does he wear when off duty? When clubbing? When doing jobs on the side? When smashing alien heads in dark alleys?

Apparel aside, there are lots of things to add here. Like how long is his hair, does he have a freaky hairdo, is his nose straight or crooked, is his mouth big or small, are his teeth healthy or yellow, green and well whatever colors you might think of? You obviously do not have to mention all these little things but the more you can think of the better everyone else can envision him properly. Do also try to avoid definitive reactions from others. To be precise things like "his face strikes fear into his enemy's eyes". Try slightly changing it in a way so that it still allows other options, for example "his face tends to frighten his enemies" or similar. That "tends to" there basically shows that exceptions can still occur. Ideally it would be for you to also provide a reason for such a claim however. As in why exactly is his face so frightening? Is it badly scarred? Is his glare capable of freezing the blood of others? Is his grin creepy enough to make you shudder? Is it one of many other possibilities? Mentioning such things would again make it easier to properly envision him and in so doing not only better "see" him but also better understand him in a way. You wouldn't after all think that a guy with a cold glare, menacing grin and nasty scar across his eye was a simple teacher or something right?

Regarding your background... Firstly it should be mentioned that VE's current timeline is somewhere around 10 ABY give or rather take a couple of years. If that is so then him being 28 would mean he would've had to be born around 18-20 BBY, meaning Corsuscant would've still been in the Republic. Now seeing how at the time the Republic was fighting the Separatists i'm not entirely sure you could say it was a peaceful world, especially considering how Coruscant was the Republic's seat of power more or less - with the Senate and the Jedi Temple all found there and everything. There were also lots of terrorist acts, assassinations and apparently at least one large enough raid made by Grievous.

What i was trying to say above - before getting sidetracked with the history lesson - was that you should try and either get your facts right or not be confused by the fact that the Republic became the Empire but should not be mistaken with the New Republic which subsequently brought the Empire down. Also Coruscant and Alderaan are different planets. The latter also eventually gets blown to bits by the first Death Star...

Regarding the personality section, well again basically just add more to it. If appearance can be somewhat tricky to figure out well personality should be fairly simple, since you can basically just provide a summary of how you intend to RP him. If you do however still have trouble coming up with more i suggest you make a list of likes and dislikes and just consider various things. For instance "likes to drink", "doesn't like to talk", "likes to gamble", "doesn't take kindly to losing", and so on...

Anyways, hope this helps.