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Tagg
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  Hello
July 31, 2010 11:14:12 AM    View the profile of Tagg 
Hello!
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  RE: Hello
July 31, 2010 11:29:12 AM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Welcome to the Vast Empire Naval Academy, Tagg.

I see you got my message

Now, for the first stage of academic work, you will need to create a biography for your character. Information can be found here.

When you have finished creating the biography, please post it here for examination by our trainers.

Once again, welcome Tagg.

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  RE: Hello
July 31, 2010 2:38:58 PM    View the profile of Tagg 
Homeworld: Corellia
          Age: 19
          Species: Human
          Native Language: Basic
          Gender: Male
          Skin Color: Pale
          Height: 5'8
          Weight: 179 lbs.
          Hair Color: Black/Dark Brown
          Facial Hair: None
          Eye Color: Brown
          Scars: None
          Tattoos: None


    Physical Description
          Good looking, no scars, dark haired, brown eyes, no facial hair, good looking, normally wears a black jacket, white T-shirt, brown boots, brown slacks, and black gloves off duty.

        Tagg's Background
          Born on Corellia, Coronet, Tagg spent most of his life in a house with his parents, though he would spend most of his time outside, playing with his friends. His parents were not rich however, and he almost never received gifts. When he grew up into his late teenager years he was looking for an education, and decided to take flight lessons. Eventually he had decided that the Navy was the life for him, and decided to join Vast Empire.
         

                        Personality
                Tagg is a very nice person, and he will talk to anyone who starts a conversation, however he does not flirt very often. He also hates fights and tries to avoid them as often as possible.
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  RE: Hello
July 31, 2010 3:52:22 PM    View the profile of Amacuse 
Alright, Tagg... I'm MCPO Amacuse, and I'll be your flight instructor in Chapter II.  But, right now, I'm going to gives you some feedback...

I'm going to have to ask you for more detail in everything.  I want you to make me see the character, make me feel like I've known him my whole life. Pour his soul out onto the paper for me.  I want to know what makes him tick.  I want to know who he is inside, who he's like that, and why he decided to do piloting.
Master Chief Petty Officer Cayden "Amacuse" Tavers

FM/MCPO Amacuse/Γ-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=AE=) (=*SAE*=) [IG]

FL/MCPO Amacuse/B-1/S:137 Raptor/W:46 Defiance/ PLF Saratoga/TF:TH/3FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=AE=) (=*SAE*=) [IG]
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  Character Description
July 31, 2010 10:29:56 PM    View the profile of Tagg 
Homeworld: Corellia
Age: 19
Species: Human
Native Language: Basic
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Pale
Height: 5'8
Weight: 179 lbs.
Hair Color: Black/Dark Brown
Facial Hair: None
Eye Color: Brown
Scars: None
Tattoos: None


    Physical Description
          Good looking, no scars, dark haired, brown eyes, no facial hair, good looking, usually keeps a smile on his face when off duty and having good time, and normally wears a black jacket, white T-shirt, brown boots, brown slacks, and black gloves off duty.

        Tagg's Background
          Born on Corellia, Coronet, Tagg spent most of his life in a house with his parents, though he would spend most of his time outside, playing with his friends. His parents were not rich however, and he almost never received gifts. When he grew up into his late teenager years he was looking for an education, and decided to take flight lessons, as he had always dreamed of flying. Eventually he had decided that the Navy was the life for him, and decided to join Vast Empire, as he had supported it, and wanted to fulfill his dream.
       

                        Personality
                Tagg is a very nice person, and he will talk to nearly anyone who starts a conversation unless they are a sworn enemy of the Vast Empire, however he does not flirt very often. He also hates arguments, losing, smugglers, Jedi, criminals, and any enemy of the Vast Empire. He is also considered a nice person to most of his friends, as he is kind spirited in person.
Amacuse
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  RE: Hello
July 31, 2010 10:32:18 PM    View the profile of Amacuse 
Can I get your background to be at least a paragraph longer?  Two more on there would be great.
Master Chief Petty Officer Cayden "Amacuse" Tavers

FM/MCPO Amacuse/Γ-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=AE=) (=*SAE*=) [IG]

FL/MCPO Amacuse/B-1/S:137 Raptor/W:46 Defiance/ PLF Saratoga/TF:TH/3FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=AE=) (=*SAE*=) [IG]
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August 1, 2010 12:51:25 AM    View the profile of Tagg 
Homeworld: Corellia, Coronet
Age: 19
Species: Human
Native Language: Basic
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Pale
Height: 5'8
Weight: 179 lbs.
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Facial Hair: None
Eye Color: Brown
Scars: None
Tattoos: None


    Physical Description
          Good looking, no scars, dark haired, brown eyes, no facial hair, good looking, usually keeps a smile on his face when off duty and having a good time. Normally wears a black jacket, white T-shirt, brown boots, brown slacks, and black gloves off duty.

        Tagg's Background
          Born on Corellia, Coronet, Tagg spent most of his life in a house with his parents, though he would spend most of his time outside, playing with his friends. He learned mostly through his parents.  His parents were not rich however, and he almost never received gifts. When he grew up into his late teenager years he was looking for an education, and decided to take flight lessons, as he had always dreamed of flying. Eventually he had decided that the Navy was the life for him, and decided to join Vast Empire, as he had supported it, and wanted to fulfill his dream. He then found a recruiter and signed up to join the Navy.
     

                        Personality
                Tagg is a very nice person, and he will talk to nearly anyone who starts a conversation unless they are a sworn enemy of the Vast Empire, however he does not flirt very often. He also hates arguments, losing, smugglers, Jedi, criminals, and any enemy of the Vast Empire. He is also considered a nice person to most of his friends, as he is a kind spirited person.
Bacredi
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  RE: Hello
August 1, 2010 1:02:04 PM    View the profile of Bacredi 
Sorry I know this is kind of repetetive, but could we still get your biography at least a paragraph (minimum 5 sentences) longer?
NLC/WO2 Bacredi/Logistics/VEN/VE
TXO/WO2 Bacredi/Raptor A-2/Platform Saratoga/VENA/VEN/VE
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Tagg
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August 1, 2010 3:09:14 PM    View the profile of Tagg 
I can try, but it may take a while.
Tagg
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  RE: Hello
August 3, 2010 5:23:50 PM    View the profile of Tagg 
Plus the wikia said only two sentences were required, I've done a lot more then that.
Bacredi
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  RE: Hello
August 3, 2010 6:45:14 PM    View the profile of Bacredi 
Wiki wrote:Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs (5 sentences each) with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.
NLC/WO2 Bacredi/Logistics/VEN/VE
TXO/WO2 Bacredi/Raptor A-2/Platform Saratoga/VENA/VEN/VE
[MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:1] [VST:1] [KST:1] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC}
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  RE: Hello
August 3, 2010 8:09:45 PM    View the profile of Tagg 
Oh. I'll try to find 4 more sentences.
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