Moks woke up, opened his eyes and looked around. The apartment he got when he joined the academy would soon be someone else’s and he will get a stupid bed in barracks. He looked at the watch, it was 7.56. Moks yawned and then sat upright like if someone threw a cold bucket of water at his face. Swearing he took of the pyjamas and got his armour on, then he clipped his grenades to his belt, clipped his E-11 to his back and took the borrowed Missile launcher. Then he grabbed a troley on which gun, base and ammo box of E-Web Heavy Repeating Blaster Turret was, which also borrowed from the armoury. After doing all of this he looked at his watch. He sweared loudly, runned to the door with the troley and kicked it open, then he placed the troley in front of him, went outside and started sprting as fast a he could towards to exit, past launge and other aparments.
“SHIT!!!!!!!” Moks swore “I'm gonna be so late!”
He glanced at his watch 8.04. Swearing even more loudly he runned down the stairs, almost making the troley to fall on its side, then outside onto the the green lawn, running into another building and opening the door he said:
“Moks Pokemon, here for Heavy Weapons Speciality training. Sorry I'm late” he said as he dropped the borrowed weapons and breathed very quickly.
“Your apologises accepted but your lateness may have an influence into your future.” said a harsh voice from a dark mass. Moks never saw a simulator at work from outside “Come into the Simulator field” said the voice again.

“I'm Sergeant Marent and I'm your trainer for this session.”
Moks looked around, still breathing fast and then it came to him. They were in a city, a destroyed one. Around couple of other recruits were standing. He thought how many of the were simulated and how many were real. Then he looked back at the sergeant who was looking at him apparently looking for any sings of reaction. Or at least it was what Moks thought the sergeant was doing. Marent looked at the datapad he had in his hand and wrote something which looked like a tick on the screen of it. Then he said:
“Yyyyhym.... So.. You're Moks Pokemon, Heavy Weapons... Or at least you want to be....” He looked at Moks ”Have you used heavy weapons before?”
“Yes I did, I can operate all of them, used them many times” Moks replied,some of the recruits looked at him.
“Fine by me...” Sergeant clicked his datapad and stuffed it into an inside pocket of uniform he was wearing. Apparently he wasn't gonna take part in the simulation itself. “Well, I don't care what experience you have in Heavy Weapons, I don't care even if you're an expert. But right now you are a Trainee and you're under my command. Ok... The point of this simulation is different for every one each of you, although the main objective is the same. Because we are two recruits short they are simulated” He pointed at two stormtroopers at the very end, who looked weirdly stiff “Now, lets move out! I will feed you on your objectives on your ComLink and on your HUD”

Moks turned on his HUD and immediately an arrow appeared pointing to his left and writing apperared Move towards the arrow. Moks moved towards an arrow and writing appeared Good. Now go to the alley corner and get the E-Web ready Moks moved towards it and saw all of the other recruits move to the other side of the alley. Moks looked into the alley and immediately moved back his head, his anger reaching boiling point. Rebels. Now, I have read though all your reports AND your application. Also the history part. I think you will enjoy this although watch what are you shooting at
“So” said the harsh voice making Moks and couple off other recruits jump “Heavy Weapon Trainee will kill everyone in the alley and then Communication Technician Trainee and Combat Engineer Trainee will move into to the door that are there. From there Engi....” Moks didn't bother to listen anymore until he heard “and Heavy Weapons Trainee will cover the ST all the way. Any questions?”
“Yeah” Moks said into his ComLink “Can you repeat the plan? Something happened to  my ComLink”
Sergeant grunted and repeated the plan, this time only to Moks.
“Basically, after you kill every Rebel in the alley, Combat Engineer and Communication Technician Trainees will move into the building from inside the alley along with one of the STs. ST stands for Simulation Trooper. After that, you and the other ST move to the end of the alley. ST will do the recon and your job is to cover him. I don't want him “killed” you understand?”
“Yes, sir”
“These are the beginnings. The overall objective is to wipe all Rebel Forces and capture the bunker on the far end of the opposite street after these buildings. O.K., Trainee”

“Lets move out!” Sergeant said to everyone this time
Moks placed the E-Web next to the corner and set it up, with the help of a ST. The other ST moved to the corner and started shooting. He was doing it clumsily, but the rebels took his attention. After he finished setting the E-Web up. Then he said to the the Engineer and Technician:
“Get ready”
Then he started shooting, practically destroying the alley. Within a minute every single rebel was down, but Moks didn't even had to aim. One rebel was crushed under some rubble that dropped of the wall he hit, the other received a body shot.
“Move, move, move!!” he shouted.
Three of the recruits runned to the door on the left. One of them took out a datapad, and a cable. He “connected” the cable to the interface of the door and the datapad, the started quickly xclicking on it. Then the door opened.
“Wouldn't it be just easier if I blast it open?” Moks asked into his the ComLink
“Perhaps, but I need top marks and anyway, I don't think you are meant to destroy doors.” Someone said.
“Too bad we're only together for this session, or the Speciality Training.” Moks saidDoes it matter? Moks thought I don't think so...

Couple of Rebels runned into the alley, but backed away immediately. Moks didn't bother to wonder why, he just shoot with face of a furious man. He hit the door, making it almost close, although just before it did close another blaster bolt hit it, ripping it off the doorway and sending it flying towards the other side of the alley. Another Rebel just runned in the help the one that survived; the door hit him, knocking him unconscious, next to the rebel. But Moks didn't stop fire. He was shooting and shooting.... and shooting...
“We got a visual on the bunker” Moks's ComLink sprung to life
“What???” Moks said, as if he just wake up
“We got a visual... on the bunker...”
“Fine... Let's go ST” he said to the other trooper, next to him.
Moks started packing up the E-Web but then it came to him that he could just move it. He picked up the gun and the base, swearing and filling strojng pain in his arm in which he was holding the gun and told the ST to pick the Ammo Box. Then they moved. Moks swore again.
“Did someone... put here.. some Bantha poo-doo?? Urgh...” Moks said to himself and moved on.
Luckily no rebels came. But just as they came to an end  of the alley a rebel burst in shooting everywhere. Moks kicked the ST making him fall, the jumped on the rebel you saw what Moks have done and stopped shooting. Moks landed on the rebel making him fall and started choking him. Then he told the ST:
“Pass me a grenade...” Moks punched the rebel almost breaking his jaw.
The ST unclipped one of his 2 grenades, passed it to Moks who stuffed it into the Rebel's mouth making it secure, so he couldn't take it out. Then he kicked him into his ball and set the grenade off. Having only few seconds Moks jumped off the Rebel and jumped again away from the him grabbing the ST. When he looked around he just saw the terrified Rebel face as he tried to take the grenade out of his mouth. Oh shit... Moks thought as the grenade exploded, shattering the rebel head and upper body, ripping his arms off His death was quick and painless. But this is not real combat. I fail this and I will get kicked out, damn it
Moks stood up and walked up to the turret, the the blast knocked it on the floor, pointed at the ST and they again moved it to the corner. Then Moks stand by it and saw a group of Rebels.
“I'm in the position. ST, bring me the Missile Launcher.” Moks said to the ComLink and to the ST.
“Ok, do you see the bunker?” voice said
“Yes, it's lightly defended”
“This may be a trap, you know” said another voice
“Look, there is a lot of imperial bodies here, and the city itself is destroyed. I'm no genius, and I think that it may have took it just recently. It's our best chance. And anyway it's just a training.” Moks said
“Fine.” said the voice that was hacking the door “I'm going to hack their HUDs so they can't see anything on their radars..”
“Do they look like they have radars????” said the second voice, Combat Engineer
“I don't think they even have HUDs...” Moks said, half laughing “I'm bored, going to take them down
“Wait, NO!!!”

Moks started shooting. Couple of the bolts hit the crowd, and couple of rebels falled dead. Moks started laughing maniacally. The crowd shattered and lot of laser fire came down Moks's way. Immediately the other three of the recruits started shooting from the balcony couple of meter left of him. Occasionally they hit. Blast it, this thing is heating up faster than I thought he thought as he glanced at the E-Web interface. Then he stopped firing and picked the Missile Launcher up and aimed at the group of rebel that were shooting at the balcony. Then he shot before the aiming system gave him a “Thumbs-Up” that the rocket would definitively hit the target. Instead he hit a a damaged LandSpeeder making it explode. He looked at the E-Web interface: 67% heat. He shook his head slowly as he heard scream, from the balcony.
“What's going on???!!!” Moks yelled into his ComLink
“The ST is down, that what happened!” hacking guy said
“Ok, no need to get angry....”
Moks breathed. It was only the ST. Then he reloaded the Missle Launcher and pointed at the bunker itself. This time he waited for the Firing Solution. And this shot was also much more satisfactory. There was some gas canisters outside the bunker but apparently also inside because the explosion could have taken out an Imperial Walker. The explosion killed nearby rebels, living the small group that was hiding itself behind a 3 LandSpeeders stacked together . Moks dropped the Missile Launcher and started shooting at them. Couple of bolts hit them, but no explosion happened. Then Moks did something either stupid or brave. He runned into the open, turned on his jetpack, went hi into the air, and shot his JetRocket at the rebels, this time he hit a meter away from them sending them flying but only one dropped dead. But his was what the whole rest was waiting for: after a second a large amount of blaster fire were sent flying. After 10 minutes, the fire fight over.
“Damn.” Moks said and started going downwards: the fuel got depleted. He threw a grenade at the ground making him stop for a moment, which helped cushion the fall. After a minute they all regrouped and started to go to secure the bunker when Sergeant appeared out of nowhere. Then the city turned black and disappeared showing the simulation room.
“You all did well, although you must not allow any-more death from your side, understand?!” said Sergeant Marent
“Yes, sir” all of the recruits said together

“Moks, can I ask you for a private word?” said the sergeant
“Sure” Moks said, unsure
“Listen” Marent said after the other 2 recruits have gone towards the Academy “Your objective was to SECURE the bunker! What do you think that means?!”
“Killing every single enemy that was inside, living no opposition?”
“Partly...” Marent sighed “Securing doesn't means destroying the place you were meant to secure! What if tanks came and all of you run out of ammo except for the E-11?!”
“We would have to find a way to destroy them?” Moks said, getting angry at the sergeant for not getting to the point
“YOU WOULD DIE!!!” Sergeant Marent roared into Moks face “You're not Super Commandos trained to dogde rockets. Tanks are very powerful, and if they fight against squad that includes you, it would take two of these tanks. Of course if you won't screw up.”
“Ok, I get the point...” Moks moaned looking away from the sergeant “Securing doesn't mean the place because it's a strategic point and if I destroy it, it won't be it anymore.” Moks sighed “Can I go now?”
“Grudgingly... I will pass it because you killed every one... but DON'T YOU DARE to do that again!!!”

“Dismissed”
Moks walked out of the simulaton building into the green lawn outside. He took off his helmet. Cold wind slapped his face but he didn't care. He nearly failed. Nearly.

Sorry to jump in here, but one thing Kand didn't mention that I would have definitely failed for was the formatting. Make sure you take a space after each paragraph and line of dialogue. You seem to hit enter once, but you need to do it twice.

So it looks like this.