I'm assuming that your wiki page is done. I have a few things to point out to you that you need to fix.
First off, our wiki apparently doesn't use some of the same templates that you used for your wiki page. You need to use our template, which (along with instructions) can be found
here.
Second, you have some unnecessary information on your wiki page, such as "Equipment/Apparel" and the "Starship(s)" headings. Currently, you don't have any items other than the standard kit, so you can't really put anything in those areas. You will be able to later on as you buy items from ICS, though most people put those sections near the bottom because they aren't as important as the history, physical appearance, etc. Also, you have a heading called "Appearances in Fiction". Because we're a completely different group than whichever one you came from, we don't have the same fiction, so it really makes no sense to have that there.
Third, no Force. It is strictly forbidden. You can't even mention it in passing or make any kind of vague reference to it. We do have a Force-using division, the Dark Jedi Order (DJO), but I'm not going to go into that right now other than to say you'd be wasting your time trying to join right now.
Fourth, I'm getting into the heart of the matter. The Imperial Navy has their own set of guidelines concerning character creation, which can be found
here. I highly suggest you read the whole page and edit your Bio accordingly.
If I sounded condescending or sarcastic at all, please just disregard it because I didn't purposefully do it.
