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Archal
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  Hi.
March 28, 2010 1:18:11 PM    View the profile of Archal 
Hello. I'm a brand-spanking-new recruit. Fresh and eager to rule the universe. Er...how do I start?
Summit
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  RE: Hi.
March 28, 2010 3:58:10 PM    View the profile of Summit 
Welcome to the Vast Empire Imperial Navy, Archal.

I am Petty Officer 2nd Class Summit, an Administrative Assistant in the Vast Empire Imperial Naval Academy (VENA).

One of the Trainers will be posting here shortly to give you the full details about the VENA. If you would like to get a jump start on the first step, you can begin with making a character biography. This is one to two paragraphs describing you character's past before joining the VEN. Other things to include would be your character's personality and any major events that may have happened to the character.

When ever you it to a point where you think its ready, post it here.

The trainers will be able to give you more detailed information about what is to come. I hope to see you in a squadron soon, and again Welcome to the VEN.
Petty Officer Second Class Saul "Summit" Aquila
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March 28, 2010 8:19:33 PM    View the profile of Drac 
Welcome to the Navy, Crewman!

I'm Drac, one of our Trainers here at the Academy. I'll be guiding you through the training regimen. If you ever have any questions about the Navy, the Vast Empire, or anything else about the club feel free to come to me.

You've already completed the first step in training: Initiation. You did this by posting in this forum. Congratulations! Now we move on to the first stage of training.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):

OOC:
= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:

== Appearance ==
(Write about the type of clothing your character wears, how they carry themselves, etc. What would someone notice about them when watching them?)

== Character’s Background ==
(Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)

== Personality ==
(Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)


One more thing to remember is that we write in the third person in the VE. Best of luck!

Here are several links that should help you out:
Flight School,
Chapter I,
Example biography,
Creating a wiki tutorial.

You may also find Wookiepedia to be a great resource for information to help round off your character's rough edges: Wookiepedia

Regards,
-Drac
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(=*A*=)(=*SA*=)

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Drac's VE Wiki Profile: http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Drac
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Archal
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  RE: Hi.
March 29, 2010 8:35:17 AM    View the profile of Archal 
Physical Appearance

Homeworld: Thyferra
Age: 20
Species: Human
Native Language: Galactic Basic Standard
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Pale. Near white.
Height: 5' 11'' and .567 cm
Weight: 182
Hair Color: Raven Black
Facial Hair: None
Eye Color: Dark Brown
Scars: Burnt tissue spiraling from his left elbow down to wrist
Tattoos: None

Physical Description

Seen usually wearing dark brown baggy pants of indeterminable material, long sleeved shirts, a long coat and hide tallboots.
Not so tall, rail-thin, and born with near-white hair.
The half-closed eyes and aloof demeanor often give him an appearance of mocking superiority.

Character’s Background

Archal Reissen, born to Major Yanus Reissen of the Thyferran Aerospace Defense Force and Dr. Melody Bruin. Raised in Arkania Prime during first five years of life.

Accepted at the Thyferran Academy at the standard age of twelve. For reasons undisclosed, left the academy at the age of sixteen.

[Interview enclosed]...excerpt:
Rt. Hon. J. Cracken, PhD: "... would be almost brilliant had he not had this restlessness...I can't explain it. Perhaps because his father is in the fleet...?"

[Interview enclosed]...excerpt:
Dr. M. Bruin, MD PhD DDS: " He doesn't tell anybody anything. I'll be lucky if I can get tonight's dinner preference out of him....I don't know why he left....didn't contact me or his father...I don't know where he is...search the skies if you will, inspector..."

Three years later, A. Reissen arrested for bacta trading on Thyferra outside cartel influence. Released due to insufficient evidence. Suspected ties to Killik smugglers.

From age eighteen to twenty, whereabouts unknown. Sporadic communication with Thyferra.

Believed to have been in the following areas : [Obroa-Skai System, Sarin Sector, Alderaan System, Hapes Cluster]

Suddenly appeared as a recruit in the Imperial Navy Academy. Reasons unknown. Observation ongoing.


Personality

Sharp-eyed and quiet, Archal Reissen is often seen walking the Academy halls in his spare time. Has few friends, and doesn't socialize much. He is fastidiously clean, yet uncaring of overall appearance.

Described by acquaintances as an 'arrogant b-------'. Unfailingly kind to his friends and small fluffy animals.
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  RE: Hi.
March 29, 2010 8:36:02 AM    View the profile of Archal 
Thanks for the welcome, Summit.
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  RE: Hi.
March 29, 2010 8:37:36 AM    View the profile of Archal 
Thanks for the welcome, too, Drac, sir. How did I do?
Drac
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  RE: Hi.
March 29, 2010 8:56:47 AM    View the profile of Drac 
Your Character Background is one of the most creative I've seen, great job. That said, I'd like to see a little more material on the other two sections. If you can come up with another two or three lines for each, you'll be in great shape.

-Drac
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[SoA][MC:2][MC:1][NSR:H][NT:H][CBV][SOV][SoL]
(=*A*=)(=*SA*=)

He is no fool who gives up what he cannot keep in order to gain what he cannot lose.
Drac's VE Wiki Profile: http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Drac
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