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Arcturus_II
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  New recruit reporting for duty
February 22, 2010 4:59:03 PM    View the profile of Arcturus_II 
Arcturus_II reporting for duty, Sir.
Hunter-Morrell
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  RE: New recruit reporting for duty
February 22, 2010 5:40:06 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman.

I am Warrant Officer 1st Class Hunter-Morrell, the Naval Training Executive Officer (or NTX for short) for the Vast Empire Navy, and I will be helping you today.

Now that you have posted a welcome message here on the Naval Academy board, you completed Imperial Initiation and have started Basic Training. BT, as it is called, is mostly Flight School, which prepares you for daily life in a squadron.

The first step in Flight School is to complete Chapter 1, which can be found here.

Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance or hop on IRC and go to the Naval Academy channel which is #VENA. Good Luck.

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Arcturus_II
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  RE: New recruit reporting for duty
February 22, 2010 6:52:29 PM    View the profile of Arcturus_II 
* Physical Appearance
          o Homeworld:  Coruscant
          o Age: 28
          o Species: Human
          o Native Language: Galactic Basic Standard
          o Gender: Male
          o Skin Color: White
          o Height: 6'0"
          o Weight: 200 lbs
          o Hair Color: Brown
          o Facial Hair: Neck beard
          o Eye Color: Hazel
          o Scars: None
          o Tattoos: Family crest on right arm

    * Physical Description
          o Arcturus is average in height at 6 foot even, and build at 200 lbs.  He is not the most handsome man in the room but that works to his favor as he doesn't appreciate unwanted attention.  When someone takes the time they can see he has pain behind his dull hazel eyes.  Arcturus is light on his feet and quick on the draw.

    * Character’s Background
          o Arcturus was born the only child of wealthy merchant class parents on Coruscant.  He was born with a silver spoon in his mouth but his taste for blood drove him to extremes.  At the age of 16 he brutally murdered his parents in order to assume their wealth and finance his bloody ambitions.
            He began a new life of bounty hunting.  He kept his identity hidden behind an armored helmet and gained a reputation for going above and beyond the call of duty, often torturing and mutilating his targets.  He kept an ear from each of his victims as a trophy, but eventually grew to resent his employers for not appreciating his flare for theatrics.

            After a dancer in a cantina broke his heart he slumped into a life of drinking and gambling.  He decided to join the Imperial Navy after gambling away his prized ship and most of his equipment.  His new calling awaits.

    * Personality
          o Arcturus is an unpleasant man.  Despite being intelligent and able to quickly read people, he keeps most at arm's length.  His spoiled upbringing has made him resentful of taking orders.  He chooses to ignore his peers, and keep his head down as he climes the ranks.
[This message has been edited by Arcturus_II (edited February 24, 2010 3:46:08 PM)]
Hunter-Morrell
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  RE: New recruit reporting for duty
February 22, 2010 8:38:31 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
Its definitely a start, but I need more before I can pass it. For Physical Description, does your character have any distinguishing marks? What exactly does he look like? For examples, refer to the wiki.

Also, please give me another paragraph on the History. Its good so far, I just need more. Give me details, like what did he do during his bounty hunting years? How exactly did he spend his upbringing?

I think the Personality is fine, so don't worry anymore about that.

Also, remember that all posts have an edit button that you can use, instead of putting up another post. Its found in the upper right corner of your post and looks like a pen and paper.
StOrMz
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  RE: New recruit reporting for duty
March 1, 2010 9:54:03 AM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Updated and passed, if you haven't already, please move on to Chapter II and post on the "Raptor Squadron" topic in the Navy Main comnet.
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