Aurora Reporting for duty

I have complete chapter 1 of my training, below is a copy of my bio and a link to my wiki page

Physical Appearance
Homeworld: Corusant
Age: 18
Species: Twi'lek
Native Language: Twi'lek and Basic
Gender: Female
Skin Color: Red
Height: 5'11
Weight: 135 lbs
Hair Color: n/a
Facial Hair: none
Eye Color: blue
Scars: left cheek
Tattoos: covered head to foot in a tattoo of charcoal tendrils emanating from her back

Appearance
Aurora is a tall, slim Female Twi'lek, her body is well defined and toned with some muscle. Her skin is smooth and unblemished, bar one scar on her cheek, and she is also covered in a tattoo of charcoal tendrils emanating from her back. Her left forearm and hand are cybernetic due to an accident when she was younger, though she has made no attempt to make it seem normal but leaves it metal covered, and only hides it with a glove.

Personality
Aurora has before been called cold hearted, but this is only by people that do not know her, those that have taken the time to get to know her will find that she may have a cold outer shell as she is not very trustful of those she does not know, but once you have got past that you will find a friendly, loyal and honourable person.

History
As far as she knows she was born on Ryloth, but soon after that she was abandoned at the main space port on the planet. it was here that she was pick up by her father, or at least what she considers her father as he was the one that gave her, her name and brought her up.
Her Father was a Merchant come smuggler, though the latter, illegal side, was only meant to be a 'hobby'. After taking her away from her birth place, they travelled alot, until her father had enough credits to 'settle down', so the travelled to Corusant and bought an apartment which his il-gotten gains, though her father did stop smuggling, he went one step higher and begun running a smuggling ring form there home, raking in more credits. They lived well while things we going well, it didn't last
One major smuggling opportunity came up which her father wanted to see through, so Aurora tagged along with him. However all did not go to plan, there freighter was attacked by pirates intending to steal there precious cargo. They attacked mercilessly, and it was during this attack where she lost her part of her arm. It was lucky that she survived at all, but her father, however, was not so lucky. In the vicinity, miraculously, a Vast Empire Destroyer was on patrol and came to her rescue, fending off the pirates and bring her aboard for medical treatment.
After losing her father and being saved by the Destroyer she had no purpose. So once she was healed, she decided she would join those that saved her, and maybe do some good after all the illegal activity she was involved with.

wiki link - http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Aurora

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