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chainsaw_wezel
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  Awaiting orders, sir!
December 17, 2009 8:35:54 PM    View the profile of chainsaw_wezel 
Awaiting orders, sir! Ready to begin basic training!
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  RE: Awaiting orders, sir!
December 17, 2009 8:43:11 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman.

I am Warrant Officer 1st Class Hunter-Morrell, the Naval Training Executive Officer (or NTX for short) for the Vast Empire Navy, and I will be helping you today.

You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start Flight School and post your character biography in this thread. This biography should be a rough outline of your characters history.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):

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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:

== Physical Description ==
How your character looks goes here, things such as build, stature, etc.

== Character’s Background ==
Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.

== Personality ==
Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!


Also, if you want to create a wiki page for your character (which is highly recommended), check here for a tutorial of sorts.

Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance or hop on IRC and go to the Naval Academy channel which is #VENA. Good Luck.
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  RE: Awaiting orders, sir!
December 17, 2009 8:46:30 PM    View the profile of chainsaw_wezel 
Yes, sir! I'll get right on it. It may take me some time though.
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  RE: Awaiting orders, sir!
December 17, 2009 9:01:53 PM    View the profile of chainsaw_wezel 
= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld: Naboo
Age: 18
Species: Human
Native Language: Basic
Gender: Male
Skin Color: White
Height: 5’2”
Weight: 130
Hair Color: dark brown
Facial Hair: goatee
Eye Color: grey
Scars: long scar going down his forehead and right cheek
Tattoos: none

== Physical Description ==
Strdreamer is short, small, yet slightly stocky. He has medium dark brown hair with a goatee to match. His eyes are grey like a stone. Stardreamer has a long scar that runs down his forehead and his right cheek. He prefers clothing that is, at the same time, formal and casual.

== Character’s Background ==
  Stardreamer was born on Naboo, in the city of Theed. There, he received his basic education. He made good grades in everything except math (his mind wasn’t down-to-earth enough for that). Stardreamer’s father was a pilot, so he grew up flying. He received a job at the age of 16 at a small, well-to-do mechanic shop near his home. The shopkeeper was always pleased with Stardreamer’s work.
  When Stardreamer was 14, his brother, Larik, registered for the Imperial Navy. He did many great things, until he died valiantly in combat defending the first Death Star. After his brother’s death, Stardreamer made a vow to join the Navy, and pay the Rebels back for murdering Larik. So, once his 18th birthday arrived, Stardreamer did just that.

== Personality ==
  Stardreamer is creative, always figuring out new, though sometimes direct, solutions to problems. He’s an avid reader, and always had a talent for writing. When he wants to write something to really dazzle readers, he can. Stardreamer is a keen learner, and fast. He’s a strong hold over his emotions, but can let go when he wishes. Though, he does so rarely. Stardreamer is adamant when it comes to his beliefs, as he is with his work. Stardreamer will continue until victory is his, or until he perishes in the attempt.
Why do they always send the poor?
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  RE: Awaiting orders, sir!
December 17, 2009 9:15:51 PM    View the profile of Drac 
Looking good. Just one thing you need to do: Bring the Physical Description section up to two or three lines long at least. It you go with full sentences you'll get a lot of that length. You should also include some stuff like his favorite clothes, etc.

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  RE: Awaiting orders, sir!
December 17, 2009 9:28:39 PM    View the profile of chainsaw_wezel 
Yes, sir, I will do that. Thank you for the tip!
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  RE: Awaiting orders, sir!
December 17, 2009 9:40:18 PM    View the profile of Drac 
Good work. Please report to the Raptor Squadron discussion topic in the Navy Main Comnet. Also, read and follow the instructions in the story "Raptor Squadron: The Training Run"

-Drac
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