The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman.

I am Warrant Officer 1st Class Hunter-Morrell, the Naval Training Executive Officer (or NTX for short) for the Vast Empire Navy, and I will be helping you today.

You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start Flight School and post your character biography in this thread. This biography should be a rough outline of your characters history.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):

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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:

== Physical Description ==
How your character looks goes here, things such as build, stature, etc.

== Character’s Background ==
Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.

== Personality ==
Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!

Also, if you want to create a wiki page for your character (which is highly recommended), check here for a tutorial of sorts.

Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance or hop on IRC and go to the Naval Academy channel which is #VENA. Good Luck.

= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld: Kalist VI
Age: 22
Species: human
Native Language: Galactic Basic Standard
Gender: Male
Skin Color: light tan
Height: 5” 11
Weight: 180
Hair Color: short black
Facial Hair: clean shaven
Eye Color: deep blue
Scars: none
Tattoos: none

== Physical Description ==
Shinoka is tall uprightly, very in shape the best of posture wears clothing that makes him blend in (not camo), his face is neatly shaven, and his hair is neatly cropped.

== Character’s Background ==
Shinoka was born on Kalist VI near the imperial base, thus he was brought up in the influence of the empire when he was about 12 years old he met a guard at the base named Adil Damodara who taught him the basics of being a soldier such as aiming with blasters, close combat fighting, piloting vehicles and certain “persuasive skills”
When Shinoka was 17 his parents were killed by a getaway slave from the Imperial Base he decided to go out to live on his own, he stowed away on an Imperial storage ship going to Coruscant, once there he managed to find a job transporting “cargo” in between planets. While at Coruscant he used his “persuasive skills” to gain a permanent box seat at the best theatre there. At the age of 22 he decided to join the Empire to have a chance to kill the kind of people that killed his parents.

== Personality ==
Shinoka is a very withdrawn person he keeps to himself most of the time but he is the life of the party with his closest friends, he is rare to laugh but when he does it is a bellowing laugh, his friends say he has the voice of a beluga whale, he has a strange liking of musical theatre.

“ah there he is” murmured Shinoka as he saw the old patched up ARC-170 fighter he was looking for perched on a large asteroid. it belonged to a bounty hunter by the name of Saz Krugal, a bandit which had just stolen 100 Kg worth of Kaldonian valuables. Shinoka threw the throttle forward and his TIE Interceptor plunged into action like a cougar leaping on a defenseless rabbit.
      as soon as he saw the TIE Interceptor racing towards him Saz lifted off and fired 3 proton torpedoes toward Shinoka so that he couldn’t get close enough to use the TIE’s superior maneuverability to great effect. Shinoka managed to blast one of the torpedoes with his missiles before the other two got two close to try and make them explode early. Shinoka then did a barrel roll watching the other 2 torpedoes rush by, but his scanner was showing that they were turning around  and following him, “damn, heat seekers I gotta get rid of these things so I can get back to that ship.”
      Shinoka then pushed the throttle as far as it would go but the torpedoes were closing in, Shinoka redirected his course towards the asteroid Saz’s ship was on earlier, the torpedoes were meters behind him and the asteroid meters ahead when Shinoka killed the thrusters and put on all of his reverse thrusters while rotating 90 degrees. The torpedoes smashed against the asteroid and the debris stopped just short of his ship,
        “whew that was close” muttered Shinoka as a trickle of sweat ran down his brow, “ now after that ship. Saz’s ship was barely in sight but it was going slow and looked like it was leaking something. Shinoka zoomed up to the ship firing at it trying to hit the main generator, seconds later Saz pulled the same trick Shinoka just pulled on the torpedoes. his ship suddenly stopped and Shinoka flew right over him, getting only inches away from the other ship’s hull.
      Shinoka then pulled a 180 and started firing at saz head on, he managed to hit cockpit pit a laser blast and it looked like it was about to shatter when shinoka saw a large orb eject out of the back of Saz’s ship and his headset crackled and he heard Saz’s voice “now you look here imperial scum I just armed  a 50 Kg thermal disintegrator to blow in thirty seconds, I can go to lightspeed to get away from the blast but even with your great speed you would never get away unless you left now,” shinoka, figuring its better to live than die with the bandit  turned his ship and streaked off the other way.   


sorry im not very good with short and i kind of have a necessity  for story sorry.

there ya go i hope its better im kind of out of it right now.

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