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Arturo
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October 24, 2009
9:43:01 PM
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I'm here, ready to go.
~Arturo
Edit: I guess I'm supposed to do a wiki page about myself, so I did. It's very basic at this point, but if I'm missing anything that will rip a hole in the universe if I don't put it on there, let me know. Thanks.
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
1:16:39 PM
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The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman. I am Senior Chief Petty Officer Hunter-Morrell, the Naval Training Executive Officer (or NXO for short) for the Vast Empire Navy, and I will be helping you today. You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start Flight School and post your character biography in this thread. This biography should be a rough outline of your characters history. In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste): - Code: Select all
= Physical Appearance = Homeworld: Age: Species: Native Language: Gender: Skin Color: Height: Weight: Hair Color: Facial Hair: Eye Color: Scars: Tattoos:
== Character’s Background == (Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)
== Personality == (Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)
Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance or hop on IRC and go to the Naval Academy channel which is #VENA. Good Luck. Useful links:
Master Chief Petty Officer Hunter Morrell XO/MCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
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Arturo
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
5:19:12 PM
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*points at original post I already did a bio, here's the link: http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Arturo.
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
5:36:27 PM
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Welcome to the VE Arturo. Good to have you.
|| Phoenix Wing || Viper Squadron || FL/CPO Beliam/Viper 3-1/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE/ (=*A*=)(=*SA*=)[MC][MC:2]  --------------------------------- Profile
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Arturo
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
6:22:40 PM
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Thanks.
Can I work on my post now, Hunter?
~Arturo
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
7:45:16 PM
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Yes, you can. Bravo on the wiki page. Its good.
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
7:50:03 PM
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Here's Chapter II. Its a little long, but enjoy. A shrill alarm sounded in Arturo’s ear, waking him from the daze he had been drifting in and out of. He glanced at his console, and his sensors confirmed what the alarm had already told him: an unidentified fighter had just entered his designated patrol area. Quickly, he powered down all systems, but kept the engines on standby. The ship, which had entered the cluster of asteroids Arturo was charged with patrolling, slowly made its way across the cockpit window. Not recognizing the craft’s design, Arturo watched it fly by carefully, waiting for the right moment. At this distance, it appeared to be an “Ugly”, or a ship cobbled together from whatever was available.
Pirate? Arturo had little time to sit and guess, however. The Ugly passed by without detecting the powered-down Interceptor parked on one of the nearby asteroids, and Arturo made his move. He quickly brought all systems on-line, and activated his repulsorlifts, to get off the rock he was on. As soon as he was three meters off of the surface, he kicked the engines on full, set his lasers to quad-fire, and evenly distributed his shields. The TIE howled with the sudden strain, but complied, and before the pirate knew of his existence, Arturo’s Interceptor was tucked in behind him, 6 o’clock high, and diving. Arturo grinned a little to himself behind his helmet, as he lined up his targeting reticule on the Ugly. The craft, upon closer inspection, appeared to be a Headhunter fuselage with a pair of TIE Fighter wings grafted onto its side. It was soon a glowing ball of gas and debris, however, as Arturo boiled off a piece of the port wing with his first quad shot, then scored a direct hit on the port engine with his second. He flew around the explosion, and returned to his asteroid, to await more intruders, or pickup by a friendly vessel, whichever came first.
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
8:03:53 PM
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Passed. Nicely done. Suggestion: if your character ever thinks in a post, you can italicize it.
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
8:24:52 PM
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After you complete Chapter III, take the Aviator's Exam and send it to StOrMz through the Message Center. You can find the link in my first post near the bottom.
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
10:44:33 PM
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Sorry about that, thought I had done italics. Guess that's why there's an edit button...
Edit: Here's my oh-so-exiting report. Hope it works.
Flight Member Reports
Arturus' Report: October 25th, 2009
Activity: I joined the VE yesterday, on October 24th, and completed my Character Wiki, Chapter I of Flight School. Today, I made my first story post for Chapter II, and this report for Chapter III, as well as my ID Line.
Upcoming plans: Tomorrow I will take the Aviator's Exam and hopefully pass Flight School, get placed in a Squadron (maybe?) and perhaps earn myself a promotion (not counting on it though.)
Questions/Suggestions: These are annoying...
~Arturo
TRN/CRW Arturo Lee/Venom 8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1FLT/VEN/VE
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RE: Arturo
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October 25, 2009
11:31:56 PM
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Exam is finished and submitted for review.
~Arturo
TRN/CRW Arturo Lee/Venom 8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1FLT/VEN/VE
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RE: Arturo
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October 26, 2009
12:11:28 AM
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Looks like Arturus might finally get that mini-me he's been talking about...
Just kidding, man. Welcome to the VE. It's good to see new guys llike you coming in.
-Drac
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RE: Arturo
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October 26, 2009
3:18:34 PM
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Name similarity is coincidental...
But still worth a chuckle
Thanks for the welcome, Drac.
Edit: StOrMz has informed me that I have passed the Aviator's Exam with distinction and that I will be promoted and placed into a squadron shortly.
~Arturo
TRN/CRW Arturo Lee/Venom 8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1FLT/VEN/VE
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RE: Arturo
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October 26, 2009
11:17:25 PM
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If you guys have some spare time, go check out Part II of the "History" portion of my Bio, feedback is appreciated. I'll keep working on it until something else requires my attention...
Thanks.
~Arturo
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RE: Arturo
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October 27, 2009
7:59:31 AM
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Very nice. More detailed than most, but that's not a bad thing. Make sure you get the intra-page links at the top of the page organized well as it gets longer and you'll be set.
-Drac
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RE: Arturo
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October 27, 2009
8:11:23 AM
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Thnak you. Links look alright for the moment, but yeah, the trick is keeping them that way, isn't it? There'll be more to come on my history, as the page says. It's kind of my main project at the moment, as I'm in between Flight School and active duty. Once I get placed, it'll still be a side story for me, one that I plan on really developing.
~Arturo
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