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  "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 12, 2009 10:59:06 PM    View the profile of Valkyrie 
Good evening Sirs, Giovanni "Valkyrie" Voss reporting for training as ordered.
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 12, 2009 11:16:32 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman.

I am Senior Chief Petty Officer Hunter-Morrell, Adjutant to the Naval Training Officer for the Vast Empire Navy (which basically means I'm his assistant ), and I will be helping you today.

You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start Flight School and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):

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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:

== Character’s Background ==
(Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)

== Personality ==
(Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)


Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good Luck.

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Also, it would really help you and us if you would get on IRC which serves as the basis of all communication here in the Vast Empire, aside from the Comnet. You can download IRC here or you can try JavaChat
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 13, 2009 9:41:08 PM    View the profile of Valkyrie 
Sir, Thank-you for the greeting and choosing to conduct my training, it is an honour. I have taken the liberty to create a wikia page for myself with the relevant information, including all that you listed above.

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Valkyrie
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 14, 2009 12:40:28 AM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Welcome to the Vast Empire Valkyrie. I am Second Lieutenant Stormz, the Naval Training Officer.

Your wiki page is very well done. Please move on to Chapter II and post the assignment when you get a chance.
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 15, 2009 11:32:05 AM    View the profile of Valkyrie 
Very well, thank-you sir. I found it difficult staying within the allocated amount of words and I hope you'll forgive me for going slightly over, if it needs to be redone, I will redo it.

Thank-you again.

Chapter II wrote:"Target Acquired." Crewman Voss chimed as his fighters scanner located a wayward enemy X-wing, smoke billowing from the upper right engine, it seemed to have already received some punishment from another source. "Roger that, Valkyrie, permission to engage granted." An unfaced voice, probably a Comms officer, replied over his ship-to-ship communication system, which was exactly what he wanted to hear.
Giovanni jammed the controls forward which pushed the TIE Interceptors engines into a scream as they accelerated to attack speed, Valkyrie projected that this would most likely be a short battle.

He banked right and up to come into visual contact with the wounded bird and let a light smile pass his lips as he read the distance to target meter, 700 meters, 650 meters, 600meters, the smile grew as he closed in upon the helpless target. At 500 meters, there was a flash of light as the X-wing suddenly burst to life, the trail of smoke no longer coming from the seemingly wounded engine. "Damn." Giovanni followed the fighter with his eyes, bringing his own ship to match speed as the distance closed to around 300 meters which would be an ideal range for him. His finger danced across a few more controls and the technical readout chimed the "A-OK" for weapons armed as the targeting computer found a lock. He pressed down hard with his thumbs and saw four satisfying green bolts blast towards the X-wing, who easily dodged by jerking down suddenly, breaking target lock. Giovanni once again followed the target, who was beginning to prove slightly more of a challenge then originally projected, which he found substantially aggravating.

"Lets see how you like this." He murmured to himself, as though he were talking to the wayward fighter, just as his computer chimed weapons lock once again, he pressed down hard once again on the firing control and let loose a barrage of green blaster bolts, but only a few found any substantial purchase which glanced across the X-wings shields. A warning bell activated in his own cockpit which signified that his ship had been scanned, just as he fired a missile at his target.

Suddenly, the X-Wing was gone, the missile soared through the formers position right before it spun out of control and detonated harmlessly in space. The X-wing had been a forward scout serving an unknown purpose. Giovanni clenched his teeth in defeat as he turned his TIE back towards his mothership.
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 15, 2009 4:00:06 PM    View the profile of Drac 
Welcome to the Navy, Valkyrie. I'm Drac, an Operator here at the Academy. Sorry to run you through the gamut of our staff, lol.

Good work on the story post. A few small errors in punctuation, but I've seen a lot worse. Proceed to Chapter III.

-Drac
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 15, 2009 5:37:31 PM    View the profile of Valkyrie 
It's my pleasure to have trained under the bulk of the Academy in one sitting, Sir. As for punctuation, when I read over your reply and then read over my own bit, I can see at least a few of the errors. I'll do my best not to mess up as often in the future.
Chapter III wrote:Valkyrie's Report: October 15th, 2009

Activity: Posted my "Reporting for Duty" thread and have received training in the Naval Academy. Thus far, I have completed chapters I and II.

Upcoming plans: Completion of Flight School and getting assigned to a squadron are my top priorities.

Questions/Suggestions: None

Crewman Valkyrie, Trainee
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TRN/CRW Valkyrie/VENA/WING1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE

Thank-you for your assistance

EDIT: The ID Line and note.
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[This message has been edited by Valkyrie (edited October 15, 2009 8:16:27 PM)]
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 15, 2009 5:57:25 PM    View the profile of Drac 
Good work on the report. Just two things you need to fix on your ID line: [Wing] and [Ship]. I saw that you weren't sure there, so I'll post the information here: All active members are assigned to Phoenix Wing and stationed on the mSSD Atrus. Update your ID line to reflect that and you'll be ready to proceed.

Just so you know: My punctuation comment was just to bring it to your attention. You're doing a lot better than many new members do, so I was a little pickier than usual.

-Drac
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[This message has been edited by Drac (edited October 15, 2009 5:58:28 PM)]
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 15, 2009 8:19:16 PM    View the profile of Valkyrie 
Thank-you for your praise and assistance, post updated with the requested changes, sir. Is there anything else that you can see that needs changing?
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 15, 2009 8:58:44 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
Pass. Take the AE and PM it to StOrMz
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 16, 2009 8:00:31 PM    View the profile of Valkyrie 
I have passed the test and am now awaiting placement, Sirs.
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 17, 2009 12:39:09 AM    View the profile of Drac 
Welcome to Nazgul Squadron, Valkyrie. You can find our conversation topic in the Navy Main Comnet.

-Drac
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  RE: "Valkyrie" Reporting
October 17, 2009 12:54:15 AM    View the profile of Valkyrie 
Thank-you, Sirs, it was a pleasure training under you.
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