SageTsyr
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Reporting for duty
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September 16, 2009
10:50:57 AM
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Sage Tasyr, reporting for duty sir.
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Hunter-Morrell
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 16, 2009
4:50:00 PM
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The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman. I am Senior Chief Petty Officer Hunter-Morrell, Adjutant to the Naval Training Officer for the Vast Empire Navy (which basically means I'm his assistant  ), and I will be helping you today. You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start Flight School and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history. In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste): - Code: Select all
= Physical Appearance = Homeworld: Age: Species: Native Language: Gender: Skin Color: Height: Weight: Hair Color: Facial Hair: Eye Color: Scars: Tattoos:
== Character’s Background == (Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)
== Personality == (Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)
Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good Luck. Useful links:Also, it would really help you and us if you would get on IRC which serves as the basis of all communication here in the Vast Empire, aside from the Comnet. You can download IRC here or you can try JavaChat
Master Chief Petty Officer Hunter Morrell XO/MCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
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SageTsyr
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 17, 2009
1:08:26 PM
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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld: Ryloth
Age: 20
Species: Twi'lek
Native Language: Ryl
Gender: Female
Skin Color: pale lavender
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 135lbs
Hair Color: none,lekka (head-tentacles) are pale lavender
Facial Hair: none
Eye Color: black
Scars: many small burn scars on her arms, several long claw marks across her stomach
Tattoos: none
Sage Tasyr, or Sag'tsyr in her native tongue, was sold into slavery by her parents, as an attempt to save her from the harsh conditions of Ryloth. She was taken to Hollistan and sold to a harsh master, a nasty human called Rewn. After suffering many injuries, she snuck onto a smugglers ship, headed for the Coruscant, thinking it was the rebellion's fault that slavery was so rampant on the Outer Rim, determined to help put an end to the war, so that slavers and outlaws could finally be brought to justice.
She is short, but slender, with lavander hued skin, and long slender head-tails. She tends to keep them pulled forward and wrapped in thin strips of black ribbon. She always wears long sleeves, both to cover her burn scars, and to assert that she is no longer, and will never be, a pleasure slave.
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StOrMz
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 17, 2009
2:31:43 PM
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It's an excellent start, if you could give us a little more background on her personality I will pass you.
2nd Lt. Stormz
Naval Training Officer
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SageTsyr
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 18, 2009
10:14:28 AM
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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld: Ryloth
Age: 20
Species: Twi'lek
Native Language: Ryl
Gender: Female
Skin Color: pale lavender
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 135lbs
Hair Color: none,lekka (head-tentacles) are pale lavender
Facial Hair: none
Eye Color: black
Scars: many small burn scars on her arms, several long claw marks across her stomach
Tattoos: none
Sage Tasyr, or Sag'tsyr in her native tongue, was sold into slavery by her parents, as an attempt to save her from the harsh conditions of Ryloth. She was taken to Hollistan and sold to a harsh master, a nasty human called Rewn. After suffering many injuries, she snuck onto a smugglers ship, headed for the Coruscant, thinking it was the rebellion's fault that slavery was so rampant on the Outer Rim, determined to help put an end to the war, so that slavers and outlaws could finally be brought to justice.
She is quiet, but self confident, and a bit on the sly side. She dislikes anger, but quickly comes to the defense of those she likes, both physically and verbally, often telling people to "go ride a rancor" when she gets pissed. She takes criticism, well, slowly, often radiating anger while thinking about how to fix the problem.
She is short, but slender, with lavander hued skin, and long slender head-tails. She tends to keep them pulled forward and wrapped in thin strips of black ribbon. She always wears long sleeves, both to cover her burn scars, and to assert that she is no longer, and will never be, a pleasure slave.
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Hunter-Morrell
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 18, 2009
3:13:02 PM
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Master Chief Petty Officer Hunter Morrell XO/MCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
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SageTsyr
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 19, 2009
1:17:19 PM
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Sage saw the enemy swing toward her through the view port. She bore down on the controls, firing all four lasers at the X-wing as it came nearer. At the edge of her vision, a missile-lock warning was flashing. She hauled up on the yoke, banking right to try to get behind the X-wing. The other fighter jerked his craft left, but she stayed on him, just out of laser range, but accelerating swiftly.
The X-wing suddenly went up and left in a tight helix, too tight for her to stay with him. She went up the center, weaving in and out of the laser-fire it was showering her with, returning some of her own, trying to get a solid lock for her own missiles. Finally, the other pilot came out of his bone-smashing turn, and leveled on her. Despite the flashing missile-lock warning, she flew straight at it, sending all power to her front shields.
The cross hairs went red, and she fired the first missile, and watched as the X-wing shimmied around it, but directly into her laser fire. It jerked up, and into another turn. This time, she was behind it, redirecting her shields to even power, and locking on with her other missile.
“Got to make this one count,” she said to no one in particular as she pushed the release, and watched as the X-wing pilot tried to jerk out of lock, but it was too late. The missile contacted, and exploded, spewing debris in a small cloud.
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Hunter-Morrell
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 19, 2009
6:14:54 PM
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Master Chief Petty Officer Hunter Morrell XO/MCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
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SageTsyr
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 21, 2009
1:43:30 PM
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SageTsyr's Report: September 21, 2009
Activity: This week I have been completing my training as quickly as possible, as well as learning a lot about the Vast Empire and the Imperial Navy
Upcoming plans: Over the next week, I hope to pass my aviators exam and be placed in my squadron.
Questions/Suggestions: Any constructive criticism on my quality of writing is appreciated.
TRN/CRW SageTsyr/VEN/VE
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StOrMz
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 21, 2009
2:09:51 PM
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Passed, please complete the Aviator's Exam and send it to me.
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SageTsyr
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 23, 2009
12:35:34 AM
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SageTsyr's Report: September 23, 2009
Activity: N/A
Upcoming plans  ue to internet complications, I will not be able to access the Vast Empire until next week. Alas, all my hard work will have to be put on hold.
I hope this is an acceptable way to let you know of the interruption in my schedule.
Questions/Suggestions: none
TRN/CRW SageTsyr/VEN/VE
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StOrMz
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RE: Reporting for duty
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September 23, 2009
1:32:09 PM
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That's fine man, hope all is well. See you then 
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