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Skorge
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  New Person
September 8, 2009 10:55:45 AM    View the profile of Skorge 
Just signed up, ready for action.
Hunter-Morrell
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  RE: New Person
September 8, 2009 4:47:38 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman.

I am Senior Chief Petty Officer Hunter-Morrell, Adjutant to the Naval Training Officer for the Vast Empire Navy (which basically means I'm his assistant ), and I will be helping you today.

You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start Flight School and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):

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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:

== Character’s Background ==
(Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)

== Personality ==
(Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)


Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good Luck.

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Vast Empire Imperial Navy
Master Chief Petty Officer Hunter Morrell
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Skorge
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  RE: New Person
September 8, 2009 5:33:21 PM    View the profile of Skorge 
Homeworld:Mandalore
Age:22
Species:Human
Native Language:Mandalorian
Gender:Male
Skin Color:Tan
Height:6'4
Weight:225lbs
Hair Color:black (crew cut)
Facial Hair:5 O'clock shadow
Eye Color:Brown
Scars:none
Tattoos:Right shoulder Imperial Emblem

== Character’s Background ==
Ordo "Skorge" Skiratta was born and raised on Mandalore, trained by his father he learned to fight at an early age, but he liked piloting ships better then he did ground fighting.

In his teenage years Ordo got the name skorge from a group of teenagers who always pestered him, he hated the name and loathed them for calling him it. One day he had, had enough an killed all single handly with a vibro-sword, this caused him to be thrown off his home world.

As he grew Skorge went from merc job to merc job. Finally on one such job skorge was sent after a reble fighter ace who had a hefty bounty on his head from a hut. Skorge tracked this ace to a  small rebel outpost where, to his dismay, Skorge found an Imperial fleet had engaged th outpost. Not wanting his prey to get away, Skorge quickly joined the fray, and took out not only the ace, but four other rebel ships.

The captain of the commanding Star Destroyer had Skorge brought on board and after a brief discussion the Mandalorian had agreed to join the imperial Navy.

== Personality ==
Skorge is a very cold human begin he general disdain for everyone is apparant, Some people believe that he is a blood-thirsty killer who will do anything to get the job done, and they are right. When given an order he exicutes it to the best of his ability.
StOrMz
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  RE: New Person
September 8, 2009 7:27:27 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
A few small grammatical errors, but nothing we can't live with

Please move on to chapter II. Post it here when you have finished.

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Skorge
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 7:30:43 AM    View the profile of Skorge 
The explosion in front of Skorge was brilliant, having just destroyed yet another rebel fighter. Then thats when the alarm went off, while running down the X-wing, Skorge forgot about the Rebel frigate that slipped in behind him. The frigate, a Corellian Corvette class, had fired a torpedo at him. Skorge tried rolling his TIE_Interceptor to starboard and port, but he couldn't shake the torpedo loose. Thats when he felt an urge to juke right.

He did and there it was, the frigate that fired the torpedo. The hull of the ship was blackened over from cannon fire, and on Skorge's HUD indicated that its shields were down. Skorge gunned his engines, he nearly hit the frigate, but he rolled up and over it. The torpedo didn't though and slammed into the frigate's lateral line. The hull boiled away, explosive decompression's erupted from the ship. The explosion was epic, skorge smiled wondering how many kills that counted as.
Skorge
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 9:00:52 AM    View the profile of Skorge 
Oh and thank you for the welcome, I hope to do good work here.
"I hear voices in my head they council me, they understand they talk to me."
"They tell me thing that I will do, they show me things I do to you they talk to me!"
StOrMz
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 10:08:19 AM    View the profile of StOrMz 
I'm going to have to ask you to expand on this. The requirement for Ch. II is atleast 250 words. You are currently at 159. What you have now is good, just add more detail and things to it.

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Skorge
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 10:09:27 AM    View the profile of Skorge 
Aye aye sir.
"I hear voices in my head they council me, they understand they talk to me."
"They tell me thing that I will do, they show me things I do to you they talk to me!"
Skorge
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 10:28:18 AM    View the profile of Skorge 
The explosion in front of Skorge was brilliant, having just destroyed yet another rebel fighter. Then thats when the alarm went off, while running down the X-wing, Skorge forgot about the Rebel frigate that slipped in behind him. The frigate, a Corellian Corvette class, had fired a torpedo at him. Skorge tried rolling his TIE_Interceptor to starboard and port, but he couldn't shake the torpedo loose. Thats when he felt an urge to juke right.

He did and there it was, the frigate that fired the torpedo. The hull of the ship was blackened over from cannon fire, and on Skorge's HUD indicated that its shields were down. The collision alam chimmed faster as each second passed. He knew the torpedo was closing and if he didn't do something, he be debris soon. Skorge gunned his engines, he nearly hit the frigate, but he rolled up and over it. The torpedo didn't though and slammed into the frigate's lateral line. The hull boiled away, explosive decompression's erupted from the ship. The explosion was epic, skorge smiled wondering how many kills that counted as.

He quickly spoted an A-wing fighter, seeing his new target Skorge quickly altered his course and chased after it. The A-wing tried to lose him but Skorge was better than that. Skorge waited for a clean shot before he fired. Then it came, Skorge squezzed the trigger and his TIE-Interceptor let loose a flurry of blaster bolts. The bolts nailed the cockpit of the rebel, causeing it to sparked and explode. Skorge grinned and tallied up yet another kill.
"I hear voices in my head they council me, they understand they talk to me."
"They tell me thing that I will do, they show me things I do to you they talk to me!"
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 10:36:42 AM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Passed, on to chapter 3 please.
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Skorge
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 10:40:08 AM    View the profile of Skorge 
If you don't mind me asking what exactly am I suppose to do in Ch. III
"I hear voices in my head they council me, they understand they talk to me."
"They tell me thing that I will do, they show me things I do to you they talk to me!"
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 11:24:22 AM    View the profile of StOrMz 
You are to create a mock report.
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 11:32:11 AM    View the profile of Skorge 
Skorge's Report: September 8th, 2009

Activity: I've been on Pay-per click and voting for the Vast Empire.

Upcoming plans: Next week I will work on my story and what ever assignments are sent my way.

Questions/Suggestions: Negative

Crewman Skorge over and out
"I hear voices in my head they council me, they understand they talk to me."
"They tell me thing that I will do, they show me things I do to you they talk to me!"
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September 9, 2009 1:03:27 PM    View the profile of Ibram Tyrol 
Thank you Skorge, you may now move on to take the Aviator's Exam.

Please send it to Stormz via Comnet PM when you are finished.
"Determining the appropiate level of interference in somebody elses war is never a simple matter."

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Skorge
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 1:13:35 PM    View the profile of Skorge 
Where do I look to take the exams sir?
"I hear voices in my head they council me, they understand they talk to me."
"They tell me thing that I will do, they show me things I do to you they talk to me!"
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September 9, 2009 1:34:53 PM    View the profile of Ibram Tyrol 
It's on the wiki, there should be a link on the same page as the Chpaters.
"Determining the appropiate level of interference in somebody elses war is never a simple matter."

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Viper Squadron
Commanding Officer
We fly, you die

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Skorge
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 1:36:28 PM    View the profile of Skorge 
Thank you, sir.
"I hear voices in my head they council me, they understand they talk to me."
"They tell me thing that I will do, they show me things I do to you they talk to me!"
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 4:37:15 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Passed and placed.
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September 9, 2009 4:40:41 PM    View the profile of Skorge 
Viper squadron, sir?
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September 9, 2009 7:19:32 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Aye, it's a good squadron
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 7:20:11 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
*snorts*
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September 9, 2009 7:38:40 PM    View the profile of Skorge 
Yes sir, and sorry Morrell I didn't get to join your squadron, but you two have nothing to fear I will preform my orders to the very best of my ability and will stop at nothing to get the job done you can count on me. One question though how to I take the other aviator exams.
I hear voices in my head they council me, they understand they talk to me."
"They tell me thing that I will do, they show me things I do to you they talk to me!"
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  RE: New Person
September 9, 2009 8:06:49 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
Wow. That was weird. I'm not used to being called Morrell. Its a new experience for me
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