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Louli
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[VE-NAVY] Crewman
 
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  New Recruit
September 2, 2009 8:17:33 PM    View the profile of Louli 
Just reporting in.
Hunter-Morrell
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Hunter-Morrell
 
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  RE: New Recruit
September 2, 2009 8:36:19 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman.

I am Senior Chief Petty Officer Hunter-Morrell, Adjutant to the Naval Training Officer for the Vast Empire Navy (which basically means I'm his assistant ), and I will be helping you today.

You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start Flight School and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):

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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:

== Character’s Background ==
(Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)

== Personality ==
(Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)


Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good Luck.

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Also, it would really help you and us if you would get on IRC which serves as the basis of all communication here in the Vast Empire, aside from the Comnet. You can download IRC here or you can try JavaChat
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Louli
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Louli
 
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  RE: New Recruit
September 3, 2009 10:27:27 PM    View the profile of Louli 
= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld: Tatooine,
Age: 24
Species: Human
Native Language: Galatic Basic Standard
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Tan
Height: 6"4
Weight: 210 LBs
Hair Color: Brown
Facial Hair: Tiered-goatee
Eye Color: Brown
Scars: None
Tattoos: None

== Character’s Background ==
He was born and raised by moisture farmers who owned several vaporators allowing them to gain a decent amount of credits. His parents were very skilled moisture farmers allowing them to gain a lot of money. They home schooled Ruik and rarely left him in the house allowing him to be a very social person. His parents always encouraged him to do things his way even though they didn't like it or disapproved of it. His parents were very old which brought up questions on how Antos would be born to such a old couple. Antos' parents was slightly on the rich side due to that his grandfather dieing due to natural reasons leaving his wealth to them.

While growing up Ruik had started to have a dislike in moisture farming and started to like the designs of starfighters and how to fly them. While being home schooled he would read up on books that had information about how to operate a starfighter, their designs, and how to fly one in his spare time. Ruik had many friends and he appreciated their company and they appreciated him. He developed a sort of way to speak to others without any consequences if he was to get in trouble. His friends had once had a contest, whoever makes up the worst or weirdest name would get to ride on one of his friend's new landspeeder. Ruik had made up the name "Louli", his friends had decided to keep calling him that and hence the nick name stayed with him.

One day a pack of Tusken Raiders invaded their house stealing most of their money and injuring his father's legs disallowing him to farm anymore. His mother continued to farm but their sales started to drop causing them to be poor. Ruik was forced to join in something he is interested in. He joined the Imperial Navy and would give all his credits to his parents when he is relieved from duty.

== Personality ==
Is very playful and social when in serious situations. He will not hesitate to lead. He is very active and craves the thrill of danger. He is also respectful towards his superiors and family members. He isn't one to disobey orders but he will disobey them on rare occasions. He has a very great sense of humor and will joke around once every while either trying to lighten up a grim situation or just to make someone laugh. Is very bright coming to formula's and solving things such as puzzles. Will put his friends and family first before his naval career that may cost him his life in the near future. Will push himself to finish out a order and won't give up until he has pushed himself too far.
StOrMz
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  RE: New Recruit
September 4, 2009 12:33:32 AM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Good work

Passed, on to chapter II please.
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Louli
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Louli
 
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  RE: New Recruit
September 4, 2009 2:38:40 PM    View the profile of Louli 
Chapter II - The Post


Louli quickly rolled his Interceptor avoiding the missile that was fired at him through the first pass. Laser fire and explosions appeared near his Interceptor and he quickly moved his Interceptor down. He saw a enemy X-Wing Fighter directly in front of him. He quickly rolled his Interceptor but kept it at the same spot, while the Interceptor was rolling he pressed the fire button, the Interceptor’s cannons fired off quickly at the X-Wing Fighter. All of the attempts failed and the X-Wing Fighter tried to shake off Louli by rolling multiple times. Louli titled his Interceptor until he was slanted, he then placed his thumb onto the fire button and a series of lasers came rapidly at the X-Wing Fighter. Suddenly one of the laser’s his one of the X-Wing Fighter’s wing causing the hull to breach. After the hull breached it’s wires was showing and sparks had flew from the laser’s impact from the hull.

The X-Wing Fighter suddenly dropped down trying to loose Louli. Louli followed the X-Wing Fighter’s path and then dropped down. Louli released a barrage of lasers at the X-Wing Fighter. The Fighter started to fly in zig zags trying to avoid the laser fire. Louli had gotten tired of chasing the Fighter at such a low speed. He pushed the foot control and the Interceptor started to get closer to the X-Wing Fighter. After a few seconds the Interceptor was right behind the X-Wing Fighter. The Fighter tried to zig zag again trying to shake off Louli. Louli pressed his thumb down on the fire button and lasers appeared out of his cannon. The lasers hit the hull of the back of the X-Wing Fighter, most of the lasers hit the engine causing it to combust in flames. When Louli saw the starfighter combust in flames he released his foot from the controller and the Interceptor stopped while the X-Wing continued to fly.

Suddenly the cockpit of the X-Wing combusted into flames and after a few seconds the X-Wing started to fly in a weird manner. The X-Wing quickly exploded after the entire starfighter combusted.
Hunter-Morrell
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  RE: New Recruit
September 4, 2009 3:06:38 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
Nicely done. About 100 words over, but unless anybody else objects I'm giving this a pass. Onto Chapter 3.
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Louli
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Louli
 
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  RE: New Recruit
September 4, 2009 3:44:59 PM    View the profile of Louli 
Louli's Report: September 4th, 2009

Activity: I wrote four story posts, and have been on IRC lately.

Upcoming plans: Next week I'll try to continue my support with the current mission post.

Questions/Suggestions: None

Crewman Louli TRN/CRWLouli/Wing 1/mSSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE

OOC:
I didn't put a squadron because I don't know if I'm allowed to place a random squadron in it.
Hunter-Morrell
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  RE: New Recruit
September 4, 2009 3:55:23 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
Passed. Take the AE and send it to StOrMz for grading.
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