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Dairy
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  Wanna get started as soon as possible! Lez do it!
August 23, 2009 12:01:13 AM    View the profile of Dairy 
Howdy; thought I'd try and get some stuff out of the way before it was asked of me- I'm anxious to get into a squadron!  Can't wait to get started- good to be in the Vast Empire Navy!

Bio:

First Name: Jasper
Surname: Crane
Homeworld: Talasea

Height: 6ft, 1 (&1/4)in
Weight: 172.7lbs
Skin Color: Black
Hair Color: Black
Hair Styling: Short

Brief Biography:

Jasper Crane was born on the planet Talasea, just outward from the core rim; it was a heavilly forested planet notorious for vicious thunderstorms and heavy rains.  Jasper's father worked for the local government as a construction crew manager and his mother served several years at a private school teaching linguistics.

The young Crane finished primary school and was beginning to focus on his interests in electronics and mechanics when he left after his twelfth birthday for a special trip his parents had ordered for him.  A local trader that flew around the inner-rim quite frequently had taken a liking to young Jasper after he'd asked him if he needed any up-and-coming mechanics; he'd agreed to take him to Alderaan first, then Coruscant, and then a quick trip down to Corellia before returning home; it would be the longest he'd ever been from home, and the only time he'd ever been off planet.  The day he left his father gave him enough credits to more than pay for food and anything else that might interest him while his mother simply pecked him on the cheek and told him to "be careful and have fun."  Jasper Crane loved his parents.

The day after he left, a gentlemen landed on Talasea who quickly attracted attention to himself, whether he wanted it or not.  They said he was a jedi forced into exile after the Empire had decided to terminate the services of his fellow knights (which had been about ten years before Jasper's birth).  Despite many warnings from Imperial Holonet, warnings that specifically stated that anyone with the knowledge of jedi and their whereabouts should report them or risk severe punishment, the people of the planet's largest city knowingly housed him and assisted him in hiding transportion data that would have linked him to their planet, further enshrouding him. 

While the Talaseians were technically brilliant, they were no match for the encryptors and research super-computers on Coruscant; the computers had instantly noticed the correction that the Talaseians had entered into the system and quickly went to work trying to understand what had changed.  Two weeks later, the computers had, as a minor, supplementary task, re-compiled three years of transportion and trade data and then re-engineered the destinations of several billion individuals.  Even though there were still thousands of individuals on this final list, a certain name, the name of a jedi, turned on a special program output: "Jedi location found!"  This information quickly worked its way from the massive computer stations to the super-star destroyer known as Executor.  When Darth Vader learned of such potential whereabouts, he didn't think twice about the chances of the person actually being a jedi- he acted without hesitation.  Taking a personal ship, he landed quietly on Talasea, found the jedi in the mountains, and slayed him.  The next day, the Executor arrived at Talasea and bombarded it as punishment for hiding the jedi.  The planet was reduced to cinders.

When Jasper returned with the merchant to Talasea, the planet was dark with mass blurs of red and orange- the planet had been scorched and fires were even then reavaging the hillsides where he'd lived.  While both he and the pilot were distraught beyond understanding, they were both equally anxious to learn of the cause; the pilot, who was an older gentlemen named Harris, was enraged to find that his people had housed a jedi, and deeply saddened that they'd thought they could fool the Imperials.  Neither were angry at the Imperials though: they'd acted justly as far as they could tell- they'd acted upon their promise and that was that.  Rather than become angry, in fact, Jasper began to carry with him a heavy understanding of justice and what it meant to abide by the law.

Bonded by their trip and common losses, Jasper moved to Corellia where he began taking odd-jobs as a mechanic, electrician, and under Harris's tutelage, a freighter pilot.  On his twenty-third years, already a well-traveled merchant, Jasper got his first look at Imperial fighter craft when he was saved from Rebellion capture; he was fascinated...  But unable to join just yet; he had a series of debts he owed for purchasing his own craft and supplies.  Two years later, at the age of twenty-four, five years after the fall of the Empire, Jasper signed for the Imperial Navy at an outpost on Lotaith.

Attitude/Personality

Jasper is a gentlemen to the likes many do not even know still exist.  Despite a background in trade, he was never involved in smuggling, as this was against his personal belief in abiding by the law.  And while he is very kind, he has no such decency to his enemies; despite his supposed morals or ethics amongst his peers, he is intentionally cold and brutal to the enemy.  Don't ask him why because it's not something he can explain, but he has a very deep hatred for those who oppose his law and order.
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Hunter-Morrell
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  RE: Wanna get started as soon as possible! Lez do
August 23, 2009 11:22:02 AM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman.

I am Senior Chief Petty Officer Hunter-Morrell, Adjutant to the Naval Training Officer for the Vast Empire Navy (which basically means I'm his assistant ), and I will be helping you today.

You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start Flight School and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):

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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
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== Character’s Background ==
(Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)

== Personality ==
(Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)


Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good Luck.

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  RE: Wanna get started as soon as possible! Lez do
August 23, 2009 2:07:06 PM    View the profile of Dairy 
BLAH!  The biography is done- ganna put it up on the wiki in two seconds...
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August 23, 2009 3:18:58 PM    View the profile of Dairy 
Ope!  So is the next part: it's uploaded to the wiki.  What should I do next?  Thanks for the quick responses, btw!
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August 23, 2009 3:33:17 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
No problem. Good work on going on and making you a wiki. Saves a little bit of time for you later. Ok. You are to go on to Chapter Two. You should be able to find the link to the page in my first post.
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August 23, 2009 4:41:12 PM    View the profile of Dairy 
Jass froze for a moment; had he actually seen it or were his eyes playing tricks on him?  Then the blip moved...

"Viper One!  Check your four o'clock!"  He was clutching the controls so tightly that the rest of his body could hardly move; how was he still breathing?

"I see it!" You gotta be shittin me!  "Form up, Two; stay starboard..."  Jass glanced back down at the radar and noticed that the craft was charging toward them, a small-cruiser by the looks of it.

"I'm ganna try to hail it- hold tight..."  Suddenly, Viper One's cockpit lit up in bright orange, the interior, and then just as quickly the rest in a fiery explosion that was quickly suffocated by the vacuum.  Jass stared in horror as the blips suddenly separated- An x-wing escort!  Jass didn't have time to think as the smaller cruiser veered off and the X-wing bolted toward him.  Looping over his training officer's debris, he was surprised to find that his stomach wasn't turning this time.  More bolts!  Jass ever so slightly rolled to avoid the fire, seeing the X-wing for the first time in detail!  He pulled the trigger vigorously, planting two bolts on the front shield of the X-wing just as it reached the hundred meter mark- and then it was past! 

Throwing down the throttle and pulling hard on the yoke, Jass turned into a hard, shallow loop that brought him onto his enemy's six; his stomach had turned that time.  Again, as if driven by the very blood coursing through his veins, Jass pulled the trigger and emerald bolts pierced the deep black of space, scorching the hind-quarters of the X-wing.  Damn- more shields...  The X was pulling hard into another turn, but before he or Jass could make another move, the X-wing was suddenly turned into vapor as the guns from the nearby lancer-frigate finally caught up with the events unfolding.  Jass let go of the controls and felt for the first time what pilots meant by "total exhaustion."

That's like 350, is that okay?  And I know it's only one pass, but it seemed like a fairly realistic display of what might actually happen. Thoughts?
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  RE: Wanna get started as soon as possible! Lez do
August 23, 2009 4:50:58 PM    View the profile of Dairy 
Chapter Three Assignment?

Dairy's Report: 08-23-2009

Activity: This week I started training for the summer Olympics and tried to re-enact the musical "Cats" by myself.

Upcoming plans: I plan to go back to school (starts tomorrow) and complete my training here on the VE!

Questions/Suggestions: That first one was a joke...  I do that.

CRW Dairy
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August 23, 2009 4:58:41 PM    View the profile of Drac 
Hmm...not sure Ibram will approve your killing him off. As a Nazzie, though, I can only applaud.

The only recommendation I have for you is to be careful during mission topics- others will quickly take offense if you write out serious injuries or death for their character. It's best to notice injuries others have given their own characters and to comment, as well as to write injuries in for your character as you feel it appropriate.

Welcome to the VEN, btw! You're looking good.

-Drac
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He is no fool who gives up what he cannot keep in order to gain what he cannot lose.
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August 23, 2009 5:10:18 PM    View the profile of Dairy 
Thanks!  And dully noted, lol.  Is there anyone else who can put me through the training?  I just finished up Chapter 3 and the Aviator's, but it looks like my trainer took off.
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August 23, 2009 9:28:10 PM    View the profile of Drac 
I'm an Operator here at the Academy, so I can do so. Since Hunter has been working with you, I preferred not to interfere...one thing to remember about the VE is that sometimes things do not move particularly fast here. Patience is a big part of interaction with the club. Keep that in mind and you'll do fine.

As for your 2nd and 3rd Chapters: Good work. You pass. You've said you finished the Aviator's Exam, so all that remains is for you to PM it to Ensign StOrMz. He will grade it and place you in a squadron if you pass.

-Drac
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August 23, 2009 9:48:27 PM    View the profile of Dairy 
Excellent, and thanks for the advice: it's spot on
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August 24, 2009 12:40:52 AM    View the profile of Dairy 
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