Communications Network
Vast Empire  -  New Posts  -  Search  -  Statistics  -  Login 
 
ComNet > Imperial Navy > Archived Naval Academy > reporting for duty
 
 
 
Author
Topic:  reporting for duty
scorpius
ComNet n00b
 
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
 
Post Number:  2
Total Posts:  19
Joined:  Aug 2009
Status:  Offline
  reporting for duty
August 4, 2009 11:33:52 AM    View the profile of scorpius 
Scorpius Black reporting for duty
Drac
ComNet Cadet
 
Drac
 
[VE-NAVY] Petty Officer 1st Class
 
Post Number:  264
Total Posts:  2191
Joined:  Jan 2009
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 4, 2009 2:33:04 PM    View the profile of Drac 
Welcome to the Navy, Crewman!

I'm Drac, one of our Trainers here at the Academy. I'll be guiding you through the training regimen. If you ever have any questions about the Navy, the Vast Empire, or anything else about the club feel free to come to me.

You've already completed the first step: Initiation. You did this by posting in this forum. Congratulations! Now we move on to the first stage of training.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):


OOC:
= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:

== Character’s Background ==
(Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)

== Personality ==
(Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)



One more thing to remember is that we write in the third person in the VE. Best of luck!

Here are several links that should help you out:
Flight School,
Chapter I,
Example biography,
Creating a wiki tutorial.

You may also find Wookiepedia to be a great resource for information to help round off your character's rough edges: Wookiepedia

Regards,
-Drac
FL/PO1 Drac/Nazgul 3-9/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1st Imperial Fleet/VEN/VE (=*A*=)(=*SA*=) [SoA][MC:2][MC:1]
Defendo est optimus (To Defend is noble)
Drac's VE Wiki Profile: http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Drac
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
scorpius
ComNet n00b
 
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
 
Post Number:  3
Total Posts:  19
Joined:  Aug 2009
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 4, 2009 6:11:31 PM    View the profile of scorpius 
= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld: Iridonia
Age: 32
Species: zabrak
Native Language: Zabraki
Gender: male
Skin Color: red and black
Height: 2 meters
Weight: 167 Lbs
Hair Color: none
Facial Hair: none
Eye Color: purple
Scars: none
Tattoos: Tribal tatoos cover his face

== Character’s Background ==
starting at a young age, Scorpius help his father repair ships. He was very interested in everything about every ship he could find. By the age of 18 he ran the shop for his father. At 20 his parents left Iridonia and left Scorpius alone with the shop and a small home.
  when he turned 30, the empire came to iridonia recruiting pilots and foot soldiers. they offered Scorpius a chance to learn new thing about ship and even how to pilot them. He signed on within the next year.

== Personality ==
Scorpius Black is a fan of chaos. He is on no ones side, but will help one or the other if it will cause chaos. he is some what of a mercenary aswell. His legiance currently lies with the empire, but he will work for the highest bidder on the side.
Hunter-Morrell
ComNet Veteran
 
Hunter-Morrell
 
[VE-NAVY] Senior Chief Petty Officer
[VE-VEEC] Word Slinger
 
Post Number:  1045
Total Posts:  2071
Joined:  Jun 2008
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 4, 2009 7:02:11 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
Good, but add another paragraph or so to both the background and personality sections.
Vast Empire Imperial Navy
Senior Chief Petty Officer Hunter Morrell
XO/SCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
scorpius
ComNet n00b
 
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
 
Post Number:  5
Total Posts:  19
Joined:  Aug 2009
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 5, 2009 10:14:58 AM    View the profile of scorpius 
== Character’s Background ==
starting at a young age, Scorpius help his father repair ships. He was very interested in everything about every ship he could find. By the age of 18 he ran the shop for his father. At 20 his parents started borrowing money they couldn't pay back. they soon fled Iridonia and left Scorpius alone with the shop, a small home, and a large debt.
  by the age of 30, he was able to fully pay off his parents debt. He would never forgive his parents. shortly after his 31st. birthday, the empire came to iridonia recruiting pilots and foot soldiers. they offered Scorpius a chance to learn new thing about ship and even how to pilot them. He signed on within the next year.

== Personality ==
Because of how he grew up, Scorpius Black is a fan of chaos. He is on no ones side, but will help one or the other if it will cause chaos, the means to spread chaos, or monetary gains. he is some what of a mercenary aswell. His legiance currently lies with the empire, but he will work for the highest bidder on the side. Scorpius is very reliable in battle, but also very unpredictable. Some day, his luck might run out.
StOrMz
ComNet Marshal
Imperial Baronet

 
StOrMz
 
[VE-NAVY] 2nd Lieutenant
[VE-VEEC] Ink Slinger
 
Post Number:  903
Total Posts:  2218
Joined:  Oct 2004
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 5, 2009 1:47:31 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
It's getting better, tell us about his childhood though.

When creating a character try to answer these (and other questions you may think of):

- Where did he grow up?
- What were his hobbies?
- What did his parents do?

Things like this give us more background and round out a character better. The better his background is laid out, the more real the person will look to us.
NTO/2Lt StOrMz/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1 Fleet/VEN/VE
(=A=)(=^SA^=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=)(=FOCE=)[NSM][IG][SWC][SRC][BI]


Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Imagel]
Imperial Baronet of Kashyyyk
scorpius
ComNet n00b
 
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
 
Post Number:  6
Total Posts:  19
Joined:  Aug 2009
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 6, 2009 10:44:17 AM    View the profile of scorpius 
== Character’s Background ==
  from the day he could hold an arc welder, he would walk around with one. his dream was to follow in his fathers footsteps and one day run his ship repaire shop. when he turned 10,Scorpius helped his father repair ships. He was taken on as an apprentice. When he wasn't in the garage, he was out with his friends. For fun they would travel to the swamps not far from the town and just relax.
  He was very interested in everything about every ship he could find. By the age of 18 he ran the shop for his father. At 20 his parents started borrowing money they couldn't pay back. they soon fled Iridonia and left Scorpius alone with the shop, a small home, and a large debt.
  by the age of 30, he was able to fully pay off his parents debt. He would never forgive his parents. shortly after his 31st. birthday, the empire came to iridonia recruiting pilots and foot soldiers. they offered Scorpius a chance to learn new thing about ship and even how to pilot them. He signed on within the next year.
StOrMz
ComNet Marshal
Imperial Baronet

 
StOrMz
 
[VE-NAVY] 2nd Lieutenant
[VE-VEEC] Ink Slinger
 
Post Number:  907
Total Posts:  2218
Joined:  Oct 2004
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 6, 2009 4:35:28 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Much better

On to chapter II please!

2nd LT. Stormz
Naval Training Officer
NTO/2Lt StOrMz/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1 Fleet/VEN/VE
(=A=)(=^SA^=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=)(=FOCE=)[NSM][IG][SWC][SRC][BI]


Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Imagel]
Imperial Baronet of Kashyyyk
scorpius
ComNet n00b
 
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
 
Post Number:  7
Total Posts:  19
Joined:  Aug 2009
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 7, 2009 11:03:41 AM    View the profile of scorpius 
As Scorpius passed the small asteroid, the scanner in his TIE Interceptor picked up a small reading. This was the reason he was out here in the first place. This must be the republic spy that was picked up on the radar by the rest of the fleet. Scorpius patrolled by as if he did not see the ship.
  The enemy E-Wing rounded the asteroid behind Scorpius. The enemy lock on alarm sounded and Scorpius knew he had to act. He revved the engines to attack speed and pulled a large loop to try to get behind the Enemy. The spy expected this and followed suit.
  Missiles were fired so Scorpius did a barrel roll to barely miss. Scorpius maneuvered the craft down then pulled up immediately. The ploy worked. The republic ship went down and Scorpius was able to get behind. He fired his lasers while trying to get a missile lock.
  His weapons locked on and Scorpius fired his missiles. Direct hit. The enemy E-Wing crashed into a small asteroid. Scorpius reported his success and returned to base.
StOrMz
ComNet Marshal
Imperial Baronet

 
StOrMz
 
[VE-NAVY] 2nd Lieutenant
[VE-VEEC] Ink Slinger
 
Post Number:  913
Total Posts:  2218
Joined:  Oct 2004
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 7, 2009 2:59:36 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Please elaborate on this. The post needs to be atleast 250 words. Also, take a look at the Nazgul and Viper stories to see the general layout we use for posting.
NTO/2Lt StOrMz/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1 Fleet/VEN/VE
(=A=)(=^SA^=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=)(=FOCE=)[NSM][IG][SWC][SRC][BI]


Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Imagel]
Imperial Baronet of Kashyyyk
scorpius
ComNet n00b
 
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
 
Post Number:  8
Total Posts:  19
Joined:  Aug 2009
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 10, 2009 11:04:18 AM    View the profile of scorpius 
"Trooper," a voice said over the radio, "a republic ship was just located on the radar. Find and destroy it before it can get back to its fleet."

Scorpius set out for the coordinate sent to his navi-computer imediatly. As Scorpius passed the small asteroid, the scanner in his TIE Interceptor picked up a small reading. This was the reason he was out here in the first place. This must be the republic spy that was picked up on the radar by the rest of the fleet. Scorpius patrolled by as if he did not see the ship.
 
The enemy E-Wing rounded the asteroid behind Scorpius. The enemy lock on alarm sounded and Scorpius knew he had to act. He revved the engines to attack speed and pulled a large loop to try to get behind the Enemy. The spy expected this and followed suit. for several minutes, Scorpius tried to shake his skilled opponent.

The republic spie's missiles were fired so Scorpius did a barrel roll. He could hear the whoosh of the missles projector as it whizzed past his right wing narrowly missing.

Scorpius maneuvered the craft down then pulled up immediately. The ploy worked. The republic ship went down and Scorpius was able to get behind. He fired his lasers while trying to get a missile lock.

His weapons locked on and Scorpius fired his missiles. Direct hit. The enemy E-Wing crashed into a small asteroid. Scorpius reported his success and returned to base.
StOrMz
ComNet Marshal
Imperial Baronet

 
StOrMz
 
[VE-NAVY] 2nd Lieutenant
[VE-VEEC] Ink Slinger
 
Post Number:  920
Total Posts:  2218
Joined:  Oct 2004
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 10, 2009 9:33:35 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Beautiful work Scorpius!

Passed with flying colors, move on to chapter III!
NTO/2Lt StOrMz/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1 Fleet/VEN/VE
(=A=)(=^SA^=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=)(=FOCE=)[NSM][IG][SWC][SRC][BI]


Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Imagel]
Imperial Baronet of Kashyyyk
scorpius
ComNet n00b
 
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
 
Post Number:  9
Total Posts:  19
Joined:  Aug 2009
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 10, 2009 9:55:23 PM    View the profile of scorpius 
Mock Weekly Report:

This week i did PPC alot. I also went through flight school. I tried to get into the Javachat on the main page but could not connect.


ID Line:

TRN/CRW Scorpius 1flt/VEN/VE
StOrMz
ComNet Marshal
Imperial Baronet

 
StOrMz
 
[VE-NAVY] 2nd Lieutenant
[VE-VEEC] Ink Slinger
 
Post Number:  921
Total Posts:  2218
Joined:  Oct 2004
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 11, 2009 5:26:35 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Passed, please take your Aviator's Exam and send it to myself
NTO/2Lt StOrMz/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1 Fleet/VEN/VE
(=A=)(=^SA^=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=)(=FOCE=)[NSM][IG][SWC][SRC][BI]


Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Imagel]
Imperial Baronet of Kashyyyk
StOrMz
ComNet Marshal
Imperial Baronet

 
StOrMz
 
[VE-NAVY] 2nd Lieutenant
[VE-VEEC] Ink Slinger
 
Post Number:  923
Total Posts:  2218
Joined:  Oct 2004
Status:  Offline
  RE: reporting for duty
August 12, 2009 3:45:18 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Passed the Aviator's Exam and placed as Viper 7.

Congratulations pilot
NTO/2Lt StOrMz/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1 Fleet/VEN/VE
(=A=)(=^SA^=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=)(=FOCE=)[NSM][IG][SWC][SRC][BI]


Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars ImageImperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Image
Imperial Network Star Wars Imagel]
Imperial Baronet of Kashyyyk
ComNet > Imperial Navy > Archived Naval Academy > reporting for duty  |  New Posts    
 

All times are CST. The time now is 11:12:57 PM
Comnet Jump:

Current Online Members - 0  |  Guests - 229  |  Bots - 2
 
< Contact Us - The Vast Empire >
 
Powered by ComNet Version 7.2
Copyright © 1998-2024 The Imperial Network
 
This page was generated in 0.776 seconds.