Kun wrote:I have no. idea. what. to do...
Kun wrote:So, Kun is a heavy-drinking mon calamari sent into the navy to fix his. problem.
Alright. First things first. Work on your punctuation. You're breaking up sentences using periods and that makes it that much harder to read.
Kun wrote: Does it work.
Kun wrote:did I spell that right.
You're using the wrong punctuation in places.
Please use capitalization. Too many examples to list.
Kun wrote:don't hesitate.
Don't hesitate to do what exactly? Please finish your sentences else people will be left with unneeded questions.
That is just some advice that would do you good to follow. If you don't want to, fine. Just ignore it. I'm just trying to help.
[This message has been edited by
Hunter-Morrell
(edited June 29, 2009
7:07:22 PM)]