Hannibal
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Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
12:25:13 AM
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Hanibal reporting for duty!
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Hunter-Morrell
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RE: Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
12:28:05 AM
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The Vast Empire Navy welcomes you, Crewman. I am Senior Chief Petty Officer Hunter-Morrell, Trainer for the Vast Empire Navy, and I will be helping you today. You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start Flight School and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history. In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste): - Code: Select all
= Physical Appearance = Homeworld: Age: Species: Native Language: Gender: Skin Color: Height: Weight: Hair Color: Facial Hair: Eye Color: Scars: Tattoos:
== Character’s Background == (Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)
== Personality == (Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)
Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good Luck. Useful links:
Vast Empire Imperial NavySenior Chief Petty Officer Hunter MorrellXO/SCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
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Hannibal
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RE: Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
12:42:26 AM
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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld: Courascant
Age: 19
Species: Human
Native Language: Basic
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Light Brown
Height: 5'11
Weight: 190 lbs
Hair Color: Brown
Facial Hair: None
Eye Color: Brown
Scars: None
Tattoos: None
== Character’s Background ==
Hannibal was born on coruscate, son of Ristad and Fin, he was born an only child. His father was a business man, he owned a small freighting company, secretly his father worked for the NR. His mother, being a Imperial officer, raised him to think that the NR was evil and wanted to destroy the galaxy, while the empire wanted only peace, and to unite the galaxy.
Hannibal’s father left them when he was ten, his mother, seeing an opportunity, told him that the NR had lured him away with lies, when in fact, he was in Imperial jail. Over the years Hannibal worked hard to get his mother’s approval, however his mother was rarely with him, being an officer kept her away. At the age of fifteen Hannibal grew an uncanny obsession with ships, and flying through space, he would often visit cantina, and spaceports to listen to the pilots talk.
At the age of nineteen he decided to join the Navy, and start his carrier as a pilot, and help to unite the galaxy under the imperial way’s.
== Personality ==
Hannibal is not outgoing but not shy, he is obedient to any officer, most people describe Hannibal as “a droid” for his lack of expressing emotions. He think that emotions are for private show, not for public or for at work.
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Hunter-Morrell
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RE: Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
12:46:07 AM
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Vast Empire Imperial NavySenior Chief Petty Officer Hunter MorrellXO/SCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
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Hannibal
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RE: Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
1:10:39 PM
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LAG PERSUIT
This maneuver is used to pursue the enemy by using speed as in advantage, and hiding behind its tail. The attacking fighter would keep up with the defender. The attacker is hidden in the defender blind spot.
The ship shook as it was buffeted my a barrage, moving slightly to the left, Hannibal escaped a quick death. Hannibal knew it was only a sim. , but to him it was very real, it meant he either made it, or failed and disappointed his mother. Diving under the income fighter, Hannibal turned left, and rocketed beneath the enemy fighter, knowing he was in his blind spot Anival toyed with his prey, shooting off three shots, before he sent his enemy into the void.
IMMELMAN
The Immelman is used to gain altitude, and change direction when needed, it says that it isn’t either defensive or offensive but I can see uses for both purposes.
There was only one other fighter left, pointing the nose of his fighter up Hannibal accelerated, bringing his ship higher into space, although in space their was no gravity, and a free fall wouldn’t help him gain speed, Hannibal executed the maneuver anyway, it brought his target a short range from his blasters. Gaining speed, Hannibal fired, missing the first barrage, he tried again, the fighter turned left, trying to lose his pursier only to be met by a second barrage that clipped his wing, the fighter rolled out of control and exploded.
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Hunter-Morrell
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RE: Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
1:14:26 PM
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Nicely done. The story part wasn't required, but it was a nice touch. Passed. Onto Chapter III. Just try to work on punctuation and spelling 
Vast Empire Imperial NavySenior Chief Petty Officer Hunter MorrellXO/SCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
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Hannibal
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RE: Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
1:27:00 PM
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TRN/CRW/Hannibal/VEN/VE
Hannibal' Report: June 14th, 2009
Activity: I have started flight school.
Upcoming plans Hopefully I will pass my AE and be able to post on the story.
Questions/Suggestions: None
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Hunter-Morrell
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RE: Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
1:30:16 PM
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Passed. Take the AE and send it to Bacredi.
Vast Empire Imperial NavySenior Chief Petty Officer Hunter MorrellXO/SCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
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Hannibal
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RE: Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
1:38:40 PM
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Bacredi
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RE: Hannibal reporting for duty
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June 14, 2009
2:06:01 PM
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Promoted to LCRW and placed as Nazgul 7.
2nd Lieutenant Zhar Bacredi, Vast Empire Navy Naval Training Officer, Vast Empire Navy ------------------------------------------ NTO/2LT Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:1] [VST:1] [KST:1] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC}
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