Edgar
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The new guy
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April 15, 2009
10:36:00 AM
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I would like to start by saying hello to everyone and that I'm reporting for duty.Oh and what do I do next?
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Bacredi
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RE: The new guy
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April 15, 2009
10:39:09 AM
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Bonjour! Welcome to the Vast Empire Navy, Crewman. I am Ensign Bacredi, Naval Training Officer for the Vast Empire Navy, I will be helping you here today. You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates and welcomes you for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start FlightSchool and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history. In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste): - Code: Select all
= Physical Appearance = Homeworld: Age: Species: Native Language: Gender: Skin Color: Height: Weight: Hair Color: Facial Hair: Eye Color: Scars: Tattoos:
== Character’s Background == (Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)
== Personality == (Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)
Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good day! Useful links:
Ensign Zhar Bacredi, Vast Empire Navy Special Agent, Vast Empire Intelligence Naval Training Officer, Vast Empire Navy ------------------------------------------ NTO/ESN Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:1] [VST:1] [KST:1] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC} AGT/ESN Bacredi/Chaos/Reaper/ISD Nemesis/Sigma Group/VEI/VE
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Edgar
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RE: The new guy
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April 15, 2009
11:48:37 AM
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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:Tatooine
Age:20
Species:Human
Native Language:English
Gender:Male
Skin Color:Pale
Height:6'7
Weight:150 lbs
Hair Color:Brown
Facial Hair:None
Eye Color:Black
Scars:His left cheek
Tattoos:None
== Character’s Background ==
Edgar was born on the planet of Tatooine.His father was a gangster and his mother had a store.Edgar grew up in a not so comfortable place.Edgar was always glad to help his parents.He didn't have much friends since the bandits always robbed the younger ones almost nobody of the kids weren't on the street.On his fifth birthday he was sold to a hutt who ruled the streets by his father.Since that day Edgar has worked hard,but the hutt didn't care.Edgar was always sleeping on the cold floor and eating leftovers.After five years he was sold by the huut to a smuggler.The smuggler didn't tell his name to Edgar.The smuggler was a quite person he didn't talk much only when needed.Edgar learned a lot from him he learned how to speak some of the alien languages and how to sell goods for a good price.Edgar was helping the smuggler to "transfer" goods to other planets.After six years the smuggler was betrayed and ambushed.The ship was attacked it was almost to fell appart but the smuggler helped Edgar to get to an escape pod he gave him some equipment.Edgar landed on a planet named Naboo,he landed in the swamp and was picked up by the inhabitants there.He was lucky they greeted him well.
After a year on Naboo he has departed for adventures.He wanted to explore more planets.A group of adventurers aliens has also joined Edgar they bought a ship and flew away from Naboo.They visited a lot of planets and Edgar learned even more alien languages and also got more enemies.After three years of adventuring,they're ship was ambushed by pirates they tried to negotiate with them but they weren't responding a fight began the pirate ship was stronger and it wasn't long untill Edgar's ships most functions were nonfunctional.When trying to escape the ship most of those adventurers have died.Edgar was lucky he only got a wound on his cheek.He and his friend ran away from the ship on the escape pods.His friend wasn't so luck his pod was shot.Edgar flew to a planet were the Imperials were ruling.When he awoke from the crash he was in an imperial base.The first thing he remembered was the ambush and revenge.An imperial asked him what happened Edgar told the whole story,the imperial later asked if Edgar would like to join the naval academy Edgar without thinking agreed.
== Personality ==
Edgar has a personality of a good guy but does bad things he can do bad thing like rob people but he will say that's good in my way.He is also very suspicious of people who he just met and kills people who betrayed him without listening.He also tends to be harsh and doesn't like to listen to long stories.He also has problems with authority.He also likes to fight and doesn't go without one aswell.
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Bacredi
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RE: The new guy
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April 15, 2009
4:41:08 PM
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If you can fix the errors with the periods (just add a space after every period) then you're set.
Ensign Zhar Bacredi, Vast Empire Navy Special Agent, Vast Empire Intelligence Naval Training Officer, Vast Empire Navy ------------------------------------------ NTO/ESN Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:1] [VST:1] [KST:1] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC} AGT/ESN Bacredi/Chaos/Reaper/ISD Nemesis/Sigma Group/VEI/VE
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Edgar
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RE: The new guy
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April 16, 2009
6:09:43 AM
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RE: The new guy
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April 16, 2009
3:15:40 PM
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Bah. Good enough. Passed. Onto to Chapter Two.
Vast Empire Imperial NavySenior Chief Petty Officer Hunter MorrellXO/SCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1]
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Edgar
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RE: The new guy
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April 17, 2009
5:23:45 AM
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The Vertical Reverse:The vertical reverse can be used to gain high speed to lose a persuader or to gain advantage on further attacks.To do the vertical reverse the pilot needs to head straight up until the ship looses it's speed it then goes all the way down gaining high speed.The only disadvantage is that only some of the ship can do that maneuver.
The Offensive Split:The offensive split can only be done with a pair of fighters.With this maneuver the pilots will have advantage over the enemies.The offensive split can be done when one of the pilots is taking all the attention of enemies on him while the other pilot sneaks past them and gets in a good attacking position.
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RE: The new guy
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April 18, 2009
12:16:27 AM
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Passed. On to chapter III
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Edgar
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RE: The new guy
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April 18, 2009
2:15:06 AM
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Edgar's report April 15th 2009
Activity:I have joined the academy and am undergoing basic training also made my bio
Upcoming Plans:Graduate from the academy
TRN/CRW Edgar Rondo
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Bacredi
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RE: The new guy
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April 18, 2009
8:40:08 AM
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Passed. Do your ae then pm it to me for grading.
Ensign Zhar Bacredi, Vast Empire Navy Special Agent, Vast Empire Intelligence Naval Training Officer, Vast Empire Navy ------------------------------------------ NTO/ESN Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:1] [VST:1] [KST:1] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC} AGT/ESN Bacredi/Chaos/Reaper/ISD Nemesis/Sigma Group/VEI/VE
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RE: The new guy
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April 19, 2009
12:39:26 AM
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Bacredi
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RE: The new guy
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April 19, 2009
11:02:15 AM
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Ensign Zhar Bacredi, Vast Empire Navy Special Agent, Vast Empire Intelligence Naval Training Officer, Vast Empire Navy ------------------------------------------ NTO/ESN Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:1] [VST:1] [KST:1] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC} AGT/ESN Bacredi/Chaos/Reaper/ISD Nemesis/Sigma Group/VEI/VE
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