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Edgar
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  The new guy
April 15, 2009 10:36:00 AM    View the profile of Edgar 
I would like to start by saying hello to everyone and that I'm reporting for duty.Oh and what do I do next?
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  RE: The new guy
April 15, 2009 10:39:09 AM    View the profile of Bacredi 
Bonjour!

Welcome to the Vast Empire Navy, Crewman.

I am Ensign Bacredi, Naval Training Officer for the Vast Empire Navy, I will be helping you here today.

You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates and welcomes you for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start FlightSchool and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):

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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:

== Character’s Background ==
(Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)

== Personality ==
(Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)


Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good day!

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Edgar
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  RE: The new guy
April 15, 2009 11:48:37 AM    View the profile of Edgar 
= Physical Appearance =
    Homeworld:Tatooine
    Age:20
    Species:Human
    Native Language:English
    Gender:Male
    Skin Color:Pale
    Height:6'7
    Weight:150 lbs
    Hair Color:Brown
    Facial Hair:None
    Eye Color:Black
    Scars:His left cheek
    Tattoos:None

    == Character’s Background ==
  Edgar was born on the planet of Tatooine.His father was a gangster and his mother had a store.Edgar grew up in a not so comfortable place.Edgar was always glad to help his parents.He didn't have much friends since the bandits always robbed the younger ones almost nobody of the kids weren't on the street.On his fifth birthday he was sold to a hutt who ruled the streets by his father.Since that day Edgar has worked hard,but the hutt didn't care.Edgar was always sleeping on the cold floor and eating leftovers.After five years he was sold by the huut to a smuggler.The smuggler didn't tell his name to Edgar.The smuggler was a quite person he didn't talk much only when needed.Edgar learned a lot from him he learned how to speak some of the alien languages and how to sell goods for a good price.Edgar was helping the smuggler to "transfer" goods to other planets.After six years the smuggler was betrayed and ambushed.The ship was attacked it was almost to fell appart but the smuggler helped Edgar to get to an escape pod he gave him some equipment.Edgar landed on a planet named Naboo,he landed in the swamp and was picked up by the inhabitants there.He was lucky they greeted him well.
  After a year on Naboo he has departed for adventures.He wanted to explore more planets.A group of adventurers aliens has also joined Edgar they bought a ship and flew away from Naboo.They visited a lot of planets and Edgar learned even more alien languages and also got more enemies.After three years of adventuring,they're ship was ambushed by pirates they tried to negotiate with them but they weren't responding a fight began the pirate ship was stronger and it wasn't long untill Edgar's ships most functions were nonfunctional.When trying to escape the ship most of those adventurers have died.Edgar was lucky he only got a wound on his cheek.He and his friend ran away from the ship on the escape pods.His friend wasn't so luck his pod was shot.Edgar flew to a planet were the Imperials were ruling.When he awoke from the crash he was in an imperial base.The first thing he remembered was the ambush and revenge.An imperial asked him what happened Edgar told the whole story,the imperial later asked if Edgar would like to join the naval academy Edgar without thinking agreed.

    == Personality ==
  Edgar has a personality of a good guy but does bad things he can do bad thing like rob people but he will say that's good in my way.He is also very suspicious of people who he just met and kills people who betrayed him without listening.He also tends to be harsh and doesn't like to listen to long stories.He also has problems with authority.He also likes to fight and doesn't go without one aswell.
[This message has been edited by Edgar (edited April 16, 2009 6:01:22 AM)]
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  RE: The new guy
April 15, 2009 4:41:08 PM    View the profile of Bacredi 
If you can fix the errors with the periods (just add a space after every period) then you're set.
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Edgar
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  RE: The new guy
April 16, 2009 6:09:43 AM    View the profile of Edgar 
Done,I guess.
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  RE: The new guy
April 16, 2009 3:15:40 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
Bah. Good enough. Passed. Onto to Chapter Two.
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  RE: The new guy
April 17, 2009 5:23:45 AM    View the profile of Edgar 
The Vertical Reverse:The vertical reverse can be used to gain high speed to lose a persuader or to gain advantage on further attacks.To do the vertical reverse the pilot needs to head straight up until the ship looses it's speed it then goes all the way down gaining high speed.The only disadvantage is that only some of the ship can do that maneuver.
The Offensive Split:The offensive split can only be done with a pair of fighters.With this maneuver the pilots will have advantage over the enemies.The offensive split can be done when one of the pilots is taking all the attention of enemies on him while the other pilot  sneaks past them and gets in a good attacking position.
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  RE: The new guy
April 18, 2009 12:16:27 AM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Passed. On to chapter III
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  RE: The new guy
April 18, 2009 2:15:06 AM    View the profile of Edgar 
Edgar's report April 15th 2009

Activity:I have joined the academy and am undergoing basic training also made my bio

Upcoming Plans:Graduate from the academy

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  RE: The new guy
April 18, 2009 8:40:08 AM    View the profile of Bacredi 
Passed. Do your ae then pm it to me for grading.
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  RE: The new guy
April 19, 2009 12:39:26 AM    View the profile of Edgar 
Done
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  RE: The new guy
April 19, 2009 11:02:15 AM    View the profile of Bacredi 
Placed as NAzgul 7.
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