Welcome, new recruit!

= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld: Dac
Age: 18
Species:Human
Native Language:English and some mon calamarian
Gender:male
Skin Color: pale white
Height:160cm
Weight:54kilograms
Hair Color:Black
Facial Hair:none
Eye Color:light blue/green
Scars:one on right eye
Tattoos:spiral going around on right arm

== Character’s Background ==
Born in Dac in a Human settlement outside the city later on moved to Tatooine and was drafted in to New republic but left after 2 years of service then started a businesses in the mid levels of Coruscant and met a man by the name of Stract Wanf who taught Power-County the ways of a Sword and Blaster Pistol then one night got in a bar fight with the wrong person then received a scar on his right eye.Then a new Republican loyalist murdered Scract right in front of Power-County and ran he is still looking for his revenge so joined the empire Navy and vowed revenge.

== Personality ==
Stubborn, ruthless and trust worthy he doesn't get along with many people, doesn't like to work in big groups but prefers to work alone he is willing to make friends but they have to prove them self still has night mares about the day his friends was murdered just is looking for inner peace within himself he looks mysterious.

ok thanks for the advice umm well i rewrote well edited it so please re read

The Immelman offensive: can be used offensively if a target is chasing and a barricade of some sort then pull up then the target would crash into the barricade.
The immelman Defensive: can be used to dodge heavy fire missiles and other sort of things when driving you just pull up quickly like you see in all the movies when the pilots are over confident about their skills.

Vertical Reverse Offensive: Well if your being chased by a target then you do he move and come turn right in front of them and blast them before they have they have the chance to get yourself.
vertical Reverse Defensive: When being chased you can do the trick and escape to your base or planet you need to arrive too

The Immelman well say your being attacked by multiple enemys and you need to dodge incoming missiles and fire so when you do the Immelman you pull up and dodge the missiles and blasts then pull right back down and either retreat or attack back.

Vertical Reverse can be used either by dodging debris incoming enemy s then either retaliate retreat or do what you have to get back home or to the command center.

THANKS for the advice well heres the new short pargraph replacing Vertical reverse. 


The sandwich
Well if ur on the right side you can either get a clear shot or if they try to escape and alert there other team mates you can prevent that and stay hidden from them what will help you defensivley and if you on the inside you can cut them off to prevent them from escaping or tell yur team mate to attack. how to initate you... is to get your member in a steady pace ahead of the target and yourself into postion and if your going for a missle or blast you have to wait for your partner to clear the danger area.


hopefully this one makes it :P

Power-County's Report April 13

Activity: Going Threw Chapters to enter the Exam.
Upcoming Plans: Avaitors Exam "AE", then to get a placement.

Questions/ Suggestions: none

Position: In Acadamy
Recruit

Position: TRN
Fleet Commander NONE
Ship Captain NONE
Wing Commander    NONE
Squadron Commander     NONE
Squadron Executive Officer    NONE
Flight Leader    NONE
Flight Member    NONE
Trainee    TRN

isn't that the ID line?

No, your ID line should look like this: XO/SCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE

Just replace my information with yours. You keep the Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE part though.

Thats good. But replace Recruit with Crewman. Also, if you want to have help in real time, you can get on http://www.vastempire.com/main/ref/javachat/.

Also, send it to me for cross-referencing... and because it makes me feel important.

so i do send it to sToRmZ

opps i only sent it 2 stOrMz

true but wouldnt i have to rewrite it to do that?