Jremy
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Jremy, reporting for duty
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March 26, 2009
2:43:20 PM
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I joined Vast Empire today, and... that's pretty much it.  |
Stewart-Power
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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March 26, 2009
3:05:35 PM
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well then, welcome...
one without a 
(you )
  R.C.S.C.C. 221 Patriot
(Sea Cadets)
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Hunter-Morrell
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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March 26, 2009
3:15:40 PM
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Glad to have you Crewman. Stand by and you'll be contacted soon by the Naval Training Officer, Bacredi. Keep in mind though, that he does have a life (unlike some on here  ) and might take a little while to respond. Vast Empire Imperial NavySenior Chief Petty Officer Hunter MorrellXO/SCPO Hunter-Morrell/Nazgul 5/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE [CBV][BRC][BWC][MC:1] |
Slasher
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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March 26, 2009
4:19:16 PM
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People who don't have a life, who could you possibly be talking about? Senior Chief Petty Officer Rorran "Slasher" Gorma
FL/SCPO Slasher/Nazgul 4-1/Pheonix Wing/1FLT/mSSD Atrus/VEN/VE/(=^ME^=)(=*SA*=)(=*A*=)[CBV][MC:1][BWC]
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Bacredi
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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March 26, 2009
5:43:25 PM
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Bonjour! Welcome to the Vast Empire Navy, Crewman. I am Ensign Bacredi, Naval Training Officer for the Vast Empire Navy, I will be helping you here today. You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates and welcomes you for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start FlightSchool and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history. In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste): - Code: Select all
= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:
== Character’s Background ==
(Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)
== Personality ==
(Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)
Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good day! Useful links:Ensign Zhar Bacredi, Vast Empire Navy Special Agent, Vast Empire Intelligence Naval Training Officer, Vast Empire Navy ------------------------------------------ NTO/ESN Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:H] [VST:1] [KST:1] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC} AGT/ESN Bacredi/Chaos/Reaper/ISD Nemesis/Sigma Group/VEI/VE |
Jremy
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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March 27, 2009
9:27:46 PM
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My biography is partly done, but I still have a lot of work to do methinks. I don't feel like finishing it now so I'll finish later |
Jremy
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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March 31, 2009
5:37:15 PM
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Alright, I'm about to post my bio. Some of the info may be contradictory though, since I haven't had much experience in the Star Wars universe. Can someone correct me if I make a mistake please? |
Jremy
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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March 31, 2009
5:53:24 PM
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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld: Naboo
Age: 17
Species: Human
Native Language: Basic
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Pale
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 130 lb.
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Facial Hair: None
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: None
Tattoos: None
== Character’s Background ==
His father was part of the original empire but was killed in the rebellion. Jeremy decided to follow in his footsteps and join Vast Empire as a result.
== Personality ==
Jeremy is friendly and generous. While he occasionally makes rash decisions under pressure, he will always take the time to think his actions through if he can. Jeremy dislikes the Dark Jedi Order because of their philosophy of killing mercilessly. He believes that this will only hurt the Vast Empire in the long run because it will encourage people to rebel against the empire rather than submit to it. Though he may seem shy, Jeremy can be quite talkative around his friends. |
Bacredi
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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March 31, 2009
9:21:17 PM
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There is a 1 paragraph bar for the history. Ensign Zhar Bacredi, Vast Empire Navy Special Agent, Vast Empire Intelligence Naval Training Officer, Vast Empire Navy ------------------------------------------ NTO/ESN Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:H] [VST:1] [KST:1] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC} AGT/ESN Bacredi/Chaos/Reaper/ISD Nemesis/Sigma Group/VEI/VE |
Flyboy
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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April 1, 2009
12:53:57 AM
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FM/LCRW Korant 'Flyboy' Borshan/Viper 14/Viper Squadron/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/4FLT/VEN/VE
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Jremy
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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April 1, 2009
2:28:33 PM
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Bacredi wrote:There is a 1 paragraph bar for the history.
Pardon my ignorance, but what does that mean?  |
Bacredi
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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April 1, 2009
4:46:38 PM
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You need one paragraph of history.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paragraph Ensign Zhar Bacredi, Vast Empire Navy Special Agent, Vast Empire Intelligence Naval Training Officer, Vast Empire Navy ------------------------------------------ NTO/ESN Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:H] [VST:1] [KST:1] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC} AGT/ESN Bacredi/Chaos/Reaper/ISD Nemesis/Sigma Group/VEI/VE |
Jremy
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RE: Jremy, reporting for duty
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April 2, 2009
2:20:15 PM
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Bacredi wrote:You need one paragraph of history.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paragraph
I know what a paragraph is  it was the way you said it that confused me, though I suppose I should have paid more attention to the template in the beginning. Permission to feel stupid sir? |
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