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Jando
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  Reporting for duty
February 25, 2009 9:48:51 AM    View the profile of Jando 
Jando kai-ur reporting for duty sir!
Bacredi
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  RE: Reporting for duty
February 25, 2009 4:53:52 PM    View the profile of Bacredi 
Bonjour!

Welcome to the Vast Empire Navy, Crewman.

I am Ensign Bacredi, Naval Training Officer for the Vast Empire Navy, I will be helping you here today.

You have just completed Imperial Initiation by posting your welcome message here, the Vast Empire Navy congratulates and welcomes you for that. Now, the next step in your training is to start FlightSchool and post your character biography. This biography will (and should) be a rough outline of your characters history.

In your biography, you will need to list the following (just copy and paste):

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= Physical Appearance =
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:

== Character’s Background ==
(Give me 1-2 solid paragraphs with information on your character’s past. Using a large amount of detail isn’t necessary, but if you feel like you want to, go ahead.)

== Personality ==
(Just write about what your character’s personality is. Make him/her interesting!)


Our method of writing here in the Vast Empire Navy (and the Vast Empire) is to write in third person. Please do so. If you have any questions, feel free to ComNet PM myself for guidance. Good day!

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Zhar "Mathis" Bacredi

Vast Empire Naval High Command:
Naval Training Officer
NTO/ESN Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:H] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC}

Vast Empire Intelligence:
Special Agent
AGT/ESN Bacredi/Chaos/Reaper/ISD Nemesis/Sigma Group/VEI/VE
Jando
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Jando
 
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  RE: Reporting for duty
February 25, 2009 6:45:38 PM    View the profile of Jando 
In the deepest pit of Riloth a 25 year old twi'lek male stands tall facing the sandy wind to shave side his purple lekku,
His gloomed dark blue eyes stare peeking into the disturbing sky,

How come he never been on this planet before but to him it still feels familiar, those slaves must have taken him here sometime during his service. why els would it feel this close to him.

As the sand sifts in every crack of his leather straps he remembers the death of his mother, he was so young but he remembers her red skin, as red as the lagreggs eye, her eyes as dark as the black stones of malachors dept.
He speaks basic for years now but his mother didnt she had a somewhat strange accent one that made him feel warm.

As a swarm of keg Beatles fly by and he snaps out of his thoughts and continues the climb upwards how he got there was easy just jump out of the the shuttle but now what was he to do he dint have a credit, he never had a cred.

the roots of the plants scorch over his whip scared back the latest cuts still fresh 
His smaller posture makes the climb somewhat easier to manage only he cant even see the surface yet. Even now as hungry as he may be he is not complaining.
They dint serve food daily at the camps so he will manage this one without any easily.
He pulls out e sharper knife shaped rock and uses it to climb his way.

He wonder what trials lye ahead for him and is preparing for the worst, he heard rumors of a vast army traveling space, maybe they can help him to find his father who he had never met.
Jando
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  RE: Reporting for duty
February 25, 2009 7:09:21 PM    View the profile of Jando 
[This message has been edited by Jando (edited February 25, 2009 7:12:30 PM)]
Bacredi
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  RE: Reporting for duty
February 25, 2009 7:12:03 PM    View the profile of Bacredi 
Ok!

You definitely have the basics down. All you need to do is capitalize beginning of sentences, spelling, etc.
Zhar "Mathis" Bacredi

Vast Empire Naval High Command:
Naval Training Officer
NTO/ESN Bacredi/Sting 1-1/Platform Saratoga/Raegent System/VENA/VEN/VE [MC:1] [EER] [SoV] [SRC] [LoM] [NSM] [MC:1] [NS:H] *[NST:1]* (=A=) (=SA=) (=*ME*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) {GWC} {SRC}

Vast Empire Intelligence:
Special Agent
AGT/ESN Bacredi/Chaos/Reaper/ISD Nemesis/Sigma Group/VEI/VE
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