oddball
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hello
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September 3, 2008
3:10:03 PM
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Signing up and ready to battle |
oddball
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RE: hello
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September 8, 2008
11:13:31 AM
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Bio
Name: Frankie Bob
Age: 24
Height: 6'
Weight: 169lbs
Hair colour: None
Species: Mon Calamari
Personal Info
Corps
The Imperial Navy
Rank
Crewman
Family
All family deceaced
History
He grew up on Dac and after his parents and family died on the Death Star as prisoners, so he joined the Rebel alliance. After seven years he was ordered to shoot some highly dangerous prisoners, he shot all the other crew men and went on the run for five years. Finally ending up on Coruscant wanting to join the Empire.
Personality
He is very outgoing and friendly but if you mention/order him to shoot prisoners he will kill you. |
Blue-Leader
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RE: hello
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September 8, 2008
7:12:57 PM
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Hello.. again Oddball. I am afraid you will need to add more to your biography for me to pass it  . Rock on! |
StOrMz
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RE: hello
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September 9, 2008
6:37:28 PM
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Hello Oddball I am the Lead Operator here at the VENA,
There is one more thing that needs to be changed within your Bio. I don't mind you not liking the shooting of prisoners (unless they are guilty of crimes), however, it would be a good idea to change "he will killt you" to something less...dramatic. Maybe...disobey the order or what not Imperial Navy-
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RE: hello
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September 9, 2008
7:07:07 PM
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Quote:I am the Lead Operator
Show off :P |
oddball
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RE: hello
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September 11, 2008
2:23:34 PM
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Bio
Name: Frankie Bob
Age: 24
Height: 6'
Weight: 169lbs
Hair colour: None
Species: Mon Calamari
Personal Info
Corps
The Imperial Navy
Rank
Crewman
Family
All family deceaced
History
He grew up on Dac and after his parents and family died on the Death Star as prisoners, so he joined the Rebel alliance. After seven years he was ordered to shoot some highly dangerous prisoners, he shot all the other crew men and went on the run for five years. Finally ending up on Coruscant wanting to join the Empire.
Personality
He is very outgoing and friendly but if you mention/order him to shoot prisoners he'll release them.
[This message has been edited by
oddball
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2:33:19 PM)]
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Blue-Leader
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September 11, 2008
5:59:51 PM
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I am afraid it still needs to be expanded, please work on this. |
oddball
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September 12, 2008
10:41:25 AM
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Bio
Name: Frankie Bob
Age: 24
Height: 6'
Weight: 169lbs
Hair colour: None
Species: Mon Calamari
Personal Info
Corps
The Imperial Navy
Rank
Crewman
Family
All family deceaced
History
He grew up on Dac and after his parents and family died on the Death Star as prisoners, so he joined the Rebel alliance. After seven years he was ordered to shoot some highly dangerous prisoners, he shot all the other crew men and went on the run for five years. Finally ending up on Coruscant wanting to join the Empire.
Personality
He is very outgoing, friendly, obiedient and strong willed. but if you mention/order him to shoot prisoners he'll release them. He is unfortunantely emotionally scarred by his family's death which he was forced to watch. |
StOrMz
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September 15, 2008
4:36:45 PM
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Is there anything more about his history you can tell us?
Did he have many friends when he was a child?
What are some of his hobbies?
Stuff like that helps shape a character and allows your audience to "see" the character better in their head. Imperial Navy-
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