Hello there, Crewman Sasquatch.

Allow me to introduce myself, I am Tech Officer Blue-Leader, I, along with the Operation Team (C-3PX2, Ibram Tyrol, and StOrMz) will be guiding you through your training. We will be helping you through Basic Training, commonly called Flight School, FS, BT, or the Academy. Flight School is composed into three chapters, Chapter One: Character Development, Chapter Two: Pilot Procedure, Chapter Three: The Squadron, and last but not least, the Aviator's Exam. Once you have finished and been passed on these Chapters we will place you into one of the active squadrons.

Lets start with the basics - Chapter One. You need to make a biography for your character (Good examples are Jegora Fal's and Ibram Tyrol's Biographies.) Once you have finished your biography you may post it on this topic. But remember - your biography is only a rough sketch of your character and should be expanded when given the time. If you have any questions, catch any member of the staff around IRC or send them a PM (Personal Message).

Now, if you have any questions, or if you want to meet any of our other members you can hop onto IRC (Internet Relay Chat), or you may send any member of the staff a PM (Personal Message). There are many other communications methods for reaching the staff in that page as well. Once you have finished Basic Training, you shall be placed into one of the active squadrons.

Catch you around sometime, Sasquatch.

Good start, Sasquatch. I just have some things to address:

1) I will need you to put this information into this format:

Code: Select all

Name:
Callsign:
Homeworld:
Age:
Hair Color:
Weight:
Eye Color:
Height:

2) There was some spelling and syntax errors, examples are:

Spelling Errors wrote:(Your Spelling) Impire    =    Empire (Correct Spelling)
(Your Spelling) Rebles    =    Rebels (Correct Spelling)

That is not all the spelling errors, I was just trying to give you the basics. Now to syntax.

syntax Errors wrote:(Your Version) i  =  I (Correct Version)
(Your Version) fet  =  Fett (Correct Version (Spelling as well))

3) And last of all, I think it needs to be lengthened. Just add about two or three more paragraphs, a personal description, and some other misc details. Just a tip, it makes a character more interesting if you add some 'flaws' to them.

Name:Kal Farren
Callsign:Sasquatch
Homeworld:bespin
Age:21
Hair Color:blonde
Weight:175 pounds
Eye Color: blue
Height: 6'

sasquatch's biography





I was born on the cloud city of Bespin. I was just old enough to attend school when I saw the famous Darth Vader capture Han Solo and sent him a way frozen in carbinite with Jango Fett to Jabba's palace. When my parrents found out our leader Lando Calrissian was helping out the rebels we moved to a planet I no longer remember. My years passed pretty unevent full after that moving from place to place, giving the Empire information that we heard about the rebels. And then one day a close friend of mine named Cravius told me about the imperial flight school he was attending and I decided to join up and begin my training as a Imperial pilot.

As I reflect apon my life I remember how hard it was moving from school to school, planet to planet. I always had a hard time making friends where ever I moved places. I was just to shy. I remeber one year I spent the whole time locked up in my house afraid to make a fool of my self out in public. I took a class on how to be a more social. I dont think it helped much. I have butterflies at the thought of flying for the empire in a squadren and then one day owning my own capital ship. But for right now I have to get through the hardship of flight school.

Name:Kal Farren
Callsign:Sasquatch
Homeworld:bespin
Age:21
Hair Color:blonde
Weight:175 pounds
Eye Color: blue
Height: 6'

sasquatch's biography





I was born on the cloud city of Bespin. I was just old enough to attend school when I saw the famous Darth Vader capture Han Solo and sent him a way frozen in carbinite with Jango Fett to Jabba's palace. When my parrents found out our leader Lando Calrissian was helping out the rebels we moved to a planet I no longer remember. My years passed pretty unevent full after that moving from place to place, giving the Empire information that we heard about the rebels. And then one day a close friend of mine named Cravius told me about the imperial flight school he was attending and I decided to join up and begin my training as a Imperial pilot.

As I reflect apon my life I remember how hard it was moving from school to school, planet to planet. I always had a hard time making friends where ever I moved places. I was just to shy. I remeber one year I spent the whole time locked up in my house afraid to make a fool of my self out in public. I took a class on how to be a more social. I dont think it helped much. I have butterflies at the thought of flying for the empire in a squadren and then one day owning my own capital ship. But for right now I have to get through the hardship of flight school.

I day dream alot on how after flight school I'll be the best pilot the empire ever had. On how I'll have my own fleet of ships and the best pilots around. But as I think about it there more like goals than dreams. I could very well reach these goals if I tried. Unfortunently if I tried is some thing im not good at. I have never really tried for stuff I want like in school for good grades or for all the projects I've tried. This will probably hands down be the hardest problem for me. I just hope I cansolve this problem before it hurts me.

The split-s is a diving loop that is very usefull to get out of gun range, shed altitude, and pick up alot of speed. This maneuver is very defencive with its "cut and run attitude". you could use this move to throw off your attacker and have a chance of escape.

The barrel roll how ever can be used both offensively and defensively. But its better purpose is offensively to slow down and not overcome your prey. I in this move you do a short roll either left or right and keeping the nosed pitched. I did say this move could be used for deffensive purposes but deffensively theres to many errors that can be done only to hurt your cause.

The split-s is a diving loop that is very usefull to get out of gun range, shed altitude, and pick up alot of speed. This maneuver is very defencive with its "cut and run attitude". you could use this move to throw off your attacker and have a chance of escape. The split-s does have a couple of dissadvantages. you cant use this move when you are close to the ground because of the loss of altitude. The second dissadvantedge is if you keep in the dive for to long it will be harder for you to pull up.

The barrel roll how ever can be used both offensively and defensively. But its better purpose is offensively to slow down and not overcome your prey. I in this move you do a short roll either left or right and keeping the nosed pitched. I did say this move could be used for deffensive purposes but deffensively theres to many errors that can be done only to hurt your cause. Some of these errors are if you do it to early your attacker will only follow you through the move, but if you do it to late the more shots the attacker will have on you that could mean all the difference which is why this move should primarily be used for offensive purposes.

Report,


Over the past week I've spent my time training at naval school and doing research for the school so i can pass.


signing,
TRN/CRW/Sasquatch

Quote:Over the past week I've spent my time training at naval school and doing research for the school so i can pass.
Sasquatch Report: July 30th, 2006
Activity:training
Questions/Suggestions: none
TRN/CRW/Sasquatch

Congratulations, Sasquatch.
I am Second Lieutenant C-3PX2, Naval Training Officer in charge of the Vast Empire Imperial Naval Academy. You have now completed all the requirements to pass Flight School, and be placed in a squadron in the Vast Empire Imperial Navy’s First Vast Imperial Fleet. You have been placed in Nazgul Squadron as Nazgul 7 (flight two, seat three). Your squadron commander is Master Chief Petty Officer Gshlecc.

Within the next week, what I need from you is your Aviator’s Exam. (If it was already sent in, I need to know.) After which, you will receive the appropriate certification and promotion.

Again, Congratulations Crewman.
Good Luck in your Travels with Nazgul Squadron.