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Joran
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  bio
July 25, 2008 4:20:15 PM    View the profile of Joran 
== Physical Appearance ==

Species: Twi’Lek
Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: none
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Color: Blue
Height: 5’8
Weight:120
Age:21
Character's Full Name: Jaronis (the Beautiful) Sa’A
Physical Build: lean, strong but you will never see it
Home world: Corellia

== Specialtys==
LAAT Transport Driving
Tie fighter driving


== Background History ==
Born and raised on Corellia living with her father the head of a cantina in Coranet. She lived happily with her father until 9 ABY when diktat killed her father because he wouldn’t sell him he’s cantina. She was angry at the evil ruler but had no way to get back. She was even more angry at the republic for not doing anything about it. She needed to get off Corellia because se couldn’t take Diktats pressure, but she couldn’t because Diktat closed off all Starports on Corellia so unless she worked for Diktat she couldn’t leave, but she hated Diktat so much she would never work for him. She kept Her fathers cantina after his death and  tended it.

She stayed for one more year, leaving because she heard two men sitting at the bar talking about a top secret Imperial base at the Golden Beach. She heard them talking about a recruiter for pilots,  she also overheard that’s the only way to get off the planet. She didn’t take long to think about it and the next morning she gave deed to the cantina to her bartender and left for the beach.




== Character's Personality ==

She is a serous, nice and forgiving person but when she’s angry she will rampage.
She likes: jizz (a music type of music), power, recourses and watching Velanarian boxing
She dislikes: other Twi’Lek female’s, Diktak and the republic
[This message has been edited by Joran (edited July 25, 2008 5:10:21 PM)]
StOrMz
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  RE: bio
July 25, 2008 5:15:26 PM    View the profile of StOrMz 
Welcome Joran.

I am Stormz an operator of the Vast Empire Naval Academy. I see you have started your bio already. It's a good start, however, I see a few spelling/grammatical errors within it. Also, try not to use "she" so much, your charater has a name. Let's try and use it a little more k?

And last but not least, if you could give a little more information about Jaronis' personality that would be great

Like I said, it's a good start. It just needs a little fine tuning, nothing major.

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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48]  why are you creaming?
[20:48]  ewwwwwwww
[20:48]  screaming*
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